[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade burst all stars

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Naru Akabane
Beyblade: fusion Aether (eclipse) 00 turn zephyr
Appearance: an orange t-shirt with a sun design on the front, purple pants and cloak with a moon design on the back, and a eclipse pin in her hair.
Personality: same
Special moves:
Fusion impulse
Fusion gravity
Fusion launch

After Aiger became champion(in turbo), Naru received her beyblade from the phantom thief and formed a connection with Aether and became one of the best bladers in beigoma academy, she is now the coach of the bey club and helps other bladers with their training.
Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Sarah Chang
Beyblade: emperor forneus
Appearance: a girl with black hair and red eyes, a black long-sleeved t-shirt, light blue pants, and fingerless gloves.
Personality: a kind hearted blader who loves sea.
Special moves:
Emperor drift
Ultra emperor drift
Emperor guard
Emperor crash

Along with her brother and sister, Sarah is an exchange student from China who wanted to train with her idol from Japan, Fubuki trained her and gave her Foneus, and now she has joined beigoma academy to become one of the best.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Ruby Chang
Beyblade: heat salamander
Appearance: a girl with black hair in a ponytail and covering one of her red eyes, a shirt with a salamander on it, a bright red blazer, and jeans with combat boots.
Personalities: ( yes, there are multiple)
First: kind and confident (like king from metal fury)
Second: rude and overconfident (like Suoh from turbo)
Third: bored
Fourth: shy
Special moves:
Swirling inferno (defense mode)
Rain of sword fire (attack mode)
Crimson lotus blaze (stamina mode)(stamina mode is when the salamander layer is in attack mode and tip is in defense mode and balance mode is the opposite)

Along with her brother and sister, Ruby is an exchange student from China who wanted to train with her idol from beigoma academy, by completing Suoh's training she obtained salamander and her true power awakened and she discovered salamander's secret modes, now as part of the bey club she's out to prove how powerful she is.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Oscar Chang
Beyblade: monster Oger O5 blitz zone-spm
Appearance: a boy with black hair and red eyes, green short sleeve t-shirt, black vest and pants, and green shoes.
Personality: a tough guy who loves to laugh.
Special moves:
Oger smash (Oger uses its height to slam down on the opponent)
Oger rush (Oger uses its speed to slam the opponent into the wall)
Oger upper (knocks the opponent into the air and strikes them in the air)
Oger dive (Oger goes into the air and dives onto the opponent)

Oscar came with his sisters to beigoma academy to become one of the best, he forged Oger to be a protective attack type, he is on a mission to prove that an attack type can have defensive abilities.
can I do one?
Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Marshall
Beyblade: Dusk Devolos1 around kick (defense type)
Appearance: a boy with black hair, a mask, a black cape and a red belt martial arts outfit.
Bit beast: a purple demon with red eyes that walks on all fours
Personality: serious but light hearted
Special moves:
Dark circle (like dusk circle)
Dark guard (when using dark circle, dusk Devolos can deflect attacks from any direction)
Dark upper (uses the kick tip to upper cut the opponent)

As number one of beigoma academy, Marshall uses his overwhelming skill and power to defeat any opponent in his way.

(Mar. 06, 2023  4:37 PM)GodzillaFan101 Wrote: can I do one?

Sure, but you must use existing beyblade parts.
(Mar. 06, 2023  4:58 PM)Turboblader Wrote: Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Marshall
Beyblade: Dusk Devolos1 around kick (defense type)
Appearance: a boy with black hair, a mask, a black cape and a red belt martial arts outfit.
Bit beast: a purple demon with red eyes that walks on all fours
Personality: serious but light hearted
Special moves:
Dark circle (like dusk circle)
Dark guard (when using dark circle, dusk Devolos can deflect attacks from any direction)
Dark upper (uses the kick tip to upper cut the opponent)

As number one of beigoma academy, Marshall uses his overwhelming skill and power to defeat any opponent in his way.

(Mar. 06, 2023  4:37 PM)GodzillaFan101 Wrote: can I do one?

Sure, but you must use existing beyblade parts.

OK
I guess, I'll throw one in.

Character Details: Former Student of Shu, and former dark resonance user.
Name: Percy Woods
Beyblade: Zest Perseus Illegal Merge'-8
Appearance: A teenager with long black hair, usually slicking the right side behind his right ear, and leaving the left side come over the normally(Similar to that of my pfp, without the blonde) He wears a shirt pictured with an grenade on it, a black jacket reaching his thighs, black sweatpants, and finally black and white high tops. He also has two ear piercings those being studs, and a nose piercing on his right nostril, being a ring.
Motif: A hero armored in gold, wielding both a longsword and shield.
Personality: A kind soul, who helps anyone, scared of death due to the past.
Special moves:
Zest Break: Just Shu's Counterbreak.
Zest Sword: When the Zest Sword is placed in attack mode, Perseus slashes into the opponent's bey.
Zest Shield: When the Zest Sword is placed in defense mode, Perseus absorbs the opponent's attacks.
Counter Zest Strike: During a Zest Break, Perseus scrapes on Merge's rubber, and shoots over to the opponent's bey, usually scoring an Over Finish.
Zest Zone: When Zest Perseus takes the center, and is in Defense Mode.

Percy has explored lots of the world, and is a kind soul, who works for Shu Kurenai, sporting an almost brotherly relationship, he also has a crush on former blader, Alexis. Likes to battle whoever, as he just enjoins battles.
(Mar. 06, 2023  8:29 PM)beansworth Wrote: I guess, I'll throw one in.

Character Details: Former Student of Shu, and former dark resonance user.
Name: Percy Woods
Beyblade: Zest Perseus Illegal Merge'-8
Appearance: A teenager with long black hair, usually slicking the right side behind his right ear, and leaving the left side come over the normally(Similar to that of my pfp, without the blonde) He wears a shirt pictured with an grenade on it, a black jacket reaching his thighs, black sweatpants, and finally black and white high tops. He also has two ear piercings those being studs, and a nose piercing on his right nostril, being a ring.
Motif: A hero armored in gold, wielding both a longsword and shield.
Personality: A kind soul, who helps anyone, scared of death due to the past.
Special moves:
Zest Break: Just Shu's Counterbreak.
Zest Sword: When the Zest Sword is placed in attack mode, Perseus slashes into the opponent's bey.
Zest Shield: When the Zest Sword is placed in defense mode, Perseus absorbs the opponent's attacks.
Counter Zest Strike: During a Zest Break, Perseus scrapes on Merge's rubber, and shoots over to the opponent's bey, usually scoring an Over Finish.
Zest Zone: When Zest Perseus takes the center, and is in Defense Mode.

Percy has explored lots of the world, and is a kind soul, who works for Shu Kurenai, sporting an almost brotherly relationship, he also has a crush on former blader, Alexis. Likes to battle whoever, as he just enjoins battles.

If you change Perseus to Spryzen and remove the mention of death then your good.
And what would the bit beast look like.
Since we're doing oc's I guess I'll drop mine in.

Name: Kai Ulrich

Age: 15

Height: 5 '9" (180 cm)

Weight: 122 pound (50.9 kg)

Appearance: Kai is a fast kid who is more on the skinnier side with spiked blond hair at the top that's short in the back as it only covers the back of his head and is short in the front as the spikes point downward to cover his forehead. He also has bright blue eyes and black tattooed whiskers on his face as a head nod to his bey. Kai's casual outfit consists of a dark green t-shirt with a red flame on the front, a necklace with a cyan crystal at the center, white shorts, and brown slippers. Kai's blading outfit though consists of a black and orange zipped up jacket with a grey long sleeve shirt under it, orange pants with a black bey holder tied to his left leg (like Valt did in S1 and S2 of Burst), and black boots.

Aura/Resonance: When Kai goes into his resonance state his eyes will change to orange and his pupils will turn into those of a fox and a yellow aura will glow yellow with some of it changing forms to a cape that goes around Kai and has nine tail like ligaments coming from the cloak as well as stripes going across the ligaments and on the cloak and Kai's whiskers becoming larger and black lines to go around Kai's eyes and go towards the sides of his head where the sides of his hair will stick up to make fox like ears. Though due to the immense power of Kai's aura his bey will glow yellow as well and gain unnatural amounts of strength and speed but its stamina will become a ticking time bomb where if Kai goes into his resonance state his bey's spin will go back to the max it had at the start of the battle but his bey will start losing more and more spin twice as fast as it would in its normal state. As well as the bey's defenses will go down and make it gain more damage from attacks and risk the chance of it breaking if it's hit with enough force. Which makes Kai's resonance state a last resort, unless Kai is able to learn to control his resonance and use this power affectively.

Personality/Origins: Kai is a kind person who likes to have fun with his friends and has plans to become the strongest blader ever. He also enjoys to play pranks on people though they're not too crazy. Kai also likes to eat as well and will eat basically anything you put in front of him. Kai as a child lost his parents at a very young age which caused him to have to live on his own but it allowed him to become understanding with people and be able to form bonds with most people as he's able to connect with them. His ability to build connections with people would allow him to make many friends and eventually get into beyblade as that's what his friends enjoyed. This lit a spark in Kai to become the best as he's very competitive and likes to be the best at what he enjoys doing. Due to his love of beyblade he would create his school first beyblade team and make a line up consisting of his two closest friends. One of them being Sebastian who is his long time rival and neck to neck in power with him. The other is Sophia who isn't as powerful as Kai and Sebastian but makes up for it with her high intelligence and strategy. The team also has a coach as the school competes in the national beyblade 3 v 3 league and a coach is mandatory for the team, Their teacher is a veteran to Beyblade as he's 27 and competed in many tournaments. This teacher is named Kayden and in the power ranking of the group he's third with him being weaker then Sebastian and Kai but he still could win as his blading iq is unmatched causing him to battle with his brain more instead of his brawn. With this team Kai won many national championships and caused his school to be recognized all over the nation of Japan as a top tier school in blading. Though after those many wins Kai decided he has surpassed everyone in his nation and has put his eyes on to surpass everyone in the world.

Bey: Planet Kitsune Blitz Evolution -4

Planet: A yellow right spinning blade with three main contact points shaped like blades with one on the top right, top left, and middle bottom (like valkyrie).

Core: Kitsune is a black right spinning core with the avatar being a yellow fox with nine yellow tails and having black stripes all over its body.

Blitz: A normal black Blitz.

Driver: A pure yellow evolution.

4: A pure yellow 4 armor.

Special Moves:
Planet Dash: By angling his launcher to a 90 degree angle, Kai is able to preform a technique similar to the Rush Shoot but instead of moving in a flower pattern Kitsune dashes at the opponents bey which blitzes the opponent's bey.

Kitsune Boost: By tapping into a bit of his resonance, Kai is able to amp Kitsune's attack power and speed but not to a crazy amount as he would if he went full out into his resonance state. This causes Kai's pupils to change into that of a fox but that's it with no aura or eye color change.

Kitsune Unleash: This is when Kai goes into his full resonance state where Kitsune gains an unimaginable speed and strength increase but with the cons of heavy stamina and defense decreases.

Trajectory Blitz: When using Planet Dash, Kitsune is able to slam onto the stadium walls to change its trajectory to a normal flower pattern which causes Kitsune to use a weaker version of Planet Dash as Kitsune loses spin when slamming onto the stadium walls but its more controlled.

Final Clash: To use this move Kitsune must be in the resonance state as when this move is used Kitsune pours all of its power into one final attack which causes Kitsune to glow dark red with all of the power its charging up so when the enemy opponent attacks Kitsune, Kitsune will self destruct and hopefully destroy the opponents bey as well.
(Mar. 07, 2023  12:45 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: Since we're doing oc's I guess I'll drop mine in.

Name: Kai Ulrich

Age: 15

Height: 5 '9" (180 cm)

Weight: 122 pound (50.9 kg)

Appearance: Kai is a fast kid who is more on the skinnier side with spiked blond hair at the top that's short in the back as it only covers the back of his head and is short in the front as the spikes point downward to cover his forehead. He also has bright blue eyes and black tattooed whiskers on his face as a head nod to his bey. Kai's casual outfit consists of a dark green t-shirt with a red flame on the front, a necklace with a cyan crystal at the center, white shorts, and brown slippers. Kai's blading outfit though consists of a black and orange zipped up jacket with a grey long sleeve shirt under it, orange pants with a black bey holder tied to his left leg (like Valt did in S1 and S2 of Burst), and black boots.

Aura/Resonance: When Kai goes into his resonance state his eyes will change to orange and his pupils will turn into those of a fox and a yellow aura will glow yellow with some of it changing forms to a cape that goes around Kai and has nine tail like ligaments coming from the cloak as well as stripes going across the ligaments and on the cloak and Kai's whiskers becoming larger and black lines to go around Kai's eyes and go towards the sides of his head where the sides of his hair will stick up to make fox like ears. Though due to the immense power of Kai's aura his bey will glow yellow as well and gain unnatural amounts of strength and speed but its stamina will become a ticking time bomb where if Kai goes into his resonance state his bey's spin will go back to the max it had at the start of the battle but his bey will start losing more and more spin twice as fast as it would in its normal state. As well as the bey's defenses will go down and make it gain more damage from attacks and risk the chance of it breaking if it's hit with enough force. Which makes Kai's resonance state a last resort, unless Kai is able to learn to control his resonance and use this power affectively.

Personality/Origins: Kai is a kind person who likes to have fun with his friends and has plans to become the strongest blader ever. He also enjoys to play pranks on people though they're not too crazy. Kai also likes to eat as well and will eat basically anything you put in front of him. Kai as a child lost his parents at a very young age which caused him to have to live on his own but it allowed him to become understanding with people and be able to form bonds with most people as he's able to connect with them. His ability to build connections with people would allow him to make many friends and eventually get into beyblade as that's what his friends enjoyed. This lit a spark in Kai to become the best as he's very competitive and likes to be the best at what he enjoys doing. Due to his love of beyblade he would create his school first beyblade team and make a line up consisting of his two closest friends. One of them being Sebastian who is his long time rival and neck to neck in power with him. The other is Sophia who isn't as powerful as Kai and Sebastian but makes up for it with her high intelligence and strategy. The team also has a coach as the school competes in the national beyblade 3 v 3 league and a coach is mandatory for the team, Their teacher is a veteran to Beyblade as he's 27 and competed in many tournaments. This teacher is named Kayden and in the power ranking of the group he's third with him being weaker then Sebastian and Kai but he still could win as his blading iq is unmatched causing him to battle with his brain more instead of his brawn. With this team Kai won many national championships and caused his school to be recognized all over the nation of Japan as a top tier school in blading. Though after those many wins Kai decided he has surpassed everyone in his nation and has put his eyes on to surpass everyone in the world.

Bey: Planet Kitsune Blitz Evolution -4

Planet: A yellow right spinning blade with three main contact points shaped like blades with one on the top right, top left, and middle bottom (like valkyrie).

Core: Kitsune is a black right spinning core with the avatar being a yellow fox with nine yellow tails and having black stripes all over its body.

Blitz: A normal black Blitz.

Driver: A pure yellow evolution.

4: A pure yellow 4 armor.

Special Moves:
Planet Dash: By angling his launcher to a 90 degree angle, Kai is able to preform a technique similar to the Rush Shoot but instead of moving in a flower pattern Kitsune dashes at the opponents bey which blitzes the opponent's bey.

Kitsune Boost: By tapping into a bit of his resonance, Kai is able to amp Kitsune's attack power and speed but not to a crazy amount as he would if he went full out into his resonance state. This causes Kai's pupils to change into that of a fox but that's it with no aura or eye color change.

Kitsune Unleash: This is when Kai goes into his full resonance state where Kitsune gains an unimaginable speed and strength increase but with the cons of heavy stamina and defense decreases.

Trajectory Blitz: When using Planet Dash, Kitsune is able to slam onto the stadium walls to change its trajectory to a normal flower pattern which causes Kitsune to use a weaker version of Planet Dash as Kitsune loses spin when slamming onto the stadium walls but its more controlled.

Final Clash: To use this move Kitsune must be in the resonance state as when this move is used Kitsune pours all of its power into one final attack which causes Kitsune to glow dark red with all of the power its charging up so when the enemy opponent attacks Kitsune, Kitsune will self destruct and hopefully destroy the opponents bey as well.

Sorry, but planet kitsune isn't an already existing beyblade.
(Mar. 07, 2023  1:11 AM)Turboblader Wrote:
(Mar. 07, 2023  12:45 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: Since we're doing oc's I guess I'll drop mine in.

Name: Kai Ulrich

Age: 15

Height: 5 '9" (180 cm)

Weight: 122 pound (50.9 kg)

Appearance: Kai is a fast kid who is more on the skinnier side with spiked blond hair at the top that's short in the back as it only covers the back of his head and is short in the front as the spikes point downward to cover his forehead. He also has bright blue eyes and black tattooed whiskers on his face as a head nod to his bey. Kai's casual outfit consists of a dark green t-shirt with a red flame on the front, a necklace with a cyan crystal at the center, white shorts, and brown slippers. Kai's blading outfit though consists of a black and orange zipped up jacket with a grey long sleeve shirt under it, orange pants with a black bey holder tied to his left leg (like Valt did in S1 and S2 of Burst), and black boots.

Aura/Resonance: When Kai goes into his resonance state his eyes will change to orange and his pupils will turn into those of a fox and a yellow aura will glow yellow with some of it changing forms to a cape that goes around Kai and has nine tail like ligaments coming from the cloak as well as stripes going across the ligaments and on the cloak and Kai's whiskers becoming larger and black lines to go around Kai's eyes and go towards the sides of his head where the sides of his hair will stick up to make fox like ears. Though due to the immense power of Kai's aura his bey will glow yellow as well and gain unnatural amounts of strength and speed but its stamina will become a ticking time bomb where if Kai goes into his resonance state his bey's spin will go back to the max it had at the start of the battle but his bey will start losing more and more spin twice as fast as it would in its normal state. As well as the bey's defenses will go down and make it gain more damage from attacks and risk the chance of it breaking if it's hit with enough force. Which makes Kai's resonance state a last resort, unless Kai is able to learn to control his resonance and use this power affectively.

Personality/Origins: Kai is a kind person who likes to have fun with his friends and has plans to become the strongest blader ever. He also enjoys to play pranks on people though they're not too crazy. Kai also likes to eat as well and will eat basically anything you put in front of him. Kai as a child lost his parents at a very young age which caused him to have to live on his own but it allowed him to become understanding with people and be able to form bonds with most people as he's able to connect with them. His ability to build connections with people would allow him to make many friends and eventually get into beyblade as that's what his friends enjoyed. This lit a spark in Kai to become the best as he's very competitive and likes to be the best at what he enjoys doing. Due to his love of beyblade he would create his school first beyblade team and make a line up consisting of his two closest friends. One of them being Sebastian who is his long time rival and neck to neck in power with him. The other is Sophia who isn't as powerful as Kai and Sebastian but makes up for it with her high intelligence and strategy. The team also has a coach as the school competes in the national beyblade 3 v 3 league and a coach is mandatory for the team, Their teacher is a veteran to Beyblade as he's 27 and competed in many tournaments. This teacher is named Kayden and in the power ranking of the group he's third with him being weaker then Sebastian and Kai but he still could win as his blading iq is unmatched causing him to battle with his brain more instead of his brawn. With this team Kai won many national championships and caused his school to be recognized all over the nation of Japan as a top tier school in blading. Though after those many wins Kai decided he has surpassed everyone in his nation and has put his eyes on to surpass everyone in the world.

Bey: Planet Kitsune Blitz Evolution -4

Planet: A yellow right spinning blade with three main contact points shaped like blades with one on the top right, top left, and middle bottom (like valkyrie).

Core: Kitsune is a black right spinning core with the avatar being a yellow fox with nine yellow tails and having black stripes all over its body.

Blitz: A normal black Blitz.

Driver: A pure yellow evolution.

4: A pure yellow 4 armor.

Special Moves:
Planet Dash: By angling his launcher to a 90 degree angle, Kai is able to preform a technique similar to the Rush Shoot but instead of moving in a flower pattern Kitsune dashes at the opponents bey which blitzes the opponent's bey.

Kitsune Boost: By tapping into a bit of his resonance, Kai is able to amp Kitsune's attack power and speed but not to a crazy amount as he would if he went full out into his resonance state. This causes Kai's pupils to change into that of a fox but that's it with no aura or eye color change.

Kitsune Unleash: This is when Kai goes into his full resonance state where Kitsune gains an unimaginable speed and strength increase but with the cons of heavy stamina and defense decreases.

Trajectory Blitz: When using Planet Dash, Kitsune is able to slam onto the stadium walls to change its trajectory to a normal flower pattern which causes Kitsune to use a weaker version of Planet Dash as Kitsune loses spin when slamming onto the stadium walls but its more controlled.

Final Clash: To use this move Kitsune must be in the resonance state as when this move is used Kitsune pours all of its power into one final attack which causes Kitsune to glow dark red with all of the power its charging up so when the enemy opponent attacks Kitsune, Kitsune will self destruct and hopefully destroy the opponents bey as well.

Sorry, but planet kitsune isn't an already existing beyblade.

Alright then just make it Brave Satan.
I already made up a character for that.
Sorry.
(Mar. 06, 2023  9:32 PM)Turboblader Wrote:
(Mar. 06, 2023  8:29 PM)beansworth Wrote:

If you change Perseus to Spryzen and remove the mention of death then your good.
And what would the bit beast look like.
No problem, does Spriggan2(Spryzen Evo) work, or original Spriggan DB Core? And I wrote the bit beast as motif. Updated the post, in the spoiler. Thanks, much.
(Mar. 07, 2023  3:09 AM)Turboblader Wrote: I already made up a character for that.
Sorry.

Super Hyperion and use 1D instead of the armor since its a Superking bey
Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Axle
Beyblade: glyph joker sen 10 turn wedge'
Bit beast: a magician with a hook
Appearance: a boy with short blonde hair, a shirt with a jester on it, a blue windbreaker jacket, and sweatpants.
Personality: a fun loving party guy
Special moves:
Glyph hook (in counter mode, glyph joker uses the turn frame to attack the opponent)
Glyph parry (in guard mode, glyph joker parrys the opponent with its round frame)
Glyph zone (like Roktavor zone)

As number two of beigoma academy, Axle uses his beyblade's versatility to defeat his opponents.

(Mar. 07, 2023  4:29 AM)beansworth Wrote:
(Mar. 06, 2023  9:32 PM)Turboblader Wrote: If you change Perseus to Spryzen and remove the mention of death then your good.
And what would the bit beast look like.
No problem, does Spriggan2(Spryzen Evo) work, or original Spriggan DB Core? And I wrote the bit beast as motif. Updated the post, in the spoiler. Thanks, much.

Any Spryzen works, and your character will show up in a later episode.
(Mar. 07, 2023  5:16 AM)Turboblader Wrote: Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Axle
Beyblade: glyph joker sen 10 turn wedge'
Appearance: a boy with short blonde hair, a shirt with a jester on it, a blue windbreaker jacket, and sweatpants.
Personality: a fun loving party guy
Special moves:
Glyph hook (in counter mode, glyph joker uses the turn frame to attack the opponent)
Glyph parry (in guard mode, glyph joker parrys the opponent with its round frame)
Glyph zone (like Roktavor zone)

As number two of beigoma academy, Axle uses his beyblade's versatility to defeat his opponents.

(Mar. 07, 2023  4:29 AM)beansworth Wrote: No problem, does Spriggan2(Spryzen Evo) work, or original Spriggan DB Core? And I wrote the bit beast as motif. Updated the post, in the spoiler. Thanks, much.

Any Spryzen works, and your character will show up in a later episode.

Is all the editing I need to do for my oc just the bey or does the character itself have to be altered? Also what about the change I made making the bey Super Hyperion Blitz Evolution 1D? Does that work? If it doesn't instead of Super Hyperion you can use King Fafnir.
(Mar. 07, 2023  5:51 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote:
(Mar. 07, 2023  5:16 AM)Turboblader Wrote: Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Axle
Beyblade: glyph joker sen 10 turn wedge'
Appearance: a boy with short blonde hair, a shirt with a jester on it, a blue windbreaker jacket, and sweatpants.
Personality: a fun loving party guy
Special moves:
Glyph hook (in counter mode, glyph joker uses the turn frame to attack the opponent)
Glyph parry (in guard mode, glyph joker parrys the opponent with its round frame)
Glyph zone (like Roktavor zone)

As number two of beigoma academy, Axle uses his beyblade's versatility to defeat his opponents.


Any Spryzen works, and your character will show up in a later episode.

Is all the editing I need to do for my oc just the bey or does the character itself have to be altered? Also what about the change I made making the bey Super Hyperion Blitz Evolution 1D? Does that work? If it doesn't instead of Super Hyperion you can use King Fafnir.

Change super to origin(first) and 1D for 1S, and your good.
And only the beyblade needs to be edited.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Lina
Beyblade: harmony Valtriek gen wheel moment
Bit beast: a harpy in armor
Appearance: a girl with light red hair, a blue shirt, a black jacket, and a skirt with shorts.
Personality: confident with more bite than bark
Special moves:
Reverse heal
Wing counter (when the wings are out, they can be used to counter attack)
Moment twist (like guard twist)

As number three of beigoma academy, Lina's beyblade can defend against any attack and knockout the opponent.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Lexi
Beyblade: Rock Cobra ten convert unite'
Bit beast: a stone rattlesnake that changes movement patterns
Appearance: a girl in a safari outfit.
Personality: a girl who loves animals
Special moves:
Bite barrage (in unbalanced mode, Rock Cobra uses multiple small attacks to weaken the opponent)
Surpent sleeper (in balance mode, Rock Cobra stays in the center and waits for the opponent to attack)
Coile counter (if knocked out of the center, rock Cobra will counter attack the opponent)

Number four of beigoma academy, Lexi's beyblade uses random movements to confuse the opponent.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Ethan
Beyblade: union Ashindra zan 00 wall high zephyr (balance type)
Bit beast: a twin blade ninja
Appearance: a boy with brown hair, black tank top and sweatpants, green scarf over his face, and goggles.
Personality: a ninja who toys with his opponents
Special moves:
Swift sword (union Ashindra uses its speed to continuously strike the opponent)
Ninja breaker (like unison breaker)
Ninja sword (like unison sword)

As number five of beigoma academy, Ethan tends to analyze the opponent before battling.
(Mar. 07, 2023  1:21 PM)Turboblader Wrote:
(Mar. 07, 2023  5:51 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: Is all the editing I need to do for my oc just the bey or does the character itself have to be altered? Also what about the change I made making the bey Super Hyperion Blitz Evolution 1D? Does that work? If it doesn't instead of Super Hyperion you can use King Fafnir.

Change super to origin(first) and 1D for 1S, and your good.
And only the beyblade needs to be edited.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Lina
Beyblade: harmony Valtriek gen wheel moment
Bit beast: a harpy in armor
Appearance: a girl with light red hair, a blue shirt, a black jacket, and a skirt with shorts.
Personality: confident with more bite than bark
Special moves:
Reverse heal
Wing counter (when the wings are out, they can be used to counter attack)
Moment twist (like guard twist)

As number three of beigoma academy, Lina's beyblade can defend against any attack and knockout the opponent.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Lexi
Beyblade: Rock Cobra ten convert unite'
Bit beast: a stone rattlesnake that changes movement patterns
Appearance: a girl in a safari outfit.
Personality: a girl who loves animals
Special moves:
Bite barrage (in unbalanced mode, Rock Cobra uses multiple small attacks to weaken the opponent)
Surpent sleeper (in balance mode, Rock Cobra stays in the center and waits for the opponent to attack)
Coile counter (if knocked out of the center, rock Cobra will counter attack the opponent)

Number four of beigoma academy, Lexi's beyblade uses random movements to confuse the opponent.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Ethan
Beyblade: union Ashindra zan 00 wall high zephyr (balance type)
Bit beast: a twin blade ninja
Appearance: a boy with brown hair, black tank top and sweatpants, green scarf over his face, and goggles.
Personality: a ninja who toys with his opponents
Special moves:
Swift sword (union Ashindra uses its speed to continuously strike the opponent)
Ninja breaker (like unison breaker)
Ninja sword (like unison sword)

As number five of beigoma academy, Ethan tends to analyze the opponent before battling.

Alright his bey is Origin Hyperion Blitz Evolution 1S. His character and design is the same and the moves that are needed to be renamed are Origin Dash (Planet Dash), Hyperion Boost (Kitsune Boost), and Hyperion Unleash (Kitsune Unleash).
(Mar. 08, 2023  12:05 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote:
(Mar. 07, 2023  1:21 PM)Turboblader Wrote: Change super to origin(first) and 1D for 1S, and your good.
And only the beyblade needs to be edited.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Lina
Beyblade: harmony Valtriek gen wheel moment
Bit beast: a harpy in armor
Appearance: a girl with light red hair, a blue shirt, a black jacket, and a skirt with shorts.
Personality: confident with more bite than bark
Special moves:
Reverse heal
Wing counter (when the wings are out, they can be used to counter attack)
Moment twist (like guard twist)

As number three of beigoma academy, Lina's beyblade can defend against any attack and knockout the opponent.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Lexi
Beyblade: Rock Cobra ten convert unite'
Bit beast: a stone rattlesnake that changes movement patterns
Appearance: a girl in a safari outfit.
Personality: a girl who loves animals
Special moves:
Bite barrage (in unbalanced mode, Rock Cobra uses multiple small attacks to weaken the opponent)
Surpent sleeper (in balance mode, Rock Cobra stays in the center and waits for the opponent to attack)
Coile counter (if knocked out of the center, rock Cobra will counter attack the opponent)

Number four of beigoma academy, Lexi's beyblade uses random movements to confuse the opponent.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Ethan
Beyblade: union Ashindra zan 00 wall high zephyr (balance type)
Bit beast: a twin blade ninja
Appearance: a boy with brown hair, black tank top and sweatpants, green scarf over his face, and goggles.
Personality: a ninja who toys with his opponents
Special moves:
Swift sword (union Ashindra uses its speed to continuously strike the opponent)
Ninja breaker (like unison breaker)
Ninja sword (like unison sword)

As number five of beigoma academy, Ethan tends to analyze the opponent before battling.

Alright his bey is Origin Hyperion Blitz Evolution 1S. His character and design is the same and the moves that are needed to be renamed are Origin Dash (Planet Dash), Hyperion Boost (Kitsune Boost), and Hyperion Unleash (Kitsune Unleash).

That's good, and your character will show up in a later episode.
Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Roy
Beyblade: rock Valtriek gen 6 proof operate' (balance type)
Bit beast: a warrior with a shield
Appearance: a boy with brown hair, a shirt and pants covered with dirt.
Personality: kind of like Kenta from metal fight
Special moves:
Sky avalanche (rock Valtriek jumps up high and strikes the opponent from above)
Shield crash

A country kid who recently transferred to beigoma to train in a new environment to improve his skills.

Character details: from beigoma academy
Name: Luke
Beyblade: genesis V3 (genesis Valtriek) 7 hold
Appearance: a boy with dark green hair, and Valt's turbo design but green and black.
Personality: goofy
Special moves:
Spring attack
Spring winged launch

Inspired by Valt during the blader cup(from evolution) he made a beyblade combo that fast and powerful, he overwhelms his opponents with his beyblade's speed and knocks them out of the stadium.
Character details: from beigoma academy (last one before the episode)
Name: Calvin
Beyblade: mirage luinor 2D extend
Bit beast: a red demon with a mask
Appearance: a boy with ginger hair, a grey hoodie and shorts.
Personality: calm
Special moves:
Barrier crush (uses the barrier to push the opponent into the wall and burst them)
Barrier counter (uses the extend tip to counter attack with the barrier)
Barrier absorb (uses the barrier to absorb power from the opponent)

After being kicked out of his town for being to powerful, Calvin went to beigoma academy to find someone to challenge him, after being defeated by Toko Aoi, he joined beigoma till he can beat him.
Episode 2: Self change, blader spirit

The episode continues the battle between The Crowned King, Rashad, and Bel, with a score of 2 to 0 to 0, with The Crowned King in the lead.

TCK: Is that really the best you can do, I'm disappointed.

Rashad (thought): how, how did his beyblade change modes like that.

Bel (grinning): This is turning out to be a fun battle.

Bel laughs

Bel: Oh and don't think I didn't see the hidden cameras live streaming the battle.

TCK: Guess you can't hide everything from the dark prince, but do think you still have a chance to beat me.

Bel: So what, just because your beyblade change modes during battle doesn't mean I will lose to you.

TCK: Alright, but I got to warn you, I'm not even using my true power.

Rashad: Bel.

Bel looks at Rashad

Bel: What is it.

Rashad: We need to work together to beat him.

Bel: Oh please, I don't need help from anyone.

TCK: Spellscraper will start in parry mode (free stamina).

Ranzo: Third battle.

Rashad: Regnar will be in attack mode.

Bladers set

Ranzo: Ready, set.

Everyone: 3..2..1.. let it rip.

Spellscraper, Belfire, and Regnar land and go around the stadium

Bel: Go Belfire.

Belfire attacks Spellscraper and Spellscraper parrys

TCK: Alright Spellscraper, attack mode.

Spellscraper's chassis switches to fixed position and extend+ changes to attack mode and attacks Regnar

Rashad: Now Regnar, glory dagger.

Regnar attacks Spellscraper and knocks Spellscraper into Belfire

Bel: time to meet your doom, Divine wrecker.

Belfire attacks Spellscraper and knocks Spellscraper into Regnar

TCK: What!

Regnar and Belfire continuously attack Spellscraper and knock Spellscraper near the center

TCK: Well played, but you won't beat me that easily, time to show off our true power Spellscraper.

Spellscraper flairs and the bit beast comes out and roars

TCK: Spellscraper, fortress mode (fixed stamina).

Spellscraper changes modes

TCK: Watch and learn.

Spellscraper suddenly changes directions and knocks out Regnar and Belfire and Bashara, Ilya, and Ranzo make a shocked face

Ranzo: but, how.

Bashara: It moved like an attack type, but it's in a stamina mode, how is that possible.

TCK: This is the true power of a beyblade, and it's a power you didn't even know about.

Ranzo: The score is now 3 to 0 to 0.

Bel picks up and looks at Belfire

TCK: Do you even understand your beyblade?

Bel looks up in confusion

TCK: Do you even understand each other?

Bel makes an annoyed face

Bel: Ofcourse me and Belfire understand each other.

TCK: Then why doesn't Belfire move on its own?

Bel looks confused

Bel: What do you mean?

TCK: You saw the way my beyblade moved, it moved directly towards your beyblade's even from the center.

Rashad: What does that have to do with anything.

TCK: If blader and bey truly understand each other, they can achieve a power that some would consider impossible.

Ranzo: Fourth battle.

Bel looks at Belfire

Bel (thought): Belfire, do we really understand each other, can we even win against him?

Belfire: Are you really questioning yourself?

Bel gets transported to Belfire's realm

Belfire: That doesn't sound like the dark prince I know.

Bel: I know but.

Belfire: Then why are you doubting yourself?

Bel: He's strong, I don't know if we can beat him.

Bel looks upset

Belfire: Look, I have a plan.

Bel: What kind?

Belfire: If you remove the L-gear, you can put me in low mode for better stamina.

Bel grins

Bel: I get it, if attacking doesn't work then let's spin to the end.

Belfire: Now that's the dark prince I know, let's do this.

Bel leaves Belfires realm

Bel: Let's do this Belfire.

Bel removes L-gear from Belfire

TCK: He put Belfire in low mode, what do you think about that Spellscraper.

Spellscraper glows

Spellscraper: I think we should test him to see if he has what it takes.

TCK: Agreed.

Bladers set

Bel: Belfire, let's show him the connection we have.

Everyone: 3..2..1.. let it rip.

All beys land and Spellscraper goes toward the center

Bel: I won't let you.

Belfire attacks Spellscraper

Rashad: Now Regnar.

Regnar knocks Spellscraper out of the center area

Bel: Belfire, take the center.

TCK: What!?

Belfire takes the center

Bashara has a shocked face

Bashara: Belfire took the center, but how is that possible?

Bel: Never underestimate the dark prince.

TCK: Not bad, but you can't keep the center for long, go Spellscraper.

Spellscraper attacks but is parried

TCK: Huh

Bel: With S-gear in defense mode, you can't hit us.

TCK: Alright then, Spellscraper attack Regnar.

Spellscraper changes directions to attack Regnar

Rashad: Regnar, glory dagger.

Regnar(in defense mode) gets hit into the wall and counter attacks

Rashad: I saw that coming a mile away.

TCK: Alright then, Spellscraper tornado mode(free attack).

Spellscraper changes modes

TCK: Now Spellscraper, crown tornado.

Spellscraper continuously hits Regnar into the wall

Rashad: Regnar, glory crown.

Regnar's halo appears

TCK: go Spellscraper.

Spellscraper hits Regnar into Belfire and knocks Belfire out of the center

Bel: Oh no.

Spellscraper then hits Regnar into the wall again and Regnar burst

Rashad: What!?

TCK: Now it's just you and me Bel, Spellscraper balance mode(fixed defense).

Spellscraper changes modes and goes to the center while Belfire circles around the center

Bel(thought): I can't believe it, he burst Regnar, does this mean I will lose.

Belfire: Snap out of it Bel, don't let Regnars defeat stop you from winning.

Bel's aura starts to glow

Bel: Your right Belfire, I won't lose!

Belfire glows bright and suddenly changes directions and attacks Spellscraper

TCK(though): They finally awakened their true power.

The Crowned King is surrounded by a red and gold aura

TCK: Attack Spellscraper.

Spellscraper attacks Belfire

Bel: It's time Belfire, Divine wrecker.

Belfire sends Spellscraper into the air

Bel: How do like that.

The Crowned King laughs

TCK: Now that your true power has awakened, I don't need to hold back anymore.

The Crowned King's hair turns

TCK: Spellscraper!

Spellscraper flairs and the bit beast appears

TCK: Attack mode.

Spellscraper changes modes and lands in the stadium

TCK: Crown strike.

Spellscraper attacks and burst Belfire and Bel is shocked

Ranzo: Spellscraper with a double burst finish, with a score of 5 to 0 to 0, The Crowned King is the winner.

The Crowned King looks at Bel

TCK: You may have lost, but now you truly understand your beyblade, you are a true blader.

The Crowned King then looks at Rashad

TCK: But you on the other hand, I'm disappointed, you don't understand your own beyblade yet and that is why you lost.

The dark prince and gang leave and The Crowned King looks into the sky

TCK: Well Spellscraper, time to find some new opponents.

Episode ends
Hope you enjoy the episode, the next five bladers to be revealed are part of the Victorys.
Character details: from the Victorys
Name: Lucy
Beyblade: Guilty luinor
Appearance: a girl with white hair, winter blue eyes, a white jacket, a blue shirt with a white Dragon on it, shorts, and black boots
Personality: Quiet, calm, and cold
Special moves:
Nightmare boost
Guilty squall
Guilty upper
Guilty smash (in high mode Luinor smashes its opponent into the ground)
Destroy counter (uses the destroy tip to change directions and counter attack)
Guilty slam (like zone slam from zone Luinor)
Luinor meteor blast attack (pegasus star blast attack)

After getting to Oger island, Lucy decided to train under Lui Shirosagi, by completing all the trials Lui gave her, she obtained Luinor, she joined the Victorys after losing to the leader.

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Character details: from the Victorys
Name: Ivy
Beyblade: Brave Satomb 2S venture + V-gear
Bit beast: a green demon with armor and a sword
Appearance: a girl with blue hair with a green streak in it, a grey cloak, a blue and green shirt with shorts
Personality: passionate, kind, and joyful
Special moves:
Brave strike (uses the three blades on the brave layer to attack the opponent)
Venture break (uses the rubber on the venture tip to counter attack)
V drift (uses V-gear to drift on the stadium for a big attack)

Ivy joined the Victorys after losing to her blading idol, she got the V-gear from Bel Daizora after showing her will to win, she is a rookie with explosive power but little skill and control.
Character details: from the Victorys
Name: Diane (pronounced Di-an) Tokoyami
Beyblade: demise/abyss Devolos 1S 00 turn wave'
Appearance: a girl with black and white hair (mostly black), green eyes, a red shirt, a black jacket with a demon design on the back, black jeans, and red shoes
Personality: a lone wolf kind of person
Special moves:
Demise/Abyss upper
Demise/Abyss smash
Demise/Abyss break (when knocked out of the center, Devolos uses the wave tip to counter attack)
Demise/Abyss drift (uses the outer edge of the wave tip to drift on the stadium to attack)
Demise/Abyss claw (uses the attack mode on the turn frame to attack the opponent)
Demise/Abyss guard (uses the defense mode of the turn frame to defend from attacks)

Frustrated from losing all the time, Diane seeked training from Delta to become stronger, after proving herself she obtained Devolos and has become the second strongest in the Victorys.
Character details: from the Victorys
Name: Taka Kusaba
Beyblade: Bushin/Flare Ashindra
Appearance: same as Arman but with a green martial arts outfit
Personality: same
Special moves:
Tower counter
Bushin guard
Hurricane defence
Double bushin guard
Flare spin (uses the outward weight of the metal orbs in the layer to increase spin power)
Flare defend (increases defense power when the metal orbs in the layer go inward)

Taka got Ashindra from his brother Arman and became the third strongest in the Victorys, Taka upgraded Ashindra by giving it the flare layer base to increase its stamina.