[Fan Fiction] Call of the Beyblade.

Nitrogenic · May. 21, 2020 6:01 PM

Will my character name even be in the story?

"The mark of my dignity shall scar thy DNA!" Gill, Street Fighter. Sub to Nitrogenic! Nitro is the heat and Nitrogen the cold.

snoc · May. 21, 2020 6:07 PM

(May. 21, 2020 6:01 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: Will my character name even be in the story?

if Amaterios has been added to the story and it has a different blader, prob not.

haven't read it all yet tho

GreenK9148 · May. 21, 2020 6:28 PM

(May. 21, 2020 6:01 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: Will my character name even be in the story?

Most likely not. It's just a name.

(May. 18, 2020 7:43 PM)Jdog757 Wrote: Do you think you can have one of those special bladers like lui or free to be in one chapter

Like CheetoBlader said. Maybe. I personally would like to.

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MasterKurenai · May. 21, 2020 7:59 PM

Maybe you should add the beys astro and artemis

CheetoBlader · May. 21, 2020 8:00 PM

(May. 21, 2020 7:59 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: Maybe you should add the beys astro and artemis

Those two make Eclipse, and the pit only has Beys that don’t appear in the anime.

GreenK9148 · May. 21, 2020 8:02 PM

(May. 21, 2020 7:59 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: Maybe you should add the beys astro and artemis

Any suggestions?

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MasterKurenai · May. 21, 2020 8:06 PM

I know who you can add in your story Raiju Tategami and his bey is Inferno Ifrit Knuckle Xtreme
Special Moves: Shooting Star Crush ( Like in Zero-G), Burning Crash, Ultimate Fireball

GreenK9148 · May. 21, 2020 9:00 PM

(May. 21, 2020 8:06 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: I know who you can add in your story Raiju Tategami and his bey is Inferno Ifrit Knuckle Xtreme
Special Moves: Shooting Star Crush ( Like in Zero-G), Burning Crash, Ultimate Fireball

Can you please pm me. If anyone wants to suggest a character, then please pm me.

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Nitrogenic · May. 22, 2020 2:10 AM

Welp this story was good while it lasted, I am confused now.

"The mark of my dignity shall scar thy DNA!" Gill, Street Fighter. Sub to Nitrogenic! Nitro is the heat and Nitrogen the cold.

GreenK9148 · May. 22, 2020 2:28 AM

(May. 22, 2020 2:10 AM)Nitrogenic Wrote: Welp this story was good while it lasted, I am confused now.

How? Can you explain?

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Nitrogenic · May. 22, 2020 2:40 AM

Too many characters, rushed plot no offense. At this rate the story might detiorate.

"The mark of my dignity shall scar thy DNA!" Gill, Street Fighter. Sub to Nitrogenic! Nitro is the heat and Nitrogen the cold.

GreenK9148 · May. 22, 2020 3:22 AM

(May. 22, 2020 2:40 AM)Nitrogenic Wrote: Too many characters, rushed plot no offense. At this rate the story might detiorate.

Okay, thanks. I will take this to thought for chapter 7.

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GreenK9148 · May. 22, 2020 3:59 PM

Update: The release of chapter 7 will be delayed to June 1st.

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sans the man · May. 22, 2020 4:35 PM

good job man it's good to see you work on something that you like

GreenK9148 · May. 22, 2020 4:41 PM

(May. 22, 2020 4:35 PM)sans the man Wrote: good job man it's good to see you work on something that you like

Thanks. Do you mean my fanfic, cause if you do, then you're correct.

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MasterKurenai · May. 22, 2020 4:43 PM

It takes alot of time to put thought into writing a chapter

sans the man · May. 22, 2020 4:53 PM

yes i mean your fanfic

CheetoBlader · May. 22, 2020 4:57 PM

(May. 22, 2020 4:43 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: It takes alot of time to put thought into writing a chapter

To write well, yes.

GreenK9148 · May. 22, 2020 5:01 PM

(May. 22, 2020 4:57 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(May. 22, 2020 4:43 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: It takes alot of time to put thought into writing a chapter
To write well, yes.

Do I write well?

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My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

CheetoBlader · May. 22, 2020 5:19 PM

(May. 22, 2020 5:01 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(May. 22, 2020 4:57 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: To write well, yes.

Do I write well?

That depends on who you’re asking, but you do better in some categories than others.

GreenK9148 · May. 22, 2020 6:48 PM

(May. 22, 2020 5:19 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(May. 22, 2020 5:01 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Do I write well?
That depends on who you’re asking, but you do better in some categories than others.

Oh, ok. Can we discuss this over pm's?

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GreenK9148 · Jun. 02, 2020 1:01 AM

Chapter 7 is finally out! Nitrogenic helped with this chapter.
Note: This chapter will contain little amounts of blood. But, not a lot. I also do not mention the word "blood."

Spoiler (Click to View)

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Nitrogenic · Jun. 02, 2020 2:16 AM

(Jun. 02, 2020 1:01 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Chapter 7 is finally out! Nitrogenic helped with this chapter.
Note: This chapter will contain little amounts of blood. But, not a lot. I also do not mention the word "blood."

Spoiler (Click to View)

As Forrest and Roan were devising a plan for their rematch battle against Minos and Akuma, Forrest became lost in his thoughts. Suddenly, he was facing a huge wolf; It seemed like a dream. 'Wow! that must be Fenrir!'
“What? Where am I? How am I here? Fenrir?” Forrest wondered.
“Do not worry Forrest, as long as you have me by your side, you are safe. Push harder, and become stronger! Together, we will win!" The huge wolf seemed to say.
Forrest stared deep into the wolf's blue eyes, and reached deep into his own thoughts. 'What's happening? Why am I feeling this sensation?'
"Relax Forrest, let me remind you of who you are."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The wind, the sensation, is what the child felt. It was all he needed. It was all he wanted. He got used to being on his own. He didn’t have any memories of his past, nor his parents. Suddenly, he tripped and fell face first. The child heard a whimper, and then many howls afterward.
He looked up to see a wolf. At first the boy backed away. But, he then realized that the wolf radiated with kindness and gentleness. The wolf offered a piece of meat and the toddler accepted it.
The wolf gently carried the child into the woods to meet its pack. The other wolves were hesitant at first, but then approached him. Later at nighttime, the boy had something called meat. Against the soft fur of the wolf, the child fell asleep

*3 years later*
An unusual sound echoed throughout the forest. It made a rustling sound. POW! The wolves in the pack instantly scattered. The boy followed the wolf that he met first. He named the wolf Forrest. Strange creatures that looked just like the child came into the clearing.
Forrest gently carried him into safety. But, as curious as the child was. The child looked behind him. A red paste was smeared against most of his packmates. Then, the red paste came to his caretaker; Forrest. The mighty wolf collapsed with a whimper. The remaining wolves howled in despair.
“Forrest,” The boy whispered, as tears rolled down his face. Then, he looked up to see a hand offering help.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“What? I’ve been raised by a wolf! Thank you, Fenrir. This really opens my mind. I don’t even know what to think or say. I’m speechless.” Forrest said, as he remembered the wolf that took care of him. ‘Fenrir and Forrest the wolf really look a lot like each other.’
“Don’t think, just trust your instinct,” Fenrir said as he disappeared.
His vision cleared, and his senses were much better. His smell, and hearing were almost as strong as a wolf.
“You’re finally listening, what happened?” Roan exclaimed.
“I don’t know, but I know what we have to do,” Forrest said, as he prepared to launch Fenrir.
“3, 2, 1. Go shoot!” Everyone yelled.

Sry for not including a battle.

Character developpement is necesary sometimes Smile

"The mark of my dignity shall scar thy DNA!" Gill, Street Fighter. Sub to Nitrogenic! Nitro is the heat and Nitrogen the cold.

GreenK9148 · Jun. 02, 2020 2:20 AM

(Jun. 02, 2020 2:16 AM)Nitrogenic Wrote:
(Jun. 02, 2020 1:01 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Chapter 7 is finally out! Nitrogenic helped with this chapter.
Note: This chapter will contain little amounts of blood. But, not a lot. I also do not mention the word "blood."

Spoiler (Click to View)

As Forrest and Roan were devising a plan for their rematch battle against Minos and Akuma, Forrest became lost in his thoughts. Suddenly, he was facing a huge wolf; It seemed like a dream. 'Wow! that must be Fenrir!'
“What? Where am I? How am I here? Fenrir?” Forrest wondered.
“Do not worry Forrest, as long as you have me by your side, you are safe. Push harder, and become stronger! Together, we will win!" The huge wolf seemed to say.
Forrest stared deep into the wolf's blue eyes, and reached deep into his own thoughts. 'What's happening? Why am I feeling this sensation?'
"Relax Forrest, let me remind you of who you are."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The wind, the sensation, is what the child felt. It was all he needed. It was all he wanted. He got used to being on his own. He didn’t have any memories of his past, nor his parents. Suddenly, he tripped and fell face first. The child heard a whimper, and then many howls afterward.
He looked up to see a wolf. At first the boy backed away. But, he then realized that the wolf radiated with kindness and gentleness. The wolf offered a piece of meat and the toddler accepted it.
The wolf gently carried the child into the woods to meet its pack. The other wolves were hesitant at first, but then approached him. Later at nighttime, the boy had something called meat. Against the soft fur of the wolf, the child fell asleep

*3 years later*
An unusual sound echoed throughout the forest. It made a rustling sound. POW! The wolves in the pack instantly scattered. The boy followed the wolf that he met first. He named the wolf Forrest. Strange creatures that looked just like the child came into the clearing.
Forrest gently carried him into safety. But, as curious as the child was. The child looked behind him. A red paste was smeared against most of his packmates. Then, the red paste came to his caretaker; Forrest. The mighty wolf collapsed with a whimper. The remaining wolves howled in despair.
“Forrest,” The boy whispered, as tears rolled down his face. Then, he looked up to see a hand offering help.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“What? I’ve been raised by a wolf! Thank you, Fenrir. This really opens my mind. I don’t even know what to think or say. I’m speechless.” Forrest said, as he remembered the wolf that took care of him. ‘Fenrir and Forrest the wolf really look a lot like each other.
“Don’t think, just trust your instinct,” Fenrir said as he disappeared.
His vision cleared, and his senses were much better. His smell, and hearing were almost as strong as a wolf.
“You’re finally listening, what happened?” Roan exclaimed.
“I don’t know, but I know what we have to do,” Forrest said, as he prepared to launch Fenrir.
“3, 2, 1. Go shoot!” Everyone yelled.

Sry for not including a battle.

Character developpement is necesary sometimes

Yep.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

GreenK9148 · Jun. 02, 2020 6:26 PM

Next chapter will be released on fri 6/12/2020.

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