Dec. 08, 2011 2:41 PM
Hi guys. Not sure if this is appropriate but I decided to do a b-daman story. Which so much competition with beyblade stories, I thought to myself,:" Why not start sometime new?" and thus, the adventure ensues!
Chapter 0/Epilogue or whatever you call it or rather: Introduction
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Chapter 1:A Hero's Journey!
Chapter 2 : The inevitable Shogun!
~~~~SLLUUURRPpPpP~~~~~ "Ahh...,that was delicious!" Gaia said as he patted his stomach. He paid for his meal as he walked out the front door . *CALLING ALL B-DAPLAYERS,THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE TO SIGN UP FOR THE 'BEGINNER'S TOURNAMENT'! REGISTRATION CLOSES IN FIVE MINUTES!* . "Hmm? This might be a good chance to brush up on my skills..." Gaia said as he dashed to the registration counter. -Exactly Five Minutes Later- "Thank you! Have a good time, OK? *wink*" the receptionist said happily as Gaia blushed in embarrasment. *THE OPENING MATCH WILL NOW COMMENCE.B-DAPLAYERS, PLEASE TAKE YOUR POSITIONS.* "Alright then,let's get this thing started!" .....Moments later..... *BLOCK B SET A, ROUND 5, GAIA VS HARRY!* Gaia took his position as he chanted the countdown.
"3",
"2",
"1",
"B-FIGHT!!" they both shouted.
Moments into the Direct Hit Battle, Harry decided to use his special move. "Go Cobalt Chrome,show him how it's done! Lion Gale Claw V3!" A marble that was engulfed in flames leapt into the air, and came down like a raining meteor! "Hah! Take this!" Gaia snickered as he sent a barrage of B-daballs into the descending projectile of certain doom. *BANG-BANG-BANG-PING* Gaia succesfully sent the B-daball into the sky,as his opponent watched in utter disbelief. "Now its our turn to show you how its done! One-shot finisher, Burst Fusion!" *BURST FUSION* Sentinel repeated after as a glowing B-daball was shot at full force. "Wahhhhhhh!" The remains of a shattered B-daman and crippled B-stadium was all that was left. *THE WINNER IS GAIA. THE JUDGES HAVE DECIDED TO BAN GAIA'S USAGE OF HIS ULTIMATE SPECIAL MOVE FOR THE SAKE OF THE POOR OL' STADIUMS* "Oh come on!"
-After a short break-
*BLOCK B SET B, ROUND 2, GAIA VS ZACKERY!*
"3",
"2",
"1",
"B-FIGHT!" and the battle ensued.
"Go Thermal Cavalry, show them what a Galetoon knight is like!"
"A real knight? He just might be worthy of...-"
"Strike Shot: Metal Shot!!"
"Woah,...eat some of here marbles!" Gaia snapped back as he tried to repel the attack
*Plop* The metal shot rolled out of the core. "Wha? I forgot! Thermal is a rapid-fire type, not a drive type silly!" Gaia sighed. *BOOM-BOOM-CRASH-SMACK* Gaia managed to dispel cavalry's assualt and unmask it. *IT APPEARS THAT THERMAL CAVALRY WAS JUST A PLAIN B-DAMAN WITH CARDBOOARD ARMOUR GLUED TO IT. THUS ZACKERY HAS BEEN DEFEATED AND DISQUALIFIED AT THE SAME TIME! THE WINNER IS ONCE AGAIN GAIA!*
-After much more annoying toilet and snack breaks-
*BLOCK B SET C,ROUND 10, GAIA VS HERMIT!*
-After much ado-
*PING-PING-PING-PING-PING-PING* The two B-daman were evenly matched! "Strike Shot: Metal Splitter Shot and Metal Shot!" Hermit said. "What? A strike shot that pops open and spreads a swarm of metal ball bearings?!" Gaia said in confusion. "Mode change, Rogue Sentinel!" *ROGUE SENTINEL* "Special move, Rogue Strike!" *ROUGE STRIKE*--------incomplete-----
Chapter 0/Epilogue or whatever you call it or rather: Introduction
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Spoiler (Click to View)
.....*swoosh*
..........*ping*....*bang*......
....."Phew!" , Gaia said as he wiped the sweat off his forehead. "This is much harder than I thought!"
~Now, Gaia was a young boy, who had just received a b-daman for his birthday. He looked like your average everyday boy, but he was royalty. However, not everything had been this way...He had a dark secret,which he always kept to himself...~
-Flashback-
"Argghh!!, Gaia, go! Don't worry about me, go and get help! Gooooo!!!!!"
Gaia 's father was in a rather secret group, which his he was working for undercover. His mother had died when he was very young, leaving his father to care for him. One day, his father was sent on a mission to retrieve a certain artifact. However , he discovered that it was a small robotic figure, along with a
peculiar blue orb, which held enormous power inside of it. Knowing it could fall into the wrong hands, he decided to take it for safekeeping. After the organization had received word about this, they started to hunt him down. Wanting it to be in the right hands, he decided to entrust it to his son. He ordered his loyal butler to guard it with his life, and then present it to Gaia when the tine was right...However that night, the 'D.D.D' had caught up with him, and had no choice but to hold them back so Gaia could escape and he never returned.
"Go , Burst Sentinal!" Gaia commanded! *BURST- FUSION*
...*Vhoom*!... the blue marble trembled with energy as Gaia pushed the trigger.
The six points of burst allowed great strength and accuracy and undeniable speed. With six pressure points producing tremendous force, it was launched at light speed, and then the six forces combined in the centre of the marble, producing a sudden burst of energy-*BOOM*......*clap-clap-clap*
....."Wow! 102 pins,a new record!" the butler complemented," The king would like to see you,please proceed this way"....*crumple*, the B-Stadium collapsed as they took their leave.
..........*ping*....*bang*......
....."Phew!" , Gaia said as he wiped the sweat off his forehead. "This is much harder than I thought!"
~Now, Gaia was a young boy, who had just received a b-daman for his birthday. He looked like your average everyday boy, but he was royalty. However, not everything had been this way...He had a dark secret,which he always kept to himself...~
-Flashback-
"Argghh!!, Gaia, go! Don't worry about me, go and get help! Gooooo!!!!!"
Gaia 's father was in a rather secret group, which his he was working for undercover. His mother had died when he was very young, leaving his father to care for him. One day, his father was sent on a mission to retrieve a certain artifact. However , he discovered that it was a small robotic figure, along with a
peculiar blue orb, which held enormous power inside of it. Knowing it could fall into the wrong hands, he decided to take it for safekeeping. After the organization had received word about this, they started to hunt him down. Wanting it to be in the right hands, he decided to entrust it to his son. He ordered his loyal butler to guard it with his life, and then present it to Gaia when the tine was right...However that night, the 'D.D.D' had caught up with him, and had no choice but to hold them back so Gaia could escape and he never returned.
"Go , Burst Sentinal!" Gaia commanded! *BURST- FUSION*
...*Vhoom*!... the blue marble trembled with energy as Gaia pushed the trigger.
The six points of burst allowed great strength and accuracy and undeniable speed. With six pressure points producing tremendous force, it was launched at light speed, and then the six forces combined in the centre of the marble, producing a sudden burst of energy-*BOOM*......*clap-clap-clap*
....."Wow! 102 pins,a new record!" the butler complemented," The king would like to see you,please proceed this way"....*crumple*, the B-Stadium collapsed as they took their leave.
Chapter 1:A Hero's Journey!
Spoiler (Click to View)
"Right this way, Sir." the butler directed Gaia through the hallway. *step-step-step*...*swoosh!* ---*ping*!.
Gaia whipped around, and his glare met with a marble heading straight towards him! He did a backflip,followed by a shot from his b-daman. *boom*-the threat had been neutralised. "My word ,Sir!" the butler stammered as a swarm of b-daballs were shot at them. "Mode-change Sentinel!" Gaia commanded. *MODE-CHANGE, ROGUE SENTINEL* Sentinel echoed as his core revolved, revealing a different core.
Rogue had 4 points that were made of fused metal and rubber . It was very flexible, as well as tough. There was an inner core which had 3 points. 2 on one side,all made of plastic. It would revolve with every shot, allowing each b-daball to fly wildly in different directions.
"Arghh!!" Gaia shouted as he smashed the trigger furiously. Every incoming b-daball was deflected profesionally. "Amazing,Master~" the butler shook in terror. *BEEP*-*BEEP-*BEEP* . A timer popped up at the very end of the corridor. It appeared as though it was counting down to something. "No! I guess i have no choice then!" Gaia sighed ,"Mode change once more!" *MODE-CHANGE, SPEAR SENTINEL* .
Spear had no points at all. Instead, it had inner barrel which had a thick loop, allowing two marbles to be shot with astoundingly sharp force. The barrel narrowed as it reached the opening.
*Shing*, the powerful duo whizzed acrossed the corridor, with the rear marble giving one last push , sending his partner straight into the timer , smashing it a the very last second. *BEEEEeeeeepp...* the timer stopped right at 00:02. "Impressive, I must say! Now, the king?" the butler chuckled. "What do you mean?! Hey!" Gaia stammered. "You'll see." the butler whispered as they proceeded through the door.
"Good morning!" the king welcomed,"Are you feeling good?"
"No" Gaia replied
"Had breakfast?"
"No"
"Would you like some?"
"Yes"
"Eggs,Bacon,Toast,Beef,Cheesstick,Hashbrown,Coffee,Milo?"
"Yes,Yes,Yes,No,No,Yes,NO,Yes"
"Would you like it on a plate or--"
"Seriously!" Gaia interrupted, "Have you seen what just happened to me?!"
"Why I have, very closely in fact", the king said as a row of moninters appeared,each one flickered on,and showed every movement that Gaia had made.
"I don't understand.." stammered Gaia.
"It was a test to prove your worth","Which you have surprisingly passed." the king chuckled as Gaia was served his breakfast.
"Knowing that you have longed to go on an adventure to avenge your father,and after seeing what you are capable of, I have decided to let you do so."
"Pfftt!" Gaia sput out a piece of toast and and scrambled eggs in astonishment.
"However,you cannot do this alone", "Do as you may wish to accomplish your quest , but just be sure to make the right choices"
"Thank you my highness, or rather , Uncle. I promise not to fail you!"
"No,don't promise me,promise yourself."
"I will." Gaia stuffed some toast into his mouth and took his leave.
"Wait! Don't forget this!"the king presented his nephew with a set of 'Power Gloves' ,a 'Trans-speaker' and 'B-gear'(similiar to the B-phone, but with more functions).
Gaia slipped them on and said his final goodbye to the palace ....
Gaia whipped around, and his glare met with a marble heading straight towards him! He did a backflip,followed by a shot from his b-daman. *boom*-the threat had been neutralised. "My word ,Sir!" the butler stammered as a swarm of b-daballs were shot at them. "Mode-change Sentinel!" Gaia commanded. *MODE-CHANGE, ROGUE SENTINEL* Sentinel echoed as his core revolved, revealing a different core.
Rogue had 4 points that were made of fused metal and rubber . It was very flexible, as well as tough. There was an inner core which had 3 points. 2 on one side,all made of plastic. It would revolve with every shot, allowing each b-daball to fly wildly in different directions.
"Arghh!!" Gaia shouted as he smashed the trigger furiously. Every incoming b-daball was deflected profesionally. "Amazing,Master~" the butler shook in terror. *BEEP*-*BEEP-*BEEP* . A timer popped up at the very end of the corridor. It appeared as though it was counting down to something. "No! I guess i have no choice then!" Gaia sighed ,"Mode change once more!" *MODE-CHANGE, SPEAR SENTINEL* .
Spear had no points at all. Instead, it had inner barrel which had a thick loop, allowing two marbles to be shot with astoundingly sharp force. The barrel narrowed as it reached the opening.
*Shing*, the powerful duo whizzed acrossed the corridor, with the rear marble giving one last push , sending his partner straight into the timer , smashing it a the very last second. *BEEEEeeeeepp...* the timer stopped right at 00:02. "Impressive, I must say! Now, the king?" the butler chuckled. "What do you mean?! Hey!" Gaia stammered. "You'll see." the butler whispered as they proceeded through the door.
"Good morning!" the king welcomed,"Are you feeling good?"
"No" Gaia replied
"Had breakfast?"
"No"
"Would you like some?"
"Yes"
"Eggs,Bacon,Toast,Beef,Cheesstick,Hashbrown,Coffee,Milo?"
"Yes,Yes,Yes,No,No,Yes,NO,Yes"
"Would you like it on a plate or--"
"Seriously!" Gaia interrupted, "Have you seen what just happened to me?!"
"Why I have, very closely in fact", the king said as a row of moninters appeared,each one flickered on,and showed every movement that Gaia had made.
"I don't understand.." stammered Gaia.
"It was a test to prove your worth","Which you have surprisingly passed." the king chuckled as Gaia was served his breakfast.
"Knowing that you have longed to go on an adventure to avenge your father,and after seeing what you are capable of, I have decided to let you do so."
"Pfftt!" Gaia sput out a piece of toast and and scrambled eggs in astonishment.
"However,you cannot do this alone", "Do as you may wish to accomplish your quest , but just be sure to make the right choices"
"Thank you my highness, or rather , Uncle. I promise not to fail you!"
"No,don't promise me,promise yourself."
"I will." Gaia stuffed some toast into his mouth and took his leave.
"Wait! Don't forget this!"the king presented his nephew with a set of 'Power Gloves' ,a 'Trans-speaker' and 'B-gear'(similiar to the B-phone, but with more functions).
Gaia slipped them on and said his final goodbye to the palace ....
~~~~SLLUUURRPpPpP~~~~~ "Ahh...,that was delicious!" Gaia said as he patted his stomach. He paid for his meal as he walked out the front door . *CALLING ALL B-DAPLAYERS,THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE TO SIGN UP FOR THE 'BEGINNER'S TOURNAMENT'! REGISTRATION CLOSES IN FIVE MINUTES!* . "Hmm? This might be a good chance to brush up on my skills..." Gaia said as he dashed to the registration counter. -Exactly Five Minutes Later- "Thank you! Have a good time, OK? *wink*" the receptionist said happily as Gaia blushed in embarrasment. *THE OPENING MATCH WILL NOW COMMENCE.B-DAPLAYERS, PLEASE TAKE YOUR POSITIONS.* "Alright then,let's get this thing started!" .....Moments later..... *BLOCK B SET A, ROUND 5, GAIA VS HARRY!* Gaia took his position as he chanted the countdown.
"3",
"2",
"1",
"B-FIGHT!!" they both shouted.
Moments into the Direct Hit Battle, Harry decided to use his special move. "Go Cobalt Chrome,show him how it's done! Lion Gale Claw V3!" A marble that was engulfed in flames leapt into the air, and came down like a raining meteor! "Hah! Take this!" Gaia snickered as he sent a barrage of B-daballs into the descending projectile of certain doom. *BANG-BANG-BANG-PING* Gaia succesfully sent the B-daball into the sky,as his opponent watched in utter disbelief. "Now its our turn to show you how its done! One-shot finisher, Burst Fusion!" *BURST FUSION* Sentinel repeated after as a glowing B-daball was shot at full force. "Wahhhhhhh!" The remains of a shattered B-daman and crippled B-stadium was all that was left. *THE WINNER IS GAIA. THE JUDGES HAVE DECIDED TO BAN GAIA'S USAGE OF HIS ULTIMATE SPECIAL MOVE FOR THE SAKE OF THE POOR OL' STADIUMS* "Oh come on!"
-After a short break-
*BLOCK B SET B, ROUND 2, GAIA VS ZACKERY!*
"3",
"2",
"1",
"B-FIGHT!" and the battle ensued.
"Go Thermal Cavalry, show them what a Galetoon knight is like!"
"A real knight? He just might be worthy of...-"
"Strike Shot: Metal Shot!!"
"Woah,...eat some of here marbles!" Gaia snapped back as he tried to repel the attack
*Plop* The metal shot rolled out of the core. "Wha? I forgot! Thermal is a rapid-fire type, not a drive type silly!" Gaia sighed. *BOOM-BOOM-CRASH-SMACK* Gaia managed to dispel cavalry's assualt and unmask it. *IT APPEARS THAT THERMAL CAVALRY WAS JUST A PLAIN B-DAMAN WITH CARDBOOARD ARMOUR GLUED TO IT. THUS ZACKERY HAS BEEN DEFEATED AND DISQUALIFIED AT THE SAME TIME! THE WINNER IS ONCE AGAIN GAIA!*
-After much more annoying toilet and snack breaks-
*BLOCK B SET C,ROUND 10, GAIA VS HERMIT!*
-After much ado-
*PING-PING-PING-PING-PING-PING* The two B-daman were evenly matched! "Strike Shot: Metal Splitter Shot and Metal Shot!" Hermit said. "What? A strike shot that pops open and spreads a swarm of metal ball bearings?!" Gaia said in confusion. "Mode change, Rogue Sentinel!" *ROGUE SENTINEL* "Special move, Rogue Strike!" *ROUGE STRIKE*--------incomplete-----
must be from any of the systems,ZERO, Crash and Cross. Must be named in the style according to each system)
orry,I really can't find the time. I'm to obsessed with te Zenonia series games, so I promise I'll get chapters 2-4 done tommorow