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[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade burst apocalypse(15+) (part 7 ongoing)

Dec. 19, 2020  6:04 AM
 
Part 5 chapter 12! Angel maiden vs nemesis!/The Happy ending!
A huge explosion happens.
Shun:Your not so bad Eda-san!
Eda: Die!
Maiden hits nemesis.
Shun:Join me Eda and we could rule this world together just me and you. I will spare your friends lives and bring back Haise.
Alice: Eda don't do it it's a trap!
Eda: shun! I will do whatever you say.
Eda grabs maiden.
Shun:Good! Lets start this party by killing all the legends.
Eda:we had a deal! Bring Haise back!
Shun: Maybe ask nicely and I will might spare Lane.
Shu:Haise wake up Haise!
Eda: If you lied I am gonna kill you!
Haise wakes up in the hospital.
Haise:what a weird dream.
Shun: is it really a dream?
Haise jumps in shock.
Haise:Your here!
Shun:calm down Haise! I just showed you what happened if you did not listen to me.
Eda walks into the room.
Eda:Haise I found this.
It was a note. It reads "remember me? The one that stalked you at night? The one who killed your mom and dad? I am coming to see you! If you reading this note I am here. Right behind you."
Haise:What is this?
Haise turns around.
Shun:miss me?
Shun stabbes Haise with broken pieces of universal maiden.
Haise:damn you!
Haise dies then wakes up in the hospital.
Haise:what is this?
Kaiser:return by death maybe?
Kisara:yes it could be!
Kai:Haise get out of there!
Haise awakens.
Haise: Shu?
Shu:Thank God your alive.
Haise gets up.
Eda:Haise!
Eda runs to Haise.
Shun: Eda! Come on I need to fix this world before we live happily ever after.
Eda hugs Haise.
Haise: Eda.
Eda gives maiden to Haise.
Shun:I said come now!
Eda disappears.
Haise: Shun!
Shun:Haise!
Haise:I am gonna kill you!
Shun:try to do it!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shun:Go nemesis!
Haise:Go Angel maiden!
Other shun:Haise please save me Haise!
Shun: Die!
Nemesis hits maiden.
Haise:Go! Angels Barrier.
Shun:Nani!
Maiden blocks the attack.
Haise:Give up shun I have you trapped!
Shun: Damn it!
Haise:you have a choice to come back to me or I will kill you or erase all the damage and you can live a free life.
Shun:Never!
Haise: So be it! Angel's release recollection! Goodbye everyone.
A huge explosion happens.
Alice:Haise!
Akira:Haise-senpai!
Delta:Haise!
Haise body is sent flying.
Shun: Damn mortals!
Shun smiles.
Haise: I did it!
Haise passes out from exhaustion.
Eda: Good work Haise.
Eda picks up Haise and puts her in her bed.
Eda:thank you for saving me.
Eda kisses Haise on the lips.
5 years later.
Yua:I am going out with aiga.
Shun:ok see you later.
Haise:yua be home by 10 ok.
Yua:see you guys later.
Aiga:ready yua?
Yua:yes I am!
Eda:yua be careful ok?
Yua:sure aunt Eda!
Shun:so Haise what did I miss?
Haise:nothing really. Glad to have you back in my head again.
Shun laughs.
Haise: Don't you think it's time to go?
Kisara:it's up to you guys.
Lana:I still don't care!
Sara:it's up to you guys.
Sarah:same thing as always.
Kai:I am leaving up to you guys.
Kaiser:I don't know.
Haise: Can we all stay together?
All of shun's personalities:sure!
Shun:I am still here!
Haise: Shun can you do the honors?
Shun: Sure!
Shun appears in front of Haise.
Haise: see you!
Shun:later!
Shun and Haise fist bump.
Haise: So this is goodbye I guess?
Shun: Don't worry I will come back Haise. I will always be here.
Shun disappears.
Haise:Thank you everyone!
Eda:so Haise your ready?
Haise:yes I am!
Eda and Haise run up stairs.
3 2 1 go shoot!
Shun and Haise:Go Angel maiden!
Eda:Go Phantom Hiatus!
Haise and Eda smile and laugh.
Chapter end!
Static sounds.
Shun .... Shun!
I am being attacked! The war is coming! Their coming for you and Haise. Their names are!
The video ends.
Dec. 19, 2020  6:16 PM
 
Part 5 chapter 13 Haise's new life! Preview!
Eda:Haise wake up you have work today.
Haise wakes up.
Haise:What day is it Babe?
Eda: Sunday.
Haise gets out of bed.
Haise:what's this?
Haise goes in front of a mirror.
Eda:Haise I can explain.
Haise:why am I wearing pink bra and panties?
Eda:Here it comes.
Haise laughs.
Haise:you got me good Eda.
Eda:I guess I did.
Later.
Aiga:where is Haise?
Preview end!
Dec. 20, 2020  7:05 AM
 
Part 6 chapter 1 the war begins!/Haise loses her mind!
In Haise's dream.
???:Remember me? Haise? Haise?
Haise:Get out of my head!
Evil Shun:Let me free come on I know you need me.
Haise:No!
Dead bodies flash between Haise's eyes.
Haise:Let me go!
Haise wakes up screaming.
Haise:that dream again.
Shun:What does the other shun want?
Haise:I don't know.
Eda:Haise are you ok?
Haise:Yes I am.
Eda checks Haise's body.
Eda:Haise your hyperventilating.
Haise jumps in shock.
Haise:How did you?
Eda pushs Haise on the bed.
Eda:I can easily calm you down.
Haise:No!
Haise wakes up.
Haise:what the hell is going on?
Maiden:I don't know maybe the other shun wants something.
Evil shun:The war is coming!
Haise:war between who?
Evil shun:between the underworld and human realm.
Haise falls backwards.
Eda:Haise are you ok? Haise?
Voices are running through Haise's head.
Eda:Haise?
Eda puts her hand on Haise's head.
Eda:it's gonna be alright Haise.
Eda puts Haise head on her lap.
Haise: .... E... D...A?
Eda:yes?
Haise:can you take me to Lane in the morning?
Eda: Sure.
Later.
Haise:Lane?
Lane:What do you want?
Haise:There after me.
Lane grabs Haise by the chest.
Lane:who?
Haise:The people of the underworld.
Lane:Nani?
Haise:They want your sister back.
Lane:I never had a sister.
Haise wakes up.
Evil shun:Free me and I will help you in the war.
Haise:I can't!
Haise starts shaking uncontrollably.
Eda:Haise what's wrong?
Haise:Get out of my head!
Haise screams on top of her lungs.
Later.
Alice:Haise wake up.
Haise wakes up.
Evil shun:Remember me?
Haise wakes up.
Haise:Why I am still in this hell of a loop of death.
Evil shun: Set me free!
Chapter end
Part 6 chapter 2 getting along with The black reaper!
Alyssa:Hey akira how is Haise doing?
Akira: She is doing alright.
Later.
Evil Shun: Haise .... Haise!
Haise:What do You want?
Evil Shun:You need me right? Without me you will cease to exist.
Haise:True but I don't trust you.
Evil shun:Come on I know you want me.
Haise:Fine I will free you.
Shun and evil shun fuse together.
Shun:I am back finally!
Later.
Eda:Haise are you ok?
Haise:Yes I am.
Haise smiles.
Later at a local tournament.
Haise:Go maiden!
Maiden repeatly hits the kids beyblade.
Kid:No!
Haise:Its over!
Shun:Maiden!
Maiden glows purple.
Kid:what!
Maiden burst the kids bey.
Haise and shun:better luck next time.
Maiden flys into Haise's hand.
Haise:I need to awaken my true power.
Eda:Haise there you are.
Haise: Oh Eda sorry I rushed out like that.
Eda:it's fine.
Later.
Haise:Hey boss!
???:you got the details?
Haise:yes I do. Meet me tommrow at headquarters.
???:see you then.
Later.
Shun:Haise can I use the body now?
Haise: Sure just let me use the bathroom.
Shun:to late!
Shun takes over.
Haise:what the hell!
Shun laughs.
Eda:Haise your home early.
Shun:Their was a mix up at work.
Eda:What was it?
Shun: it was a False alarm.
Later.
Haise grins.
Shun:what's so funny?
Haise:I can't believe we're doing this.
Shun:what pink ain't your color?
Haise:I told you I can't wear a pink bra and panties.
Shun:Fine your such a baby. No wonder Kisara hates you.
Haise:Hey boys.
Guards: Oh my god!
The guards have a nose bleed.
Haise:which luck guy is gonna go out with little old me?
Guard 1:Me!
Guard 2:No she likes me!
The second guard fights the other guard.
Shun:What the hell was that?
Haise:seduction.
Shun:where you learned that?
Haise:Lets say I got it from my wife.
Shun:Now what?
Haise:we have to fight our way in.
Shun:Give me a damn break!
Haise walks into the room.
Haise:Hey boys!
Guards: Oh my God! What are you doing here cutie?
Haise:Lets say to say hi to you guys.
The guard pass out from blood loss.
Haise:pervert!
Chapter end!
Dec. 21, 2020  5:13 AM
 
Bloopers 1!
Haise:Its not like I like you Idiot!
Kai edits:your so cute went your angry Haise.
Haise Slaps Kai edits.

Part 6 chapter 3 The black reaper awakens!
???:Hey Haise!
Haise:Hey!
Haise slams the files on the desk.
???:Nice!
Haise:I quit!
Haise walks away.
???:Wait why?
Haise:damn idiot!
A explosion destroys headquarters.
Haise:Arrivederci!
Haise laughs.
Haise:Let my killing spree begin!
Guard:Hold it right there!
The guard shoots Haise with a gun.
Haise:pathetic!
Haise dodges the bullets and kills the guard.
Later.
Haise:I am home.
Eda:Haise are you Ok?
Haise:Yes I am.
Eda:I got a call that your boss got killed in a accident.
Haise:Luck enough I quit just in time.
Later.
Haise:I did it Mom,Dad I began the war!
Maiden glows purple.
Eda:why is your bey glowing purple?
Haise:Its probably gonna evolve.
Eda laughs.
Eda: you remind me of my little sister Kissara.
Haise smiles.
Haise:I hope to see her in the future.
Later.
Shun:exactly as planned!
Haise:Now!
Maiden glows purple.
Haise:Awaken Devilish Maiden!
A mark appears on Haise's hand.
Shun:Its working!
Later.
Eda:Haise?
Haise:Yes?
Eda:The police are here.
Haise smiles.
Haise:Good to know.
Haise mumbles under her breath;Devilish Time.
*time stops for The police*
Eda:What the hell?
Haise:I am back Eda!
Eda:Good to have you back Black reaper!
Haise puts her hand on her left eye.
Haise:Now let's get this party started!
Haise does a crazy laugh.
Chapter end!
Dec. 21, 2020  5:18 AM
 
…those aren’t bloopers. Those are forced tiny segments that you wrote to get a cheap laugh out of people when it doesn’t even work
Dec. 21, 2020  5:30 AM
 
(Dec. 21, 2020  5:18 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: …those aren’t bloopers. Those are forced tiny segments that you wrote to get a cheap laugh out of people when it doesn’t even work
Bruh moment.
I was trying something new lol.

Haise/Shun has something unique about her.
Dec. 21, 2020  5:55 AM
 
(Dec. 21, 2020  5:30 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Dec. 21, 2020  5:18 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: …those aren’t bloopers. Those are forced tiny segments that you wrote to get a cheap laugh out of people when it doesn’t even work
Bruh moment.
I was trying something new lol.

Haise/Shun has something unique about her.
*cough cough*

(Oct. 12, 2020  3:21 AM)kai edits Wrote: Here are the bloopers of my new fanfic
Valt:me and valkryie won't lose
Shun:you and how? Oh **** I mess up my line start over.
Shun:I am the maiden of destruction
Akira:yo sis where are you
Shun:in a meeting mom I mean sister god dang it.
Drum:my name is drum
Shun:so your a drum
Shun bursts into tears and laugher
Shun:sorry sorry again from the top
Drum:where is the top
Shun dies of laughter
Shun:where is the top
Even if it was new, it wouldn’t change anything really. I suggest actually writing it with the story, but not making it the main selling point.
Dec. 21, 2020  2:09 PM
 
Part 6 chapter 4 Awaken Haise's will!
Police:Hold it right there!
Haise:You got me!
One of the police officers put out his gun.
Haise:Your gonna shoot me?
Haise laughs.
Police:Your under arrest for murder!
Haise:You should of confronted me sooner!
Haise laughs.
*time stops*
Eda:Welcome back Black reaper.
Haise:it's good to be back.
Haise breaks free of the police grip.
Eda:How you been?
Haise:I been trying to get rid of the legends.
Haise punchs both police officers.
Eda:Wait so you came up with the false name shun kurenai?
Haise:No exactly.
*time resumes*
Police officer:what the?
The gun goes off and shoots the officers leg.
Haise:I am so sorry let me help you.
Haise grabs the gun.
Police officer 2:it's a trap!
Haise shoots both officers.
Haise:Good grief!
Haise throws the gun on the floor.
Later.
???:Haise your first target is valt aoi.
Haise:Got it.
Valt:Hey Haise what are you doing here?
Haise:I want to battle you.
Haise pulls out a gun.
Valt:what are you doing?
Haise aims the gun at valt.
Haise: Sorry buddy I can't risk you dying in the war.
Haise shoots valt.
Haise:Target 1 down.
???:Good. Next target drum and aiga.
Haise:I got them in my sites.
Later.
Haise:Good grief!
Haise wipes the blood off her face.
Haise:Targets 2 and 3 are down.
???:Good your all clear.
Haise:I can't believe I am doing this but.
Later.
Free:Haise what are you doing.
Haise:I can explain.
Haise was only wearing a bra and panties.
Free:Tell me then.
Haise:Uh.
Haise shoots free.
Free:why?
Haise:I don't have time for this.
Haise laughs.
Haise:Target 4 is down.
???:got you.
Haise laughs.
Haise:Finally with the legends out of the way I can move into war without regret.
Haise pulls out her phone and calls Eda.
Eda:Hello?
Haise: Eda take the kids to the underworld. It's not safe here on earth.
Eda:Wait why.
Haise:We just went into war.
Gun shots go off.
Eda:Haise? Haise?
Haise:Be safe.
Haise hangs up.
Later.
???:You got the package secured?
Haise:Yes I do.
Gwynn:Lets move on.
Haise:Right.
Chapter end.
Dec. 21, 2020  3:05 PM
 
Wow Haise is one mean killing machine for real!
Dec. 21, 2020  4:07 PM
 
(Dec. 21, 2020  3:05 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Wow Haise is one mean killing machine for real!

Yeah rip everyone who get in her way
Dec. 21, 2020  4:08 PM
 
*Sad Legend Bladers Death Noises plays*
Dec. 21, 2020  4:17 PM
 
(Dec. 21, 2020  4:08 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: *Sad Legend Bladers Death Noises plays*
Haise became a villain?
Haise? Haise? Wake up Haise!
(Dec. 21, 2020  3:05 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Wow Haise is one mean killing machine for real!
Part 6 chapter 5 investigation!
Haise wipes the blood on her face.
Haise:Targets 1-16 are down.
Gwyn:Good work Haise take a break.
 Haise:Thank you!
Haise sits down.
Police:There she is get her!
Haise shoots all the officers while taking a drink of water.
Haise:Let a girl relax.
Later.
Gwyn:how you killed all those guards so fast?
Haise:I can stop time remember? Oh by the way your underwear and pants are down.
Gwyn:Hey!
Gwyn blushes.
Later.
Haise:Targets 17 and 18 are on the move.
Hyuga:I lost again?
Lane:I suggest using your limit break more often.
Hyuga:thank you!
Haise smiles.
Gwyn: Shoot them now!
Haise shoots both of them.
Gwyn: Pay attention!
Haise:sorry I am not use to be a bounty hunter.
Later at Gwyn's house.
Gwyn:Haise?
Haise:Yes?
Gwyn:Are you ok?
Haise:Yeah I am.
???:Kill him! Kill him!
Haise grins.
Gwyn:Haise you alright.
Shun:I am better than alright.
Both gwyn and shun draw their guns.
Later.
Haise:where am i?
Gwyn:Your in my lab.
Haise:For what?
Gwyn:You will see.
Later.
Alex:Haise are you there?
Haise:I am here.
Maiden glows red.
Alex:can you please teach me some stuff?
Haise:Like?
Alex:For math.
Haise:Babe.
Gwyn:Yes?
Haise:Alex needs help with math.
Gwyn:Let me see here.
Alex hands him the paper.
Gwyn:Your working on physics.
Alex:Yeah I am.
Gwyn:Let me teach you a trick to finding out mass,speed and calculating velocity.
Alex: Ok.
Gwyn: So you take this and do this then here you go.
Chapter end.
Dec. 22, 2020  5:26 AM
 
New character coming soon!
???:Haise let's do our best.
Oliver valhalla Drops in!
Oliver:Go Death Achilles!

Haise:You are really strong want to pair up?
Oliver and Haise can pair up in battle. Do you want to continue?
Yes!
Oliver:Lets do it!
Oliver:Go Achilles!
Haise: Devilish time!
*time stops*
Oliver: Death's Sword!
Haise:Go maiden! Devilish recollection!



Oliver valhalla coming soon!
Dec. 22, 2020  9:06 PM
 
Part 6 chapter 6 Awaken Death God!
Haise:Finally it's done!
Maiden glows red.
Gwyn:What's that?
Haise:A upgrade for maiden.
Later.
???:I guess she lives here?
There was a knock on the door.
Haise:Who is that?
Haise Opens the door.
???:Hey there Haise remember me?
Haise:Is that you Oliver?
Oliver:Yeah long time no see.
Later.
Gwyn:Your in Position Haise?
Haise:Yes I am.
Oliver draws his gun.
Gwyn:lui and sisco are coming.
Both Oliver and Haise shoots them.
Haise:we are all clear.
Gwyn:copy that.
Police:There she is get her.
Haise:back for more?
The Police try to shoot her but miss.
Haise:Missing something?
The police:What the?
Haise holds the police's arms in her hand.
Haise:What's wrong never fought a demon before?
Haise grins.
Gwyn:Haise don't do it!
Haise shoots all of the officers.
Haise:Huh? Oh **** I killed them.
Oliver:Haise your a bounty hunter and a killer.
Haise:What you have a problem with that?
Oliver laughs.
Oliver:No it makes you hotter.
Haise Smiles then fires a bullet at something.
Oliver:What was that?
???:My god there is blood.
Later.
Shun:Yo Haise.
Haise:What you want?
Shun:Nice aim.
Haise throws maiden up and down.
Alex:Haise-Kun there is a bully at school can you tell him to stop.
Haise:Where is he at?
Later.
Bully:Well well there is Alex with his mommy.
Haise:You got one thing wrong punk.
Haise grabs the bully by the neck.
Alex:What?
Haise grins.
Haise:Never mess with my family.
Bully:I'm sorry please don't hurt me.
Haise:You realize who I am right?
Bully:Yes. Stay away from me.
Haise:Battle me and I might not kill you.
Later.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Bully:Go bull!
Haise:Maiden!
A random bey joins in the battle.
Oliver:Move!
Achilles hits bull.
Haise:Lets go Oliver-san.
Oliver:Right.
(Pair up special!)
Maiden and Achilles hit each other.
Oliver:Its over!
Haise:Recollection Canon!
Achilles is launched towards bull.
Bully:No I won't let you.
Haise: Devilish time!
*time freezes*
Oliver:Go! Death's sword!
A huge explosion hits bull and the bully.
*time resumes*
Bully:What?
The bully is sent flying into a glass window.
Haise: Piece of trash!
Haise laughs.
Chapter end!
Dec. 24, 2020  1:08 AM
 
This fanfic won a award!
My day got better lol
Dec. 24, 2020  8:07 PM
 
Part 6 chapter 7 The return of a horrifying killer!
Haise:Your pathetic!
Haise points the gun at the bully.
Haise: See you in hell!
Haise shoots the bully.
Later.
Gwyn:Welcome home Haise.
Haise:What's this?
Gwyn:Haise it's our 15th anniversary.
Haise:Gwyn I am so sorry.
Haise goes up the stairs.
Gwyn:Haise are you ok?
Haise pulls out a locket with a picture of her family.
Haise:I can't believe what have I done.
Tears run down Haise's face.
Haise:This is all my fault!
Kisara:Cheer up Haise.
Kai:Yeah.
Shun:With out you we wouldn't have been here.
Haise:Your right.
Haise wipes her tears.
Haise:It's time to go war with the wbba!
Later.
Guard:Hold it right there.
Haise:Move!
Haise shoots her gun at the guard.
Haise:Gwyn I am in.
Gwyn:Alright go to the room on your left.
Haise:Got it.
Haise reloads her gun.
Guard and police:Get her.
Haise:You guys never learn. Maiden!
Haise eyes glow red.
Guard:what's this!
A image of maiden attacks the guards and the police.
Gwyn:You got the package?
Haise:Yes I do!
Haise:Gwyn their on my tail.
Gwyn:Try using the sword in your left side.
Haise pulls out the sword.
Haise:Here I come!
Haise slash the guards.
Later.
Gwyn:we got 5 pieces of the weapon we need 1 more.
Haise:Nice! Lets go get it tommrow.
Gwyn:Wait. Haise tommrow is yua's and Charlie's birthday.
Haise:Looks like we have to get it today. Where is it?
Gwyn:Looks like wbba old headquarters.
Haise:Here I go.
Haise jumps on her motorcycle.
Gwyn:Go!
Later.
Gwyn:You got it Haise?
Haise:Yes I do.
Later.
Gwyn:We got all the pieces.
Haise:Now what?
Gwyn:We free Shun.
Haise:Wait what? Can't we free kisara or Kai or even Lana.
Gwyn: Sorry but shun is our best choice.
Later.
Shun: So you want my help huh?
Haise:Thats why we free you in the first place.
Shun:Where is my bey?
Haise:look in your pocket.
Shun:Nice! According to the tablet of maiden bloodline their can't be 2 maidens on earth so lucky my bey is Nemesis.
Haise: Does this applied to the mark?
Shun:No it does not.
Haise:Will let's get going!
Chapter end!
Dec. 26, 2020  7:23 PM
 
Part 6 chapter 8 Awaken Destiny maiden!
Haise;Die!
Maiden hits training bey into the wall.
Oliver;Someone's anger.
Haise:Yes I am!
Oliver:Maybe talk to Gwyn or shun or me.
Haise:I have no time for that.
Maiden hits 100 beys at once.
Haise:I am done with training.
Maiden flys into Haise's hand.
Oliver:What the!
Later.
Lui:My my if it isn't Haise.
Haise:Battle me!
Lui:No your a waste of time.
Haise pulls out her gun.
Haise:Battle me!
Lui:I said no-.
Haise shoots lui.
Haise:You should have battled me.
Haise grabs longunis.
Later.
Gwyn:Haise what are you doing?
Haise pulls maiden and longunis on the table.
Haise:Upgrade maiden.
Gwyn:Your sure?
Haise:Yes I am sure.
Haise runs upstairs.
Gwyn:Alrighty then.
Haise pulls out a picture of a girl.
Haise: Emma I miss you.
18+ moment.
Later.
Gwyn:It's done Haise.
Haise falls down the stairs.
Haise:Yes!
Haise picks up maiden.
Haise:Awaken Destiny maiden!
A aura appears around Haise and maiden.
Later.
Alex:Go dragoon!
Dragoon is sent flying.
Gingka:Go Pegasus!
Pegasus jumps into the air.
Gingka: Pegasus star booster attack!
A bey cancels the attack.
Haise;Damn brat!
Maiden knocks Pegasus into a wall.
Gingka:No!
Haise:Huh? You want more?
Later.
Maiden hits Pegasus into a wall.
Haise:Had enough?
Later.
Haise: Emma I missed you so much. I can't believe we got split apart during the last war. I can't stop thinking about you. I hope we can get back together.
Gwyn:What are you doing?
Haise jumps and drops the picture.
Gwyn:Haise is that?
Haise grabs the picture.
Haise:Yes. That's my wife.
Gwyn:I thought Eda was your wife.
Haise:We got divorced.
Gwyn:Wait what!
Haise:I lost Emma during the war a few years ago. She was kidnapped by the wbba.
Gwyn:That's why your trying to destroy it.
Haise:Yeah. It looks like my secret is out.
Gwyn;Don't worry we will find her.
Haise:Thank you.
Haise coughs.
Gwyn:What?
Haise:Can i finish what I was doing?
Gwyn;Oh sorry.
Gwyn locks the door and leaves.
Later.
Haise wakes up.
Haise:Well time for work.
???:Can we stay in bed for a little longer Haise-Senpai?
Haise turns her head.
Haise:Your!
Emma:I am back Haise.
Haise has a nose bleed and blacks out.
Emma:Um Haise are you ok?
Later.
Haise wakes up.
Emma:Thank God your awake.
Haise: Emma?
Emma:Yes?
Haise:How did you find me?
Emma:Gwyn found me.
Haise crys.
Haise:I missed you so much.
Emma:Haise.
Emma wipes Haise's tears.
Emma:It's ok Haise.
Chapter end!
Dec. 27, 2020  4:18 PM
 
Part 6 chapter 9 Emma vs Alex!
Haise:I can't believe your really here Emma.
Emma:Maybe I should get dressed.
Emma gets out of bed.
Haise: Emma you look beautiful.
Emma:Really?
Haise:Yes!
Emma puts clothes on.
Emma:Haise are you ok?
Haise was passed out with a nose bleed.
Emma:What a surprise.
Later.
Alex:Haise-Senpai?
Emma:Um she is asleep.
Alex: Oh ok.
Emma:Your Alex?
Alex:Yes I am.
Later.
Alex:Go dragoon!
Emma:Go Apocalypse!
Apocalypse knocks dragoon into a wall.
Alex:Nani!
Emma:Lets finish this! Darkness slash!
Apocalypse bursts dragoon.
Emma:That was fun.
Alex:Yeah it was.
Haise: Emma?
Emma:Yes babe?
Haise kisses Emma on the lips.
Alex:whoa!
Emma:Haise.
Emma pulls Haise close to her.
Haise:Meet me in my room in a few minutes.
Alex screams.
Alex:I am only 14.
Haise:Then don't go into my room.
Emma and Haise Go upstairs.
Later after Emma and Haise's 18+ moment.
Gwyn:Haise are you up?
Haise:Yeah why?
Gwyn:The police are coming to your house.
Haise:Right.
Later.
Haise: Emma?
Emma:Yes?
Haise:I was thinking can we get married?
Emma:Um sure.
Later.
Alex:Haise can I come in?
Haise:Yeah come in.
Emma:Haise you dummy I am still naked.
Haise:Before you come in let Emma and I put clothes on.
Alex: Oh ok.
Both Haise and Emma get dressed.
Haise:Come in.
Alex walks into the room.
Alex: So now what?
Haise: Emma and I are getting married and we want you to be best man.
Alex:Really?
Emma:Yeah Alex!
Police:This the police open up.
Haise:Let me get rid of this clown.
Haise reaches for her gun.
Haise: Emma can you pass me that gun on the floor?
Emma: Sure.
Emma gives Haise the gun.
Haise:Be right back.
Later.
*Gun shots*
Emma: Damn it Haise.
Haise:I am back.
Emma:Haise you ok.
Haise:Yes I am.
Emma kisses Haise on the lips.
Alex:Um I am gonna get going.
Haise:Lock the room door when you leave.
Alex locks the door and leaves.
Emma:Haise you are hot.
Haise:What you mean.
Emma:You are burning up.
Haise: It's fine.
Chapter end!
Dec. 28, 2020  6:40 PM
 
Part 6 chapter 10 End of the war!/the finale!
Emma:Haise?
Haise:Yes?
Emma:Can you please bring back shun?
Haise:I don't know she seems a bit mad at me.
Later.
*gun shots*
???:This too easy.
The mysterious figure licks the blood off her hand.
Haise:You!
???:Haise!
Haise:Calm down am I here to ask for your help.
???:What's in it for me?
Haise:You can stay at place and we can talk about body sharing.
???:I am in.
Haise:Glad to have you back Shun.
Later.
Emma:Where is Shun?
Haise: She is right here.
Shun:Nice to meet you.
Shun blows a piece of her hair to the side.
Emma:Haise she is so cute.
Shun:Huh?
Haise: Shun let's get to work.
Later.
Emma:Hey boss it's me again we are in.
Bruce: Ok got it.
Haise: Emma you coming?
Emma:I have to go. I am coming.
Later.
Shun:Maiden?
Haise:What's that?
Shun:Give me maiden!
Haise hands maiden to shun.
Haise:Happy.
Shun puts nemesis in Haise's hand.
Shun:You take nemesis. I might go on a rampage with all that power.
Later.
Haise:Gwyn you in there?
Gwyn: Don't come in I am doing math.
Haise opens the door.
Haise:Uh.
Gwyn drops a picture of Haise on the floor.
Haise:What's this?
Haise picks up the picture.
Haise:Were you pleasing yourself with a picture of me?
Gwyn:it's not what it looks like.
Haise:You pervert!
Haise smacks Gwyn.
Later.
Shun:What happen between you and Gwyn.
Haise:I don't want to talk about it.
Alice walks into the room.
Alice:My my you grew little sis.
Shun:Alice nice to see you.
Haise:Welcome home Alice.
Alice:Haise,Shun.
Alice starts crying.
Haise:I am glad to have you back.
Haise disappears back into Shun's mind.
Shun:I am glad the war is over.
Alice wipes her tears.
Alice:Where is Haise.
Shun: She is back where she belongs.
Shun and Alice hugs.
A few years later.
Shun:Mom,Dad we did it. We won. Now I can finally live my dream. Thank you everyone. Without your support I would have died in the war.
Story end!
Thanks for reading.
*glitches*
Heavy breathing.
???:I am back Shun,Haise prepare to die to me once more!
???:Go Hiatus!
Preview end.
(Its not Eda by the way.)
Dec. 29, 2020  6:46 PM
 
i will post maybe a few end credit scenes.
Anyways beyblade burst redo is not canon to apocalypse since apocalypse starts off the story.
Dec. 29, 2020  7:53 PM
 
So it's all over. It's started off meh and evolved into a good fanfic, I'm gonna miss this thing. (Yes I know you're doing a sequel series)
Dec. 29, 2020  8:04 PM
 
(Dec. 29, 2020  7:53 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: So it's all over. It's started off meh and evolved into a good fanfic, I'm gonna miss this thing. (Yes I know you're doing a sequel series)
I maybe have something planed for next year for apocalypse
Dec. 30, 2020  7:59 PM
 
Bad ending 1(Bloody ending).
Haise: Don't you need me shun?
Shun:No!
Shun stabs Haise.
Haise:I am glad we stayed together for all those years.
Tears run down Haise's cheek.
Shun:Well I am not.
Haise: See you later Shun kurenai-.
Haise dies.
Shun:Finally dead.
Suddenly shun stabs herself.
Shun:What the hell!
Shun dies.
(New chapters coming soon!)
Dec. 31, 2020  9:13 AM
 
Btw Beyblade burst alicization is not canon!
Part 7 chapter 1 True friend!
Emma:Haise wake up!
Haise walks up.
Haise:Its Sunday I have no work today.
Emma: Still I want to have child.
Haise:Later Emma I am not in the mood.
Emma:Fine party pooper.
Later at Alice's house.
Alice:You see that's how I met your father.
Danielle:And why we talking about this?
Alice:Your 18 grow up and have fun.
Delta:Alice let me handle this.
Alice: Sure go ahead.
Delta:GET A DAMN LIFE YOU HEAR ME! YOU HAVE BEEN LIVING OFF US!
Danielle:Uh ok dad.
Later.
Yua:Hey Danielle.
Danielle:What you want?
Yua:Maybe a battle well be nice.
Haise:Mind if I join you?
Later.
Haise:Go Maiden! Devilish Burn!
A random bey cancels Maidens attack.
Shun:What did I told you about leaving me .
Haise:idiot it's Sunday it's my day off your the maid.
Shun: Oh so that's why my Body was weird.
Haise:Want to battle like to good old times.
Shun: Sure!
3 2 1 go shoot!
Shun:Go Angel Helios!
Haise:Go maiden!
Haise daydreams.
Oliver:Go Achilles!
Eda:Go hiatus!
Alice:Go Pegasus!
Delta:Go Diabolos.
Shun:Got you!
Helios knocks maiden into the air. Haise stops dreaming.
Haise: Damn it!
Haise grins as her flare increases.
Shun:Go Helios! Angel's Breaker!
Haise grins.
Haise:Maiden!
Haise eyes turn red.
Shun:What!
Haise: Devilish barrier!
Maiden barrier chassis opens up.
Shun:What in the hell!
Helios hits maiden.
Haise: Devilish disaster!
A huge explosion hits Helios and Helios bursts.
Chapter end!
Dec. 31, 2020  3:37 PM
 
Story ends: okay cool it’s done
Two days later: it keeps going

Okay, so you changed when the end would happen again, and then just completely removed a fanfic from your story universe canon? It’s too inconsistent
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