Mar. 26, 2013 9:57 PM
Mar. 26, 2013 10:20 PM
Its pretty good! I hope you do more with it! 

Mar. 26, 2013 10:43 PM
Ye-Gi-On, Bakigens, and Greenakai XD
Anyway, its pretty good! I already gave you a few suggestions over pm, but other than that, its pretty good!
Just a tip, you might want to merge the two parts.
Anyway, its pretty good! I already gave you a few suggestions over pm, but other than that, its pretty good!
Just a tip, you might want to merge the two parts.
Mar. 26, 2013 10:45 PM
(Mar. 26, 2013 10:43 PM)ΩµτήµшБεгεđ Wrote: [ -> ]Ye-Gi-On, Bakigens, and Greenakai XD
Anyway, its pretty good! I already gave you a few suggestions over pm, but other than that, its pretty good!
Just a tip, you might want to merge the two parts.
Ok.
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My bad puns bring all of the girls to the yard.
Finishing up part 3 now

Mar. 30, 2013 2:30 PM
[quote='Leone19' pid='1105388' dateline='1364331453']
I've wrote a corresponding story to my created tcg
However, I took parts 1&2 down for now, for editing purposes. If part three would,be wanted, please comment.
I've wrote a corresponding story to my created tcg
However, I took parts 1&2 down for now, for editing purposes. If part three would,be wanted, please comment.