Triple posted more like.
sigh. Work on the fundamentals, you're still lacking them.
sigh. Work on the fundamentals, you're still lacking them.
(Sep. 03, 2013 2:21 PM)Grixis Wrote: These are the first creations iv made in months, I would appreciate some opinions.Both of these look great! Gradient is used well in the first one I.M.O
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(Sep. 05, 2013 10:45 AM)galaxy blade Wrote: I made a sig is it goodQuality is low, render looks a little sloppy, you have inefficient lighting and the background doesn't compliment the image. The basics definitely should be taken into account here.
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(Sep. 05, 2013 11:26 AM)galaxy blade Wrote: Thanks i do have a lighter one And yes i should try thatAll of these have the same issues I stated above,
EDIT: Heres some more please tell me what one is the best and what one is not thanks.
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(Sep. 05, 2013 5:12 PM)Kujikato Wrote: To be really frank, you two are still a long ways from 'good'wow! thanks Kujijato, btw it looks absolutely stunning. I see that the parts further away from the render and closer to your primary light source are blurred more, If I am correct. I definitely will work on getting higher resolution images. The duality of yellow/orange and purple do add depth and their opacity fades as they grow towards the middle on your image (aside from the purple fractal line that fades horizontally) the purple spatter goes well with the render and displays good flow.
You're using low quality images and resources. Yes, switch, those images you use are just medium quality. High quality would be around 1000x1000 ish and up.
I'll do some explaining, although I should be doing HW
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In my absolutely best tag recently, I used just ONE C4D, but since it was like 2000x3000 and suited my render, I was able to utilize every side of it, resized, etc. As you can see, I have a strong (primary) light source in the upper right hand corner that shines on the render. You can see his hair, hand, sword and arm accented with orange - that is lighting. The smaller light source (the purple one) is for color variation and composition, it gives an alternate feeling to the tag.
You can see that not everything in the tag is in focus, I blurred some parts. This was done for depth. I built up the depth by blurring C4Ds using Gaussian Blur (decreasing in strength as I make it closer to the render).
I also covered the render a bit to make him fit in, this is blending (and also depth, foreground depth)
I'll leave these tips here for now. Keep at it, you'll get better eventually.
(Sep. 06, 2013 1:22 PM)galaxy blade Wrote: I have one please tell me if its goodwhy did you put it three times?
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