That dog officially scares me

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Credit to MBX for the awesome siggie
North USA Leader of team chaos universe. Any bladers in the northern US pm me about the team

cool my characters bey is a new and improve pegasus(Star Light Pegasus!!!)

Epic story!I saw the movie In Time too!

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you should make the chapters longer!you always leave me more curious than before!

im glad to read chapter 13

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THIS SIG AND AVATAR IS FROM THE GREAT (BESTLEONEBLADE) HE DESERVES ALL CREDIT BECAUSE I WOULD DUCK AT TRYING TO MAKE A SIG

SPOILER ALERT i did not see that comin, soko is dead

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THIS SIG AND AVATAR IS FROM THE GREAT (BESTLEONEBLADE) HE DESERVES ALL CREDIT BECAUSE I WOULD DUCK AT TRYING TO MAKE A SIG

Poor Soko

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Credit to MBX for the awesome siggie
North USA Leader of team chaos universe. Any bladers in the northern US pm me about the team

This is story is great but to the people reading it do you ithink its the best story out right now

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i do

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THIS SIG AND AVATAR IS FROM THE GREAT (BESTLEONEBLADE) HE DESERVES ALL CREDIT BECAUSE I WOULD DUCK AT TRYING TO MAKE A SIG

Thanks BeatFox, and if my story is not the best i'm okay with that. I just like righting stories people like.

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

Spoiler (Click to View)

When my bey stop spinning
In Time

nice story
Anyways i have a character request
Name:Marcus
Bey:Burn Bull 90EWD
Age :11
How I look: Yellow-Spiky Hair,White hoodie,Yellow t-shirt,white shorts,white cap,gray shoes and kinda short
Special move:Red horn uppercut,Burning Stampede,Flaming Horn Strike
How i act :Annoying,cheerful,determined

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Member of Team Chaos Universe[WORLDWIDE]
Division Leader of Asia
Bladers in Asia who wish to join Chaos Universe PM me or go find some other way...
As for other bladers not in Asia, find the division Leaders of your own contry if you wish to join:|


Meteo L-Drago's Clear wheel is not clear at all; it's opaque:P

I really like this character request for some reason?

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

Spoiler (Click to View)

When my bey stop spinning
In Time

i promised i wouldnt cry

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THIS SIG AND AVATAR IS FROM THE GREAT (BESTLEONEBLADE) HE DESERVES ALL CREDIT BECAUSE I WOULD DUCK AT TRYING TO MAKE A SIG

I know. It is sad

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

Spoiler (Click to View)

When my bey stop spinning
In Time

Why you killed Soko for...

Because it got far into the story and a main character didn't die yet. Plus when i created Soko I already had it in my mind to kill him. Oh and every night i'll right a chapter.

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

Spoiler (Click to View)

When my bey stop spinning
In Time

Because it got far into the story and a main character didn't die yet. Plus when i created Soko I already had it in my mind to kill him. Oh and every night i'll right a chapter.

Oh!ok cool make a new chap this story is epic so far!!!

I will later

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

Spoiler (Click to View)

When my bey stop spinning
In Time

nice story
Anyways i have a character request
Name:Marcus
Bey:Burn Bull 90EWD
Age :11
How I look: Yellow-Spiky Hair,White hoodie,Yellow t-shirt,white shorts,white cap,gray shoes and kinda short
Special move:Red horn uppercut,Burning Stampede,Flaming Horn Strike
How i act :Annoying,cheerful,determined

Oops just for got a detail:
Red horn uppercut:hits the bey at the spintrack
Burning Stampede:bull charges at the opponent and will make an explosion
Flaming horn strike:Bull's beast will come out with fiery horns and charging at the bey and it is faster than burning stampede but the damage is lower
Edit:Brown Yellow-Spiky Hair

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Member of Team Chaos Universe[WORLDWIDE]
Division Leader of Asia
Bladers in Asia who wish to join Chaos Universe PM me or go find some other way...
As for other bladers not in Asia, find the division Leaders of your own contry if you wish to join:|


Meteo L-Drago's Clear wheel is not clear at all; it's opaque:P

This chapter is one of my favorites!Karuo is grand Leone!just epic!

Just wait till Will unleash Karuo's true power. Now that's a chapter i can't wait to write.

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

Spoiler (Click to View)

When my bey stop spinning
In Time

Just wait till Will unleash Karuo's true power. Now that's a chapter i can't wait to write.

Awesome!!!!tomorrow I will do mines too!

Should I name the chapters? I was thinking of it, but i'll let the readers decided.

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

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When my bey stop spinning
In Time

u have made so many chapters i dont think its that important now that u name chapters

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I kinda think it should. You no to help the new readers get a hint on what they're about to read.

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

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When my bey stop spinning
In Time

yeah i agree with that

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THIS SIG AND AVATAR IS FROM THE GREAT (BESTLEONEBLADE) HE DESERVES ALL CREDIT BECAUSE I WOULD DUCK AT TRYING TO MAKE A SIG