[Fan Fiction]  HEY DELETE THIS THREAD

HEY DELETE THIS THREAD

and all my other threads
Cool dude you might want to keep adding to this thread
Its rewritten, I don't want to add things that was wasn't planned in the thread before
Oh maybe you should make a thread about the weirdest things in beyblade
Episode 1 Preview

Wow you are good at this
Theme Song Based on Hikari Are
"Ace Serve"

Dude!!!you are good at this whole thing
THANKS     !
(Jan. 24, 2022  4:06 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: Theme Song Based on Hikari Are
"Ace Serve"

pog
Fun facts about the team


1. Tsukiyomi has a pet grasshopper named Slice (fun fact to I myself WILL have a pet grasshopper named Slice DeMantis)
2. Hiro is an Avid Gamer
3. Daedalus's name is based on the father of Icarus which will be planned to be Daedalus half younger brother.
4. Sora is the last revealed member of the team
5. Aelius has a pet grasshopper named Annabela
6. Chikara and Bo's name etymology is Chikara which means power and Bokuasa which I got from Boku meaning I and Asa meaning Dynasty or Morning so it means I am the Morning but when combined is also like the Indonesian word Berkuasa which means Rule and in Malay it means  Power
7. Gai and Cho's is formely a member of the soccer, ping pong and antology club
8. The Seniors never got a grade below 80

Back to the Slice fact I can get it if I do my chores, make his house and take care of it Alone so dont ask any pics

(Jan. 25, 2022  2:35 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: Fun facts about the team


1. Tsukiyomi has a pet grasshopper named Slice (fun fact to I myself WILL have a pet grasshopper named Slice DeMantis)
2. Hiro is an Avid Gamer
3. Daedalus's name is based on the father of Icarus which will be planned to be Daedalus half younger brother.
4. Sora is the last revealed member of the team
5. Aelius has a pet grasshopper named Annabela
6. Chikara and Bo's name etymology is Chikara which means power and Bokuasa which I got from Boku meaning I and Asa meaning Dynasty or Morning so it means I am the Morning but when combined is also like the Indonesian word Berkuasa which means Rule and in Malay it means  Power
7. Gai and Cho's is formely a member of the soccer, ping pong and antology club
8. The Seniors never got a grade below 80

Back to the Slice fact I can get it if I do my chores, make his house and take care of it Alone so dont ask any pics


Wow! Nice!
First Episode!



Ratings/Reviews super Appreciated
@Hollowmind8  Super A  BeybladeManiac0  reshiwum  xros
(Jan. 26, 2022  12:17 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: First Episode!



Ratings/Reviews super Appreciated
@Hollowmind8  Super A  BeybladeManiac0  reshiwum  xros

Wow! It's great! 9.3/10
If I guess correctly its because of the grammar making it 9.3

Anyway some Character Bio's coming soon
(Jan. 26, 2022  12:17 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: First Episode!



Ratings/Reviews super Appreciated
Hollowmind8  "Super A"  BeybladeManiac0  reshiwum  xros
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7.8928/10
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It is only the beginning, so normally the grades are lower.
Grammar wise you could use Google docs and/or Grammarly.
Dialog can be polished for sure, and maybe add a little more emotion.
Overall not bad, but not excellent either
(Jan. 26, 2022  8:14 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jan. 26, 2022  12:17 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: First Episode!



Ratings/Reviews super Appreciated
Hollowmind8  "Super A"  BeybladeManiac0  reshiwum  xros
.
7.8928/10
.
It is only the beginning, so normally the grades are lower.
Grammar wise you could use Google docs and/or Grammarly.
Dialog can be polished for sure, and maybe add a little more emotion.
Overall not bad, but not excellent either

Its still the first episode also i still wanna rewrite for some reason
(Jan. 29, 2022  7:46 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote:
(Jan. 26, 2022  8:14 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
7.8928/10
.
It is only the beginning, so normally the grades are lower.
Grammar wise you could use Google docs and/or Grammarly.
Dialog can be polished for sure, and maybe add a little more emotion.
Overall not bad, but not excellent either

Its still the first episode also i still wanna rewrite for some reason
.
Well, you can rewrite it, just don't create yet another thread lo. Just edit it and send again? or announce that it is edited
(Jan. 25, 2022  2:35 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: Fun facts about the team


1. Tsukiyomi has a pet grasshopper named Slice (fun fact to I myself WILL have a pet grasshopper named Slice DeMantis)
2. Hiro is an Avid Gamer
3. Daedalus's name is based on the father of Icarus which will be planned to be Daedalus half younger brother.
4. Sora is the last revealed member of the team
5. Aelius has a pet grasshopper named Annabela
6. Chikara and Bo's name etymology is Chikara which means power and Bokuasa which I got from Boku meaning I and Asa meaning Dynasty or Morning so it means I am the Morning but when combined is also like the Indonesian word Berkuasa which means Rule and in Malay it means  Power
7. Gai and Cho's is formely a member of the soccer, ping pong and antology club
8. The Seniors never got a grade below 80

Back to the Slice fact I can get it if I do my chores, make his house and take care of it Alone so dont ask any pics


I got my another Grasshopper and renamed it Samurai when Slice Died