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Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 03, 2021
So this is the thread for my rewrite of beyblade burst legends. If a moderator could close the old thread that would be nice. I'll be rewriting it in a narrative style. It will also be closer to my original vision. Think of this as the snyder cut and the previous fanfic as the whedon cut. The Chapters will be longer, Characters will be more fleshed out and the tone will be a bit darker. Battles will be longer and more action packed. The chapters will be posted here.
Rankings:
(this takes place 5 years after DB)
1. Aiga Akaba
2. Valt Aoi
3. Shu Kurenai
4. Lui Shirosagi
5. Free De La Hoya
6. Xhaka Shakadera
7. Silas Karlisle
8. Zac Kaneguro
9. Fubuki Sumiye
10. Dante Koryu
11. Ken Midori
12. Daina Kurogami
13. Wakiya Murasaki
14. Amane Kusaba
15. Rantaro Kiyama
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - LegendJustice - Jun. 03, 2021
I look forward too this
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 03, 2021
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:23 PM)JJustice Wrote: I look forward too this
*to this*
Jokes aside, Thank you.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - LegendJustice - Jun. 03, 2021
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:24 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:(Jun. 03, 2021 10:23 PM)JJustice Wrote: I look forward too this
*to this*
Jokes aside, Thank you.
NP
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 03, 2021
Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview
"A tournament?" Eijiro asks
"yep" Tsukiya replies
Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.
"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims
"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly
"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts
"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - kai edits - Jun. 03, 2021
Is shun Kurenai in this?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 03, 2021
(Jun. 03, 2021 11:07 PM)kai edits Wrote: Is shun Kurenai in this?
idk. might change later on
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - LegendJustice - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:42 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview
"A tournament?" Eijiro asks
"yep" Tsukiya replies
Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.
"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims
"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly
"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts
"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.
Nice!!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 05, 2021
(Jun. 04, 2021 4:07 AM)JJustice Wrote:(Jun. 03, 2021 10:42 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview
"A tournament?" Eijiro asks
"yep" Tsukiya replies
Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.
"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims
"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly
"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts
"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.
Nice!!!!
Thank you
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - PinkRose - Jun. 05, 2021
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:42 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview
"A tournament?" Eijiro asks
"yep" Tsukiya replies
Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.
"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims
"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly
"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts
"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.
Huh, this looks somewhat interesting. Also I wanna ask: Is there a Character Contest for this?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 05, 2021 1:18 PM)PinkRose Wrote:(Jun. 03, 2021 10:42 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Chapter 1: The Journey Begins preview
"A tournament?" Eijiro asks
"yep" Tsukiya replies
Eijiro looks at Tsukiya, Tsukiya looks back at him.
"Look out world, There's a new champion in town!" Eijiro exclaims
"It's a district tournament" Tsukiya replies bluntly
"Oh. I guess the district is getting a new champion!" Eijiro shouts
"Good luck with that" a boy standing in the shadows replies.
Huh, this looks somewhat interesting. Also I wanna ask: Is there a Character Contest for this?
nope. I feel like being forced to include other people's Oc's would derail the narrative I'm trying to create
Updates: Chapter 1 is almost done. Aiga is champion rather than Valt.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - GenesisBlader - Jun. 25, 2021
I LOVE THIS SEASONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 25, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 4:36 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: I LOVE THIS SEASONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
I haven't posted a chapter yet.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - GenesisBlader - Jun. 25, 2021
ik i loved the old season
like the other season before you revamped it
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 27, 2021
(Jun. 25, 2021 12:37 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: ik i loved the old season
like the other season before you revamped it
oh ok.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Nov. 25, 2021
Update: sorry for necroposting my old thread. Episode 1 will be out tomorrow
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - Hollowmind13 - Nov. 25, 2021
(Nov. 25, 2021 5:20 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Update: sorry for necroposting my old thread. Episode 1 will be out tomorrow
You can't necropost your own thread. You just revive it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Dec. 02, 2021
Ok so turns out i couldn't get episode 1 out. So I'll just post a list of beys that'll be featured in the series. I promise episode 1 will be out soon.
Eijiro Takahashi: Tidal Evenus
Tsuikya Aizawa: Absolute Thestius
Akhito Suzuki: Sword Ares
Aiko Suzuki: Shield Athena
Lee Yamamoto: Stride Leviathan
Aiger Akabane: Arrow Achilles
Valt Aoi: Apex Valkyrie
Shu Kurenai: Flare Spriggan
Lui Shirosagi: Strato Longinus
Free De La Hoya: Absorb Fafnir
Xhaka Shakadera: Unbound Xcalibur
Silas Karlisle: Basalt Satan
Zac Kaneguro: Kepler Zeus
Fubuki Sumiye: Razor Forneus
Dante Koryu: Scale Dragon
Ken Midori: Chained Kerbeus
Daigo Kurogami: Grave Deathscyther
Wakiya Murasaki: Maelstrom Wyvern
Amane Kusaba: Wall Ashura
Rantaro Kiyama: Blitz Raganarok
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jan. 01, 2022
So I haven't posted anything about this in a while, so yeah, i'm just correcting a few errors and de-cringing some of the dialogue right now. In the mean time here's another preview:
Chapter 1: The Journey Begins Preview #2
“On the Blue corner, we have the challenger trying to reclaim his champion title, the wonder boy himself, VALT AOI AND APEX VALKYRIE!!! And on the Red Corner, we have the current champion, who claimed this title almost 9 YEARS AGO, AIGA AKABA AND ARROW ACHILLES!!!!!!!” Hanami Exclaims
Valt walks in and picks up a mic.
“Don’t worry everyone I won’t fall this time.”
No one laughs
“Oh yeah, a lot of the people in the room weren’t born when the incident happened, it all happened when I entered th-”
“Yeah yeah, No one needs to hear your stories Valt. They’re here for the Battle” Aiga “rudely” interrupts
Aiga and Valt walk to the center of the room and shake hands. Valt then smirks and walks away.
“3,2,1, GO SHOOT!!!!!!”
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - kai edits - Jan. 02, 2022
Can’t wait to see maiden in action again.
Can you please change my character from shun kurenai to Eda kurenai
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - SacredXcalibur - Jan. 02, 2022
(Jan. 02, 2022 3:05 AM)kai edits Wrote: Can’t wait to see maiden in action again.
Can you please change my character from shun kurenai to Eda kurenai
Yo, to be honest, I'm not even sure if Shun/Eda will even be in the fanfic
RE: Beyblade Burst: Legends (Rewritten) - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 04, 2022
So this looks very nice I would think season one will be epic and this might end up in one of my favorite threads