Wow. That’s harsh. Well people have different opinions so maybe others will like it

Bruh, its not garbage first of all. I noticed that you @"Spin Stealing" are very rude tbh. TheRogueBlader, I'm reading this fan fic, and my honest opinion is this:

85/100

Well, I gave my very honest opinion, I asked him if he wanted my honest opinion, and that's what I did.

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Bruh, its not garbage first of all. I noticed that you @"Spin Stealing" are very rude tbh. TheRogueBlader, I'm reading this fan fic, and my honest opinion is this:

85/100

Well, I gave my very honest opinion, I asked him if he wanted my honest opinion, and that's what I did.

but this is not the first time you've been rude, and everyone VERY WELL knows that

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FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

Wow. That’s harsh. Well people have different opinions so maybe others will like it

You did ask for his honest opinion. Would you like a Cheeto Rating?

Sure

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Wow. That’s harsh. Well people have different opinions so maybe others will like it

Bruh, its not garbage first of all. I noticed that you @"Spin Stealing" are very rude tbh. TheRogueBlader, I'm reading this fan fic, and my honest opinion is this:

85/100

Cool. So should I continue?

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Blader for 8+years, CA Organizer, hoping to improve at the game and meet more people along the way. Let It Rip!

Well, I gave my very honest opinion, I asked him if he wanted my honest opinion, and that's what I did.

but this is not the first time you've been rude, and everyone VERY WELL knows that

Well that was over a month ago when I was much too entitle to my opinion.
*cough*And calling someone VERY RUDE is also very nice*cough*

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You did ask for his honest opinion. Would you like a Cheeto Rating?

Sure

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Bruh, its not garbage first of all. I noticed that you @"Spin Stealing" are very rude tbh. TheRogueBlader, I'm reading this fan fic, and my honest opinion is this:

85/100

Cool. So should I continue?

Well, yeah I guess. There's no downsides

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HI GIVE ME MONEY

You did ask for his honest opinion. Would you like a Cheeto Rating?

Sure

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Bruh, its not garbage first of all. I noticed that you @"Spin Stealing" are very rude tbh. TheRogueBlader, I'm reading this fan fic, and my honest opinion is this:

85/100

Cool. So should I continue?

If u want to. Your choice, I can't really decide for you

All Im saying is that this Fan Fic's good and I like it

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Please try out my Fan Fics:
FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

but this is not the first time you've been rude, and everyone VERY WELL knows that

Well that was over a month ago when I was much too entitle to my opinion.
*cough*And calling someone VERY RUDE is also very nice*cough*

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Sure

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Cool. So should I continue?

Well, yeah I guess. There's no downsides

Ok, I’ll see if anyone else wants me to continue

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Blader for 8+years, CA Organizer, hoping to improve at the game and meet more people along the way. Let It Rip!

You should continue, just because someone was a bit too blunt about it doesn't mean you can't improve your work.

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but this is not the first time you've been rude, and everyone VERY WELL knows that

Well that was over a month ago when I was much too entitle to my opinion.
*cough*And calling someone VERY RUDE is also very nice*cough*

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Sure

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Cool. So should I continue?

Well, yeah I guess. There's no downsides

It's a nicer insult then the insults you make

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Please try out my Fan Fics:
FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

You should continue, just because someone was a bit too blunt about it doesn't mean you can't improve your work.

Thanks man. 
I know this is unrelated but I really enjoy the WBO, there’s so many supportive people and I’ve made so many friends I just months of being here ever since I joined in July 2020

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Blader for 8+years, CA Organizer, hoping to improve at the game and meet more people along the way. Let It Rip!

You should continue, just because someone was a bit too blunt about it doesn't mean you can't improve your work.

Thanks man. 
I know this is unrelated but I really enjoy the WBO, there’s so many supportive people and I’ve made so many friends I just months of being here ever since I joined in July 2020

That's good to hear, don't let anyone make you feel down.

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TheRogueBlader, You made a typo. BEGGINING and beginning have some differences

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Please try out my Fan Fics:
FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

Well that was over a month ago when I was much too entitle to my opinion.
*cough*And calling someone VERY RUDE is also very nice*cough*

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Well, yeah I guess. There's no downsides

It's a nicer insult then the insults you make

Hey, now that really stings. I gave my honest opinion. I do not see what I could've done wrong, I know I was harsh, but I gave the truth.

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TheRogueBlader, You made a typo. BEGGINING and beginning have some differences

Oh, that’s why beginning always autocorrects.

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Thanks man. 
I know this is unrelated but I really enjoy the WBO, there’s so many supportive people and I’ve made so many friends I just months of being here ever since I joined in July 2020

That's good to hear, don't let anyone make you feel down.

Thanks man

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Blader for 8+years, CA Organizer, hoping to improve at the game and meet more people along the way. Let It Rip!

It's a nicer insult then the insults you make

Hey, now that really stings. I gave my honest opinion. I do not see what I could've done wrong, I know I was harsh, but I gave the truth.

the truth? That's cap

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Please try out my Fan Fics:
FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

Grammar: 2.5/5 It’s essentially a wall of text.
Story: 3/5 It has some potential, but it’s pacing is wack.
Characters: 1.5/5 Canon characters are out of character, most characters don’t even have a personality. The 1.5 is just because I somewhat find the character dynamic between Phi and Hyde is interesting.
Dialogue: 2/5 It’s lifeless for the most part. Hyde’s lines are spicy though.
Length: 2.5/5 It’s inconsistent in length, could use a lot more detail, and makes things feel either too slow or too fast.

Total: 11.5/25

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You did ask for his honest opinion. Would you like a Cheeto Rating?

Sure

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Bruh, its not garbage first of all. I noticed that you @"Spin Stealing" are very rude tbh. TheRogueBlader, I'm reading this fan fic, and my honest opinion is this:

85/100

Cool. So should I continue?

Here is what I think. First of all, can you make a line of blank between every line. The line spacing for WBO makes it really close together and when reading a fan fic it makes my eyes hurt a little. It would also help if you use these "" when speaking. It helps seperates out the story and the talking if that makes sense. Finally, I feel like you are kind of changing Phi he feels less evil. Overall though, I really like it. I only talked about things you could change, but the Fan-fic is actually really good. You have a good story line going right now and I think if you add some phi character development so that he gets more evil than I think this could be one of the best fan-fics. Good Job! BTW I think your thread was high-jacked LOL.

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Hey, now that really stings. I gave my honest opinion. I do not see what I could've done wrong, I know I was harsh, but I gave the truth.

the truth? That's cap

Cap? I'm confused.

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the truth? That's cap

Cap? I'm confused.

i think he means carp.

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if you dont see yellow in this signature, you need primogems.

turn your face sunny side up.

Cap? I'm confused.

i think he means carp.

oh, the c word? Well idc what he has to say, because idc- ik that im innocent and idc if some random person on the internet doesnt believe/think that.

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