Make Your Own Beyblade Burst Character

(Oct. 20, 2018  2:14 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:05 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Fin Dakon 
She is a very shy person but in battle she starts to open up.

Beyblade:
Combo 0. tail tail is a frame that is super sharp six side frame. it has no lad at all. Flugel'

Special Moves. Tail whip is when Dragoon speeds in to it's opponent hops and hit it with it's frame.

Dragon flight is when Dragoon spin in a tight circular moment and make a vortex and then it rides the vortex in to the air and then falls right on top of its opponent. 
Can my Blader battle yours?

Sure. Am i writing it or you?
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:27 AM)Jman jman Wrote:
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:14 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Can my Blader battle yours?

Sure. Am i writing it or you?
We both can write one. Although if you don’t want too you don’t have too
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:29 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:27 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Sure. Am i writing it or you?
We both can write one. Although if you don’t want too you don’t have too

Okay we can both write one.
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:32 AM)Jman jman Wrote:
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:29 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: We both can write one. Although if you don’t want too you don’t have too

Okay we can both write one.

I finally finished. https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Write-Y...pid1469860
(Oct. 20, 2018  3:02 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Oct. 20, 2018  2:32 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Okay we can both write one.

I finally finished. https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Write-Y...pid1469860

Me too.
This is @[Jman jman]'s character. he has a bio for the blader this is just for the evolution of reverse minoboros.

Beyblade: gM.2'B.Tm
Layer: guard Minorboros (or CZ-M) Part of the evolved chouzetsu system. Has two large walls with a gap between them. The walls are filled with metal. The gimmick is that on the second click (halfway to bursting) two metal weights extend out to fill the gaps to make it more defensive. Right spin unlike it's predecessor.
disk: 2'. Heavy IWD, thicker than most disks and holds frames lower than usual.
frame: Bump.
Driver: Timer. The driver starts as an xtreme hole flat with very aggressive movement but half way through the battle a orbit like ball extends out and it changes to controlled movement.
(Oct. 22, 2018  7:50 PM)MWF Wrote: This is @[Jman jman]'s character. he has a bio for the blader this is just for the evolution of reverse minoboros.

Beyblade: gM.2'B.Tm
Layer: guard Minorboros (or CZ-M) Part of the evolved chouzetsu system. Has two large walls with a gap between them. The walls are filled with metal. The gimmick is that on the second click (halfway to bursting) two metal weights extend out to fill the gaps to make it more defensive. Right spin unlike it's predecessor.
disk: 2'. Heavy IWD, thicker than most disks and holds frames lower than usual.
frame: Bump.
Driver: Timer. The driver starts as an xtreme hole flat with very aggressive movement but half way through the battle a orbit like ball extends out and it changes to controlled movement.
Cool good job. And I like that you use 2'.
Oliver Powers
Appearance: He has messy blonde hair similar to Fubuki. He has very fair skin that is almost white and bright purple eyes. He wears a thin silver necklace with a glowing purple gem at the bottom over his gray shirt. He also wears long black pants that reach down to his black shoes.
Personality: He is rather rude and spoiled. In battle he becomes vicious and fierce. However, he later ditches this attitude because of an important plot point and becomes kind and thoughtful, and excited and happy during battle.
Beyblades:
Prophet Ouroboros 9Sight Wand (Current)
Layer - Prophet Ouroboros
Prophet Ouroboros has a round design with 10 smooth scales slightly protruding out. One protrudes out further and is angled upwards; this is what facilitates the gimmick. It can be shifted so it’s another scale that deflects attacks or a dragons head that deals powerful attacks.
Disc - 9
9 is very round with four gashes on one side and five on the other. It weighs equal to 0 with a very even weight distribution. The prongs that hold frames are also lower by 5 mm.
Frame - Sight
Sight is perfectly round like Proof but with a lower center of balance and a higher weight.
Driver - Wand
Wand can switch between three modes like zeta: attack, defense, or stamina. The attack mode is a rubber flat with an equal diameter to hunter. The defense mode has a ball tip that rotates freely but slightly smaller than orbit. The stamina mode has a pointed cone driver like survive but slightly smaller in diameter.
Black Ouroboros 0Dagger Hunter’ (Old)
Layer - Black Ouroboros
Black Ouroboros has a round design that slopes upwards for upper attack starting at a short blade shaped like a head at the bottom. It can also spin left and right.
Disc - 0
0 is the heaviest disc in Beyblade Burst. See more on the WBO page.
Frame - Dagger
Dagger has one main blade for attack that lines up with Black Ouroboros’ head. See more on the WBO page.
Driver - Hunter’
Hunter’ has a rubber flat tip like Xtremes but smaller. It also features a thick golden spring for heightened burst resistance.
Special Moves:
Sorcerers Slash
Black Ouroboros strikes the opponent with full power.
Darkness Lift
Black Ouroboros lifts the opponent up with upper attack and flings them into the air.
Prophecy Slash
In attack mode, Prophecy Ouroboros attacks with full power.
Prophecy Spin
Prophecy Ouroboros forms a large tornado in stamina mode and blocks attacks.
Prophecy Launch
Prophecy Ouroboros takes the center in defense mode and loops away right when the opponent is about to attack so it takes very little damage.
Eternity Spiral
Prophecy Ouroboros begins spinning around the opponent super fast, trapping them in the center.
Ultra Eternity Spiral
While in stamina mode and spinning left, Prophecy Ouroboros spins around the opponent to gain spin and start spinning faster.
Blader: Mysuku Wren
This blader has so many odd things about her. Her spiky leather jacket is a stark contrast to her pastel heart. Her blading style matches that Duality
Original bey: bK.0B.S
Layer color: rose with black accents and god chip
Frame color: black
Driver color: White

Current bey: iK.10Bt.S'
Layer: Impact Kulkulkan. The trigger attack is filled with metal. Black with rose accents. Rose gold metal.
Disk: 10
Frame: beat. Shaped like beat Kulkulkan with trigger attack active. Lines up when trigger attack is activated. Rose colored
Driver: Survive prime. White, rose gold spring.

Special mode: Trigger impact. Strong attack when trigger attack is activated.

Blader: Tsuku Wren
The older brother of Mysuku, this blader has a down to earth personality and never looks down on a challenge.
Original bey:bJ.7U.At
Layer color: dark purple layer and shield with white accents and god chip.
Frame color: White
Driver color: Black

Current bey: gJ.10Bl.At'
Layer: gatekeeper Jinnus. Metal on the shield. Shield creates down force. White with dark purple accents. Gun metal.
Disk: 10
Frame: Blast. Based off the shield of blast Jinnus. Has two modes, one mode has the shield upside down and works with all layers. The other mode is a boost disk like mode that only works with jinnus, this mode surrounds the bottom of the layer, the shield resting on it. Dark purple.
Driver: atomic prime. Black with gun metal spring.

Special move:Jinnus guard, in Blast mode the two shields increase burst resistance by making it where the top shield has to Raise up to click.


Special facts:
They created their combos from their original beys.
Mysuku used her bK to create the Beat frame and added a stronger, rose gold spring into her survive driver.
Tsuku used the shield from his broken bJ and created the Blast frame and added a stronger, gun metal spring into his atomic driver.

The two siblings are tied for third best Blader in japan. Behind Phi and hearts.
(Oct. 27, 2018  3:27 AM)MWF Wrote: Blader: Mysuku Wren
This blader has so many odd things about her. Her spiky leather jacket is a stark contrast to her pastel heart. Her blading style matches that Duality
Original bey: bK.0B.S
Layer color: rose with black accents and god chip
Frame color: black
Driver color: White

Current bey: iK.10Bt.S'
Layer: Impact Kulkulkan. The trigger attack is filled with metal. Black with rose accents. Rose gold metal.
Disk: 10
Frame: beat. Shaped like beat Kulkulkan with trigger attack  active. Lines up when trigger attack is activated. Rose colored
Driver: Survive prime. White, rose gold spring.

Special mode: Trigger impact. Strong attack when trigger attack is activated.

Blader: Tsuku Wren
The older brother of Mysuku, this blader has a down to earth personality and never looks down on a challenge.
Original bey:bJ.7U.At
Layer color: dark purple layer and shield with white accents and god chip.
Frame color: White
Driver color: Black

Current bey: gJ.10Bl.At'
Layer: gatekeeper Jinnus. Metal on the shield. Shield creates down force. White with dark purple accents. Gun metal.
Disk: 10
Frame: Blast. Based off the shield of blast Jinnus. Has two modes, one mode has the shield upside down and works with all layers. The other mode is a boost disk like mode that only works with jinnus, this mode surrounds the bottom of the layer, the shield resting on it. Dark purple.
Driver: atomic prime. Black with gun metal spring.

Special move:Jinnus guard, in Blast mode the two shields increase burst resistance by making it where the top shield has to Raise up to click.


Special facts:
They created their combos from their original beys.
Mysuku used her bK to create the Beat frame and added a stronger, rose gold spring into her survive driver.
Tsuku used the shield from his broken bJ and created the Blast frame and added a stronger, gun metal spring into his atomic driver.

The two siblings are tied for third best Blader in japan. Behind Phi and hearts.

Cool. I can tell that you base gatekeeper Jinnus frame off your broke J3.
(Oct. 27, 2018  3:33 AM)Jman jman Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  3:27 AM)MWF Wrote: Blader: Mysuku Wren
This blader has so many odd things about her. Her spiky leather jacket is a stark contrast to her pastel heart. Her blading style matches that Duality
Original bey: bK.0B.S
Layer color: rose with black accents and god chip
Frame color: black
Driver color: White

Current bey: iK.10Bt.S'
Layer: Impact Kulkulkan. The trigger attack is filled with metal. Black with rose accents. Rose gold metal.
Disk: 10
Frame: beat. Shaped like beat Kulkulkan with trigger attack  active. Lines up when trigger attack is activated. Rose colored
Driver: Survive prime. White, rose gold spring.

Special mode: Trigger impact. Strong attack when trigger attack is activated.

Blader: Tsuku Wren
The older brother of Mysuku, this blader has a down to earth personality and never looks down on a challenge.
Original bey:bJ.7U.At
Layer color: dark purple layer and shield with white accents and god chip.
Frame color: White
Driver color: Black

Current bey: gJ.10Bl.At'
Layer: gatekeeper Jinnus. Metal on the shield. Shield creates down force. White with dark purple accents. Gun metal.
Disk: 10
Frame: Blast. Based off the shield of blast Jinnus. Has two modes, one mode has the shield upside down and works with all layers. The other mode is a boost disk like mode that only works with jinnus, this mode surrounds the bottom of the layer, the shield resting on it. Dark purple.
Driver: atomic prime. Black with gun metal spring.

Special move:Jinnus guard, in Blast mode the two shields increase burst resistance by making it where the top shield has to Raise up to click.


Special facts:
They created their combos from their original beys.
Mysuku used her bK to create the Beat frame and added a stronger, rose gold spring into her survive driver.
Tsuku used the shield from his broken bJ and created the Blast frame and added a stronger, gun metal spring into his atomic driver.

The two siblings are tied for third best Blader in japan. Behind Phi and hearts.

Cool. I can tell that you base gatekeeper Jinnus frame of your broke J3.

The blast frame is inspired by what happened to my J3. Infact the two original combos. bK.0B.S and bJ.7U.S were two the the three beys involved, the third was sX.7M.X
Danny Rips

Danny is a tall 15 year-old he has pale skin. No hair wears a jet black hoodie with a dark purple D on the front of it. Dark black jogger and some purple and black Nikes. he is smart with the urge to cheat . easy to get mad.



Beyblade: Ripper Doomscizor is a fully metal beyblade based off Doomscizor D3 and  dark black and purple Plastic on the tips. It's combo is 10 jaggy' 


Special move: Fear ripper is when Doomscizor
Rides on the eage of the stadium and shoots right in the middle.

Special move: Bey ripper is when Doomscizor is not wearing it's Plastic case and dose fear ripper.
Shield crash: no need for info, everybody knows thisMy character:

Satoshi Kishima
he has black hair (looks like he has cat ears), wears a red jacket with a beyblade logo at the shoulder and has a white t shirt underneath the jacket. always has a body bag, a green wrist watch, has black jogging pants and has grey sneakers. has a cheerful and weird attitude.

Beyblade: Cho-z system

Shivering poltergeist or Poltergeist Cogwheel Axis (cogwheel and axis are made up)

a defense type that has some tiny bumps and a unique gimmick, his layer has a  free spinning kerberus-like outer contact point layer that reduces recoil

full description:

Poltergeist: has a gimmick that  has a free spinning metal and plastic mix kerberus like outer point contact layer it reduces recoil and the layer has 4 tiny bumps that makes the recoil happen so the beyblade wont be too OP

the con of this is that it may have a low stamina because of the unstable weight distribution, to counteract this, metal weights are added in the inner layer to make longer lasting stamina
also the teeth are small but not too small to burst itself teeth size of victory valkyrie

Cogwheel (made up): it is made up of  8 cogwheel like joints that gives weight to the beyblade

Axis (made up): it is made up of a free spinning ball tip and a gimmick, there is a free spinning ring with four spikes similar to the orbit tip but this time the side spikes are free spinning. and has a probability to rise up or decrease hight (not spikes wearing of ok) (the ring being elevated or fall)

color:

layer-cyan and white
forge disk-silver
performace tip-cyan but free spinning ring is silver

moves:

Astral defense: goes to the center and the free spinning ring rises up which means if hit, the free spinning gimmick wont affect the spin, result is the beyblade will have little recoil and go back to the center

Haunting launch: its just the beyblade launched tilted and in landing, the tip and the free spinning rings are in contact with the stadium resulting (probably) in a speeding beyblade with alot of kinetic energy that gives great recoil that makes the enemy go out of the stadium,

Levitated boost: the blader jumps and launches the beyblade, resulting in gravity pulling the beyblade more on the ground making it have more concentrated space and more stamina (i think)

Magnitude Shield crash: the beyblade gets alot of recoil that it hits the side of the stadium and bounces off it and delivers a massive pressure off force that has the ability to burst another beyblade

Shield crash: no need for info, everybody knows this

Ultra Shield crash: no need for info, everybody knows this

Shield pounds: just a attack barrage from poltergeist
(Oct. 27, 2018  5:20 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Danny Rips

Danny is a tall 15 year-old he has pale skin. No hair wears a jet black hoodie with a dark purple D on the front of it. Dark black jogger and some purple and black Nikes. he is smart with the urge to cheat . easy to get mad.



Beyblade: Ripper Doomscizor is a fully metal beyblade based off Doomscizor D3 and In case in dark black and purple removable Plastic. It's combo is 10 jaggy' 


Special move: Fear ripper is when Doomscizor
Rides on the eage of the stadium and shoots right in the middle.

Special move: Bey ripper is when Doomscizor is not wearing it's Plastic case and dose fear ripper.

So 12 The Layer. Are you trying to destroy beys? The plastic cover shouldn't be removable. The deathscyther line was never made for destruction, if anything the layers were better for stamina.

Might I suggest a change?

rD.10Kl.J'
Layer: Ripper Deathscyther, based off killer deathscyther, this layer has a metal scythe with a plastic tip to prevent damage to other beys. Black metal with purple plastic. Silver skull.
Disk: 10 black
Frame: Killer. Based off killer deathscyther without he double strike. Lines up on second click. Dark purple
Driver: Jaggy prime. Black with gold spring.

Keeps the attack power without damaging opponets.
(Oct. 27, 2018  6:46 PM)MWF Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  5:20 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Danny Rips

Danny is a tall 15 year-old he has pale skin. No hair wears a jet black hoodie with a dark purple D on the front of it. Dark black jogger and some purple and black Nikes. he is smart with the urge to cheat . easy to get mad.



Beyblade: Ripper Doomscizor is a fully metal beyblade based off Doomscizor D3 and In case in dark black and purple removable Plastic. It's combo is 10 jaggy' 


Special move: Fear ripper is when Doomscizor
Rides on the eage of the stadium and shoots right in the middle.

Special move: Bey ripper is when Doomscizor is not wearing it's Plastic case and dose fear ripper.

So 12 The Layer. Are you trying to destroy beys? The plastic cover shouldn't be removable. The deathscyther line was never made for destruction, if anything the layers were better for stamina.

Might I suggest a change?

rD.10Kl.J'
Layer: Ripper Deathscyther, based off killer deathscyther, this layer has a metal scythe with a plastic tip to prevent damage to other beys. Black metal with purple plastic. Silver skull.
Disk: 10 black
Frame: Killer. Based off killer deathscyther without he double strike. Lines up on second click. Dark purple
Driver: Jaggy prime. Black with gold spring.

Keeps the attack power without damaging opponets.
Sorry no can do. This beyblade is going to break reverse minbros that why your person is going to help matt with guard minbros.
(Oct. 27, 2018  7:35 PM)Jman jman Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  6:46 PM)MWF Wrote: So 12 The Layer. Are you trying to destroy beys? The plastic cover shouldn't be removable. The deathscyther line was never made for destruction, if anything the layers were better for stamina.

Might I suggest a change?

rD.10Kl.J'
Layer: Ripper Deathscyther, based off killer deathscyther, this layer has a metal scythe with a plastic tip to prevent damage to other beys. Black metal with purple plastic. Silver skull.
Disk: 10 black
Frame: Killer. Based off killer deathscyther without he double strike. Lines up on second click. Dark purple
Driver: Jaggy prime. Black with gold spring.

Keeps the attack power without damaging opponets.
Sorry no can do. This beyblade is going to break reverse minbros that why your person is going to help matt with guard minbros.

Why don’t you use MWFs suggestion but make the plastic tip covering the metal scythe removable?
(Oct. 27, 2018  8:09 PM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  7:35 PM)Jman jman Wrote: Sorry no can do. This beyblade is going to break reverse minbros that why your person is going to help matt with guard minbros.

Why don’t you use MWFs suggestion but make the plastic tip covering the metal scythe removable?

Because I like my idea MWFs is cool but I want it to be mine.
(Oct. 27, 2018  7:35 PM)Jman jman Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  6:46 PM)MWF Wrote: So 12 The Layer. Are you trying to destroy beys? The plastic cover shouldn't be removable. The deathscyther line was never made for destruction, if anything the layers were better for stamina.

Might I suggest a change?

rD.10Kl.J'
Layer: Ripper Deathscyther, based off killer deathscyther, this layer has a metal scythe with a plastic tip to prevent damage to other beys. Black metal with purple plastic. Silver skull.
Disk: 10 black
Frame: Killer. Based off killer deathscyther without he double strike. Lines up on second click. Dark purple
Driver: Jaggy prime. Black with gold spring.

Keeps the attack power without damaging opponets.
Sorry no can do. This beyblade is going to break reverse minbros that why your person is going to help matt with guard minbros.

Ok let's say in that battle the sheath on the scythe breaks and then Minoboros gets destroyed. I just dislike the idea of a beyblade intentionally made to break other beys.
(Oct. 27, 2018  9:56 PM)MWF Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  7:35 PM)Jman jman Wrote: Sorry no can do. This beyblade is going to break reverse minbros that why your person is going to help matt with guard minbros.

Ok let's say in that battle the sheath on the scythe breaks and then Minoboros gets destroyed. I just dislike the idea of a beyblade intentionally made to break other beys.

Okay sure.
(Oct. 27, 2018  10:08 PM)Jman jman Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  9:56 PM)MWF Wrote: Ok let's say in that battle the sheath on the scythe breaks and then Minoboros gets destroyed. I just dislike the idea of a beyblade intentionally made to break other beys.

Okay sure.

Ok, time line wise this battle would be after his battle with Vis but before guard Minoboros. I guess the serious design change would be due to reverse Minoboros being torn to pieces. No bey to reference.
(Oct. 27, 2018  6:46 PM)MWF Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  5:20 AM)Jman jman Wrote: Danny Rips

Danny is a tall 15 year-old he has pale skin. No hair wears a jet black hoodie with a dark purple D on the front of it. Dark black jogger and some purple and black Nikes. he is smart with the urge to cheat . easy to get mad.



Beyblade: Ripper Doomscizor is a fully metal beyblade based off Doomscizor D3 and In case in dark black and purple removable Plastic. It's combo is 10 jaggy' 


Special move: Fear ripper is when Doomscizor
Rides on the eage of the stadium and shoots right in the middle.

Special move: Bey ripper is when Doomscizor is not wearing it's Plastic case and dose fear ripper.

So 12 The Layer. Are you trying to destroy beys? The plastic cover shouldn't be removable. The deathscyther line was never made for destruction, if anything the layers were better for stamina.

Might I suggest a change?

rD.10Kl.J'
Layer: Ripper Deathscyther, based off killer deathscyther, this layer has a metal scythe with a plastic tip to prevent damage to other beys. Black metal with purple plastic. Silver skull.
Disk: 10 black
Frame: Killer. Based off killer deathscyther without he double strike. Lines up on second click. Dark purple
Driver: Jaggy prime. Black with gold spring.

Keeps the attack power without damaging opponets.

I Am making the next part of the storyline so is this what I am going to due and have the plastic tip come off or brake off?
Name: Ian Kogeru
Age: 13
Bey: Inferno Ifrit .M.L
Bey Type: Balance
Layer: Ifritor I2
Disk: Magnum
Driver: Liner
Ian is a very short-tempered person, but often means well. He hates losing, but embraces the challenge of overcoming the losses. He can often get carried away, but seems to rarely burn himself out. He loved to Beyblade, and strives to do his best, and be the best. But, his short temper often drives others away, so he has few friends. This is why he can often be seen practicing alone.

Special Moves:

Line Dance: Inferno Ifrit repeatedly slams into an opponent into the center, moving to the edge with each hit, and quickly moving back in for a barrage of hits.
Inferno Crash: Inferno Ifrit attacks in quick succession with its three blades, sending the opponent reeling, or bursting it altogether. Can be combined with Line Dance for massive damage.

(I figured that Inferno Ifrit needed a blader, so why not create one? I think this would be cool.)
(Oct. 28, 2018  3:41 AM)Jman jman Wrote:
(Oct. 27, 2018  6:46 PM)MWF Wrote: So 12 The Layer. Are you trying to destroy beys? The plastic cover shouldn't be removable. The deathscyther line was never made for destruction, if anything the layers were better for stamina.

Might I suggest a change?

rD.10Kl.J'
Layer: Ripper Deathscyther, based off killer deathscyther, this layer has a metal scythe with a plastic tip to prevent damage to other beys. Black metal with purple plastic. Silver skull.
Disk: 10 black
Frame: Killer. Based off killer deathscyther without he double strike. Lines up on second click. Dark purple
Driver: Jaggy prime. Black with gold spring.

Keeps the attack power without damaging opponets.

I Am making the next part of the storyline so is this what I am going to due and have the plastic tip come off or brake off?

Yes. Let's say it is a special move clash that rips the plastic cover off deathscyther.
(Oct. 28, 2018  4:58 AM)MWF Wrote:
(Oct. 28, 2018  3:41 AM)Jman jman Wrote: I Am making the next part of the storyline so is this what I am going to due and have the plastic tip come off or brake off?

Yes. Let's say it is a special move clash that rips the plastic cover off deathscyther.

I just finished I am going to spell check it and then pm it to you.
Hey @[Jman jman] Does Matt have a friend that he would like to tag along? I have an idea for a 2v2 battle of Matt and a friend vs Mysuku and Tsuku Wren.