[Fan Fiction] Call of the Beyblade.

GreenK9148 · Oct. 14, 2020 6:20 PM

Um, I accidentally posted a random thing in the wrong fanfic, sorry.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Master_chanter0 · Oct. 14, 2020 6:40 PM

(Oct. 14, 2020 6:20 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Um, I accidentally posted a random thing in the wrong fanfic, sorry.

Wdym

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Leader of the Spryzenlightnings
I make beyblade recolors! Check out my thread if you want one (or a few) done!
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GreenK9148 · Oct. 14, 2020 7:09 PM

(Oct. 14, 2020 6:40 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020 6:20 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Um, I accidentally posted a random thing in the wrong fanfic, sorry.

Wdym

I accidentally posted a thing for my other fanfic in this one.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Master_chanter0 · Oct. 14, 2020 7:35 PM

(Oct. 14, 2020 7:09 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020 6:40 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: Wdym

I accidentally posted a thing for my other fanfic in this one.

No you didn't

Sup Turtle
Leader of the Spryzenlightnings
I make beyblade recolors! Check out my thread if you want one (or a few) done!
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GreenK9148 · Oct. 14, 2020 7:38 PM

(Oct. 14, 2020 7:35 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020 7:09 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I accidentally posted a thing for my other fanfic in this one.

No you didn't

I edited the post. That's why you don't see it.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

GreenK9148 · Oct. 18, 2020 5:26 PM

I'm getting kinda paranoid. I searched up amatatios for some inspiration on a commission for my 3D printing thread. I went to images and one of the pictures was my profile pic and was a link to page 6 of this fanfic. Also, Someone recognized me on overwatch and typed (in all caps) "Call of The Beyblade" in the chat.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Master_chanter0 · Oct. 18, 2020 6:19 PM

(Oct. 18, 2020 5:26 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I'm getting kinda paranoid. I searched up amatatios for some inspiration on a commission for my 3D printing thread. I went to images and one of the pictures was my profile pic and was a link to page 6 of this fanfic. Also, Someone recognized me on overwatch and typed (in all caps) "Call of The Beyblade" in the chat.

that is crazy, i believe the link though.

Sup Turtle
Leader of the Spryzenlightnings
I make beyblade recolors! Check out my thread if you want one (or a few) done!
spoiler (click to view)

GreenK9148 · Oct. 18, 2020 6:27 PM

(Oct. 18, 2020 6:19 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 18, 2020 5:26 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I'm getting kinda paranoid. I searched up amatatios for some inspiration on a commission for my 3D printing thread. I went to images and one of the pictures was my profile pic and was a link to page 6 of this fanfic. Also, Someone recognized me on overwatch and typed (in all caps) "Call of The Beyblade" in the chat.

that is crazy, i believe the link though.

I'm actually not lying. It might sound fake. I wish I took a screenshot.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

6Jupiter5 · Oct. 18, 2020 8:23 PM

This is much better than that garbage known as BruhBlade burst

GreenK9148 · Oct. 18, 2020 8:27 PM

(Oct. 18, 2020 8:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: This is much better than that garbage known as BruhBlade burst

Well, that's the point of this fanfic. Isn't it?

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Master_chanter0 · Oct. 18, 2020 9:33 PM

(Oct. 18, 2020 8:27 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 18, 2020 8:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: This is much better than that garbage known as BruhBlade burst

Well, that's the point of this fanfic. Isn't it?

when da next chapter.

Sup Turtle
Leader of the Spryzenlightnings
I make beyblade recolors! Check out my thread if you want one (or a few) done!
spoiler (click to view)

GreenK9148 · Oct. 18, 2020 9:35 PM

(Oct. 18, 2020 9:33 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 18, 2020 8:27 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Well, that's the point of this fanfic. Isn't it?

when da next chapter.

I wrote some of it today. I’m not sure when it will come out thought.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

GreenK9148 · Oct. 25, 2020 4:26 PM

Ok, scheduled release for wenzday. Oh no, 6Jupiter5. My experience with BruhBlade burst is making me stoopider, helP MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

GreenK9148 · Oct. 28, 2020 4:52 PM

Chapter 14. Master_chanter0

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‘It was cold, too cold to be out in the open. But he knew he couldn’t stop, or else they would catch up to him. The humans who said they “Rescued him”. He couldn’t stand to live with them anymore. The skins of his caretakers hanging on the walls of his den (bedroom), the loud noises of the long sticks they carry around.
Panting, Forrest needed a source of nutrition. His lips, freezing dry and his body feasting on the remaining fat left in his stomach.
“Over there!” One of Hunters yelled.
“I’ll go left you go right!” The other one hollered.
Stumbling and tripping, Forrest was using all four limb just to keep himself upright and going. His fortunes suddenly turned on him. Slipping on a puddle of water, his face landed an a root of a tree.
Now, with a bleeding nose and a scarred face Forrest was only hindered even more. Almost falling again, Forrest stumbled onto a frozen river. His bare feet freezing as he tried to gain some sort of traction.
“Looks like we’ll have to set up camp here,” One of the hunters shouted, as it was hard to hear through the turbulent winds.
‘I’ve been here before, this has to be dream,’ Forrest thought. Looking around, the snow flakes melting on his face. Suddenly, he heard some crunching in the snow. Forrest quickly swerved around. He came face to face with a wolf. The majestic beast slowly pivoted and trotted away.
“Wait!” Forrest called, and chased after the wolf.
But, the wolf picked up speed. Faster and faster the wolf went, the faster Forrest ran out of breath. Forrest could barely see the frozen ravine that lay ahead, and the wolf standing on top of thin soon to crack layer of ice.
“Watch out!” He called.
‘No,’ he thought, he won’t let himself fail this time. Not this time.
Rushing out onto the feeble ice, Forrest dove and pushed the wolf towards safety. Thought, the wolf’s claws scraped the ice, trying to gain more traction. But fatally, it broke the ice.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhh,” Forrest yelled, as he fell through the ice and into the darkness.”

Even though it was a dream, Forrest felt the sharp pain that stuck at the back of his head. As if he had hit the ground from that dangerous fall. Quietly, he climbed out of his sleeping bag and headed towards the outdoors stadium. But, in the distance he could see the smoke of a camp fire.
“Something or someone is in there,” Forrest whispered to himself.
Then he heard a wolf howl, the pain in it’s voice. Forrest took out eclipse from his pocket. He felt the urge to howl back, but he couldn’t. Instead, he looked at the moonlight reflecting off of the right side of eclipse.

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Master_chanter0 · Oct. 28, 2020 8:37 PM

(Oct. 28, 2020 4:52 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Chapter 14. Master_chanter0

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‘It was cold, too cold to be out in the open. But he knew he couldn’t stop, or else they would catch up to him. The humans who said they “Rescued him”. He couldn’t stand to live with them anymore. The skins of his caretakers hanging on the walls of his den (bedroom), the loud noises of the long sticks they carry around.
Panting, Forrest needed a source of nutrition. His lips, freezing dry and his body feasting on the remaining fat left in his stomach.
“Over there!” One of Hunters yelled.
“I’ll go left you go right!” The other one hollered.
Stumbling and tripping, Forrest was using all four limb just to keep himself upright and going. His fortunes suddenly turned on him. Slipping on a puddle of water, his face landed an a root of a tree.
Now, with a bleeding nose and a scarred face Forrest was only hindered even more. Almost falling again, Forrest stumbled onto a frozen river. His bare feet freezing as he tried to gain some sort of traction.
“Looks like we’ll have to set up camp here,” One of the hunters shouted, as it was hard to hear through the turbulent winds.
‘I’ve been here before, this has to be dream,’ Forrest thought. Looking around, the snow flakes melting on his face. Suddenly, he heard some crunching in the snow. Forrest quickly swerved around. He came face to face with a wolf. The majestic beast slowly pivoted and trotted away.
“Wait!” Forrest called, and chased after the wolf.
But, the wolf picked up speed. Faster and faster the wolf went, the faster Forrest ran out of breath. Forrest could barely see the frozen ravine that lay ahead, and the wolf standing on top of thin soon to crack layer of ice.
“Watch out!” He called.
‘No,’ he thought, he won’t let himself fail this time. Not this time.
Rushing out onto the feeble ice, Forrest dove and pushed the wolf towards safety. Thought, the wolf’s claws scraped the ice, trying to gain more traction. But fatally, it broke the ice.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhh,” Forrest yelled, as he fell through the ice and into the darkness.”

Even though it was a dream, Forrest felt the sharp pain that stuck at the back of his head. As if he had hit the ground from that dangerous fall. Quietly, he climbed out of his sleeping bag and headed towards the outdoors stadium. But, in the distance he could see the smoke of a camp fire.
“Something or someone is in there,” Forrest whispered to himself.
Then he heard a wolf howl, the pain in it’s voice. Forrest took out eclipse from his pocket. He felt the urge to howl back, but he couldn’t. Instead, he looked at the moonlight reflecting off of the right side of eclipse.

Is the chapter called Master_chanter0? (It's a joke)

Sup Turtle
Leader of the Spryzenlightnings
I make beyblade recolors! Check out my thread if you want one (or a few) done!
spoiler (click to view)

GreenK9148 · Oct. 29, 2020 4:50 PM

(Oct. 28, 2020 8:37 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 28, 2020 4:52 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Chapter 14. Master_chanter0

Spoiler (Click to View)

‘It was cold, too cold to be out in the open. But he knew he couldn’t stop, or else they would catch up to him. The humans who said they “Rescued him”. He couldn’t stand to live with them anymore. The skins of his caretakers hanging on the walls of his den (bedroom), the loud noises of the long sticks they carry around.
Panting, Forrest needed a source of nutrition. His lips, freezing dry and his body feasting on the remaining fat left in his stomach.
“Over there!” One of Hunters yelled.
“I’ll go left you go right!” The other one hollered.
Stumbling and tripping, Forrest was using all four limb just to keep himself upright and going. His fortunes suddenly turned on him. Slipping on a puddle of water, his face landed an a root of a tree.
Now, with a bleeding nose and a scarred face Forrest was only hindered even more. Almost falling again, Forrest stumbled onto a frozen river. His bare feet freezing as he tried to gain some sort of traction.
“Looks like we’ll have to set up camp here,” One of the hunters shouted, as it was hard to hear through the turbulent winds.
‘I’ve been here before, this has to be dream,’ Forrest thought. Looking around, the snow flakes melting on his face. Suddenly, he heard some crunching in the snow. Forrest quickly swerved around. He came face to face with a wolf. The majestic beast slowly pivoted and trotted away.
“Wait!” Forrest called, and chased after the wolf.
But, the wolf picked up speed. Faster and faster the wolf went, the faster Forrest ran out of breath. Forrest could barely see the frozen ravine that lay ahead, and the wolf standing on top of thin soon to crack layer of ice.
“Watch out!” He called.
‘No,’ he thought, he won’t let himself fail this time. Not this time.
Rushing out onto the feeble ice, Forrest dove and pushed the wolf towards safety. Thought, the wolf’s claws scraped the ice, trying to gain more traction. But fatally, it broke the ice.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhh,” Forrest yelled, as he fell through the ice and into the darkness.”

Even though it was a dream, Forrest felt the sharp pain that stuck at the back of his head. As if he had hit the ground from that dangerous fall. Quietly, he climbed out of his sleeping bag and headed towards the outdoors stadium. But, in the distance he could see the smoke of a camp fire.
“Something or someone is in there,” Forrest whispered to himself.
Then he heard a wolf howl, the pain in it’s voice. Forrest took out eclipse from his pocket. He felt the urge to howl back, but he couldn’t. Instead, he looked at the moonlight reflecting off of the right side of eclipse.

Is the chapter called Master_chanter0? (It's a joke)

Yep

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Master_chanter0 · Nov. 02, 2020 6:33 PM

When's the next chapter coming at us?

Sup Turtle
Leader of the Spryzenlightnings
I make beyblade recolors! Check out my thread if you want one (or a few) done!
spoiler (click to view)

GreenK9148 · Nov. 03, 2020 12:04 AM

(Nov. 02, 2020 6:33 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: When's the next chapter coming at us?

Umm, idk. I write when I feel like writing. Cause that’s what brings out the best of my writing. Is there anything that can make this fanfic better?

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

6Jupiter5 · Nov. 03, 2020 12:43 AM

(Nov. 03, 2020 12:04 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Nov. 02, 2020 6:33 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: When's the next chapter coming at us?

Umm, idk. I write when I feel like writing. Cause that’s what brings out the best of my writing. Is there anything that can make this fanfic better?

Maybe xtend the story length a little bit longer.

GreenK9148 · Nov. 03, 2020 1:57 AM

(Nov. 03, 2020 12:43 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020 12:04 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Umm, idk. I write when I feel like writing. Cause that’s what brings out the best of my writing. Is there anything that can make this fanfic better?

Maybe xtend the story length a little bit longer.

Like, per chapter?

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

6Jupiter5 · Nov. 03, 2020 2:00 AM

(Nov. 03, 2020 1:57 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020 12:43 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Maybe xtend the story length a little bit longer.

Like, per chapter?

Yes. If you could increase it by a short paragraph’s length that would be awesome.

GreenK9148 · Nov. 03, 2020 2:00 AM

(Nov. 03, 2020 2:00 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020 1:57 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Like, per chapter?

Yes. If you could increase it by a short paragraph’s length that would be awesome.

Cool, anything else? Like character or plot stuff?

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

6Jupiter5 · Nov. 03, 2020 2:02 AM

(Nov. 03, 2020 2:00 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020 2:00 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Yes. If you could increase it by a short paragraph’s length that would be awesome.

Cool, anything else? Like character or plot stuff?

Not really. I mean I could read everything here, but I’ll tell you these two questions to ask yourself. Where is this story heading and how has my characters developed, have they been fleshed out enough?

GreenK9148 · Nov. 03, 2020 2:08 AM

(Nov. 03, 2020 2:02 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020 2:00 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Cool, anything else? Like character or plot stuff?

Not really. I mean I could read everything here, but I’ll tell you these two questions to ask yourself. Where is this story heading and how has my characters developed, have they been fleshed out enough?

Hm, I’ll put some more thought into that. Thanks!

My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

GreenK9148 · Mar. 06, 2021 3:07 PM

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My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA