3000 years after beyblade first started lives a new era of Bladers and beyblades (not sure if this is gonna be good but im trying xD) Bladers must now wield a gauntlet called a Beyfusionr will allow them to control or actually be the beyblade . Beyblade is now more deadly then before (erm yeah i reccomend people10+ to read this xD) The Beyblades and the Bladers have finnaly become one. (i might switch from narraotr to the main charchter perspective from time to time)
Main charchter: Jin (charchter request acepted)
Chapter : In the beginning its all fun and games
It was a very sunny day outside it was summer and it was getting hotter as the days passed by.Jin walked to hes local Beystore to buy a BeyFusion.He was excited he had just got a beyblade for the first time he couldnt wait to try it out.I bought the black Beyfusion i immediately tried it on .It felt lightweight allmost like a feather.I went to the nearest bey park to test my beyblade and the Beyfusion out . He found a staduim with a young boy standing next to it.He looked about Jins age.We both got ready to launch our beys .3..2...1 LET IT RIP .I launched my Ice naiooxs into the staduim.The both of our beys were attack types.I eventually figured out hes beyblade was Fire Ueno . I used my Beyfusion to control my bey i decided i wanted to stay on him .I thrusted my hand towards hes bey.Hes beyblade started to wobble i decided to use my special move .I moved my hand up,left,right,and left again. my beyblade then activated its special move i was going to win!My beys metal wheel turned into ice and rammed Ueno till it stoped spining.I had won my very first beybattle. The kid said that i was pretty strong.No im not strong i just got my beyblade i replied.He said hes name was Travis .We walked home talking about beyblades the whole time.But then i heard a crash.......
Its kinda lengthy i think but tell me how i did and please point out mistakes
Main charchter: Jin (charchter request acepted)
Chapter : In the beginning its all fun and games
It was a very sunny day outside it was summer and it was getting hotter as the days passed by.Jin walked to hes local Beystore to buy a BeyFusion.He was excited he had just got a beyblade for the first time he couldnt wait to try it out.I bought the black Beyfusion i immediately tried it on .It felt lightweight allmost like a feather.I went to the nearest bey park to test my beyblade and the Beyfusion out . He found a staduim with a young boy standing next to it.He looked about Jins age.We both got ready to launch our beys .3..2...1 LET IT RIP .I launched my Ice naiooxs into the staduim.The both of our beys were attack types.I eventually figured out hes beyblade was Fire Ueno . I used my Beyfusion to control my bey i decided i wanted to stay on him .I thrusted my hand towards hes bey.Hes beyblade started to wobble i decided to use my special move .I moved my hand up,left,right,and left again. my beyblade then activated its special move i was going to win!My beys metal wheel turned into ice and rammed Ueno till it stoped spining.I had won my very first beybattle. The kid said that i was pretty strong.No im not strong i just got my beyblade i replied.He said hes name was Travis .We walked home talking about beyblades the whole time.But then i heard a crash.......
Its kinda lengthy i think but tell me how i did and please point out mistakes