[Fan Fiction]  Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (BBB OC Story) (Completed Until Further Notice)

(Nov. 02, 2021  4:19 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Also congrats unseen for participating in a tournament for the first time also you got decent br points

Thanks but this isn't exactly the right place to congratulate me, this is DeltaZakuro's Fanfic area so please don't post on it unless you're talking about the fanfic
Coming Chapters
Chapter 26: A New Shu, Spriggans Retribution!!
Chapter 27: Triple Threat! Battle Royale!!
Chapter 28: The Battle At Sunset!!
Chapter 29: Decisive Battle: Athena VS Lane!!
Chapter 30: Fierce Showdown! Aiga VS Lane!!
Why I submitted the Valkyrie evolution is because I thought it would be interesting if lane broke Valkyrie since Valt is the #1 ranked blader in the legends
(Nov. 02, 2021  11:58 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Why I submitted the Valkyrie evolution is because I thought it would be interesting if lane broke Valkyrie since Valt is the #1 ranked blader in the legends

Thing is, Lane has already destroyed Valkyrie in a recent episode (Episode 20 I believe it was) and Valt simply just repaired Brave Valkyrie. Like I already stated, Valkyrie evolving is meaningless in this story (hence why I deleted the post for a "new" Spriggan)
Oh ok I kinda wanted some custom evolutions for some legends but you can check out my custom Beyblade evolutions here
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Custom-Bey-Evolutions
New Chapter coming soon
Season 2 Chapter 25: Athena VS Chiki! A Real Battle Of Friendship!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1150084439-story...lade-burst
So the new chapter is gonna be delayed a little bit as my Wifi is down (im on a phone with about 4 bars of service) so new Chapter will be delayed for a little while until my wifi comes back.

This applies to all my Fanfictions.
Internet has been restored at my house so now i can start writing again. New Chapter will hopefully be out sometime this week
S2 Chapter 26
https://www.wattpad.com/1150832657-story...lade-burst
Chapter 28 will be renamed to "Decisive Battle On The High Seas: Athena VS Lane!!"
Chapter 29 is "A Champions Legacy"
S2 Chapter 27
https://www.wattpad.com/1152484078-story...lade-burst
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 28: Decisive Battle On The High Seas: Athena VS Lane!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1152727663-story...lade-burst

Upcoming Chapters
Chapter 29: Athenas Resolve! Sovereign Adeona!!
Chapter 30: A Champions Legacy!!
Chapter 31: Full Powered Mastery! Athena's New Flare!!
Chapter 32: The Greatest Battle Royale Ever!
Chapter 33: The New Beys Of The Sun! Hyperion And Helios!!
Chapter 34: The Bonds That We Share!
Chapter 35: The Dark Prince Of The Black Sun! Dark Matter Lucifer!!
Sovereign Adeona.Barrage.8A

Sovereign Ring (Sv) - A Right Spin Sparking Ring that has 4 large and thick blades that have rubber for absorbing and dealing strong attacks. It also has 4 smaller blades for dealing follow up attacks.

Adeona IV (Ad4) - Unlike its Dual Spin Predecessors, Adeona IV is a right spin only chip that features an Adeona motif. The chip has Metal in it followed by a blue metal chip Core, the chip also features a Burst Stopper just like Belial2

8A Chassis - An attack single chassis that features a sharp design and a very heavy weight

Barrage' Driver (Ba') - A driver with an integrated disk built into it. The driver has a POM semi flat as a primary contact point on a Strong launch. When the bey slows down, two tabs retract and the semi flat tip retracts to a rubber plate which resembles Almights tip which makes the bey more mobile and fast

User: Athena Valhalla

Special Moves: Sovereign Symphony, Barrage Dance

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Dark Matter Lucifer.Dropper

Dark Matter Lucifer Layer (dLc) - A right spin layer with a Lucifer motif. The layer is incredibly bulky and a similar shape to a right spin Dread base with 2 trident like contact points that resemble that of Lucifer The End. The gimmick is when on a strong shoot, 2 cyan colored blades will extend and it activates burst stoppers. The layer also features 2 symmetrical metal blades on it and it has a metal center.

Dropper Driver (Dp) a Fused driver that has a very heavy weight featuring a ball tip which is shaped exactly like Massive but made of metal which is surrounded by a POM Ring which is separated from the ball, The gimmick is when on a strong shoot; The POM Ring is locked and is stationary and when the bey starts to slow down , the ring is dropped and is free spin. The driver also has pretty tight spring which makes the bey nearly unburstable. The ring is simply pushed back up and it locks into place to reset the gimmick.

Owner: Lane Valhalla

Special Moves: Dark Matter Shield, Dark Matter Slash, Dark Matter Dropper
S2 Chapter 29
https://www.wattpad.com/1153122788-story...lade-burst
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 30: A Champions Legacy!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1153494350-story...lade-burst

Ratings/Reviews are much appreciated Smile
Coming Chapters

Chapter 31: Full Powered Mastery! A Battle On A Stormy Night!!
Chapter 32: Devoted Spirits! Tag Battle!!
Chapter 33: Prince Of The Black Sun! Dark Matter Lucifer!!
Chapter 34: Be Strong! The Princess Of The Sun Of Light Rises!!
Chapter 35: Explosive Battle! Bonds Of Legends!
Chapter 36: The Grand Event! Legends Reunited!!
Chapter 37: Explosive Attack! Spark-Drive System!!
Chapter 38: A Grand Revolution! Battle Royale!!

Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 31: Full Powered Mastery! A Battle On A Stormy Night!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1153973989-story...lade-burst
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New Chapter coming soon

Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 32: Devoted Spirits! Tag Battle!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1154336881-story...lade-burst
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Season 2 OP 2 coming soon. Title is called "Finding My Reasons Why"

Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Opening #2: Finding My Reasons Why (FULL SONG)
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Thoughts? Opinions?
S2 Chapter 33
https://www.wattpad.com/1156027197-story...lade-burst
(Nov. 20, 2021  3:30 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: S2 Chapter 33
https://www.wattpad.com/1156027197-story...lade-burst

pretty decent chapter! im proud to say that this 8x7-9+3-10+10-48x42=84th episode was a blast to read and it was pretty obvious that lane was gonna win (not saying its plot armor just saying as in its literally the 33rd episode) but it still amused me to watch it! also loved the enthusiastic interactions between the asahi bros and athena and also loved the battle! also the last predicament for next episode makes me insanely hyped for the next episode! keep up the good work DZ!
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 34: The Bonds That We Share!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1156656951-story...lade-burst
(Nov. 19, 2021  6:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Season 2 OP 2 coming soon. Title is called "Finding My Reasons Why"

Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Opening #2: Finding My Reasons Why (FULL SONG)
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Thoughts? Opinions?

I personally think this is good. Its a song grounded in reality — the imagery, as if attentive to the surroundings and its whereabouts; and the literal phrases that emphasize Athena’s emotions. This theme song conveys the fanfic’s ongoing theme of emotions and gathering strength, and the lyrics show just that. Awesome job
Next Episode is gonna be pretty sick, also probably going to be my longest chapter yet which will hopefully exceed 3,000 Words.