(Jul. 28, 2012  5:02 PM)blader7228 Wrote: Chapter 1:Vs. kenta

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i was strolling around training my beyblade.then i saw a tournement blimb.
and blader dj said"ladies and gentlemen!,the canyon tournement is coming!"
"this is my lucky day"i say to my self.then i run to sign up...just in time!
then i bumped into kenta"woah..."i said"sorry"kenta said.
"hey,since we've met,want to battle me?i asked."sure"said kenta
we attached our beys to the launcher

3...2...1!let it rip!
we said pulling our rip cords
"go!capricorn"i shout
"come on saggitario"said kenta

they slamed each other for a while,then they were wobbley
"lets finish it,capricorn!"i say"special move!carprihorn blast!"
then capricorn flew into the air and and a huge bang went on
...saggitario was stopped!"I WON!!"
*i hold my beypointer up*
"i have 02000 beypoints,kenta"i say.

chapter 2:the tournement

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the next day i went to the tournement.
then blader dj said"first up!kyoya vs. teru!"
i watched
"come on virgo!"shouted teru
"leone!go!"said kyoya
"special move!lion wild wind fang dance"shouted kyoya
And a tornado formed...and virgo was knocked out!
"too easy..."said kyoya

blader dj said"next,yemin vs. tobio!"
"capricorn,we will win"tobio said
"your the best capricorn"i say
and we attached our beys to the launchers
3...2...1...LET IT RIP!

they clash feicrcely
"go capricorn"i shouted
then,i saw tobios beyblade slow
"special move!caprihorn blast!"and then my capricorn knocked tobios capricorn
"mission...incomplete"tobio said with a grunt
"yeah,i won!"

blader dj then said"next!the semifinal,hyoma vs tsubasa
"go earth eagle!"tsubasa said when they launched
"alright,aries hold him!"shouted
After a long battle,tsubasa won

i got nothing else after that

(Jul. 28, 2012  5:05 PM)Ichigo32 Wrote: Hmm good story, could be a little longer though, but keep trying and someday you'll get there.