[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade burst.. End of an Era

I feel like you didn't explain the Battle well try this:

*Valkryie leans on its driver and speeds up*

Or this:

(Valkryie collides with Tigre)

And for the announcer you can do "Hanami" it you want
(Aug. 08, 2021  6:17 PM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: Guys after the tournament ends what do you guys want to see?

A- Tadi on the path to become the strongest alone

B- Tadi joins a club to get stronger

B definitely because plot armor
(Aug. 11, 2021  12:22 AM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: Chapter 4: Valkryie! Get them!

PREVIEW:

Tadi: Ok, it’s the Quarter Finals of the Tournament!

Tadi: I got a pretty tough, opponent, but I’ll beat him.

Tadi: Me and Tigre will resonate more and become the greatest ever.

Valt: Tadi, do this battke the right way.

Tadi: It looks like Valt is watching me battle!

Next on Beyblade burst… End of an Era:

Quarter Finals! An insane battle!

3!
2!
1!
Go shoot!

Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you guys, Tadi is going to have a pet.

Yeah, like LegendJustice said "You could've explained it a bit better" try working on Grammer too!
Hey, so I will just explain a bit about this fanfic:

This fanfic is called Beyblade Burst.. End of an Era. And the main character is called Tadi. I wouldn’t really call him a hero because he wants to destroy blading as we all know it. And if he does so. The world of blading will change completely. This fanfic will be appropriate for all ages, and I can assure you, you will enjoy reading it! Now about Tadi: His bey is called Bite Tigre, he wants to become the greatest ever. Now a bit about his personality:

He is a boy
He is mysterious and lonely.
He has a bey called Bite Tigre.
He is 13 years of age.
He lives in a city called Brookville, Japan.
He was born in Japan.

Now about the plot:

The current tournament is being hosted at a stadium called Brooblade Stadium.

The announcer for this series is NOT Hanami.

Conclusion:

Hopefully this got you to understand a bit more of the fanfic!
Will this Fic continue?