My longest fanfic ever(besides my um yugioh fanfic) sadly must be put at its end because her creator is retiring her love for beyblade. Sorry everyone.
I am trans and bisexual
I am trans and bisexual
(Apr. 09, 2021 3:16 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: I wanted to make a statement. I am now helping with the writing of this story and am going to try and deliver on these things. I want to get rid of this script format and turn it into a bookish format, next I want to focus more on the Beyblade aspect and much less on the romance aspect (which to be honest is very forced and weird), and finally I want to make characters much more relatable and more 3 dimensional. That’s right I’m going to try and save this fan fic (really hope I can do it).
(Apr. 09, 2021 3:21 AM)kai edits Wrote: Romance is a main part of the story lol. It suppose to be a romance fanfic
(Apr. 09, 2021 3:25 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:You know this was originally a sao fanfic? To be honest I would love to fix up my fanfic but I feel that someone better should write it.(Apr. 09, 2021 3:21 AM)kai edits Wrote: Romance is a main part of the story lol. It suppose to be a romance fanfic
You see that’s where you’re wrong and that’s why people don’t like it. When people come here to read a fan fiction they expect to see some good bey battles not some story that has heavy romantic elements (in other words no one wants to read about a bunch of teenagers having their own individual harem). No offense or anything kai edits, but even the writing is bland (I’ve read he**** better)
(Apr. 09, 2021 4:55 AM)kai edits Wrote:(Apr. 09, 2021 3:25 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: You see that’s where you’re wrong and that’s why people don’t like it. When people come here to read a fan fiction they expect to see some good bey battles not some story that has heavy romantic elements (in other words no one wants to read about a bunch of teenagers having their own individual harem). No offense or anything kai edits, but even the writing is bland (I’ve read he**** better)You know this was originally a sao fanfic? To be honest I would love to fix up my fanfic but I feel that someone better should write it.
I get to do voice acting when it comes to that road lol. I want to keep maiden and Emilia just the way they are but you can change her a bit. Maiden needs a upgrade so I am fine when you want to upgrade it.
Btw we can just start all over and start a new timeline.
(Apr. 09, 2021 5:02 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:No. I am gonna post it on my yt channel to promote my fanfic(Apr. 09, 2021 4:55 AM)kai edits Wrote: You know this was originally a sao fanfic? To be honest I would love to fix up my fanfic but I feel that someone better should write it.
I get to do voice acting when it comes to that road lol. I want to keep maiden and Emilia just the way they are but you can change her a bit. Maiden needs a upgrade so I am fine when you want to upgrade it.
Btw we can just start all over and start a new timeline.
Voice acting? When it comes to that? Please don’t tell me you think this fanfic will blow up and you’ll be getting people trying to get this on TV
(Apr. 09, 2021 5:05 AM)kai edits Wrote:(Apr. 09, 2021 5:02 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Voice acting? When it comes to that? Please don’t tell me you think this fanfic will blow up and you’ll be getting people trying to get this on TVNo. I am gonna post it on my yt channel to promote my fanfic
(Jun. 19, 2021 2:25 PM)Longinox Wrote:(Jun. 05, 2021 7:50 AM)kai edits Wrote: Working on the new chapter!
If you're err... working on another fic and say one is cancelled before posting another chapter on said 'cancelled' series just say the 'cancelled' series is on hiatus.