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Knights of Galetoon(A B-Daman Story)

Dec. 08, 2011  2:41 PM
 
Hi guys. Not sure if this is appropriate but I decided to do a b-daman story. Which so much competition with beyblade stories, I thought to myself,:" Why not start sometime new?" and thus, the adventure ensues!

Chapter 0/Epilogue or whatever you call it or rather: Introduction
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Chapter 1:A Hero's Journey!

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Chapter 2 : The inevitable Shogun!

~~~~SLLUUURRPpPpP~~~~~ "Ahh...,that was delicious!" Gaia said as he patted his stomach. He paid for his meal as he walked out the front door . *CALLING ALL B-DAPLAYERS,THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE TO SIGN UP FOR THE 'BEGINNER'S TOURNAMENT'! REGISTRATION CLOSES IN FIVE MINUTES!* . "Hmm? This might be a good chance to brush up on my skills..." Gaia said as he dashed to the registration counter. -Exactly Five Minutes Later- "Thank you! Have a good time, OK? *wink*" the receptionist said happily as Gaia blushed in embarrasment. *THE OPENING MATCH WILL NOW COMMENCE.B-DAPLAYERS, PLEASE TAKE YOUR POSITIONS.* "Alright then,let's get this thing started!" .....Moments later..... *BLOCK B SET A, ROUND 5, GAIA VS HARRY!* Gaia took his position as he chanted the countdown.

"3",
"2",
"1",
"B-FIGHT!!" they both shouted.

Moments into the Direct Hit Battle, Harry decided to use his special move. "Go Cobalt Chrome,show him how it's done! Lion Gale Claw V3!" A marble that was engulfed in flames leapt into the air, and came down like a raining meteor! "Hah! Take this!" Gaia snickered as he sent a barrage of B-daballs into the descending projectile of certain doom. *BANG-BANG-BANG-PING* Gaia succesfully sent the B-daball into the sky,as his opponent watched in utter disbelief. "Now its our turn to show you how its done! One-shot finisher, Burst Fusion!" *BURST FUSION* Sentinel repeated after as a glowing B-daball was shot at full force. "Wahhhhhhh!" The remains of a shattered B-daman and crippled B-stadium was all that was left. *THE WINNER IS GAIA. THE JUDGES HAVE DECIDED TO BAN GAIA'S USAGE OF HIS ULTIMATE SPECIAL MOVE FOR THE SAKE OF THE POOR OL' STADIUMS* "Oh come on!"

-After a short break-

*BLOCK B SET B, ROUND 2, GAIA VS ZACKERY!*

"3",
"2",
"1",
"B-FIGHT!" and the battle ensued.

"Go Thermal Cavalry, show them what a Galetoon knight is like!"
"A real knight? He just might be worthy of...-"
"Strike Shot: Metal Shot!!"
"Woah,...eat some of here marbles!" Gaia snapped back as he tried to repel the attack
*Plop* The metal shot rolled out of the core. "Wha? I forgot! Thermal is a rapid-fire type, not a drive type silly!" Gaia sighed. *BOOM-BOOM-CRASH-SMACK* Gaia managed to dispel cavalry's assualt and unmask it. *IT APPEARS THAT THERMAL CAVALRY WAS JUST A PLAIN B-DAMAN WITH CARDBOOARD ARMOUR GLUED TO IT. THUS ZACKERY HAS BEEN DEFEATED AND DISQUALIFIED AT THE SAME TIME! THE WINNER IS ONCE AGAIN GAIA!*

-After much more annoying toilet and snack breaks-

*BLOCK B SET C,ROUND 10, GAIA VS HERMIT!*

-After much ado-

*PING-PING-PING-PING-PING-PING* The two B-daman were evenly matched! "Strike Shot: Metal Splitter Shot and Metal Shot!" Hermit said. "What? A strike shot that pops open and spreads a swarm of metal ball bearings?!" Gaia said in confusion. "Mode change, Rogue Sentinel!" *ROGUE SENTINEL* "Special move, Rogue Strike!" *ROUGE STRIKE*--------incomplete-----
Dec. 09, 2011  12:29 PM
 
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Dec. 09, 2011  11:21 PM
 
NAO CHRCTER QUETS!

Seriously, make your own characters, otherwise you'll suffer from 'n00b request overload syndrome'.
Dec. 10, 2011  2:31 PM
 
Ok then. But I might do that through PM to people I trust. How's the story anyway? Burst Sentinal was built to be 10x more powerful than Cobalt blade , 8xstronger than the Crash series main b-daman and 5 x stronger than Accel Dracyan. Access Dracyan can destroy walls etc, but Burst Sentinel can destroy a whole stadium, most likely a whole room and can penetrate even the toughest materials. Also, it has a hidden ability.
Dec. 11, 2011  10:53 PM
 
Nice B-Daman story!
Dec. 12, 2011  3:33 AM
 
I have decided to allow 2, yes, only 2, character requests. If you do so, you must accept that I may use your character in any way I like .(I'm not dumb, so don't worry)Pretty basic stuff,
Name:
Age:
B-damanUnhappymust be from any of the systems,ZERO, Crash and Cross. Must be named in the style according to each system)
Special moves /gimmicks:
Etc:
Thank you. Chapter 1 coming soon, stay tuned!
Gaia 's real name is: Gaia Ramekitori(based on his supposed love for ramen and yakitori)
Dec. 12, 2011  5:50 AM
 
In this case...

Name: Alexander Kale

Age: 13

B-Daman: Mega Diabros (Blaster Core/ZERO2 System B-Daman), Midnight Blade (ZERO System B-Daman)

Strike Shot: Speed Shot (Mega Diabros), Cyclone Sonic (Mega Diabros)

Special Shot: Phantom Scream (Mega Diabros), Midnight Power Blast (Midnight Blade)

Background: He acquired Mega Diabros from his father, who warned him not to let the powerful Blaster Core B-Daman get to his head. Alexander asks his father why, and he replied with a tragic tale of Mega Diabros. Mega Diabros was created in an attempt to create the ultimate Blaster Core B-Daman, that is a combination of all five types. Some say that its creator had sold his soul in a bid to create this devilishly powerful B-Daman. Its power proved so great, that many daring thieves attempted to steal it for themselves. Two thieves, who are lovers, eventually managed to successfully steal Mega Diabros, and the male thief was corrupted by the B-Daman's amazing firepower, which actually worried the female thief to death. She willingly turned herself to the authorities for questioning, if it meant getting her beloved back. They figured that the only way to make her partner see reason, is to beat him and Mega Diabros. To that end, a second Mega Diabros was created. The female thief was given this B-Daman, and she went off to stop her crazed partner. The two met, and a ferocious Direct Hit Battle was well underway, and the female thief was already having a hard time, because she didn't want to hurt her beloved. But, she managed to get over it and summoned the strength to defeat him. Tragically, the male thief died after he was freed from the influence of Mega Diabros' power. The first Mega Diabros was sealed away, never to be seen again. The female thief kept the second one, as a grim reminder of how power can corrupt others and make them hurt innocent people. The female thief would one day become Alexander's grandmother, who passed Mega Diabros to her son, who passed it to Alexander. After hearing this story, Alexander decided to undergo serious mental training, as so to keep himself from becoming influenced by the second Mega Diabros' fearsome power. He only uses Mega Diabros when things get serious, but when on the competitive scene, he uses the ZERO System B-Daman, Midnight Blade.
Dec. 12, 2011  6:19 AM
 
Could I feature your character more on the 'dark' side, something like Gray's storyline?
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Sorry if Chapter 1 was too long
Dec. 12, 2011  1:53 PM
 
Deleted. Sorry for double posting
Dec. 12, 2011  4:23 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2011  6:19 AM)Z.E.R.O Wrote: Could I feature your character more on the 'dark' side, something like Gray's storyline?
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Sorry if Chapter 1 was too long

Hey Z.E.R.O., Do you mind if I change a thing or two about my OC?

Dec. 13, 2011  4:36 AM
 
(Dec. 12, 2011  4:23 PM)T. L-Drago 9207 Wrote:
(Dec. 12, 2011  6:19 AM)Z.E.R.O Wrote: Could I feature your character more on the 'dark' side, something like Gray's storyline?
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Sorry if Chapter 1 was too long

Hey Z.E.R.O., Do you mind if I change a thing or two about my OC?
Sure
. Chapter 2 coming soon,stay tuned;B-DaSpirits,Unite!
Dec. 13, 2011  5:24 AM
 
Chapter 1 looks pretty good
Dec. 15, 2011  6:46 AM
 
Chapter 2 coming soon! I had it half done but it got erased at the last moment
Dec. 15, 2011  8:43 AM
 
it's ok, but I feel like you've overpowered your main B-daman. how are you going to make it better than it is now, the B-daman can't last forever.
Dec. 15, 2011  9:41 AM
 
I recommend you make the enemies' B-Daman better.Something like 1000x of Enjyu's strength.That guy with Variable Kaiser?I used to play B-Daman,but I left the hobby a long time ago.
Dec. 15, 2011  3:35 PM
 
I know. The first few tests are very simple. There will be a plot twist later in the story, here Burst Sentinel goes from hero to zero. Gaia hasn't even participated in a battle yet
Dec. 15, 2011  8:53 PM
 
good point, also I would try and sorta make the designs plausible, just the flip bit seems unlikely.
Dec. 16, 2011  3:45 AM
 
The burst core has 3 cores in a triangular fashion.. It rotates to switch cores. The other two will be pointing diagonally on each side of the trigger. There is a slot between these 2 cores which allow the trigger to push through. It's arms also lift when changing cores and click back into place to 'lock' it. Spear is fast,and accurate and is good with long distances ,with just enough power. Burst has 6 points,making it almost king,although it does have some flaws.
Finally,Rogue. It has tremendous speed,rapid-fire and agility and control(more like control spray-fire).


Chapter 2 Spoilers P1
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Dec. 16, 2011  7:03 AM
 
So the burst core is something like Revolver Hades?Nice point there.Make sure the enemy has a group too!Like Shadows or something.Are the marbles any special?I'd like you to introduce Strike Shots.
Dec. 16, 2011  1:06 PM
 
Alright then. I'm sure I've owned revolver hades but I don't think it's the same thing. Think of a wheel turning while it's flat on the ground,not a bottle cap twisting vertically. I have an idea for strike shots
Oh yeah,are you a psychic or something? How did you know I was gonna form a group?
Dec. 16, 2011  2:11 PM
 
Yes,I am psychic.Can I have a character request for the team's leader?
Name:Unknown(Called by team members as Gyros)

Age:Unknown

B-Daman:-Ares Kaizer(Zero 3 System(Made it up myself,which eventually Zero 2+Cartridge system))

Strike Shots:-Slash Shot(Slashes every obstacle)Dark Slash Shot(Like Slash shot,but is more powerful and uncontrolable)Drain Shot(Drain's enemy's Strike Shot powers and reflects it to the enemy)

Special Move:Ares Summon

Background:-Really unknown,but he found his B-Daman at exactly the same place where Enjyu fought Yamato,before,he used a normal Zero 3 B-Daman.After he found the bey,his personalities totally changed,from good to evil.


Dec. 16, 2011  2:20 PM
 
Could you describe the special move to me? ATTENTION,I've decided to allow one last character request until further notice. I'm busy these few days,so I'll do chapters 2 and 3 this weekend
Dec. 24, 2011  8:11 PM
 
Name: Jackson Kurokama AKA Jack the Sniper

Age: 20

B-Daman: Shield Giga (ZERO System, Combination-type (Accuracy/Balance hybrid))

Strike Shot: Speed Shot

Special Shot: Boosted Sniper (I made it up)

Background: He is an official of the World B-DaMan Association, following in the footsteps of his father, who was an official for the WBMA's predecessor, the IBA (International B-Daman Association). He's got a preference for accuracy, and sometimes even fancying himself as a military sniper. Because of his amazing accuracy with his Shield Giga, his compatriots in the WBMA started calling him "Jack the Sniper".
Dec. 24, 2011  8:19 PM
 
(Dec. 16, 2011  2:20 PM)Z.E.R.O Wrote: Could you describe the special move to me? ATTENTION,I've decided to allow one last character request until further notice. I'm busy these few days,so I'll do chapters 2 and 3 this weekend
He summons the Greek God Ares (by shooting an unknown marble,which changes into and unknown Strike Shot.After this move,the marble is normal again),which hacked and slashed the his opponent's B-Daman.Basically,the Ares helped the marble to destroy other opponent's B-Daman.However,he can only use it once a month,as this move really exhausts him.The only B-Daman that survived Ares Summon belongs to a character that Z.E.R.O can choose.It's a special B-Daman made of zinc alloy steel.Yo,use this,the whole stadium will crumble to pieces.This is a Forbidden Move,and can't be controlled.

Dec. 28, 2011  10:20 AM
 
Haha,Burst Fusion is also a legendary move. Don't forget, Burst Sentinel is a King rank Legendary B-daman.(Burst Fusion too makes stuf explode,so I guess they're even.)


Good news everyone, i will be doing 2-3 chapters later today. Enjoy!

EDITConfusedorry,I really can't find the time. I'm to obsessed with te Zenonia series games, so I promise I'll get chapters 2-4 done tommorow
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