[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst SK Drive/Cyber Force

(Aug. 18, 2021  6:34 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great chapter! My little sister was reading it to lol She loves Austin she’s fan Girl ing so hard lol

I'm so glad she liked it,

Adrian: Why doesn't she like me, I'm the cool one!

Austin: I'm cooler and have better looks

Adrian: The blobfish looks prettier than you!

Austin: Uno Reverse Card!

Adrian: You little--

(Adrian chases after Austin)

Austin: See ya guys later!!

(Adrian jumps on Austin)

Austin: AH!!
(Aug. 18, 2021  6:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 18, 2021  6:34 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great chapter! My little sister was reading it to lol She loves Austin she’s fan Girl ing so hard lol

I'm so glad she liked it,

Adrian: Why doesn't she like me, I'm the cool one!

Austin: I'm cooler and have better looks

Adrian: The blobfish looks prettier than you!

Austin: Uno Reverse Card!

Adrian: You little--

(Adrian chases after Austin)

Austin: See ya guys later!!

(Adrian jumps on Austin)

Austin: AH!!

Lol 😂 She says that if Adrien had a face she would kick it lol
(Aug. 18, 2021  6:42 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Aug. 18, 2021  6:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm so glad she liked it,

Adrian: Why doesn't she like me, I'm the cool one!

Austin: I'm cooler and have better looks

Adrian: The blobfish looks prettier than you!

Austin: Uno Reverse Card!

Adrian: You little--

(Adrian chases after Austin)

Austin: See ya guys later!!

(Adrian jumps on Austin)

Austin: AH!!

Lol 😂 She says that if Adrien had a face she would kick it lol

Austin: She likes me better than you!

*Austin sticks his tongue out*

Adrian: What's not to like about me, I'm on a better winning streak than him!

Austin: You got lucky!!

Lol, Adrian's a very unlikeable character.

Adrian: What did you say?!

(Adrian jumps on me)

Me: Ah! See ya guys--
(Aug. 18, 2021  6:44 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 18, 2021  6:42 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Lol 😂 She says that if Adrien had a face she would kick it lol

Austin: She likes me better than you!

*Austin sticks his tongue out*

Adrian: What's not to like about me, I'm on a better winning streak than him!

Austin: You got lucky!!

Lol, Adrian's a very unlikeable character.

Adrian: What did you say?!

(Adrian jumps on me)

Me: Ah! See ya guys--

Welp, Have fun with that
12) A Tag Battle Stereotype

13) Adrian Goes Nuts (XD)

14) World Champion(S)

15) Journey To Spain!
Alright boys, time to put Adrien in a asylum
Chapter 12 is out!
(Aug. 19, 2021  9:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 12 is out!

RIP Adrian, he was a not so good brother and somewhat evil, but a person.

Anyways, Does Ifrit have sth like Trans'? Because It went with stamina mode and if I'm not wrong, it also has an attack mode.
(Aug. 19, 2021  9:37 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 19, 2021  9:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 12 is out!

RIP Adrian, he was a not so good brother and somewhat evil, but a person.

Anyways, Does Ifrit have sth like Trans'? Because It went with stamina mode and if I'm not wrong, it also has an attack mode.

It's Xtend+' Metal
(Aug. 19, 2021  9:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 12 is out!

Their mom used to babysit Valt!?
(Aug. 19, 2021  9:40 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:
(Aug. 19, 2021  9:28 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 12 is out!

Their mom used to babysit Valt!?

Yeah, when Valt was four
holy nuts, adrian's gotta chill like 😏👌
R.I.P Adrien
I will never forgive myself for Chapter 13's ending
Um...
(Aug. 20, 2021  12:14 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Um...

wait why?

WHAT DID I DO?!?!

mods can you please tell me in pm i cant see it i dont know what i did

BRO IM CONFUSED WHAT DID I DO IF SOMEONE COULD PLEASE TELL ME I'D APPRECIATE IT AND ABIDE BY WHAT YOU SAID

TELL ME WHAT I DID

DUDE I LOOKED IT UP AND THAT WORD THAT I SAID THAT WAS APPARENTLY SWEAR WASN'T

"But now it's considered as a general insult towards a jerk or bad person."  STRAIGHT FROM GOOGLE

TELL ME WHAT I DID

OR UNLESS YOU JUST DON'T WANT ME SAYING IT BECAUSE ITS OFFENSE TELL ME

YOU GOTTA BE REALLY MESSED UP IN THE MIND TO THINK THAT AN INSULT TOWARDS A CHARACTER IN A STORY LIKE ITS STUPID

IF YOU WOULD JUST TELL ME WHAT I DID I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT

BRUH YOU DONT GIVE THE PEOPLE WHO USE REAL "SEMI-SWEAR" WORDS A NOTICE BUT YOU GIVE ONE SPECIFIC PERSON THAT USES A WORD THAT FOR 1 DOESN'T EVEN PERTAIN TO A REAL LIFE PERSON AND TWO WASN'T EVEN A SWEAR WORD TO BEGIN WITH
14) Journey To Spain!

15) Roaring Dragon, Shade Fafnir!

16) Dynamic Saber, Holy Valkyrie!

17) Legendary Tag Battle, Newbie's Vs Legends!

18) World Champion(s)

19) Venture To The Demon's Castle!

20) Darkness Roars, Belial Vs Asriel!
(Aug. 20, 2021  6:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 14) Journey To Spain!

15) Roaring Dragon, Shade Fafnir!

16) Legendary Tag Battle, Newbie's Vs Legends!

17) World Champion(s)

18) Venture To The Demon's Castle!

19) Darkness Roars, Belial Vs Asriel!

I wonder if nobody will remeber that the whole Fafnir thing is spin-stealing... Anyways, looking nice.
(Aug. 20, 2021  6:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 14) Journey To Spain!

15) Roaring Dragon, Shade Fafnir!

16) Dynamic Saber, Holy Valkyrie!

17) Legendary Tag Battle, Newbie's Vs Legends!

18) World Champion(s)

19) Venture To The Demon's Castle!

20) Darkness Roars, Belial Vs Asriel!

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Chapter 14 is very important to the plot (Not lying)
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heck yeah nice chapter jit 😏👌
wow adrian has some bad intentions 😤😤🤬👎
Chapter 15 is awesome!
(Aug. 21, 2021  7:12 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is awesome!

Nice Chapter Man.
But When Ethan Battles Austin
Ethan Vs Austin Sequence :
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(Ethan grabs his launcher and attaches Fallen Phoenix to his launcher)

Ethan: Go, Shoot!

(Ethan shoots Fafnir at Austin)

Austin: *Gasps*

???: Go, Shoot!

(Someone shoots their Bey before it hits Austin, Both Beys burst)

He said he launched Farfnir Isn't his bey is Phoenix not Farfnir.
Ummm... Didn't know where to post this but this is basically what Aeneas looks like:

The white parts pop out like roars burst stoppers
Chapter 16 is sus. (Did I already use that one?)
Thoughts, please Smile Tell me your fave parts too!