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This chapter was really awesome! (Tho Chiki's language was a bit off the charts) Anyways, I love how Chiki was encouraging Athena to do better because She wanted a true rival, and we got to saw Chiki's true self, (I knew she was too nice to be legit) and (I can't spell her Bey's name lol) Chiki's Bey's avatar was sick, (Though I do prefer Adeona's avatar) overall awesome chapter! Looks like Lane has his sights on Aiga, that battle will be interesting in the next chapter. Though the battle ended in a draw so it kinda felt like a filler but whatever the chapter is to good for me to care about that.

Are you having a Character Contest soon? I really wanna add a character.

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

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This chapter was really awesome! (Tho Chiki's language was a bit off the charts) Anyways, I love how Chiki was encouraging Athena to do better because She wanted a true rival, and we got to saw Chiki's true self, (I knew she was too nice to be legit) and (I can't spell her Bey's name lol) Chiki's Bey's avatar was sick, (Though I do prefer Adeona's avatar) overall awesome chapter! Looks like Lane has his sights on Aiga, that battle will be interesting in the next chapter. Though the battle ended in a draw so it kinda felt like a filler but whatever the chapter is to good for me to care about that.

Are you having a Character Contest soon? I really wanna add a character.

Unfortunately no. Chiki is the only character contest character that i allowed, Season 2 has its own set of characters (mainly returning ones) and Season 3 has pretty much Athena, Lane, The New Protags and the DB Characters (Bell, Rashad, Basara, Ranzo and Ilya)

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New Chapter Coming soon, i had fun writing this one

Chapter 47: Explosion! The Crimson Champion VS The Jet-Black Sun!!
Chapter 48: Triple Suns! Athena VS Hikaru And Hyuga!!

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Chapter 46
https://www.wattpad.com/1122411171-story...lade-burst
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New Chapter Coming soon, i had fun writing this one

Chapter 47: Explosion! The Crimson Champion VS The Jet-Black Sun!!
Chapter 48: Triple Suns! Athena VS Hikaru And Hyuga!!

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Chapter 46
https://www.wattpad.com/1122411171-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst PinkRose

*Squeals like a little girl* This chapter was amazing!!

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The battle with Chiki was awesome! It really shows Athena's growth and strength! It was amazing! And when Adeona went in for the final blow! It was amazing, I loved it so much! I'm thinking of doing a Sparking or DB OC now, I've just gotta think about the plot and stuff then it'll be complete. But anyway, the start of the battle with Lean and Aiga was awesome! I loved the clash and everything! (Though it's kinda obvious Lean is gonna win) But, the battle with Chiki and Athena kinda felt rushed, you had plenty of time and space to add some more. But other than that the chapter was amazing as usual! You did awesomely.

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Dub Names

Guide Adeona - Guardian Adeonis
Angelic Adeona - Angelica Adeonis
Adeona Heaven - Adeonis Heavenbringer
Adeona Royal - Adeonis Royalbringer
Flare Lucifer - Fire Lucius
Zone Xcalibur - Zenith Xcalius
Utopia Genesis - No change

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Chapter 47
https://www.wattpad.com/1124220731-story...lade-burst
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Dub Names

Guide Adeona - Guardian Adeonis
Angelic Adeona - Angelica Adeonis
Adeona Heaven - Adeonis Heavenbringer
Adeona Royal - Adeonis Royalbringer
Flare Lucifer - Fire Lucius
Zone Xcalibur - Zenith Xcalius
Utopia Genesis - No change

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Chapter 47
https://www.wattpad.com/1124220731-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst PinkRose reshiwum

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Wow, this chapter was just... perfect, I loved everything about it, especially the battle with Lane, Athena you've literally gambled your Brother's life away, (To be fair she didn't really have a choice, the ending was perfection but I;m a bit upset the Lane won (Even though it was obvious) Aiga tried so hard yet failed so hard, again awesome chapter, my fave part was when Aiga explained everything about Phi! Overall: Awesome Chapter A+!

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Iam catching up with this fic, Iam on chapter 20 right now.

bruh athena you sussy baka bring back lane and he might just go good with season 3

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

The full list of DB Beys for Season 3

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Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3 -> Venture Ausrine.Aq.Dv'-6 (Audrey Valhalla)
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3 -> Rampage Ares.Rs.Rl'-2 (Alexis Valhalla)
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10
Blood Nemesis.Gd.Ln-4 (Nyle Leeman)
Genocide Azrael.Tp.MJs-12 (Anna Valhalla)
Dynamite/Devil Belial.Nx.Vn-2
Savior Valkyrie.Sh-7
Astral Spriggan.Ov.Qt-0
Jynx Lucifer.Pt.Bn-8
Guilty Longinus.Kr.MDs-2
Vanish Fafnir.Tp.Kc-3
Cyclone Ragnaruk.Gg.Nv-6
Valor Achilles.Gg.Dm'-2
Roar Bahamut.Gg.Mm-10
Rashad's Bey (Regnar?)
Magma Ifrit.Cq.J-Q-?
Sonic Wyvern.Ov.Js-6

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Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst reshiwum

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3 more chapters left of Season 1, big things are coming.

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being totally honest i think athena is maybe gonna win

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

The full list of DB Beys for Season 3

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Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3 -> Venture Ausrine.Aq.Dv'-6 (Audrey Valhalla)
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3 -> Rampage Ares.Rs.Rl'-2 (Alexis Valhalla)
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10
Blood Nemesis.Gd.Ln-4 (Nyle Leeman)
Genocide Azrael.Tp.MJs-12 (Anna Valhalla)
Dynamite/Devil Belial.Nx.Vn-2
Savior Valkyrie.Sh-7
Astral Spriggan.Ov.Qt-0
Jynx Lucifer.Pt.Bn-8
Guilty Longinus.Kr.MDs-2
Vanish Fafnir.Tp.Kc-3
Cyclone Ragnaruk.Gg.Nv-6
Valor Achilles.Gg.Dm'-2
Roar Bahamut.Gg.Mm-10
Rashad's Bey (Regnar?)
Magma Ifrit.Cq.J-Q-?
Sonic Wyvern.Ov.Js-6

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Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst reshiwum

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Alexander you sussy baka. This chapter was incredible like usual (It breaks my heart that you don't ping Pinkrose, it reminds the WBO how much we miss him) Anyways I loved the battle with Athena and The Ashi Bros, I'm keeping this short and sweet because I'm not feeling the best (Not Covid! I think...) Anyways I loved how you referenced scenes from God and other seasons. Overall Awesome Chapter, I'm excited for the Finale.

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

The full list of DB Beys for Season 3

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Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3 -> Venture Ausrine.Aq.Dv'-6 (Audrey Valhalla)
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3 -> Rampage Ares.Rs.Rl'-2 (Alexis Valhalla)
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10
Blood Nemesis.Gd.Ln-4 (Nyle Leeman)
Genocide Azrael.Tp.MJs-12 (Anna Valhalla)
Dynamite/Devil Belial.Nx.Vn-2
Savior Valkyrie.Sh-7
Astral Spriggan.Ov.Qt-0
Jynx Lucifer.Pt.Bn-8
Guilty Longinus.Kr.MDs-2
Vanish Fafnir.Tp.Kc-3
Cyclone Ragnaruk.Gg.Nv-6
Valor Achilles.Gg.Dm'-2
Roar Bahamut.Gg.Mm-10
Rashad's Bey (Regnar?)
Magma Ifrit.Cq.J-Q-?
Sonic Wyvern.Ov.Js-6

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Chapter 48
https://www.wattpad.com/1124778943-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst reshiwum

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Alexander you sussy baka. This chapter was incredible like usual (It breaks my heart that you don't ping Pinkrose, it reminds the WBO how much we miss him) Anyways I loved the battle with Athena and The Ashi Bros, I'm keeping this short and sweet because I'm not feeling the best (Not Covid! I think...) Anyways I loved how you referenced scenes from God and other seasons. Overall Awesome Chapter, I'm excited for the Finale.

UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*

anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!

(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Chapter 49
https://www.wattpad.com/1125445414-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst reshiwum

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Alexander you sussy baka. This chapter was incredible like usual (It breaks my heart that you don't ping Pinkrose, it reminds the WBO how much we miss him) Anyways I loved the battle with Athena and The Ashi Bros, I'm keeping this short and sweet because I'm not feeling the best (Not Covid! I think...) Anyways I loved how you referenced scenes from God and other seasons. Overall Awesome Chapter, I'm excited for the Finale.

UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*

anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!

(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)

um, by "his/him" are you referring to Pink? Pink goes by she/her.

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hey guys, did you know that in terms of competitive battling, vaporeon is one of the most underrated? not only that it is a water type which grants it only 2 weaknesses and 3 resistances, vaporeon also has a whopping HP stat of 130 and a respectable special defense of 95, allowing it to tank attacks well. it also has the access to the ability hydration, which makes it especially a power to be beckoned in rain teams as it is immune to status moves. not only as a staller, vaporeon can also hold the role of a sweeper as it has a respectable special attack stat of 110, allowing it to fit on HO or HO Rain teams well. in addition, it is able to learn the moves toxic, scald, wish, protect and acid armor making it a very compatible staller and support, flexible to fit in various teams, tiers and so much more to come.

UB... *sniff* just, please don't mention his name again... *sniff*

anyway, this was an epic episode and athena was being a sussy baka as always... and i sure hope that she defeats lane and teaches him a lesson or two about resonance and flare!

(*sniff* pinkrose would've been proud to see the piticall of such a great fanfic...)

um, by "his/him" are you referring to Pink? Pink goes by she/her.

oh my bad

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Chapter 50
https://www.wattpad.com/1125850339-story...lade-burst
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Chapter 50
https://www.wattpad.com/1125850339-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst

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this chapter was so epic!!!!! i cant wait for the finale!!!

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Final Chapter will be out tomorrow evening, I am very excited for everyone to read it.

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The Final Chapter will be out shortly but I do have some exciting news for Season 2.

- New Legends like Daina and Phi are coming
- There will be 52 Chapters instead of 38
- There will be a new tournament at the end of the season called the Sparking Tour or something along those lines.

Very excited for the things to come and I hope everyone likes it. New Chapter will be out shortly, hopefully within an hour

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Season 1 Finale
https://www.wattpad.com/1125985500-story...lade-burst
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The Final Chapter will be out shortly but I do have some exciting news for Season 2.

- New Legends like Daina and Phi are coming
- There will be 52 Chapters instead of 38
- There will be a new tournament at the end of the season called the Sparking Tour or something along those lines.

Very excited for the things to come and I hope everyone likes it. New Chapter will be out shortly, hopefully within an hour

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Season 1 Finale
https://www.wattpad.com/1125985500-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst

THIS CHAPTER WAS THE DEFINITION OF AMAZING!!!

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This chapter was basically the final battle between Aiga and Phi but 10 times better! Lane and Athena really gave it their all and it was awesome to watch, this has to be the best season finale I've ever read, and when Adeona finally burst Lucifer I was on the moon with happiness because Athena finally gave Lain the whooping he deserved! But seriously Lane? You literally learned nothing from that battle and go back to the snake pit? *Sighs* I guess it can't be helped, I'm super excited for season 2 and I loved season 1 a lot! This season was amazing and knowing you season 2 will be even better! You deserve a good firm pat on the back!

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lol this is kinda like a reference to beyblade burst turbo episode 50, nice! i'll keep reading

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WOW! THIS WAS AMAZING! It was so epic, perfectly fits for a finale! great job on this season! (for some reason athena feels like a sussy baka)

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

(Insert Fan Boy Scream Here)

I loved this, my favorite part was definitely Heaven Symphony!

I again thank you DeltaZakuro for being Athena to all.

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Yes, no, maybe? ¯\_(•,•)_/¯

Three bladed beys are the best.

My long-overdue thoughts about this fanfic. Ive been reading as a "ghost" here and there, as I was a little afraid to spam your notifs with liked messages, rip. But nevertheless, Ill try to make my thoughts as short and easy-to-understand as possible

This really has to be my favorite OC fic in the Beyblade fandom. On the surface, Athena seems like another "Sibling OC" trope and ready to be ignored. But I kid nonreaders not -- Athena is one of the best sibling OCs in the Beyblade Burst fanfiction community. She has a clear motive and is not like your "energetic, happy-go-lucky protagonist who wants to befriend everyone" idea. She is clearly on a mission and her character grows as the mission progresses. She is one heck of an OC to read about and Delta evidently put in a lot of effort into her. She is a unique character and Im glad to read a story with her in it

Awesome fanfic and character. Athena is amazing

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[Status: Lurking]

Guardian Adeona.Love.6A

Guardian Ring (Gr) - The ring features a shape very similar to that of the World wing but it's a bit more thicker and jagged as it has 4 wings that can move into different, it can basically awaken like Imperial Dragon. The ring is also Flippable like World too. Right spin looks like Guide and Left looks like Angelic.

Adeona III Chip (Ad3) - A clear Superking chip that has a similar face to Hyperion but the yellow parts are all purple and some stickers are blue. It is also Dual spin.

6A Chassis (6A) - An LR Double Chassis that has 6 blades that look like that of 1A. The chassis also has 2 modes: in one mode, The blades are fixed and can't move and the other mode allows for free spin

Love Driver (Lv) - An attack type driver that has a pretty segmented base similarly to Venture but it's a tad bit shorter and the tip is actually a hole flat instead of simply an Accel tip. It also has the same rubber ring too.

User: Athena Valhalla

Special Moves: Guardian Upper, Guardian Break, Guardian Shoot, Guardian Slash

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