(Story) Beyblade: The Twin Heros (Stopped Writing. Read my last post!)

Poll: What do you think of my story?

It's amazing, as always! I love it! Grin
61.54%
16
It's good. I like it a lot! Smile
15.38%
4
Neyh. It's okay. :\
7.69%
2
No. Just no.
15.38%
4
Total: 100% 26 vote(s)
I did not say anything hateful or insulting, I just said "Why don't you like ChinaBlade's story?" I apologize if I hurt anyone with my private messages.
dont stop writing chinablade you inspired me to write my story
you inspired me too. THE REASON I CREATED MY STORY! You stop, i stop.
She has also inspired me. All of this nonsense is pointless, if you have anything nasty to say, keep it out of the public, better yet, keep it to yourself.
Pastaa?
W-w-w-why?
China! Come on! Your better than this!
Think of something better like puppies or Italy in Chibitalia or something!
Don't quit.
Don't.
Don't.

Im going to leave this thread for you's to sort out. Its getting out of hand.

IF you continue I will jump up and down and draw a super amazing picture dedicated to you.
So don't.


Please don't give up. HI! I just popped out of random here :3 U MAD BROS? Anywaaayyyyssssss, ChinaBlade, many people idolize you. It's because the way you write (and luv HETALIA Grin ) gives us a thrill to our minds. I myself, am too tired to watch too much Beyblade anime ( BUT NAWT HETALIA :3 ) so I became interested in literature which involves a new story with new characters. I have been flattered by your amazing work (America: AND LUV FOR HETALIA! Me:shut it America! ) and am very interested to your type of literature. Please don't lose hope. Anyone who is with me is free to join, while I am not to be breaking rules for this post. (*America pops out randomly* This guy has a likes you ME: WHAAATT?! err, no I don't ="l ) If I broke a rule, I'm sorry.
Thanks for all the nice posts guys...
I apologized to Hazel and Kai-V for the way I acted.
Anyways, I'm back! Grin
YaY! Your back! (AMERICA: =w= Me: WHAT?!)
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
When you stoped I was like:When I saw you would continue I was like :Did thinking about puppies and Chibi Italy help?
Know time for that picture................
What do you want in it?
No need for the picture. Anyways, here's the ever awaited, chapter 4!

Chapter 4:
Awshum as always!
I luv it!
Cute
Ima gonna do it anyways!
Good Chapter China! Smile
that chapter was so cool, it's like a frozen version of liquid nitrogen(that liquid that freezes other things on contact.) so... yeagh. great chapter china.
(Sep. 17, 2012  5:58 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: No need for the picture. Anyways, here's the ever awaited, chapter 4!

Chapter 4:
Much better. The Camille bit was pretty interesting.

@ChinaBlade lol: You mess with the wolf, you get the fangs. You got that saying from KungFu Panda 2 XD
Katniss and China: HETTTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Sep. 14, 2012  11:17 PM)xXJCherzXx Wrote: If you can't take criticism then you shouldn't be a writer. I'm done.

Hey u need to be quite. She's trying to make entertainment for some of us. She actually inspired me to write a story not on here though it's about a show called Zatch Bell
Sorry there was no chapters!
I had a track meet. (We came in 2nd out of the top 6 schools in the county!)
Anyways, there should be new chapters up tomorrow!
We had Beez In The Trap by Nicki Minaj blasting on the bus ride back.
It's now stuck in my head.
Neyh. XD
Oh yeah Pinky, try to fix up one detail in some area :3
Wow, it's been awhile.
Well, here it goes...
I have bad news...
I have gotten a concusion.
I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.
Neyh.
But! Don't get too upset! I have a new idea!
It has new characters and an even better story line!
Just need a title.
Anyways, this story is officially... Over.
Thanks for reading, I guess. :\
(Sep. 29, 2012  12:12 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.

Pretty sure that discus wasn't the reason you want to end the story. Or it must've hit you insanely hard and probably made you to go to the hospital ...

But anyways, some stories just don't end. That's cool. Looking forward to the next.
(Sep. 29, 2012  12:15 AM)ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) Wrote:
(Sep. 29, 2012  12:12 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.

Pretty sure that discus wasn't the reason you want to end the story. Or it must've hit you insanely hard and probably made you to go to the hospital ...

But anyways, some stories just don't end. That's cool. Looking forward to the next.

It was insanely hard. Like, I was standing in front of the chick. I blacked out for 5 or 6 minutes. DX

Me and my smartness.
... And I somehow made a 100 on a math test two days later.
sad that this ones over but good thing your making a new one anyway did you really hit your head
(Sep. 29, 2012  12:12 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Wow, it's been awhile.
Well, here it goes...
I have bad news...
I have gotten a concusion.
I got hit in the head with a discus at my track meet the other day, and well...
You can figure out the rest.
Anyways, I have completely forgoten what was going to happen...
Yeah. I lost my memory of my story.
Neyh.
But! Don't get too upset! I have a new idea!
It has new characters and an even better story line!
Just need a title.
Anyways, this story is officially... Over.
Thanks for reading, I guess. :\
Well that's good(not the concussion,the new story line)
Hope you'll use older characters XD

@Angry Face
They never do
Unsmith

(Sep. 29, 2012  12:18 AM)beybladefoever Wrote: did you really hit your head

Yes.
I was standing in front of this person, trying to get my discus.
Long story short, I got hurt. Badly.
oh, im never doing track i dont want to get hurt