Metal Fury(storyline)

Poll: Who do you like most?

Kye
66.67%
2
David
0%
0
James
33.33%
1
Total: 100% 3 vote(s)
Chapter 1 A Tournament One normal afternoon







I like the story, but the format is wrong. Here's an example how you do it: 'Hi' Said Bob
Here's how you should do it: "Hi," said Bob. The more books you read the better you get at writing.
(Jun. 02, 2012  6:38 PM)LibraKai800 Wrote: I like the story, but the format is wrong. Here's an example how you do it: 'Hi' Said Bob
Here's how you should do it: "Hi," said Bob. The more books you read the better you get at writing.
Thanks for the tip Grin
By the way I need more characters for the semi finals and finals.
PM me or post it here
Name: Xion
Age: 13
Beyblade: Fang Leone
Move: True King Lion Tearing Blast, True Lion Wild Wind Fang Dance, King Lion Reverse Wind Strike, King Lion Furious Blast Shot
(i want him in semi and finals)
Why am I not seeing any content in the chapter?
im not either.
Y U NO TEL MEH STORYIES?
Seriously
Do not make new threads until you actually have a story to post.