[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst: Matrix!

(Jun. 25, 2021  6:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: next chapter soon at around 2:00

i finally got an idea on what its gonna be on

Tip: Make it relate to the first chapter
Episode 2!
Opening! Beyblade Ceremony!

*Uriel and Shinito would be at the Bey Park, battling other kids there.*

Uriel: Go Ulysses!

Haden: Cmon, we got this!

*Ulysses would strike through the opposing beyblade, the beyblade would burst.*

Shinito: And with a Burst Finish, Uriel Nomura wins!

Uriel: YEAH! Me and Ulysses make a great team!

*Shinito's Tablet would get a notification* (Ting!)

Shinito: Hm? What's this? A video?

*Uriel would come over to watch*

Hanami: Hello all you Beyfans! As you all know, we have a Bey Arena right over where the Bey Park is! Go meet us over there where Valt Aoi will be giving a speech!

Uriel and Shinito: VALT AOI!? SPEECH?!

Shinito: We gotta go head over there bro!

Uriel: Yeah! Let's go!

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to the Bey Arena, before they saw Valt walking over there.*

Valt: Oh, hey you two!

Shinito and Uriel: Hey Valt!

Valt: I'm pretty nervous for my speech, but I know I'm gonna ace it!

Uriel: Yeah! Do it Valt!

Valt: Alright, I'll see you guys there!

Uriel and Shinito: We will too!

*Uriel and Shinito would walk over to the Bey Arena.*

*They would take their seats.*

Valt: Alright Bladers! You all are the New Generation! So I want you to give it your all and Let it Rip!

The Entire Crowd: Yeah!

Valt: There can only be one of you guys to topple the champion, but all of you can do it!

Uriel and Shinito: Yeah!!!

Valt: So give it your all and blade your spirits out, got it Bladers!

The Entire Crowd: YEAH!!

*Bax Noiji would be in one of the seats, with a hint of interest.*

Bax's Thoughts: If I topple the king, I can rule Beyblade and Valt can't even stop me!

Hanami: You heard that right Bey Fans! Valt Aoi just did an inspiring speech! Go out there and give it your all!

*Everyone would leave the arena.*

Bax: If I'm gonna defeat Valt, I'm gonna need to level up, which means I need a Quantum bey!

*Bax would walk off into the distance, with determination in his eyes.*

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to their respective homes.*

Uriel: That speech was awesome! It made me wanna go super ultra Matrix!

Shinito: Yeah! It really inspired alot of people! It made me even wanna make my own Quantum bey!

Uriel: Hey Shinito, could you help me do a Quantum shoot tomorrow? It's so cool and it'll help take me to the next level!

Shinito: Sure!

Uriel: Ok, see you tomorrow!

Shinito: See you!

*Uriel would head inside his house.*

Uriel: Hey Mom!

Mom: Hey sweetie! How was your day?

Uriel: It was so awesome! Valt had a speech and everything!

Mom: That's good! Did you know that your big brother just became a member of the Quantum 4?

Uriel: He did?! Awesome! I can't wait to battle him again!

Mom: He won't really have enough time to come and visit us though... 

Uriel: Aw man... Well, Goodnight mom!

Mom: Goodnight, Uriel.

*Uriel would enter his bed, with his beyblade beside him.*

Uriel: Goodnight, Ulysses! Tomorrow we'll go super duper Matrix together!

this was shorter than my other chapters

(Jun. 25, 2021  7:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 2!
Opening! Beyblade Ceremony!

*Uriel and Shinito would be at the Bey Park, battling other kids there.*

Uriel: Go Ulysses!

Haden: Cmon, we got this!

*Ulysses would strike through the opposing beyblade, the beyblade would burst.*

Shinito: And with a Burst Finish, Uriel Nomura wins!

Uriel: YEAH! Me and Ulysses make a great team!

*Shinito's Tablet would get a notification* (Ting!)

Shinito: Hm? What's this? A video?

*Uriel would come over to watch*

Hanami: Hello all you Beyfans! As you all know, we have a Bey Arena right over where the Bey Park is! Go meet us over there where Valt Aoi will be giving a speech!

Uriel and Shinito: VALT AOI!? SPEECH?!

Shinito: We gotta go head over there bro!

Uriel: Yeah! Let's go!

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to the Bey Arena, before they saw Valt walking over there.*

Valt: Oh, hey you two!

Shinito and Uriel: Hey Valt!

Valt: I'm pretty nervous for my speech, but I know I'm gonna ace it!

Uriel: Yeah! Do it Valt!

Valt: Alright, I'll see you guys there!

Uriel and Shinito: We will too!

*Uriel and Shinito would walk over to the Bey Arena.*

*They would take their seats.*

Valt: Alright Bladers! You all are the New Generation! So I want you to give it your all and Let it Rip!

The Entire Crowd: Yeah!

Valt: There can only be one of you guys to topple the champion, but all of you can do it!

Uriel and Shinito: Yeah!!!

Valt: So give it your all and blade your spirits out, got it Bladers!

The Entire Crowd: YEAH!!

*Bax Noiji would be in one of the seats, with a hint of interest.*

Bax's Thoughts: If I topple the king, I can rule Beyblade and Valt can't even stop me!

Hanami: You heard that right Bey Fans! Valt Aoi just did an inspiring speech! Go out there and give it your all!

*Everyone would leave the arena.*

Bax: If I'm gonna defeat Valt, I'm gonna need to level up, which means I need a Quantum bey!

*Bax would walk off into the distance, with determination in his eyes.*

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to their respective homes.*

Uriel: That speech was awesome! It made me wanna go super ultra Matrix!

Shinito: Yeah! It really inspired alot of people! It made me even wanna make my own Quantum bey!

Uriel: Hey Shinito, could you help me do a Quantum shoot tomorrow? It's so cool and it'll help take me to the next level!

Shinito: Sure!

Uriel: Ok, see you tomorrow!

Shinito: See you!

*Uriel would head inside his house.*

Uriel: Hey Mom!

Mom: Hey sweetie! How was your day?

Uriel: It was so awesome! Valt had a speech and everything!

Mom: That's good! You know, there is a district tournament coming up, right?

Uriel: There is?

Mom: Yup! Do you wanna enter it?

Uriel: Of course! That would be awesome!

Mom: Alright, good night Uriel.

Uriel: Goodnight mom!

*Uriel would enter his bed, with his beyblade beside him.*

Uriel: Goodnight, Ulysses! Tomorrow we'll go super duper Matrix together!

this was shorter than my other chapters

chapter*

Episode 3 Preview!

Uriel: So... you have to strengthen your bond! Alright!

Uriel: Wait, Bax has a new beyblade?!

Uriel: I'll take it on anyday!

Next time on Beyblade Burst: Matrix!

King of Snakes and Dragons! Dominate Basilisk!
(Jun. 25, 2021  7:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 2!
Opening! Beyblade Ceremony!

*Uriel and Shinito would be at the Bey Park, battling other kids there.*

Uriel: Go Ulysses!

Haden: Cmon, we got this!

*Ulysses would strike through the opposing beyblade, the beyblade would burst.*

Shinito: And with a Burst Finish, Uriel Nomura wins!

Uriel: YEAH! Me and Ulysses make a great team!

*Shinito's Tablet would get a notification* (Ting!)

Shinito: Hm? What's this? A video?

*Uriel would come over to watch*

Hanami: Hello all you Beyfans! As you all know, we have a Bey Arena right over where the Bey Park is! Go meet us over there where Valt Aoi will be giving a speech!

Uriel and Shinito: VALT AOI!? SPEECH?!

Shinito: We gotta go head over there bro!

Uriel: Yeah! Let's go!

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to the Bey Arena, before they saw Valt walking over there.*

Valt: Oh, hey you two!

Shinito and Uriel: Hey Valt!

Valt: I'm pretty nervous for my speech, but I know I'm gonna ace it!

Uriel: Yeah! Do it Valt!

Valt: Alright, I'll see you guys there!

Uriel and Shinito: We will too!

*Uriel and Shinito would walk over to the Bey Arena.*

*They would take their seats.*

Valt: Alright Bladers! You all are the New Generation! So I want you to give it your all and Let it Rip!

The Entire Crowd: Yeah!

Valt: There can only be one of you guys to topple the champion, but all of you can do it!

Uriel and Shinito: Yeah!!!

Valt: So give it your all and blade your spirits out, got it Bladers!

The Entire Crowd: YEAH!!

*Bax Noiji would be in one of the seats, with a hint of interest.*

Bax's Thoughts: If I topple the king, I can rule Beyblade and Valt can't even stop me!

Hanami: You heard that right Bey Fans! Valt Aoi just did an inspiring speech! Go out there and give it your all!

*Everyone would leave the arena.*

Bax: If I'm gonna defeat Valt, I'm gonna need to level up, which means I need a Quantum bey!

*Bax would walk off into the distance, with determination in his eyes.*

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to their respective homes.*

Uriel: That speech was awesome! It made me wanna go super ultra Matrix!

Shinito: Yeah! It really inspired alot of people! It made me even wanna make my own Quantum bey!

Uriel: Hey Shinito, could you help me do a Quantum shoot tomorrow? It's so cool and it'll help take me to the next level!

Shinito: Sure!

Uriel: Ok, see you tomorrow!

Shinito: See you!

*Uriel would head inside his house.*

Uriel: Hey Mom!

Mom: Hey sweetie! How was your day?

Uriel: It was so awesome! Valt had a speech and everything!

Mom: That's good! You know, there is a district tournament coming up, right?

Uriel: There is?

Mom: Yup! Do you wanna enter it?

Uriel: Of course! That would be awesome!

Mom: Alright, good night Uriel.

Uriel: Goodnight mom!

*Uriel would enter his bed, with his beyblade beside him.*

Uriel: Goodnight, Ulysses! Tomorrow we'll go super duper Matrix together!

this was shorter than my other chapters

(Jun. 25, 2021  7:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 2!
Opening! Beyblade Ceremony!

*Uriel and Shinito would be at the Bey Park, battling other kids there.*

Uriel: Go Ulysses!

Haden: Cmon, we got this!

*Ulysses would strike through the opposing beyblade, the beyblade would burst.*

Shinito: And with a Burst Finish, Uriel Nomura wins!

Uriel: YEAH! Me and Ulysses make a great team!

*Shinito's Tablet would get a notification* (Ting!)

Shinito: Hm? What's this? A video?

*Uriel would come over to watch*

Hanami: Hello all you Beyfans! As you all know, we have a Bey Arena right over where the Bey Park is! Go meet us over there where Valt Aoi will be giving a speech!

Uriel and Shinito: VALT AOI!? SPEECH?!

Shinito: We gotta go head over there bro!

Uriel: Yeah! Let's go!

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to the Bey Arena, before they saw Valt walking over there.*

Valt: Oh, hey you two!

Shinito and Uriel: Hey Valt!

Valt: I'm pretty nervous for my speech, but I know I'm gonna ace it!

Uriel: Yeah! Do it Valt!

Valt: Alright, I'll see you guys there!

Uriel and Shinito: We will too!

*Uriel and Shinito would walk over to the Bey Arena.*

*They would take their seats.*

Valt: Alright Bladers! You all are the New Generation! So I want you to give it your all and Let it Rip!

The Entire Crowd: Yeah!

Valt: There can only be one of you guys to topple the champion, but all of you can do it!

Uriel and Shinito: Yeah!!!

Valt: So give it your all and blade your spirits out, got it Bladers!

The Entire Crowd: YEAH!!

*Bax Noiji would be in one of the seats, with a hint of interest.*

Bax's Thoughts: If I topple the king, I can rule Beyblade and Valt can't even stop me!

Hanami: You heard that right Bey Fans! Valt Aoi just did an inspiring speech! Go out there and give it your all!

*Everyone would leave the arena.*

Bax: If I'm gonna defeat Valt, I'm gonna need to level up, which means I need a Quantum bey!

*Bax would walk off into the distance, with determination in his eyes.*

*Uriel and Shinito would be walking to their respective homes.*

Uriel: That speech was awesome! It made me wanna go super ultra Matrix!

Shinito: Yeah! It really inspired alot of people! It made me even wanna make my own Quantum bey!

Uriel: Hey Shinito, could you help me do a Quantum shoot tomorrow? It's so cool and it'll help take me to the next level!

Shinito: Sure!

Uriel: Ok, see you tomorrow!

Shinito: See you!

*Uriel would head inside his house.*

Uriel: Hey Mom!

Mom: Hey sweetie! How was your day?

Uriel: It was so awesome! Valt had a speech and everything!

Mom: That's good! You know, there is a district tournament coming up, right?

Uriel: There is?

Mom: Yup! Do you wanna enter it?

Uriel: Of course! That would be awesome!

Mom: Alright, good night Uriel.

Uriel: Goodnight mom!

*Uriel would enter his bed, with his beyblade beside him.*

Uriel: Goodnight, Ulysses! Tomorrow we'll go super duper Matrix together!

this was shorter than my other chapters

chapter*

Episode 3 Preview!

Uriel: So... you have to strengthen your bond! Alright!

Uriel: Wait, Bax has a new beyblade?!

Uriel: I'll take it on anyday!

Next time on Beyblade Burst: Matrix!

King of Snakes and Dragons! Dominate Basilisk!

Can't really rate it now but good job this has potential I'm exited to see what this will turn into
thanks dont worry the battles will get even more intese
Great work!
episode 3 is gonna be out tomorrow or later on today

alright thanks
Episode 3!
King of Snakes and Dragons! Dominate Basilisk!
*It was morning, and Uriel was at the Bey Park with Shinito, trying to do a Quantum Shoot.*

Uriel: Go Shoot!

Shinito: Still no Quantum Shoot...

Uriel: Aw man! It's so hard to unlock...

Shinito: Maybe you need to start talking to your bey more often.

Uriel: Talk to my bey?! What?!

Shinito: Valt used to do it all the time, and it helped him come up with strategies and win battles more often!

Uriel: Maybe it'll work!

*Uriel would hold up his Bey* ULYSSES!

*Nothing happened..*

Uriel: ...

Shinito: Try doing it again!

Uriel: Fine... *He'd Hold up his Bey, again* Ulysses!

*They'd try many, many more times to unlock the Quantum Shoot, but it still wasn't working. Meanwhile, at a nearby alleyway, Bax and his gang were lurking, searching for a way to evolve his bey.*

Bax: I gotta evolve my bey if I wanna defeat Valt, so does anyone got an idea where to do that?

*Everyone would seem to be silent, instead of his right hand man, Morgon, who would be raising his hand.*

Morgon: Maybe we can go ask that old guy over there? *He'd point to the house of the man who originally created Quantum beys, Akio Nunsuma.*

Bax: Hmmm, alright gang you guys stay here, me and Morgon will go over there and ask him to evolve my bey, got it?

Everyone In The Gang: Yes sir!

*Bax and Morgon would walk up to Akio's house.*

*Morgon would knock on the door three times.*

Akio: Hello there! What can I do for you two?

Morgon: Well, only one of us need something, my boss Bax here needs to evolve his bey.

*Bax would hold his bey out to Akio.*

Morgon: So will you help us?

Akio: Sure! A little boy came here a couple days ago asking for the same thing!

Bax's Thoughts: A little boy? Wait...

*Akio would lead them to the 3D printing station.*

*Bax would sit down at the 3D printer* I'll take it from here, old man.

Akio: Oh.. ok.

*Montage through Bax making his new Quantum beyblade.*

Bax: It's finally done! Dominate Basilisk!

Morgon: Awesome bey, boss! We just need someone to test it on...

Bax: I know exactly who!

*Back to Uriel and Shinito, where they were tired of training all day.*

Uriel: Argh... I don't think... I can't do a Quantum launch... right now...

Shinito: *grunts* Maybe we... did something wrong...

Uriel: Wait, who's that?

*Bax and Morgon would come walking up to them.*

Bax: Uriel Nomura and Shinito Kamaro! It's a pleasure to see you two again!

Uriel: Grr... Aren't you that guy that broke my Beyblade, AND almost stole Shinito's beyblade?!

Bax: Well, at least he got it back! Anyways, I've got a new Beyblade, and it's called Dominate Basilisk!

Uriel: A new beyblade? Well, we're gonna win this thing!

Bax's Thoughts: This kid is something else...

*They would get in their places around the stadium.*

Shinito: I'll r-

Morgon: Outta the way, punk!

*Morgon would push Shinito out of the way.*

Morgon: Due to Bax's rules, we will not inspec-

Bax: As a matter of fact, we can inspect each other's beyblades.

Morgon: So be it! Inpect each others beyblades!

Uriel's Thoughts: Hmmm, Basilisk is a clockwise spinning defense type. It has a metal ball tip that helps it come back from opponents attacks, and its layer has ridges that deflect the enemy's attacks. It'll be tough to break this beyblade's defenses, but its worth a try!

Bax's Thoughts: The little squirt is resilient, I'll give him that. He made a new bey... it looks like an attack type with a rubber flat tip that helps it go fast and attack hard. This'll be a piece of cake, however!

Morgon: First Battle! Ready, and set!

Uriel and Bax: 3! 2! 1! Let it... RIP!!

Bax: Take the center, Basilisk!

*Basilisk would go straight for the center.*

Uriel: Go Ulysses! Attack, attack, and attack!!

*Ulysses would repeatedly attack Basilisk. It looked like it was doing nothing, however.

Bax: You're gonna need more than those puny attacks to defeat me! Basilisk!

*Basilisk would get set up the stadium by an attack from Ulysses.*

Bax: Under Counter!

*Basilisk's Metal ball tip would stick in, it would start charging towards Ulysses.*

Bax: Burst it!

*Basilisk would make fierce contact with Ulysses, Ulysses would burst.*

Morgon: With a score of 2-0, Bax Noiji wins!

Uriel: Aw man! Again, this time I'll definitely win!

Bax: Get lost, kid. I defeated you fair and square. Cmon Morgon, let's go meet up with the gang.

Morgon: Right behind you, boss!

Uriel: Grrrr! I want a rematch!!

Shinito: Chill out dude, you need to strategize if you wanna win!

Uriel: Strategize? What's that?

*Shinito would put it hand over his face in disbelief*

*A strange couple of people would come towards Uriel and Shinito, one had cyan and green attire, the other had gold  and pink attire, and looked much older than the other.*

*Uriel and Shinito would look confused.*

Uriel: Uhh, who are you two?

Aria: I'm Aria, and this is my little sister, Nora!

Nora: Hello!

Uriel: Hi, Aria...

Shinito: Uriel, snap out of it!

Aria: We came when we saw that 15 year old teen win against you. It was pretty rough!

Nora: Yeah!

Aria: So we decided to come here and help you with some training, so when you encounter him again it won't be the same!

Uriel: Oh, cool! But it's getting pretty late, we should go to our homes!

Aria: Alright, see you two tomorrow!

Shinito: See you!

Uriel: Bye, Aria...

*Uriel and Shinito went home.*

*Uriel would go up to his room.*

Uriel: Alright Ulysses! We'll go Matrix tomorrow!!

Episode 4 Preview!

Uriel: Training for a Quantum shoot? This'll be a piece of cake!

Uriel: Wait, Aria's got a Quantum bey as well? This'll be so much fun!

Uriel: All ready for a rematch against Bax!

Next episode of Beyblade Burst Matrix!

Super Training! Master The Quantum Shoot!

3, 2, 1!
Let it RIP!!
Hey, could I maybe submit a character? I gave an idea for one
I like it (that's not to much to hate, it's the beginning so anything can be blamed on it). I like how the story starts off and how it went (for now).

Pro Tip: use spoilers (the things that when you tap it shows whats inside)
(Edited: you probably don't know how, I forgot so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯)
lol yeah i dont

i might take a break after i post episode 5

or the first arc
(Jun. 27, 2021  2:30 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: lol yeah i dont

i might take a break after i post episode 5

or the first arc

i'd say about 50-52

(Jun. 27, 2021  4:03 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Hey, could I maybe submit a character? I gave an idea for one

sure

Episode 4!
Super Training! Master The Quantum Shoot!

*It was a bright Morning in El Astro, and Uriel was walking down the sidewalk, polishing his bey with a piece of cloth.*

Uriel: Don't worry, Ulysses! We'll master the Quantum Shoot today and defeat Bax!

*Ulysses would sparkle in agreement.*

*Shinito would come over by Uriel's side.*

Uriel: Oh hey Shinito!

Shinito: Hey. Aria wants us to go over to the Bey Park for some training!

Uriel: Oh yeah! To unlock the Quantum shoot!!

*Shinito would nod.*

Shinito: So what are we waiting for? Lets go!

Uriel: Yeah!

*Uriel and Shinito would go over to the Bey Park.*

Aria: Hey guys!

Uriel and Shinito: Hey Aria! What's up?

Aria: So me and Nora were recently studying...

Uriel: Alright...

Aria: ...and we figured out that a Quantum Shoot depends on your launching strength, and the bond with your bey.

Nora: Mhm!

Shinito: And?

Aria: So I've decided that we should do some training to test your strength! And at the end we'll do a battle!

Uriel: A battle?! Aw yeah, lets do this!

*They would go to Aria's house.*

Aria: I have a training area in my backyard! That will help you learn a Quantum Shoot in no time!

Uriel: Cool!

*Aria would lead the gang to her backyard.*

Uriel: Whoa! This is awesome!

Shinito: It even has a Beystadium!

Aria: Uh huh! So lets get to training!

Uriel: Right!

*There would be a rope attached to a tree, a weight lifting area, and a core/leg exercising area! Uriel would go over to the launching area.*

Uriel: Alright, lets go... *He would grab the rope.* Three, two, one, Let it RIP!

Uriel: Let's try this again... 3, 2, 1, Let it RIP!!

*After another 27 let-it-rips, he still wouldn't be strong enough to break the rope.*

Uriel: Grrrr, *He'd grab the rope once more.* I'm... gonna... go... MATRIX!!! *He'd rip so hard, the rope would break.*

Shinito: Wow Uriel, looks like you're getting the hang of this!

Nora: Yeah! Not even our dad could break it.

Aria: Nice job Uriel!

Uriel: Heh heh... thanks. So, you got another rope?

*The whole group would bellow in laughter.*

*Uriel would cuff his hands, with his bey in the middle.*

Uriel: Don't worry Ulysses, we'll go super duper Matrix together!

*Ulysses would glow.*

*Valt would be going on a run on the sidewalk. He'd hear the sound of people training, then he'd go over to take a peek over the wooden gate around Aria's house.*

Valt's Thoughts: Maybe I should go help...

*Valt would hop over the gate.*

The Whole Gang: Valt Aoi?!?!

*They would all rush over to him.*

Uriel: Hey Valt! What are you doing over here?

Valt: I heard you guys training, and I thought, why not tag along?

Shinito: Cool!

*They would all sit down.*

Valt: So you guys are training?

Uriel: Yeah! So I can unlock the Quantum Shoot and defeat Bax!

Valt: Bax, huh? He must have got a new beyblade! Akio told me.

Uriel: Yeah! I want to defeat him for revenge!

Valt: Hmmm. Ok! Hey Uriel, I need to tell you something in your ear!

Uriel: Ok!

*Valt would whisper something in Uriel's ear.*

Shinito: What did he whisper in your ear?

Uriel: Nothin' much.

*Shinito would feel absolutely stupefied.*

Uriel: Alright Aria, can we battle now?

Aria: Sure! I think we did enough training.

*They would go over to the Bey Stadium.*

Aria: Meet my Quantum Bey, Shine Aurora!

Uriel: Wow! Awesome! But I'll defeat it with my Pursuit Ulysses!

Shinito: First Battle! Ready, and Set!

*Uriel would get a brief memory of Valt whispering in his ear.*

Valt (Whispering): Do your best and give it your all in every battle! Talk to your bey!

*The memory would end.*

Uriel: Ulysses... we can do this!

*Uriel's resonance would flare up.*

Uriel and Aria: 3, 2, 1! Let it...

*Uriel would gain an immense boost in power!*

Uriel: RIP!!!!!!

*Uriel would pull off a Quantum Shoot. Finally!*

Shinito: Did he just do a-

Valt: Good job Uriel! You nailed it!

Uriel: YEAH! I did a Quantum Shoot!!

Aria: Nice job! But no matter, Aurora, take the center!

Uriel: Ulysses, don't let her get to the center!

*Ulysses would aggressively attack Aurora before she could get to the center.*

Aria: Argh... Aurora, take the center once more!

*Ulysses would attack Aurora again, cancelling out Aurora.*

Aria: Change of plans! Aurora! Shining Spiral!

*Aurora would spiral around the stadium, engulfed in a pink flame.*

Uriel: That's exactly what I thought you would do! Ulysses!

*Ulysses' avatar would glow from the beyblade.*

Uriel: Clash Counter!

*After Ulysses got hit, it would get sent back, do a U turn, and return the favor by delivering Aurora a counter strike, making it hit the wall and be sent flying out of the stadium.*

Shinito: With a Ring out finish, Uriel Nomura wins the match!

Uriel: YEAH! We totally went Matrix, Ulysses!

*Ulysses would sparkle in agreement.*

Aria: That was totally awesome! But next time, me and Aurora will be winning!

Uriel: In your dreams! Me and Ulysses will totally knock you out of the park!

Valt's Thoughts: Amazing, Uriel!

Nora: Do you think your ready to rematch that mean guy again?

Uriel: Totally! Hey guys, you wanna battle!

Everyone: Yeah!

Everyone: 3, 2, 1, Let it RIP!!!

*Morgon and 2 other grunts from Bax's gang would secretly be watching and listening from behind the gate. They would go to the alleyway where their hideout was.*

Morgon: *huff* Boss, we got news!

Bax: Wut is it?

Morgon: Ya know the kid that ya defeated yesterday? Well, he's gotten better.

Bax: He what? Well, I'ma go test this myself. *He'd start to head to the Bey Park.* Tell them that I wanna issue a challenge at the Bey Park!

Morgon: You got it, boss!

*Morgon would start running to Aria's house. He'd jump the gate.*

Uriel: Morgon? What are you doing here?

Shinito: Yeah, I thought you went away for good.

Morgon: Wanna say that again, little punk?

Shinito: YEAH! I thought you went away for good!

Morgon: I'll shatter your bey into pieces, just like my boss almost did-

Valt: Hey hey, settle down! Why'd you come here?

Morgon: Da boss wanted me to come over here 'cause he wanted to issue a challenge. Meet 'em tomorrow at the Bey Park.

Uriel: Got it! I'll totally defeat him with all the training that I got!

Shinito: Yeah! Serves him right!

Aria: You can do it!

Uriel: Alright, see you guys tomorrow!

Everyone (Except Morgon): Bye!

Morgon: Also you won't be defeating our boss anytime soon. So go ahead and try!

Uriel: I will defeat him! Right Ulysses!

*Ulysses would sparkle.*

Morgon: Whatever.

*Uriel would be walking home.*

Uriel: Ulysses, we can win tomorrow's match!!

Episode 5 Preview!

Uriel: Yeah Ulysses! We can totally win this!

Uriel: WOW! Cool, you can talk?! This is what Valt meant!

Uriel: We can definitely break through that defense! Go!

Next Episode of Beyblade Burst Matrix!

Burning Resilience! Pursuit Whip!
@BladekingX I don't really have time to rate it and give you feedback all I can say is this is amazing ngl I thought you we're gonna start out as a Rookie fanfic creator but your my level now lol
Here's my character.
Hope this is OK, hopefully no one has salamander already
(Jun. 27, 2021  9:21 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Here's my character.

Name: Santino Genji

Eye color: Orange

Hair color: White

Appearance: Santino has a tall muscular build similar to Xander Shakadera, he wears a plain grey shirt and a red and black coat over that. He wears a red glove on his left hand. He wears plain black pants and black and red shoe's.

Personality: Santino is very confident and determined. He can be a bit hot headed. He usually can be seen by himself because of this, though if you get to know him he's super nice and helpful.

Bey: Royal Salamander

Type: Balance

Matrix chip: Salamander - the Salamander chip features a red and gold dragon looking down with a blue S in the middle.

Matrix Ring: Royal - the Royal ring features 5 stationary blades in the shape of dragon heads. The run also features 5 moveable blades that can be locked into the stationary blades or be separate. The moveable 5 blades are designed like dragon heads as well. 5 blade mode looked like 5 large dragons well 10 blade mode looks like 10 normal/small dragon heads.

Plating: barrage - the barrage plating will cover 5 of the dragons with rubber when in 10 blade mode. Or in 5 blade mode it covers the end of the dragon's. The plating is fully rubber

Forge disc: Hyper - The hyper disc has a thick round design with 10 protrusions around the disc. The disc also features rubber chunks on the 10 protrusions.

Driver: warp: The warp driver features a flat-ish wide tip with 4 indents around that. The top part of the driver has a free spinning rubber ring.

Matrix excess: Omega - The omega excess locks into the bottom of the Royal layer, the omega excess adds a heavy amount of weight with the metal core and improves burst resistance 5x with the rubber bottom. The omega excess also has a feature where if it is launched really hard it will create a "roar" sound.

Modes:

5- the 5 blade mode is an attack based mode the 5 blades hit harder then when in 10 blade mode. The bey exhibits higher wind output in this mode as well.

10 - the 10 blade mode or the defense/stamina mode makes Salamander more of a circle shape. The beys hits are lighter and stamina is higher in this mode.

Special moves:

Royal guard - Royal guard uses ten blade mode and the free spinning ring on the driver to create a defense pattern that has incredible defense and stamina but no attack power.

Royal smash - in 5 blade mode salamander leans forward and hits the rubber ring on the stadium floor and shots its self at its opponent with crazy speed and power.

Up charge - in 10 blade mode with the plating on Salamander barrages the apposing bey with a bunch of attacks.

Royal upper - in 5 blade mode Salamander rides up the stadium slopes and smashes the other beyblade on the lower part of the layer.

Hope this is OK, hopefully no one has salamander already

Good to see you back on the WBO
(Jun. 27, 2021  9:23 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jun. 27, 2021  9:21 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Here's my character.

Name: Santino Genji

Eye color: Orange

Hair color: White

Appearance: Santino has a tall muscular build similar to Xander Shakadera, he wears a plain grey shirt and a red and black coat over that. He wears a red glove on his left hand. He wears plain black pants and black and red shoe's.

Personality: Santino is very confident and determined. He can be a bit hot headed. He usually can be seen by himself because of this, though if you get to know him he's super nice and helpful.

Bey: Royal Salamander

Type: Balance

Matrix chip: Salamander - the Salamander chip features a red and gold dragon looking down with a blue S in the middle.

Matrix Ring: Royal - the Royal ring features 5 stationary blades in the shape of dragon heads. The run also features 5 moveable blades that can be locked into the stationary blades or be separate. The moveable 5 blades are designed like dragon heads as well. 5 blade mode looked like 5 large dragons well 10 blade mode looks like 10 normal/small dragon heads.

Plating: barrage - the barrage plating will cover 5 of the dragons with rubber when in 10 blade mode. Or in 5 blade mode it covers the end of the dragon's. The plating is fully rubber

Forge disc: Hyper - The hyper disc has a thick round design with 10 protrusions around the disc. The disc also features rubber chunks on the 10 protrusions.

Driver: warp: The warp driver features a flat-ish wide tip with 4 indents around that. The top part of the driver has a free spinning rubber ring.

Matrix excess: Omega - The omega excess locks into the bottom of the Royal layer, the omega excess adds a heavy amount of weight with the metal core and improves burst resistance 5x with the rubber bottom. The omega excess also has a feature where if it is launched really hard it will create a "roar" sound.

Modes:

5- the 5 blade mode is an attack based mode the 5 blades hit harder then when in 10 blade mode. The bey exhibits higher wind output in this mode as well.

10 - the 10 blade mode or the defense/stamina mode makes Salamander more of a circle shape. The beys hits are lighter and stamina is higher in this mode.

Special moves:

Royal guard - Royal guard uses ten blade mode and the free spinning ring on the driver to create a defense pattern that has incredible defense and stamina but no attack power.

Royal smash - in 5 blade mode salamander leans forward and hits the rubber ring on the stadium floor and shots its self at its opponent with crazy speed and power.

Up charge - in 10 blade mode with the plating on Salamander barrages the apposing bey with a bunch of attacks.

Royal upper - in 5 blade mode Salamander rides up the stadium slopes and smashes the other beyblade on the lower part of the layer.

Hope this is OK, hopefully no one has salamander already

Good to see you back on the WBO

Glad to be back
lol, i went somewhere for a while but nice character your character can definitely be in my fanfic, i was looking for a new salamander owner lol
(Jun. 27, 2021  9:33 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: lol, i went somewhere for a while but nice character your character can definitely be in my fanfic, i was looking for a new salamander owner lol

Ah perfect lol
Name: Aria Soranora

Gender: Female

Age: 11

Birthday: June 18

Status: Deuteragonist

Characteristics: Aria is a medium height girl with a pink bun and silver eyes.  She has a silver vest with golden outlines on top of a magenta shirt with pink likes going across it. She also has black shorts and golden boots with pink outlines.

Personality: She is a friendly individual who always tries to forget about the past. She is also quite selfless, as she spent most of her day helping Uriel train to achieve the Quantum Shoot. She can be quite snappy, at some times, when people are being rude or dishonest.

Beyblade: Shining Aurora Swirl Balanced Harmonic+  Twirl

Type: Stamina

Parts:

Matrix Chip: Aurora - Aurora's chip looks like a golden maiden in pink outlines is looking to the left.

Matrix Ring: Shining - Shining has four rubber blades, able to drain the opponents spin, like Fafnir. It has a golden motif with pink and silver outlines all around it.

Forge Disc: Swirl - Swirl is a heavy disc, and it has 8 blades going to the left, increasing its KO resistance and grip to the stadium.

Performance Tip: Balanced - This is a golden, mobius-like tip (but the white, freespining part of the tip is pink, and is smaller) can increase the beyblade's counterattack potential, LAD, and overall defense.

Layer Plating: Harmonic - This layer plating has the exact amount of blades as the Shining ring (4 blades). It is rubber and increases its spin steal capability.

Matrix Excess: Twirl - Twirl is an excess that goes onto the forge disc, right above it. It is circular in shape. It is also rubber, and gold, and furthermore increases this beyblade's spin steal capability, but as an addition increases its overall stamina.

Special Moves:

Shining Spiral: Aurora ultilizes the Balanced performance tip to spiral around the stadium, usually dodging the opponents attacks, or increasing its own stamina due to the thin Matrix ring it has.

Shining Siphon: When Aurora gets hit by an attack, it bolts around the stadium and hits the opponent with almost all of its rubber, stealing a lot (or all) of its spin.

More Info Coming Later On In The Story!
@BladeKingX to do spoilers you need to do:
(spoiler) what you want there (/spoiler) but you use [] instead of ()
Also, how the platings work? Like, they stay on top or it's a frame for layers? The matrix excess stays between the layer and the forge disc? Or it connects both together? The plating has direct contact with the excess? Hope I'm not bothering
Well would you look at that, this story turned out a bit better than I thought. So, are there any slots left for an extra character?
(Jun. 28, 2021  11:57 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Well would you look at that, this story turned out a bit better than I thought. So, are there any slots left for an extra character?
yeah

(Jun. 28, 2021  11:08 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: @BladeKingX  to do spoilers you need to do:
(spoiler) what you want there (/spoiler) but you use [] instead of ()
Also, how the platings work? Like, they stay on top or it's a frame for layers? The matrix excess stays between the layer and the forge disc? Or it connects both together? The plating has direct contact with the excess? Hope I'm not bothering

the platings are on top of the Matrix rings. also ur not bothering!

they can be either: metal, plastic, or rubber. they give the beyblade more weight and give it more contact points at times

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the plating can have direct contact with the excess, if the excess from that beyblade is meant to be attached to the layer.

also i was sleeping and i just woke up so sorry that i couldn't answer ur questions later
Like this:

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Whatever u wanna say

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Replace () with []
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Whatever you wanna say

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ugh i cant do it

(spoiler) man [/spoiler]

next chapter at around 11:30


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