the story is cool! and less sidetracky. i would prefer them to be in a bigger arena

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Im a BeyScientist

Sorry for the delay. I have some difficult tests coming up.

The next day.

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Ami, Kal, Lee, and Hope were walking along the side of a road.
"Where are we headed Lee?" Ami asked
"There is a Beyblade tournament in a town a distance away from here, it is famous and lots of Bladers gather there."
"Maybe we can find some of the Bladers you are searching for Ami!" Kal chimed in.
"You are searching for Bladers?" Hope turns toward Ami and starts walking backwards. "Which ones?"
Ami looks sheepish "We don't really know that." She admits.
"Hey, Hope." Lee starts "How did you happen upon us?"
"I am also searching for someone. You happened to be nearby."
"Well we're grateful you found us." Kal says
"Kal you forgot to tell us about your dream last night."
"It was weird. I was alone in this purple mist and then this Dragonish/Demon type creature showed up..."
"A Drude."
Kal looks at Hope "Pardon?"
"A Demon/Dragon cross is called a Drude." Hope clarified
"Yeah that's what he said. He also said that he lives in my Beyblade. He also said that I had a 'dream block'."
Lee was bouncing up and down. "That is awesome. It sound like you have a Bit Beast. Normally only really strong Bladers have one. How long have you been Blading for?"
"I don't know."
"Huh?"
"Lee, Kal has amnesia. He doesn't even know his own name."
"Oh, Well, A Bit Beast is a spirit that lives in your Beyblade. It is said that strong Bladers can call on them in battles."
"If strong Bladers have Bit Beasts, why don't I have one?" Ami complained
"Well It is said that Bit Beasts have four main requirements before joining a Blader.
1. The Blader must be willing to give their all in battles.
2. The Bladers personality must be acceptable.
3. The Blader must have experience.
4. The Beyblade must be suitable for the Spirit.
My guess is that your Cyber Fay did not meet the fourth requirement. Now that you have Tvastar maybe you will be approached by a Bit Beast."
"Do you have a Bit Beast Hope?" Ami asks
"Yes."
"You don't talk much do you?"
"No."
"Well, if battling more will help me get a Bit Beast let's hurry to that tournament." Ami orders

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Sorry for the delay. I have some difficult tests coming up.

The next day.

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Ami, Kal, Lee, and Hope were walking along the side of a road.
"Where are we headed Lee?" Ami asked
"There is a Beyblade tournament in a town a distance away from here, it is famous and lots of Bladers gather there."
"Maybe we can find some of the Bladers you are searching for Ami!" Kal chimed in.
"You are searching for Bladers?" Hope turns toward Ami and starts walking backwards. "Which ones?"
Ami looks sheepish "We don't really know that." She admits.
"Hey, Hope." Lee starts "How did you happen upon us?"
"I am also searching for someone. You happened to be nearby."
"Well we're grateful you found us." Kal says
"Kal you forgot to tell us about your dream last night."
"It was weird. I was alone in this purple mist and then this Dragonish/Demon type creature showed up..."
"A Drude."
Kal looks at Hope "Pardon?"
"A Demon/Dragon cross is called a Drude." Hope clarified
"Yeah that's what he said. He also said that he lives in my Beyblade. He also said that I had a 'dream block'."
Lee was bouncing up and down. "That is awesome. It sound like you have a Bit Beast. Normally only really strong Bladers have one. How long have you been Blading for?"
"I don't know."
"Huh?"
"Lee, Kal has amnesia. He doesn't even know his own name."
"Oh, Well, A Bit Beast is a spirit that lives in your Beyblade. It is said that strong Bladers can call on them in battles."
"If strong Bladers have Bit Beasts, why don't I have one?" Ami complained
"Well It is said that Bit Beasts have four main requirements before joining a Blader.
1. The Blader must be willing to give their all in battles.
2. The Bladers personality must be acceptable.
3. The Blader must have experience.
4. The Beyblade must be suitable for the Spirit.
My guess is that your Cyber Fay did not meet the fourth requirement. Now that you have Tvastar maybe you will be approached by a Bit Beast."
"Do you have a Bit Beast Hope?" Ami asks
"Yes."
"You don't talk much do you?"
"No."
"Well, if battling more will help me get a Bit Beast let's hurry to that tournament." Ami orders

Wonderful! And also is my character going to be a side character in the tournament?

Wonderful! And also is my character going to be a side character in the tournament?

I'm afraid I can't leak the storyline in advance. Your character will appear soon though.

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Wonderful! And also is my character going to be a side character in the tournament?

I'm afraid I can't leak the storyline in advance. Your character will appear soon though.

Okay that's fine I respect that.

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Wait. Are those Dark and Thunder/Infinity from MFB?!

@[ThePheonix] wait and see!?

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New Part
On the way to the tournament!

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As Ami and company were talking there was a great flash and a roar in the woods besides the path.
"What was that?"
"It looked like an explosion of some kind."
Ami starts running "Come on. Someone might need help!"

Meanwhile in a warehouse not too far away

"Man! Those kids annoyed me!"
"Calm down Slim."
"Calm down?! Calm Down?! The People in town aren't scared of us now that they've heard about us getting beaten. They even kicked us out of the Bey park!"
"That just tells us that we must get stronger."
Suddenly a boy and a girl step out of the shadows.
"You say you want to get stronger? If so our master has an offer for you." The girl says.
Slim jumps to his feet "Who are you two?"
"We are people that can make you stronger."
"You two?" Slim scoffs "That's likely."
"How about this then, I will battle both of you alone, If I win you will consider our offer."
"If we win?"
"You can keep my Bey B-Cerberus Wing Eternal Semi Defense.




"Deal!"
The girl launches her Beyblade.
"Here, I'll even give you a head start."
Carl and Slim launch at B-Cerberus.
"Slicing Tornado!"
"Using a special move right off the bat. Well then. Cerberus Chain Hurricane."
The two storms collide sending dirt into the air. It clears to reveal Tengu and Susanoo not moving.
The girl throws a metal card at their feet.
"When you want to talk break this."
"Come on" She says to the boy.
They leave the warehouse.

@[Jman jman] coming soon!

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Out of This Universe!

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Ami, Kal, Lee, and Hope arrive in a clearing to find two unconscious people. The area is filled with blackened trees.
"Whoa. There really was an explosion!" Lee exclaims
Hope was already checking for a pulse.
"They both seem okay. The shock waves probably knocked them out."
"Ugh"
They turn around to see one of the people reviving. He was pulling out a launcher.
"Alright! Where am I?"
"You are a little west of Lighton."
"Where? Never mind" The boy waved it off. "Where is Maria? Do you work for her?"
"Who's Maria?"
"Funny, Everyone knows Maria. The one that controls the Beyblade world by force?"
"I've never heard of her"
"Man!"
The other boy was getting up off the ground.
"You mean I went through all of that and I didn't even get Maria?"
"Who are you two?" Ami asks
"I am Matt and this is my Reverse Minbros."



"I am Neil and this is the forbidden Portal Bey Dark Wolf."



Credit to @[Jman jman] for Matt and Reverse Minbros!

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Dark Wolf and reverse minbros look super sweet.

Hey! I don't know how many people actually read this but, sorry for the long delay! I had a couple of tests at school.
Anyway...

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Ami looks at Matt and Neil.
"What is going on here? It looked like there was a big explosion."
Neil looks at them.
"That was the portal closing."
"What portal?"
"Seeing as it failed I see no harm in telling you. This Beyblade, Dark Wolf, Comes from another universe much like our own. Because Dark wolf has travelled to another universe it can now open portals between the worlds."
Matt interrupts.
"Do you mean to say this is a different universe? Cause awesome as that sounds I am needed  back at home to beat Maria. My friends are depending on me."
"Don't rub it in. I was trying to get Maria not you."
"Why would you want Maria here? She's evil!"
"My Master thinks that her darkness could be put towards our cause."
Ami steps towards Neil
"I don't know you but, from what you and him" she nods towards Matt "Say. This Maria is evil. Me and Tvastar will gladly battle you to prevent that."
"Why don't you let Matt go home first since you didn't need him here to begin with?"
Lee interjects
"Tvastar?" Neil consults a notepad. "That is on my target list so I can oblige you. If you win I will let Matt go home."
"And if I lose?"
"Then Tvastar is no more."
Kal stands up.
"Let Matt go home."
Neil looks flustered
"M-Master? I didn't see you there. O-of course right away?" He bows
"Dark Wolf special move Howling Portal!"
Purple smoke begins circling Matt.
"Hey. Anyone that is willing to fight against darkness is a friend of mine." Matt waves at Ami
"I'll be back after I beat Maria count on it."

BANG

The smoke explodes throwing Kal, Ami, Lee, and Hope away.

Meanwhile

The boy looked at the three intruders.
"You can't have him"
The middle one seemingly the leader said
"Look here. I am a reasonable fellow. So I will make you a deal. If you beat all three of us at the tournament then we will leave you alone for now. If even one of us wins then we get to take the Doctor with no arguments."
"You call three against one fair?"
"We will be battling you one at a time."
"What makes you think you'll make it that far in the contest anyway?"
"We will make it all right. See you later."
The strangers walk away through the broken down door.
"I'm sorry father." the boy says to the man laying on the ground. I know I said I wouldn't but, it seems I don't have a choice any more.
The boy walks out as well.

Also I named the series Metal Madness!

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You should work with hasbro and sunrights for episodes of beyblade burst turbo and other series. Your story is good

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Lee coughed as he got up.
"Ami? Kal? Hope? Is everyone okay?"

Hope walks over "I'm fine. Ami and Kal appear to have been hit the hardest and they are unconscious."

"Are they all right?"
"Bruises and scratches. Nothing more."
"That's a relief. What do you think that guy meant calling Kal master?"
"I don't know. How well do you know him?"
"I just met him."
Hope turns away "interesting..."
"Huh?"
"Here is my first aid kit. I am going ahead, I can't miss this tournament."
"You're leaving us. What if that guy comes back?"
"You'll be fine, but I need to go."

Hope drops the first aid kit besides Lee and starts walking away.

Elsewhere

"Do you really think this is a good idea Slim?"

Carl asks looking at the piece of metal.

"Are you kidding?! You saw how strong that girl was."
"Yeah..."
"Then what are you waiting for? Do it all ready."
"Alright"

Carl breaks the piece of metal.
There is large flash of light.

"OW!"

The light clears revealing them in a large dark castle. The boy from earlier is waiting.

"You could have warned us it would hurt."

The girl from earlier walks over.

"What would be the fun in that? Now come on the Master would like to talk to you."

The boy leads the way into a large chamber. There is a person seated on a large throne.

The girl speaks first "Some of the new recruits are here master."

The mysterious two bow.

"Very good Maria, Bruce. Take them with you on your mission. Also give them their encouragement."

Bruce steps forward two Bitbeasts appear beside him.

"This is Tengu, and this is Susanoo. they are two of the Bitbeasts that serve the Master. They will be your partners as long as you cooperate."

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Lighton at Last!

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"I still can't believe Hope dumped us back there" Ami complained
"She said she needed to get to the tournament. Maybe the person she's searching for is here." Lee points out
"It still wasn't friendly." Ami pushes
"It doesn't really matter now, there's Lighton!" Lee points to a city appearing through the trees.
"Let's go!"

In Lighton

"We're finally here!"
"Just in time for the qualifiers." Lee says
"Qualifiers?"
"This tournament isn't like the one back home, People come from all over the country for this. It is an official WBBA tournament."

"Charles, Charles!" A man is calling
"Is he looking for someone?" Ami asks
The man stops "Have you seen a boy about this tall with brown hair? He is called Charles"
"We just arrived mister but, we can look for him."
"Oh, thank you!"
The man continues on "Charles!"
Ami looks at the others "Weird."
"Look there guys, that's the sign up table" Lee points
"Well let's hurry!" Ami says
They run over to the desk.
"Let's sign up for different qualifiers so that we all have a good change of getting in." Kal suggests
"Good idea meet back here when you're done"
They run off to the different qualifiers.

In the Forest Outside Lighton

"We're just about ready Lusca. They won't take Father if we can help it." Charles promises.

Coming Soon

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Out of curiosity who is your favorite/least favorite character so far?

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The last two look a bit like a reversed Magical Ape MS and reversed Winning Valkyrie respectively.

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No I don't plan on doing more yet.

I should probably go back to making fan custom Zero G beyblade concepts again

The last two look a bit like a reversed Magical Ape MS and reversed Winning Valkyrie respectively.

The metal wheels are based off of Magical Ape and V2.
Do you have a favorite character yet?

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The last two look a bit like a reversed Magical Ape MS and reversed Winning Valkyrie respectively.

The metal wheels are based off of Magical Ape and V2.
Do you have a favorite character yet?

I'm still undecided, but I'll lean towards Ami for now.

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No I don't plan on doing more yet.

I should probably go back to making fan custom Zero G beyblade concepts again

The Tournament Begins!

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Ami, Kal, and Lee have completed the qualifiers and met back at the sign in table.

"How did you guys do in the qualifiers?" Ami ask
"I came in 26th out of 100 bladers. The challenge was to see who could keep their Beyblade balanced on a dowel" Kal announces "What about you Lee?"
"I came in 50th it was just good enough to qualify. I had to do an obstacle course." Lee says "What place did you get Ami"
"I came in 4th in a traditional battle set-up. The remaining 3 teamed up against me."
Lee looks shocked
"You came in 4th in the qualifiers for the Lighton Games?"
"Yeah."
"That's awesome!" Kal says enthusiastically "Maybe you will win."
"I doubt it but, I am certainly going to try!"

"May I please have your attention" a voice booms

"That's the announcer!" Ami says "The tournament is starting let's go!"


Meanwhile on a hill overlooking the Beypark


"So I'm going to eliminate that nerdy kid, what did they call him?"
"Lee." Carl supplies
"Huh?"
"Lee. They called him Lee."
"Right! So I'm going to eliminate Lee, while Carl eliminates the other guy. You two are going to beat the girl that joined the battle last minute and then we regroup. Is that all?"
"That is the plan except that I will beat Hope. Bruce will battle the Champion instead."
"Let's go."

You can win the chance to have your character included in my story. Check here for more details https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Flame-B...er-Contest

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