I decided to do it
{STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 29 added, and taking Character Request
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ok thats fine
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Sorry guys for not adding some chapters, so here you go
i have a character request
name- kane
age-14
bey- twisted tempo ed145mb
way he looks- white hairs and a black cap and a t-shirt with grey jeans
way he acts - kinda alone , never likes some1 helping him , bt is actually kind hearted
special moves - time wrap , destructor drive , last hour
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i have a character request
name- kane
age-14
bey- twisted tempo ed145mb
way he looks- white hairs and a black cap and a t-shirt with grey jeans
way he acts - kinda alone , never likes some1 helping him , bt is actually kind hearted
special moves - time wrap , destructor drive , last hour
time wrap- creates a vortex arnd the bey and stop it,destructor drive acts bey in zig-zag motion,last hour-tempo shines and spins fast and hits the bey
name- kane
age-14
bey- twisted tempo ed145mb
way he looks- white hairs and a black cap and a t-shirt with grey jeans
way he acts - kinda alone , never likes some1 helping him , bt is actually kind hearted
special moves - time wrap , destructor drive , last hour
[quote='dragonPhang101' pid='1022733' dateline='1346074405']
i have a character request
name- kane
age-14
bey- twisted tempo ed145mb
way he looks- white hairs and a black cap and a t-shirt with grey jeans
way he acts - kinda alone , never likes some1 helping him , bt is actually kind hearted
special moves - time wrap , destructor drive , last hour
time wrap- creates a vortex arnd the bey and stop it,destructor drive acts bey in zig-zag motion,last hour-tempo shines and spins fast and hits the bey
Epic chapters!!!!I can't believe the vision will had!and what lily did!and Jaden has a brother!?!?!?
gr8 chptr amazing dat lily wanted t be no longer a dark follower and the anger in jaden about his brother is really impressing
gr8 chptr amazing dat lily wanted t be no longer a dark follower and the anger in jaden about his brother is really impressing
gr8 chptr amazing dat lily wanted t be no longer a dark follower and the anger in jaden about his brother is really impressing
Name:Hassan
Bey:Meteo L-Drago
Age (dosen't matter how old):2
How they look:like riouga(little verzion
Special moves (3):l-Dagos
The way they act:Like riouge with meteo l-drago(ps. he is his son)
Bey:Meteo L-Drago
Age (dosen't matter how old):2
How they look:like riouga(little verzion
Special moves (3):l-Dagos
The way they act:Like riouge with meteo l-drago(ps. he is his son)
Nice job! Does Jason get to battle anywhere in the story?
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Credit to MBX for the awesome siggie
Yeah he's just waiting for the right moment.
Good. I was getting nervous
the battle between virgo and pegasis will be gr8
Chapter 24 is now up.
So this is the story you been writing. I like it!
Awesome! That battle was epic!
Chapter 25 is up!
oh cool
!!!!!beymania never thought about it lol
!!!!!beymania never thought about it lol
Chapter 26 is up and i the most Saddest Confusing chapter made.
Yeah it is confusing!!!hope you make the next chapter soon!I want to hear the long story of how he died!
Well it pretty obvious. Just look back about 2 or 3 chapters and you'll see some of the reasons he died.
Edit: You'll need to look father then that.
Edit: You'll need to look father then that.
It's not that obvious!I can't find it
Chapter 27 is now up, so your questions are finaly answered
so he has the cure to QH70 , and also got a never to die ability
Well it's kinda like that. He can die, just not by he hands of QH70. When QH70 kinda does kills him, but not fully. It's hard to explain.
Lol he is sorta immortal!so *EPIC*!!!so he can visit his dead friends and stuff when he dies for a little while
Are you a native english speaker, because if you are you could really use to take a grammar class