(Jun. 19, 2011  1:33 AM)Captain Caprii Wrote: Thats ok but um super strong id only use it at teh end of battles if that .. Final attack SF TO HF are they made up or the hasbro and stuff ones?

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Since i finnaly thought of a sceneario for chapter 2 u get it early i swear if i can think up more stuff u will have 6 chapters up in 1 day xD

Chapter 2:The Crash

Travis and I both jumped at the sound of it. I decided to walk over and see what it was .Travis stayed put he said he was to scared. When i looked there was a Man He looked about 17 he was very tall and skinny ,He was Wearing a plaid shirt and with skinny jeans. Where he landed was a giant crater. I stared at him i didnt notice he saw me staring at him. He walked up to me hes eyes looked looked they had flames burning in them I could tell that he was going to do something.Before i could run he grabed me and threw me on the ground.
Travis wondered what happened and came running over .I tried to signal him to stop but he didnt get the message .Travis ran up to the man and started to punch him.The man turned around and looked at him."You are not the one i was sent to retrive go away before i hurt you"The man said.I thought to myself retrive what does he mean by that.The man quickly grabed me again and teleported.I felt like my body was being torn apart and put back together again.When we came out we were in a warehouse .The man opened hes mouth to speak "My master told me to keep a watch on you the second you got that beyblade your a very poweful young man most people dont learn there special moves that easily. I brought you here to help you double your power." He brought me to a staduim. "Ready up " He said. 3...2...1...LET IT RIP . My ice naioox spun around the stage trying to attack hes bey.Every moved just drew down my stamina.He moved hes hand right,up,down,up. Hes beyblades performance tip changed and hes beyblade acted an attack beyblade.I moved my hand down and forward my bey attacked hes from below."Thats not going to work"He said .He moved hes hand right,left,down,right . Hes beyblade had a life sucking energy around it. He started to take hes beyblades power he had a life sucking energy now.But instead of pointing hes hand at my beyblade...He pointed it at me i felt the life being drained of of me.I fell to the floor .He sitll had hes hand pointed at me.I heard a ladies voice ."Thats enough Ben.He has had enough "She said.She droped down from one of the rails at the top of the room.I Gasped for air."Why do you allways have to do this to the recruits?"She said.She walked over to me .She opened her mout"Are you ok sweetie?".She held out a friendly hand .I grabed it and she helped lift me up."Thank you" I said. She said her name was Savannah and the other person name was ben.I looked at her i wondered if they could bring travis here."What about my friend?" I said."Were getting him next he wasnt part of the mission at that presnt time" She said. (good place for me to stop)