Check bottom post.

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Its pretty good! I hope you do more with it!

Ye-Gi-On, Bakigens, and Greenakai XD
Anyway, its pretty good! I already gave you a few suggestions over pm, but other than that, its pretty good!
Just a tip, you might want to merge the two parts.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Ye-Gi-On, Bakigens, and Greenakai XD
Anyway, its pretty good! I already gave you a few suggestions over pm, but other than that, its pretty good!
Just a tip, you might want to merge the two parts.

Ok.

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My bad puns bring all of the girls to the yard.

Couldn't resit. haha
Finishing up part 3 now should be up soon

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[quote='Leone19' pid='1105388' dateline='1364331453']
I've wrote a corresponding story to my created tcg

However, I took parts 1&2 down for now, for editing purposes. If part three would,be wanted, please comment.

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