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Gears (non beyblade story) - Cookie Bouquets - Jun. 05, 2012

Chapter 1: Finding Shelter
Chapter 2: Wyoming, Mourne, and Mirror Part 1
Chapter 3: Vengeance! Return of the writer!
eh, I really have a lot of time on my hands, schools out so more chapters.



RE: Gears (non beyblade story) - Duck - Jun. 06, 2012

This story has great potential and dialouge formatting, but you should try typing in MS Word and use the SpellCheck function to fix grammatical mistakes. Very suspenseful, indeed! What are the Gears!? XD


RE: Gears (non beyblade story) - Cookie Bouquets - Jun. 06, 2012

(Jun. 06, 2012  12:24 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: This story has great potential and dialouge formatting, but you should try typing in MS Word and use the SpellCheck function to fix grammatical mistakes. Very suspenseful, indeed! What are the Gears!? XD

thanks for the feedback and telling you what Gears was that would spoil the story, XD

edit: I'll explain. This story takes place around this time but people started living underground, Think of fallout vaults. Gears is essentially a worse version of that, anything more, that would spoil the story,



RE: Gears (non beyblade story) - Cookie Bouquets - Jun. 08, 2012

new chapter!


RE: Gears (non beyblade story) - Cookie Bouquets - Jul. 11, 2012

Sorry for reviving an old thread but I have continued this story.
Chapter 3 isn't done yet.