Guardian Reviser draft-i need your opinions

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This is my first attempt at a beywiki article, I own this bey so I am trying to do the best I can :)



Guardian Revizer is a defense type and BBG-10


'''Stone Face: Reviser '''
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Weight: 1.2 grams
It's face depicts leviathan, an ancient sea monster.


'''Chrome Wheel:Reviser'''
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Weight:30.6
Reviser is circular and mostly smooth making it top tier for defence with only 2 small gaps making it have not very much recoil. On 1 side of reviser is a head of a sea monster while the other is more hollow without the head, making this, when not synchromed, very unbalanced.



'''Use in spin steal customizations in a zero-g stadium'''


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Reviser is extremely good when on the bottom and dragooon on top, making Reviser Dragooon, when reviser's defence and dragooon's left spin are combined, it makes it very good and because of this reviser dragoon is top tier with many tip and track combos such as: B:D, SA165BWD and SA165GCF/CF/Gf.






'''Use in spin steal customizations in a bb-10"
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Reviser Dragooon is also top tier in a bb-10 in combos such as MSF-H Reviser Dragooon SA165EWD

'''Use when combined with itself in a zero-g stadium'''
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Reviser Reviser is a good defensive bey and is also top tier in combos such as: MSF-H Reviser Reviser E230RS/RB for defense and MSF-H Reviser Reviser E230RS/BSF/MB/TB/RSF for sway defense






'''Use when combined with itself in a BB-10'''
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It is to tier when combined with itself in combos such as MSF-H Reviser Reviser E230CS/RB/RSF/RS and MSF-H Reviser Reviser BD145RDF/CS/RS/RB


'''Crystal Wheel: Guardian'''

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Guardian is much like reviser in overall shape, being circular with 2 small gaps.
The sides are wavy almost like a chain and one side depicts a shiel like design. Guardian is blue in color. Guardian and all other crystal wheels have no competitive use.


'''Track: 160'''
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160 is a perfect cylinder, unlike tracks like 145,130,125 ect. 160 is a pretty mediocre track as far as gimmicks, but is 1 of only 2 tracks of that height ( The other being LW160). 160 is green in color .



'''Tip: Sharp Ball'''
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SB is basically WB but instead of it curving at the bottom and making a ball, it sharpened. SB is sum what of a better version of Sharp ball, offering more balance . SB has no competitive use. SB
is dark green in color.

'''Other Versions"
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Orojya Revizer T125JB Dark Blue Ver. - WBBA Lottery Campaign: A Starter+Stadium or a Set that contains a stadium had to be purchased for a chance to win one of the 1000 available.
Pirates Revizer M145CF - BBG-17 Random Booster Vol. 2 Archer Gargole SA165WSF (Pink, purple, green and yellow stickers)
Samurai Revizer SA165Q - BBG-17 Random Booster Vol. 2 Archer Gargole SA165WSF (Orange, green and black stickers)
Guardian Revizer 160SB - BBG-21 Fast Zero-G Battle Set (Grey stickers)
Goreim Revizer E230SB - BBG-25 Ultimate Synchrom DX Set Stamina & Defense Type (Green, yellow and blue stickers)
Guardian Leviathan A230JSB - Hasbro Leviathan Orochi Water Synchrome 2-Pack (Neon yellow Reviser Face, transparent blue Guardian, dark blue A230, light blue JSB)



'''Overall'''

Guardian Reviser is a good beyblade to get mainly for reviser, a top tier defence Chrome Wheel in numerous defence and dragooon combos. While the other parts have no competive use, "'it is still a must have, all bladers should own multiples of this beyblade.'''
There's many grammatical and some spelling errors. Plus you really didn't supply enough information for what would be considered an article.

Your spin steal section is not right. For spin steal, it'd be Reviser Dragooon SA165EWD, not the others you listed. Reviser Dragooon SA165CF/GCF is a sway attacker, not a spin stealer. You definitely need much more elaboration of the parts and the customizations.
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