Gears (non beyblade story)

Chapter 1: Finding Shelter
Chapter 2: Wyoming, Mourne, and Mirror Part 1
Chapter 3: Vengeance! Return of the writer!
eh, I really have a lot of time on my hands, schools out so more chapters.
This story has great potential and dialouge formatting, but you should try typing in MS Word and use the SpellCheck function to fix grammatical mistakes. Very suspenseful, indeed! What are the Gears!? XD
(Jun. 06, 2012  12:24 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: This story has great potential and dialouge formatting, but you should try typing in MS Word and use the SpellCheck function to fix grammatical mistakes. Very suspenseful, indeed! What are the Gears!? XD

thanks for the feedback and telling you what Gears was that would spoil the story, XD

edit: I'll explain. This story takes place around this time but people started living underground, Think of fallout vaults. Gears is essentially a worse version of that, anything more, that would spoil the story,
new chapter!
Sorry for reviving an old thread but I have continued this story.
Chapter 3 isn't done yet.