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Metal Fury(storyline) - Kye#4 - Jun. 02, 2012
Chapter 1 A Tournament One normal afternoon
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - Driger Kai - Jun. 02, 2012
I like the story, but the format is wrong. Here's an example how you do it: 'Hi' Said Bob
Here's how you should do it: "Hi," said Bob. The more books you read the better you get at writing.
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - Kye#4 - Jun. 02, 2012
(Jun. 02, 2012 6:38 PM)LibraKai800 Wrote: I like the story, but the format is wrong. Here's an example how you do it: 'Hi' Said BobThanks for the tip
Here's how you should do it: "Hi," said Bob. The more books you read the better you get at writing.
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - Kye#4 - Jun. 03, 2012
By the way I need more characters for the semi finals and finals.
PM me or post it here
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - Mercury.Anubis - Jun. 03, 2012
Name: Xion
Age: 13
Beyblade: Fang Leone
Move: True King Lion Tearing Blast, True Lion Wild Wind Fang Dance, King Lion Reverse Wind Strike, King Lion Furious Blast Shot
(i want him in semi and finals)
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - Kye#4 - Jun. 04, 2012
OK
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - *Ginga* - Jul. 27, 2012
Why am I not seeing any content in the chapter?
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - Luck - Jul. 27, 2012
im not either.
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - King of Misfits - Jul. 27, 2012
Y U NO TEL MEH STORYIES?
Seriously
RE: Metal Fury(storyline) - sarabscientist - Jul. 27, 2012
Do not make new threads until you actually have a story to post.