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Magnetic force story(redo) - Elite Projects - Feb. 14, 2014
As you all know,my first version of this story sucked so I am making a new one!
Chapter 1"Here,take this bey,young one.It will protect you from danger."The old man told me.
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"Whoa!What is that?"John yells.
"My gravity destroyer105rf ofcourse!"Yells a boy.
"Show yourself!"I yell.
"No need!I'm right in front of you!Battle me,"he yells as he calls his bey back.
"Ok,fine!Me first!"John yells.
"3,,21,LET IT RIP!"
Immediately,both beys circle the stadium.
"Destroyer,now!"
Destroyer suddenly turns around and heads straight for John's bey Flamespidered145sf.
"Is that reverse rotation?"Johnathan asks."Never mind,flamespider!"
Spider veers backwards,reveling his spintrack,ed145.
When Destroyer hit Spider's spin track,he circled around him without delivering damage.
"How'd you like my ed145?"John teased.
"Impressive,but futile!"
"Oh yeah?Special move Spider,Fiery Web!"
The mysterious blader only smirked.
John's bey quickly closed the distance between them,and then there was the explosion.
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Dual - Feb. 14, 2014
I could be wrong, but I think you can only have one thread per story, even if it's a redo.
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Classik - Feb. 14, 2014
Lol Dual.....try making your own beys
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Dual - Feb. 14, 2014
What the heck is that supposed to mean? That honestly made no sense...
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - ULTIMATE BLAZE - Feb. 14, 2014
i think he means storys, i guess, but classik don't say beys it just sounds confusing
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Dual - Feb. 14, 2014
If he did mean stories then his post is ridiculous as I've written many stories...
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Elite Projects - Feb. 14, 2014
But the story?Do you guys like it?(You're Ultramarine,right Dual?)
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - DRAGON KING - Feb. 14, 2014
(Feb. 14, 2014 3:21 AM)King EVIL Emper Wrote: But the story?Do you guys like it?(You're Ultramarine,right Dual?)
Yes, he is.
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Elite Projects - Feb. 14, 2014
Having trouble with the spoilers...Can someone help me?
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Classik - Feb. 15, 2014
honestly this could be better.....space your words...
RE: Magnetic force story(redo) - Tri - Feb. 15, 2014
One thread per story. No need for multiples.