please, spell Pegasus correctly
the tittle
the tittle
(Dec. 20, 2010 3:42 AM)alexscott12 Wrote: pegasis, that's how you spell it
(Dec. 20, 2010 1:36 AM)Dude Wrote: Haha...I love those kind of stories. The same way I love crappy movies like The Room and the Troll series. I'm kind of an idiot, that way.
The edited version of Kyuubi-Master is somewhat...readable, if that's a word, but it still lacks any form of originality and fails to strike interest in my heart. The first few lines of a story are exactly made to swoop people in reading the story...