Hmmm..... I sense Free is the babysitter lol
[Fan Fiction] Beyblade burst apocalypse(15+) (part 7 ongoing)
Free is technically not the father of yua.
Lane is the father.
Lane is the father.
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Hey dont forget Gwyn lol
Ok guys if anyone wants to do a crossover fanfic pm me or email me!
Due to school I won't respond to pm as quick so here is my email address!
vegitoblueedits@gmail.com
Due to school I won't respond to pm as quick so here is my email address!
vegitoblueedits@gmail.com
Part 3 chapter 17 Eda vs Lane/Lane's flare!
Shun:damn it!
Blood runs down shun's arm.
Free:shun you ok?
Shun:yeah I am fine.
Later.
Lane:get out of my way!
Hyperion and Helios are send flying.
Hikaru:Helios no!
Hyuga:go Hyperion!
Lane:pathetic! Lucifer! Flare disaster!
Both Hyperion and Helios break in half.
Lane:my flare is increasing!
Lane laughs as a aura forms around him.
Eda:lane!
Lane:oh!
Eda:battle me.
Later.
Maiden starts to glow red.
Shun:nani!
Lane:looking for someone?
Free:shun get behind me I will protect you.
Shun:Lane.
Shun smiles.
Lane:look what I brought.
Lane pulls out a picture of hiatus broken.
Shun:no way!
Lane:my flare increases so much when I think of you shun. Why don't you come with shun I can tell your not happy.
Shun:um.
Free:shun its a trick.
Shun:Lane i-i want to go with you.
Free:huh.
Lane:come on shun.
Shun:free I think we are not a perfect fit for each other I am breaking up with you.
Free:shun.
Tears run down free's face.
Yua:who I am going with.
Shun:you can stay with me and your dad.
Yua:who's my real dad?
Lane:I am.
Lane laughs.
Later.
Eda:hiatus we need to get stronger!
Hiatus:how?
Eda:let's evolve!
One year later after the divorce of shun and free.
Shun:yua wake up time for school.
Yua:I am up.
Lane:yua after school I want to show you something.
Yua:ok daddy.
Later after yua is dropped off from school.
Shun:well we got 6-8 hours of yua not being home what you want to do?
Lane:I don't know?
Shun:oh my god.
Lane:what happened?
Shun:the baby just kicked.
Lane:we are gonna have another child!
Chapter end.
Shun:damn it!
Blood runs down shun's arm.
Free:shun you ok?
Shun:yeah I am fine.
Later.
Lane:get out of my way!
Hyperion and Helios are send flying.
Hikaru:Helios no!
Hyuga:go Hyperion!
Lane:pathetic! Lucifer! Flare disaster!
Both Hyperion and Helios break in half.
Lane:my flare is increasing!
Lane laughs as a aura forms around him.
Eda:lane!
Lane:oh!
Eda:battle me.
Later.
Maiden starts to glow red.
Shun:nani!
Lane:looking for someone?
Free:shun get behind me I will protect you.
Shun:Lane.
Shun smiles.
Lane:look what I brought.
Lane pulls out a picture of hiatus broken.
Shun:no way!
Lane:my flare increases so much when I think of you shun. Why don't you come with shun I can tell your not happy.
Shun:um.
Free:shun its a trick.
Shun:Lane i-i want to go with you.
Free:huh.
Lane:come on shun.
Shun:free I think we are not a perfect fit for each other I am breaking up with you.
Free:shun.
Tears run down free's face.
Yua:who I am going with.
Shun:you can stay with me and your dad.
Yua:who's my real dad?
Lane:I am.
Lane laughs.
Later.
Eda:hiatus we need to get stronger!
Hiatus:how?
Eda:let's evolve!
One year later after the divorce of shun and free.
Shun:yua wake up time for school.
Yua:I am up.
Lane:yua after school I want to show you something.
Yua:ok daddy.
Later after yua is dropped off from school.
Shun:well we got 6-8 hours of yua not being home what you want to do?
Lane:I don't know?
Shun:oh my god.
Lane:what happened?
Shun:the baby just kicked.
Lane:we are gonna have another child!
Chapter end.
Part 4 chapter 1 the new beginning!
Yua:mom I am going out with aiga be back in a few.
Shun:ok.
Later.
Aiga:yua you bursted Achilles.
Yua:I did?
Shun walks into the room.
Shun:looks like the maiden bloodline strongly flows with in you.
Yua:maiden bloodline?
Shun:aiga and I will show you how strong the maiden bloodline is.
Aiga:right shun!
Shun:here I go!
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shun:collision fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Later.
Aiga breaths heavily.
Aiga:you still got it.
Kaiser:do you think I stopped training?
Aiga:yes because your so busy with 2 children and your husband.
Kaiser smiles.
Kaiser:aiga.
Later.
Alice:dang it I failed entry exam.
Akira:same what did you get?
Alice:68%
Akira:I got a 68 also.
Alice looks at akira test.
Alice:you have it backwards you got a 98. Nani!
At shun's house.
Shun:I am home.
???:nice to drop by shun Lisa kurenai!
Shun:what did you do to lane?
Eda:nothing just consume his flare and also free's dead.
Shun:no way of all the days he was at my side.
Tears run shun's face.
Eda:your next then yua and your other child.
In shun's mind.
Erica:shun are you ok?
Kai:she is sad.
Sarah:free is alive I know it.
Lana:use all your angry into power.
Kisara:shun I need you to avoid-.
Chapter end
Yua:mom I am going out with aiga be back in a few.
Shun:ok.
Later.
Aiga:yua you bursted Achilles.
Yua:I did?
Shun walks into the room.
Shun:looks like the maiden bloodline strongly flows with in you.
Yua:maiden bloodline?
Shun:aiga and I will show you how strong the maiden bloodline is.
Aiga:right shun!
Shun:here I go!
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shun:collision fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Later.
Aiga breaths heavily.
Aiga:you still got it.
Kaiser:do you think I stopped training?
Aiga:yes because your so busy with 2 children and your husband.
Kaiser smiles.
Kaiser:aiga.
Later.
Alice:dang it I failed entry exam.
Akira:same what did you get?
Alice:68%
Akira:I got a 68 also.
Alice looks at akira test.
Alice:you have it backwards you got a 98. Nani!
At shun's house.
Shun:I am home.
???:nice to drop by shun Lisa kurenai!
Shun:what did you do to lane?
Eda:nothing just consume his flare and also free's dead.
Shun:no way of all the days he was at my side.
Tears run shun's face.
Eda:your next then yua and your other child.
In shun's mind.
Erica:shun are you ok?
Kai:she is sad.
Sarah:free is alive I know it.
Lana:use all your angry into power.
Kisara:shun I need you to avoid-.
Chapter end
(Nov. 28, 2020 7:09 AM)kai edits Wrote: Part 4 the new beginning!
Yua:mom I am going out with aiga be back in a few.
Shun:ok.
Later.
Aiga:yua you bursted Achilles.
Yua:I did?
Shun walks into the room.
Shun:looks like the maiden bloodline strongly flows with in you.
Yua:maiden bloodline?
Shun:aiga and I will show you how strong the maiden bloodline is.
Aiga:right shun!
Shun:here I go!
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shun:collision fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Later.
Aiga breaths heavily.
Aiga:you still got it.
Kaiser:do you think I stopped training?
Aiga:yes because your so busy with 2 children and your husband.
Kaiser smiles.
Kaiser:aiga.
Later.
Alice:dang it I failed entry exam.
Akira:same what did you get?
Alice:68%
Akira:I got a 68 also.
Alice looks at akira test.
Alice:you have it backwards you got a 98. Nani!
At shun's house.
Shun:I am home.
???:nice to drop by shun Lisa kurenai!
Shun:what did you do to lane?
Eda:nothing just consume his flare and also free's dead.
Shun:no way of all the days he was at my side.
Tears run shun's face.
Eda:your next then yua and your other child.
In shun's mind.
Erica:shun are you ok?
Kai:she is sad.
Sarah:free is alive I know it.
Lana:use all your angry into power.
Kisara:shun I need you to avoid-.
Chapter end
Aiga: loses
Me: I summon the dark lord Amane to erase all from exsistance
(Nov. 28, 2020 7:12 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:Aiga is not a legend in this fanfic lol but amane is(Nov. 28, 2020 7:09 AM)kai edits Wrote: Part 4 the new beginning!
Yua:mom I am going out with aiga be back in a few.
Shun:ok.
Later.
Aiga:yua you bursted Achilles.
Yua:I did?
Shun walks into the room.
Shun:looks like the maiden bloodline strongly flows with in you.
Yua:maiden bloodline?
Shun:aiga and I will show you how strong the maiden bloodline is.
Aiga:right shun!
Shun:here I go!
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shun:collision fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Later.
Aiga breaths heavily.
Aiga:you still got it.
Kaiser:do you think I stopped training?
Aiga:yes because your so busy with 2 children and your husband.
Kaiser smiles.
Kaiser:aiga.
Later.
Alice:dang it I failed entry exam.
Akira:same what did you get?
Alice:68%
Akira:I got a 68 also.
Alice looks at akira test.
Alice:you have it backwards you got a 98. Nani!
At shun's house.
Shun:I am home.
???:nice to drop by shun Lisa kurenai!
Shun:what did you do to lane?
Eda:nothing just consume his flare and also free's dead.
Shun:no way of all the days he was at my side.
Tears run shun's face.
Eda:your next then yua and your other child.
In shun's mind.
Erica:shun are you ok?
Kai:she is sad.
Sarah:free is alive I know it.
Lana:use all your angry into power.
Kisara:shun I need you to avoid-.
Chapter end
Aiga: loses
Me: I summon the dark lord Amane to erase all from exsistance
Part 4 chapter 2 shun's anger awakens!
During training with shu.
Shu:Go spriggan!
Maiden dodges spriggan.
Shun:Go maiden!
Maiden knocks spriggan into the air.
Shu:you feel for it! Crimson cross attack!
Shun grins.
Shun:are you sure about that.
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shu:go spriggan!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright! Maidens barrier!
Maiden blocks the attack.
Shu:break through spriggan!
Kaiser grins.
Kaiser:maiden!
Maidens barrier is broken.
Shu:alright spriggan knock maiden out!
A huge explosion comes from maiden.
Shu:nani!
Kaiser:maidens 3rd bomb bites za bursto!
Spriggan hits the wall outside the stadium.
Shu:that was some technique you learned.
Later.
Eda:go doomsday hiatus!
Alyssa breaths heavily.
Alyssa:you never really learn do you.
quetzalcoatl is sent flying into the air.
Alyssa:I am not gonna lose to you. quetzalcoatl!
Hiatus is sented flying into the stadium wall.
Eda:pathetic!
Hiatus hits quetzalcoatl then quetzalcoatl layer cracks.
Alyssa:nani!
Eda:die!
Hiatus hits quetzalcoatl then quetzalcoatl breaks in half.
Later.
Shun picks up a picture of free and shun together.
Shun:I let you down free.
Tears run down shun's face.
???:nonsense shun.
Shun:huh?
Free:I am still here shun.
Shun:free!
Free disappears and something was left behind.
Later at gwynn's house.
Gwynn:how was your hunting trip go?
???:good I consumed 100's beys.
Gwynn:good. Looks like hiatus wants to evolve again.
Eda:let's do it!
Chapter end
Teaser for the next chapter!
Solve these questions and the answers lay ahead.
Who is the traitor?
During training with shu.
Shu:Go spriggan!
Maiden dodges spriggan.
Shun:Go maiden!
Maiden knocks spriggan into the air.
Shu:you feel for it! Crimson cross attack!
Shun grins.
Shun:are you sure about that.
Shun's earrings glow blue.
Shu:go spriggan!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kaiser:alright! Maidens barrier!
Maiden blocks the attack.
Shu:break through spriggan!
Kaiser grins.
Kaiser:maiden!
Maidens barrier is broken.
Shu:alright spriggan knock maiden out!
A huge explosion comes from maiden.
Shu:nani!
Kaiser:maidens 3rd bomb bites za bursto!
Spriggan hits the wall outside the stadium.
Shu:that was some technique you learned.
Later.
Eda:go doomsday hiatus!
Alyssa breaths heavily.
Alyssa:you never really learn do you.
quetzalcoatl is sent flying into the air.
Alyssa:I am not gonna lose to you. quetzalcoatl!
Hiatus is sented flying into the stadium wall.
Eda:pathetic!
Hiatus hits quetzalcoatl then quetzalcoatl layer cracks.
Alyssa:nani!
Eda:die!
Hiatus hits quetzalcoatl then quetzalcoatl breaks in half.
Later.
Shun picks up a picture of free and shun together.
Shun:I let you down free.
Tears run down shun's face.
???:nonsense shun.
Shun:huh?
Free:I am still here shun.
Shun:free!
Free disappears and something was left behind.
Later at gwynn's house.
Gwynn:how was your hunting trip go?
???:good I consumed 100's beys.
Gwynn:good. Looks like hiatus wants to evolve again.
Eda:let's do it!
Chapter end
Teaser for the next chapter!
Solve these questions and the answers lay ahead.
Who is the traitor?
What is your favorite ships from beyblade burst apocalypse?
Part 4 chapter 3 awaken the new hiatus!
A huge explosion happens as genesis hits hiatus.
Gwynn:what power!
Eda:Go hiatus! Big bang recollection!
Later.
Alyssa:shun its a emergency!
Alyssa pulls out quetzalcoatl.
Shun:how is that possible.
Shun clenchs her fist tightly.
Shun:eda you monster!
Later at lanes hospital room.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:yes my love.
Lane punchs shun.
Lane:shun will never say my love.
Eda:subarashii!
Eda starts clapping.
Later.
Eda:shun battle me.
Shun:finally came to your sense eh?
Shun gets up and walks towards eda menacingly.
~menacing~
Eda:I am gonna kill you like I did to free.
Shun laughs.
In shun's head.
Kisara:are you gonna use the part lane gave you or free's part.
Shun:I will use both!
In the real world.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Eda:go big bang hiatus!
Shun:Maiden!
A huge explosion happens when both beys hit each other.
Eda:subarashii!
Shun laughs.
Shun:if that's hiatus's new power than its a joke. Die!
Maiden hits hiatus into the air.
Eda:nani!
Shun:this is the power of my bond with maiden and lane.
Lane:let's go shun!
Shun:right!
Shun earrings glow blue.
Eda:die damn human!
Shun and Lane:Go maiden! Flare fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Sara:Guess who's back!
Eda:nani!
Narrator:as shun and eda clash a new fusion is born! Will this mysterious fusion beat eda. Find out next time on beyblade burst apocalypse!
Chapter end
Preview
Eda coughs up blood.
Eda:damn you! I am a god you can't beat me! I am the great Eda! I-
Maiden sends hiatus flying and Eda is punched.
Sara:sorry but you were wide open.
Eda:damn human!
Preview end.
A huge explosion happens as genesis hits hiatus.
Gwynn:what power!
Eda:Go hiatus! Big bang recollection!
Later.
Alyssa:shun its a emergency!
Alyssa pulls out quetzalcoatl.
Shun:how is that possible.
Shun clenchs her fist tightly.
Shun:eda you monster!
Later at lanes hospital room.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:yes my love.
Lane punchs shun.
Lane:shun will never say my love.
Eda:subarashii!
Eda starts clapping.
Later.
Eda:shun battle me.
Shun:finally came to your sense eh?
Shun gets up and walks towards eda menacingly.
~menacing~
Eda:I am gonna kill you like I did to free.
Shun laughs.
In shun's head.
Kisara:are you gonna use the part lane gave you or free's part.
Shun:I will use both!
In the real world.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Eda:go big bang hiatus!
Shun:Maiden!
A huge explosion happens when both beys hit each other.
Eda:subarashii!
Shun laughs.
Shun:if that's hiatus's new power than its a joke. Die!
Maiden hits hiatus into the air.
Eda:nani!
Shun:this is the power of my bond with maiden and lane.
Lane:let's go shun!
Shun:right!
Shun earrings glow blue.
Eda:die damn human!
Shun and Lane:Go maiden! Flare fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Sara:Guess who's back!
Eda:nani!
Narrator:as shun and eda clash a new fusion is born! Will this mysterious fusion beat eda. Find out next time on beyblade burst apocalypse!
Chapter end
Preview
Eda coughs up blood.
Eda:damn you! I am a god you can't beat me! I am the great Eda! I-
Maiden sends hiatus flying and Eda is punched.
Sara:sorry but you were wide open.
Eda:damn human!
Preview end.
(Nov. 30, 2020 11:32 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 4 chapter 3 awaken the new hiatus!
A huge explosion happens as genesis hits hiatus.
Gwynn:what power!
Eda:Go hiatus! Big bang recollection!
Later.
Alyssa:shun its a emergency!
Alyssa pulls out quetzalcoatl.
Shun:how is that possible.
Shun clenchs her fist tightly.
Shun:eda you monster!
Later at lanes hospital room.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:yes my love.
Lane punchs shun.
Lane:shun will never say my love.
Eda:subarashii!
Eda starts clapping.
Later.
Eda:shun battle me.
Shun:finally came to your sense eh?
Shun gets up and walks towards eda menacingly.
~menacing~
Eda:I am gonna kill you like I did to free.
Shun laughs.
In shun's head.
Kisara:are you gonna use the part lane gave you or free's part.
Shun:I will use both!
In the real world.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Eda:go big bang hiatus!
Shun:Maiden!
A huge explosion happens when both beys hit each other.
Eda:subarashii!
Shun laughs.
Shun:if that's hiatus's new power than its a joke. Die!
Maiden hits hiatus into the air.
Eda:nani!
Shun:this is the power of my bond with maiden and lane.
Lane:let's go shun!
Shun:right!
Shun earrings glow blue.
Eda:die damn human!
Shun and Lane:Go maiden! Flare fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Sara:Guess who's back!
Eda:nani!
Narrator:as shun and eda clash a new fusion is born! Will this mysterious fusion beat eda. Find out next time on beyblade burst apocalypse!
Chapter end
Preview
Eda coughs up blood.
Eda:damn you! I am a god you can't beat me! I am the great Eda! I-
Maiden sends hiatus flying and Eda is punched.
Sara:sorry but you were wide open.
Eda:damn human!
Preview end.
nice chapter
(Nov. 30, 2020 11:35 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:(Nov. 30, 2020 11:32 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 4 chapter 3 awaken the new hiatus!
A huge explosion happens as genesis hits hiatus.
Gwynn:what power!
Eda:Go hiatus! Big bang recollection!
Later.
Alyssa:shun its a emergency!
Alyssa pulls out quetzalcoatl.
Shun:how is that possible.
Shun clenchs her fist tightly.
Shun:eda you monster!
Later at lanes hospital room.
Lane:shun are you there?
Shun:yes my love.
Lane punchs shun.
Lane:shun will never say my love.
Eda:subarashii!
Eda starts clapping.
Later.
Eda:shun battle me.
Shun:finally came to your sense eh?
Shun gets up and walks towards eda menacingly.
~menacing~
Eda:I am gonna kill you like I did to free.
Shun laughs.
In shun's head.
Kisara:are you gonna use the part lane gave you or free's part.
Shun:I will use both!
In the real world.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Eda:go big bang hiatus!
Shun:Maiden!
A huge explosion happens when both beys hit each other.
Eda:subarashii!
Shun laughs.
Shun:if that's hiatus's new power than its a joke. Die!
Maiden hits hiatus into the air.
Eda:nani!
Shun:this is the power of my bond with maiden and lane.
Lane:let's go shun!
Shun:right!
Shun earrings glow blue.
Eda:die damn human!
Shun and Lane:Go maiden! Flare fusion!
A bright light comes from shun.
Sara:Guess who's back!
Eda:nani!
Narrator:as shun and eda clash a new fusion is born! Will this mysterious fusion beat eda. Find out next time on beyblade burst apocalypse!
Chapter end
Preview
Eda coughs up blood.
Eda:damn you! I am a god you can't beat me! I am the great Eda! I-
Maiden sends hiatus flying and Eda is punched.
Sara:sorry but you were wide open.
Eda:damn human!
Preview end.
nice chapter
Many dbz and JoJo references lol
Yo Free since Shun left you got date Kris lol
Part 4 chapter 4 Eda vs Sara part 1
Eda:die maiden!
Sara:Go maiden!
Maiden dodges the attack.
Eda:go Hiatus! Big bang overburst!
Sara:maidens recollection barrier!
A huge explosion of air bursts outwards.
Eda:it's over!
Sara:are you sure about that.
Hiatus is sent flying.
Eda:nani!
Sara:maiden has already touched hiatus.
*click*
A huge explosion comes from hiatus.
Eda:what's going on?
Eda is sent flying back the coughed up blood.
Sara:hmm my bomb did not kill you but I know what move can.
Eda:damn you! I am a god you can't beat me! I am the great Eda! I-
Maiden sends hiatus flying and Eda is punched.
Sara:sorry but you were wide open.
Eda:damn human!
Sara:it is over! Maidens recollection!
A huge explosion hits hiatus.
Eda:nani!
Eda is sent flying into a wall and hiatus was in the wall next to eda.
Sara:is that all you got?
Chapter end
Eda:die maiden!
Sara:Go maiden!
Maiden dodges the attack.
Eda:go Hiatus! Big bang overburst!
Sara:maidens recollection barrier!
A huge explosion of air bursts outwards.
Eda:it's over!
Sara:are you sure about that.
Hiatus is sent flying.
Eda:nani!
Sara:maiden has already touched hiatus.
*click*
A huge explosion comes from hiatus.
Eda:what's going on?
Eda is sent flying back the coughed up blood.
Sara:hmm my bomb did not kill you but I know what move can.
Eda:damn you! I am a god you can't beat me! I am the great Eda! I-
Maiden sends hiatus flying and Eda is punched.
Sara:sorry but you were wide open.
Eda:damn human!
Sara:it is over! Maidens recollection!
A huge explosion hits hiatus.
Eda:nani!
Eda is sent flying into a wall and hiatus was in the wall next to eda.
Sara:is that all you got?
Chapter end
Well part 4 is the final part. And chapter 4 is the ending of beyblade burst apocalypse.