"This could be the place Aries, lets go see if their are any bladers" He then noticed two bladers battling "HEY YOU TWO THEIR, WANT TO BATTLE A REAL BLADER? 3... 2... 1... LET IT RIP" His special Thermal Aries landed on the ground and sped straight for the other beys "Do'nt hesitate if you want to win, King Of The Mountain Crash" The beys flew backwards and tumbled back to the bladers who appeared to be stunned. "You two are not that bad but nobody can beat my Aries. You two are the first people I meet in this town and you you happen to have Beys. Oh sorry, im Vance Martinez and this my trusted friend Thermal Aries. Im one of Team Radgers bladers" He sees their blank expressions "Geez you don't know anything about this tournament do you? We reprsent the southern half of Asia,
we actually are set to battle the American team once you slowpokes finish deciding the rest of your team." He pointed at the one with Eagle "And you will be my first opponent. Lets hope you get better before then."


[OOC: I AM NOT REALLY FROM ASIA]

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Support my favorite team in the World Beyblade Championships

Team Wang Hu Zhong

I am also happy to announce that I'm the WBO's first (and mabe only) Fruits Basket fan

I've read you first chapter. I will finish it soon. So far, I think your a good writer and I bet its gonna be awesome!

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Ozone is my character gonna come in or what?

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Othellog made this

if your still doing character request, could you make this dude?

Name: Brad Lucas

Age. 14

Bey: Death Quetzalcoatl

Special moves: (defense mode) Coiled Snake (attack mode) Eight fangs of fury.

Look: Brown hair. Tall. Wears a necklace that looks a snake. dresses like he was going to a rodeo. Keeps to himself. Uses defense special move but when he really angry he will unleash his attack special.

if you could include him i would be great. also your story is Fricikin Awesome!

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Focus made this awesome Sig!!

OK. I finished the story so far. I love it. If you want more people to se it, There s Beyblade Fanon Wiki. You could post your storys on that too. Are you making more of the story?

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Name: Rex Jamison
Bey: RayPiscesCH105RFS
Age: 13
Appearance: Rex has blond hair that spikes up in random directions. He wears blue a lot, blue shirt,shorts, Etc.
Personality: An intelligent Blabbermouth who is courageous when needed to be, but annoying. He has a dream of getting into the top 10 bladers. He constantly makes puns and jokes. Rex is the leader of team Star, a group of 3 bladers.

You don't need to use him now because he is fit to be in later chapters.

@ Akio314: So your OC's a human equivalent of Annoying Orange. How interesting!

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

@ Akio314: So your OC's a human equivalent of Annoying Orange. How interesting!

Or annoying! Hey Apple! Hey Apple! Hey Apple! Hey Apple! Hey Pear! So annoying!

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@ Duck: I thought A.O. was pretty cool. Anyways, let's get back on subject.

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

hey this is nat blader so black hole are you playing mine craft

Please do not post things like that in my story. If your gonna ask those questions, do it on a mine craft thread, but not this one.

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Ok guys. I'm not doing anymore requests unless I like them! I'm sorry but, I need to find a way to put most of the characters in here!

Chapter 5:

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The Battle Begins!
"Go L-Drago!" Karan shouted as I watched his battlie in the championships. He was facing the blader from Washington. "L-DRAGO!" He shouted. "GO! SPECIAL MOVE! DRAGON SOARING RAGE!" The L-Drago beast appeared and flew into the air. He came down in a firey explosion and kocked out the other bey. "Alright Karan!" Alfred shouted and jumped in the air. Karan came back with a smile on his face. "You're up next, Shawn." He says. "I know." I say. I get up and start walking out of the room. "Good luck Shawn!" Karan and Alfred shout.
I walk out the the stadium. "Here's our next battle!" The ref shouts. "The representitive of North Carolina, Shawn Faircloth!" I smile and wave. "He's his opponent, the representitive of Texas, Vance Martinez!" He walk out from the shadow of the waiting area. He's around 15 and has neck length black hair and brown eyes. He's wearing a brown jacket with a ram's head on it, black pants, and silver shoes. "He must use Aries." I think. I take out my Eagle. "Bring it Vance!" I say as I show him Eagle. "Consider it brought." He says as he takes out his Thermal Aries and shows it to me. We ready our beys. "Alright!" The ref starts. "3! 2! 1!" My grip tightens. "GO SHOOT!" We both shout.
Eagle instantly smashes Aries into the wall. "No! Aries!" Eagle goes in for the kill. "EAGLE! SPECIAL MOVE! CLAWING UPPERCUT!" I shout as eagle tosses Aries into the air. "GO GO!" I shout as Eagle flies into the air. "EAGLE! TWIN TURBO SMASH!" I shout as Eagle sets on fire and smashes Aries into the stadium. Aries stops spinning. I catches Eagle. "The winner is Shawn Faircloth of North Carolina!" The ref shouts. "Yeah! Alright!" I shout and hold Eagle in the air. "We're going to the finals!" I shout. I run back into the room were Alfred and Karan are waiting.
They give me high fives. "Alfred, you're up next." I say. "Yup!" He says and starts walking out. "Me and Byxis won't let 'cha down." Me and Karan smile. He walks up to the stadium. "The representer of New York, Alfred Jones vs the representer of Florida, Joseph Dawson!" The ready their beys. "3! 2! 1!" The ref shouts. "GO SHOOT!" They shout, and as soon as the battle begins, it's over. And the winner is Alfred.

Chapter 6 will be up soon!

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Vance POV

"Perfect, just perfect. Eliminated already. I don't know what to do now. Aries why do we lose my friend" He looked at Thermal Aries. "Aw well, hey Shawn do'nt make me feel bad about losing to you in the representitive matches. Hey and I know we do'nt know each other that well but mind if I tag along?. I might be a support member anywhay"

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Team Wang Hu Zhong

I am also happy to announce that I'm the WBO's first (and mabe only) Fruits Basket fan

I love your story! When are you going to need more characters?

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The Finals Begin!
"Rumor has it!" I heard Alfred singing along to. "Really Alfred?" I ask. "Adele?" "Yes." He responds. "She is the best singer on the planet." "Well you need to stop focusing on here, and focus on your game plane." Karan says. "The finals are very soon, and the opponents are strong." "i know, I know." He responds. "But that doesn't mean I can't have a little fun." "You New Yorkers..." I say, laughing. "Always looking for fun."
"Shawn Faircloth to the stage!" I hear the ref shout. "Welp, I'm next!" I say, happily. I walk out of the room to the stadium. The crowd roars as I wave. "GO SHAWN!" I hear a familier voice shout. I look up to see D.J., Taylor, and Jake in the stands. "I'll win for you guys!" I shout and give a thumbs up. I see the opponent and get serious. "We have Shawn Faircloth of North Carolina vs Angela Stiger of Ohio!" She was shorter than me and looked young. Around 8 or 9. She took out her bey, Libra DF145BS. "I should go easy on her..." I thought.
"Bladers ready!" The ref shouts. We ready our beys. "3! 2! 1!" He shouts. "GO SHOOT!" We both shout and launch our beys. "GO EAGLE!" I shout as Eagle smacks into Libra, but Libra doesn't budge. "What the..." I mumble. "GO GO LIBRA!" She shouts. Her Libra sends out a huge blast of energy. Eagle gets smashed with the blast, but is still spinning. "WHOA!" I shout. "EAGLE! FLY!" Eagle flies into the air. "GO EAGLE! SPECIAL MOVE! TWIN TURBO SMASH!" I shout as Eagle sets on fire and comes down at a high speed. Angela laughs. "Huh?" I say. "Go Libra! Special move!" She starts. "I'm so dead." I think.

This one's a cliff hanger!

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Whoa good chapter, Nice cliffhanger. This is a great story.

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The Legendary Blader
"Libra!" Angela shouted. "Libra! Final Inferno Flare!" Libra shouts a huge beam of energy right at Eagle. "No!" I shout as Eagle gets thrown down into the side of the stadium. This causes a huge explosion and I fly back into the wall of the arena. I sit there, in pain, and think about what I'm supposed to do. "C'MON SHAWN!" I hear D.J. shout. "YOU CAN'T GIVE UP NOW!" "DON'T LOSE!" Jake shouts. "I KNOW YOU CAN DO IT!" Taylor adds. "USE YOUR SPIRIT!" As soon as I heard that I open my eyes and stand up. "I WON'T LOSE!" I shout as that purple aura starts to glow. I turn to them. "Thanks guys." I say and smile. I start walking back to the stadium when Taylor calls my name.
I turn around. "Shawn... I... I love you." She says. My cheeks turn bright red. I then realize what I must do. "I will win." I say. "I swear it." I start walking back to the stadium, with even more confindence and power. "ALRIGHT EAGLE!" I start. "LET'S TRY THIS AGAIN!" The aura gets bigger. Eagle flies into the air. Angela laughs and prepairs her next special move. "LIBRA! FINAL INFERNO FLARE!" She shouts. Libra powers up. "GO EAGLE! LEGEND MOVE!" I shout and hear Angela gasp. The crowd goes silent. "EAGLE! CROSS WIND DESTROYER!" As Libra blasts the beam of energy, Eagle counters it. "EAGLE!!!!" I shout as he destroys the energy. "No! Libra!" Angela shouts as Eagle smashes it from above.
A stadium out. I win and catch Eagle. "ALRIGHT!" I shout. "I'M A MEMBER OF THE AMERICAN TEAM!" I continue. "I AM A LEGENDARY BLADER!" D.J., Taylor, and Jake all run out to congradulate me. "You sure are!" D.J. adds. I hug Taylor, who's cheeks were red as a tomato. We both laughed as Karan and Alfred ran out to join us. "Well," They all said. "Kiss her!" I stared into her eyes and, in the heat of the moment, kissed her. As I pull away, I realize. This was my first kiss. We smile. As I hug her once more, I whisper in her ear, "I'll be back once I win the world series. I promise."
"Celebration time's over." Alfred says. "My battle's up next." I nod in agreement. "Good luck man." I say. "Hmph." He says and turns to see his opponent on the board. The champion of South Carolina. Anna Marie Gray and her bey, Beat Lynx TH170WD. I stand beside him. "it's only gonna get tougher from here man." I say. "I know right..." He responds and takes out Byxis. "I know right..." He repeats and clinches Byxis tightly in his fist.

I got bored and excited, so I made the next chapter. XD

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SUPER, SUPER, SUPER!!!!!

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:dj2002yeah: Thanks to BeybladeFreak for the sweet signature.

I love it! Its good how you added some romance. A good story always has some romance.

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I love it! Its good how you added some romance. A good story always has some romance.

Thanks! There's gonna be some more later in the story

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No one likes my beyblade story Yours is perfect though.. (I think I missed a chapter of it though)

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No one likes my beyblade story

Don't wory! I'm kind of expereanced. Not on here, but at school. I enjoy writing storys there. Give it some time. Practice. If you have a great idea and want other people to know about it, start writing. It took me awhile to come up with a good plot for this story. Writing is always tough, but you'll make it through. Trust me.

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Thanks! Also thanks for checking it out

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Thanks! Also thanks for checking it out

No problem!

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Looks like this story is building up quite nicely! Love how everything is playing out!

The words are jumbled up a little, but the story itself totally makes up for it. Keep it up!

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This story is crazily good. Can't wait for Chapter 4!

Chapter 4? You mean Chapter 3? Chapter 4 is two chapters away! You sure are looking ahead...

Anyway, great Chapter 2! I love the beys Eagle and Kerbecs! Keep up the amazing writing!

Chapter 3? The next thing that comes next is chapter 2 part 2...Eh. Almost like Chapter 3. Keep up the good writing! And make sure not to have Can-Dai always winning. Tha would make the story kind suckish. I used to hate Pokemon because Ash was beatin everyone including my favorite character. My favorite character in your story is Jake. Jake the one with a defensive type bey. He should've been in the stadium a bit longer. If you have Hasbro beyblade then use the codes for beybladebattles.com to see the combinations in the character requests.

Well that's enough. Great job, Ozone!

I heard not very many people on the WBO go on beybladebattles.com because they have tournaments or something like that. (Just saying.)

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