Mr. N's Beyblade Story (CHAPTER 3 IS UP!)

Poll: My story is...

Good
84.00%
21
OK
12.00%
3
Bad
4.00%
1
Total: 100% 25 vote(s)
StupidStupidStupidStupidStupidStupidStupidStupidStupid good
Vulcapcator? Good name for the clear wheel?
Swordfish sounds like a good Clear Wheel. Nitro a good Metal Wheel name?
What about Hydrus or Hydra?They're constellations.
*facepalm* Someone has requested it already and I have it planned for another character...
I got a character request

Name: Sarah Melaz
Male or Female: Female
Bey: Earth Fireblaze 105WD
Personality: Loud mouth, Generous, Funny, Sadistic
Good or Bad: Good
Gear: Blue and yellow launcher grip. Orange string launcher.
Appearance: Long brunette hair. She is 5 feet tall. Pink skirt. A nyan cat shirt. Black long converse shoes.
Age:13

Enjoy!


EDIT:My 100th post!
Hey man good story. I have a serious question. Would you mind including my character into your story as a main character while I include yours in mines? Overall anyway, Your writing skills are awesome.
I thought this thread died long ago...

I do have plans for this thread. I might update it in November since I have to take the AMC8 and I just don't have a lot of free time.
it was dead long ago until i read it and posted a reply!
I have an energy ring, its called Spider, it has a spider web-like wheel. Its white and grey.
OK, I'm just not gonna take requests since I can't incorporate all of them into my story and it would be unfair.