So this is the thread for my rewrite of beyblade burst legends. If a moderator could close the old thread that would be nice. I'll be rewriting it in a narrative style. It will also be closer to my original vision. Think of this as the snyder cut and the previous fanfic as the whedon cut. The Chapters will be longer, Characters will be more fleshed out and the tone will be a bit darker. Battles will be longer and more action packed. The chapters will be posted here.

Rankings:

(this takes place 5 years after DB)

1. Aiga Akaba

2. Valt Aoi

3. Shu Kurenai

4. Lui Shirosagi

5. Free De La Hoya

6. Xhaka Shakadera

7. Silas Karlisle

8. Zac Kaneguro

9. Fubuki Sumiye

10. Dante Koryu

11. Ken Midori

12. Daina Kurogami

13. Wakiya Murasaki

14. Amane Kusaba

15. Rantaro Kiyama

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 hi

I look forward too this

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

I look forward too this

*to this*

Jokes aside, Thank you.

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 hi

I look forward too this

*to this*

Jokes aside, Thank you.

NP

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview

"A tournament?" Eijiro asks

"yep" Tsukiya replies

Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.

"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims

"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly

"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts

"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.

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 hi

Is shun Kurenai in this?

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Creator/owner of beyblade burst apocalypse.
Maiden will awaken and destroy genesis once more!
i have returned

Is shun Kurenai in this?

idk. might change later on

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 hi

Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview

"A tournament?" Eijiro asks

"yep" Tsukiya replies

Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.

"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims

"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly

"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts

"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.

Nice!!!!

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview

"A tournament?" Eijiro asks

"yep" Tsukiya replies

Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.

"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims

"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly

"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts

"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.

Nice!!!!

Thank you

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 hi

Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview

"A tournament?" Eijiro asks

"yep" Tsukiya replies

Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.

"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims

"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly

"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts

"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.

Huh, this looks somewhat interesting. Also I wanna ask: Is there a Character Contest for this?

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview

"A tournament?" Eijiro asks

"yep" Tsukiya replies

Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.

"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims

"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly

"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts

"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.

Huh, this looks somewhat interesting. Also I wanna ask: Is there a Character Contest for this?

nope. I feel like being forced to include other people's Oc's would derail the narrative I'm trying to create

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Updates: Chapter 1 is almost done. Aiga is champion rather than Valt.

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 hi

I LOVE THIS SEASONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

I LOVE THIS SEASONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

I haven't posted a chapter yet.

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 hi

ik i loved the old season

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like the other season before you revamped it

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

ik i loved the old season

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like the other season before you revamped it

oh ok.

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 hi

Update: sorry for necroposting my old thread. Episode 1 will be out tomorrow

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 hi

Update: sorry for necroposting my old thread. Episode 1 will be out tomorrow

You can't necropost your own thread. You just revive it.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Ok so turns out i couldn't get episode 1 out. So I'll just post a list of beys that'll be featured in the series. I promise episode 1 will be out soon.

Eijiro Takahashi: Tidal Evenus
Tsuikya Aizawa: Absolute Thestius
Akhito Suzuki: Sword Ares
Aiko Suzuki: Shield Athena
Lee Yamamoto: Stride Leviathan
Aiger Akabane: Arrow Achilles
Valt Aoi: Apex Valkyrie
Shu Kurenai: Flare Spriggan
Lui Shirosagi: Strato Longinus
Free De La Hoya: Absorb Fafnir
Xhaka Shakadera: Unbound Xcalibur
Silas Karlisle: Basalt Satan
Zac Kaneguro: Kepler Zeus
Fubuki Sumiye: Razor Forneus
Dante Koryu: Scale Dragon
Ken Midori: Chained Kerbeus
Daigo Kurogami: Grave Deathscyther
Wakiya Murasaki: Maelstrom Wyvern
Amane Kusaba: Wall Ashura
Rantaro Kiyama: Blitz Raganarok

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 hi

So I haven't posted anything about this in a while, so yeah, i'm just correcting a few errors and de-cringing some of the dialogue right now. In the mean time here's another preview:

Chapter 1: The Journey Begins Preview #2


“On the Blue corner, we have the challenger trying to reclaim his champion title, the wonder boy himself, VALT AOI AND APEX VALKYRIE!!! And on the Red Corner, we have the current champion, who claimed this title almost 9 YEARS AGO, AIGA AKABA AND ARROW ACHILLES!!!!!!!” Hanami Exclaims

Valt walks in and picks up a mic.

“Don’t worry everyone I won’t fall this time.”

No one laughs

“Oh yeah, a lot of the people in the room weren’t born when the incident happened, it all happened when I entered th-”

“Yeah yeah, No one needs to hear your stories Valt. They’re here for the Battle” Aiga “rudely” interrupts

Aiga and Valt walk to the center of the room and shake hands. Valt then smirks and walks away.

“3,2,1, GO SHOOT!!!!!!”

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 hi

Can’t wait to see maiden in action again.
Can you please change my character from shun kurenai to Eda kurenai

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Creator/owner of beyblade burst apocalypse.
Maiden will awaken and destroy genesis once more!
i have returned

Can’t wait to see maiden in action again.
Can you please change my character from shun kurenai to Eda kurenai

Yo, to be honest, I'm not even sure if Shun/Eda will even be in the fanfic

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 hi

So this looks very nice I would think season one will be epic and this might end up in one of my favorite threads