World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Chapter 1 A Tournament One normal afternoon

I like the story, but the format is wrong. Here's an example how you do it: 'Hi' Said Bob
Here's how you should do it: "Hi," said Bob. The more books you read the better you get at writing.

(Jun. 02, 2012  6:38 PM)LibraKai800 Wrote: [ -> ]I like the story, but the format is wrong. Here's an example how you do it: 'Hi' Said Bob
Here's how you should do it: "Hi," said Bob. The more books you read the better you get at writing.

Thanks for the tip

By the way I need more characters for the semi finals and finals.
PM me or post it here

Name: Xion
Age: 13
Beyblade: Fang Leone
Move: True King Lion Tearing Blast, True Lion Wild Wind Fang Dance, King Lion Reverse Wind Strike, King Lion Furious Blast Shot
(i want him in semi and finals)

OK

Why am I not seeing any content in the chapter?

im not either.

Y U NO TEL MEH STORYIES?
Seriously

Do not make new threads until you actually have a story to post.