Whew, finally finished reading the whole thing. I can follow the chapters as soon as they are released now. Definitely one of the best Beyblade fanfics I've read. The one thing I want to say is that when I read that Elaina was a ruler of a kingdom, it took me 2 seconds to register it, but, Lane is a prince. And he lives in an industrial warehouse. The irony is hilarious! Oh, I also left a couple of comments on your last chapter on Wattpad ^_^

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DON'T CALL ME SHORT!1!!1!

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Chapter 34
https://www.wattpad.com/1063219231-story...lade-burst

Ngl, as much as I love Valt and Shu and as much as the battle was frickin' hype, the selling point of this chapter for me was Athena's flashback. It's just sooooooooooooo cute and it gets even better when I can actually visualize that. Dangit Lane, what happened to that sweet cotton-candy kiddo?
In any case, my predictions for the next couple chapters are:
- Lane beats Valt, Athena beats Aiga, Lane beats Athena and breaks Adeona, which prompts Athena to evolve her Bey into Adeona Heaven/Royal and then they fight again at some point in the future chapters.

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

quick message before i take my leave

Chapter 35: Full-Force Bonds! Semi-Finals! and Chapter 36: Lane Vs Valt!! (yes i changed it again) will be posted when i get back so stay tuned.

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quick message before i take my leave

Chapter 35: Full-Force Bonds! Semi-Finals! and Chapter 36: Lane Vs Valt!! (yes i changed it again) will be posted when i get back so stay tuned.

Can't Wait! Seriously!

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quick message before i take my leave

Chapter 35: Full-Force Bonds! Semi-Finals! and Chapter 36: Lane Vs Valt!! (yes i changed it again) will be posted when i get back so stay tuned.

Can't Wait! Seriously!

I agree with @Ryuga’s Son

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If you want to see my irl face pixelated, click the following spoiler

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Ok, I trolled you, but the next one is real

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You're a pervert for wanting to find my irl face pixelated!

New Chapter half-way done.

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Chapter 35
https://www.wattpad.com/1064616054-story...lade-burst

@tenma PinkRose

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Chapter 35
https://www.wattpad.com/1064616054-story...lade-burst

Idk if this is the result of trying to read a fic at 5 AM, but I feel like the first match was...kinda rushed, for lack of a better word. Might be able to explain that a bit more down below, so here goes.

Plot: 4.5/5. Athena advances to the finals (which is coolio) and one of the most intense battles in the whole tournament starts. Hyyyyype.
Dialogue: 5/5. Short as it may feel, the chapter had pretty decent dialogue. Nothing else I have to say.
Characterization: 5/5. Nothing on this one either, all characters are portrayed pretty well.
Grammar: 4.5/5. Nothing much, just the usual minor errors here and there.
Battles: 3.5/5. Okay, this is probably the chapter's only weak point. Athena VS Aiga seemed like they were just calling out attacks then responding with other attacks and BANG!, someone bursts.

Final Rating: 22.5/25. Cool af chapter, but the first battle kinda hurts it. Still hype for the next one tho.

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

Chapter 35
https://www.wattpad.com/1064616054-story...lade-burst

@tenma PinkRose

Ah. The long-awaited chapter.

I'm busy and I want to write my fan fic, I'll just say this chapter is decent and I'll give it a 8.2/10

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Chapter 36 (actually went and proofread it this time-)
https://www.wattpad.com/1070563276-story...lade-burst

@Tenma PinkRose

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Chapter 36 (actually went and proofread it this time-)
https://www.wattpad.com/1070563276-story...lade-burst

Tenma, PinkRose

I could almost swear I reviewed this already-

Plot: 5/5. FINALS ARE COMING YAS! Looks like we'll be getting some interesting stuff with the Valhallas next time, so hyped for it!
Dialogue: 5/5. Love it, especially the part with Elaina and Athena near the end, awwww.
Characterization: 5/5. Pretty sweet (again, last part is the highlight).
Grammar: 4/5. It's good, seems better than last time at least.
Battle: 4.5/5. Just because we all saw this coming doesn't mean I don't feel bad for my boi Valt. Well, at least he got away without Valkyrie taking any damage...

Final Rating: 23.5/25. Great chapter; deffo looking forward to the next one (cuz tbh, every chapter since 34 has been pretty cool).
Pls win Athena we believe in u

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

Oh dang, this is getting good. Sure it may be the general tournament arc, but it definitely has more feeling behind than something like Sparking. Hyped for chapter 37.

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Brave Valkyrie is my favorite bey, and Valt is my favorite character even if he's a bit overrated.

Chapter 36 (actually went and proofread it this time-)
https://www.wattpad.com/1070563276-story...lade-burst

@Tenma PinkRose

So fast?!

Yoo.

Battle: 4.2/5- Fleshed out. Pretty good, but I don't think Valt is the type of guy who would say "Full Power". If you get what I mean. And is was kinda predictable. But it's fun, so i guess 4.2/5 suits it well.
Dialouge: 5/5- Perfect
Plot: 5/5- Progressing. I really want Athena to win. Couldn't spot any mistakes
Grammar: 4/5- Basic mistakes, but fine and fun to read

Loved this chapter, hopefully the next one comes soon.

Hope Lane's flare gets destroyed.

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Honestly this is great! I kept on reading this again and again for hours!

New chapter is changed to "The Dance Of Light And Darkness! Athena VS Lane!!"

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New chapter is changed to "The Dance Of Light And Darkness! Athena VS Lane!!"

....I just imagined them dancing to a spanish song while glaring death at each other because of this title.

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

New chapter is changed to "The Dance Of Light And Darkness! Athena VS Lane!!"

....I just imagined them dancing to a spanish song while glaring at each other because of this title.

Im currently eating and I just about choked reading this lmfao!!

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New chapter is changed to "The Dance Of Light And Darkness! Athena VS Lane!!"

....I just imagined them dancing to a spanish song while glaring death at each other because of this title.

Someone has GOT to draw this!

What have I done...?

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....I just imagined them dancing to a spanish song while glaring death at each other because of this title.

Someone has GOT to draw this!

your wish is my command. /hj

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hey guys, did you know that in terms of competitive battling, vaporeon is one of the most underrated? not only that it is a water type which grants it only 2 weaknesses and 3 resistances, vaporeon also has a whopping HP stat of 130 and a respectable special defense of 95, allowing it to tank attacks well. it also has the access to the ability hydration, which makes it especially a power to be beckoned in rain teams as it is immune to status moves. not only as a staller, vaporeon can also hold the role of a sweeper as it has a respectable special attack stat of 110, allowing it to fit on HO or HO Rain teams well. in addition, it is able to learn the moves toxic, scald, wish, protect and acid armor making it a very compatible staller and support, flexible to fit in various teams, tiers and so much more to come.

Woo boy... Heres Chapter 37
https://www.wattpad.com/1072915001-story...lade-burst

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Woo boy... Heres Chapter 37
https://www.wattpad.com/1072915001-story...lade-burst

Most fun chapter in this fan fic. Although, everyone had already known Lane would body Athena and break her bey. Nevertheless, this chapter was breathtaking.

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hmm I thought this was boring but I will just give you a rating
plot 4/5
grammer 5/5
characters 6/6
overall
15/15

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hmm I thought this was boring but I will just give you a rating
plot 4/5
grammer 5/5
characters 6/6
overall
15/15

you just wrote numbers. No info, no background.

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Please try out my Fan Fics:
FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

hmm I thought this was boring but I will just give you  a rating
plot 4/5
grammer 5/5
characters  6/6
overall
15/15

you just wrote numbers. No info, no background.

cause im at school

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably