My beyblade fan fiction

Chapter 1:Vs. kenta
chapter 2:the tournement
chapter 3 coming soon!give me a character request please.
Hmm good story, could be a little longer though, but keep trying and someday you'll get there.
(Jul. 28, 2012  5:02 PM)blader7228 Wrote: Chapter 1:Vs. kenta
chapter 2:the tournement
i got nothing else after that
One word:Capitilization.Another Word:To short.A third worrd:Bad just bad

(Jul. 28, 2012  5:05 PM)Ichigo32 Wrote: Hmm good story, could be a little longer though, but keep trying and someday you'll get there.

obviosly he wll do more 3 chpters isnt a story i think u done very wellill look fowards to more Wink
sorry 2 chapters Smile