Magnetic force story(redo)

Elite Projects · Feb. 14, 2014 1:28 AM

As you all know,my first version of this story sucked so I am making a new one!
Chapter 1"Here,take this bey,young one.It will protect you from danger."The old man told me.

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I nod slightly,and the old man scuttles offTwelve years later,we meaning me and John(my best friend were battling when a strange bey shot out from the surrounding trees.
"Whoa!What is that?"John yells.
"My gravity destroyer105rf ofcourse!"Yells a boy.
"Show yourself!"I yell.
"No need!I'm right in front of you!Battle me,"he yells as he calls his bey back.
"Ok,fine!Me first!"John yells.
"3,,21,LET IT RIP!"
Immediately,both beys circle the stadium.
"Destroyer,now!"
Destroyer suddenly turns around and heads straight for John's bey Flamespidered145sf.
"Is that reverse rotation?"Johnathan asks."Never mind,flamespider!"
Spider veers backwards,reveling his spintrack,ed145.
When Destroyer hit Spider's spin track,he circled around him without delivering damage.
"How'd you like my ed145?"John teased.
"Impressive,but futile!"
"Oh yeah?Special move Spider,Fiery Web!"
The mysterious blader only smirked.
John's bey quickly closed the distance between them,and then there was the explosion.

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Dual · Feb. 14, 2014 1:33 AM

I could be wrong, but I think you can only have one thread per story, even if it's a redo.

“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Classik · Feb. 14, 2014 1:43 AM

Lol Dual.....try making your own beys

Dual · Feb. 14, 2014 1:44 AM

What the heck is that supposed to mean? That honestly made no sense...

“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

ULTIMATE BLAZE · Feb. 14, 2014 3:03 AM

i think he means storys, i guess, but classik don't say beys it just sounds confusing

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Dual · Feb. 14, 2014 3:10 AM

If he did mean stories then his post is ridiculous as I've written many stories...

“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Elite Projects · Feb. 14, 2014 3:21 AM

But the story?Do you guys like it?(You're Ultramarine,right Dual?)

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DRAGON KING · Feb. 14, 2014 3:32 AM

(Feb. 14, 2014 3:21 AM)King EVIL Emper Wrote: But the story?Do you guys like it?(You're Ultramarine,right Dual?)

Yes, he is.

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