Wow this thread has been dead (not psychically) for a month now

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If you want to see my irl face pixelated, click the following spoiler

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Ok, I trolled you, but the next one is real

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You're a pervert for wanting to find my irl face pixelated!

I'm supppppeeerrrr sorry!
I just can't find time!
New deadline (for me) DECEMBER:p

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ok, if your sure

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If you want to see my irl face pixelated, click the following spoiler

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Ok, I trolled you, but the next one is real

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You're a pervert for wanting to find my irl face pixelated!

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King Nebula! The Lord of Destruction!


Unknown Location:

*Lightning sounds*

Unknown: “Isn’t the pitter patter of the rain just beautiful?”
Servant: “Y-yes sir.”
Unknown: “You know what would go well with it?”
Servant: “W-what, my liege?”
Unknown: “My company’s newest creation; and you know when I want it?”
Servant: “W-when sir?”
Unknown: “NOW!”
Servant: “It isn’t done yet, m-my king. It will take at lea-”
Unknown: “SILENCE!”
*Servant falls to the ground and starts shivering*
Servant; “I am very sorry King Nebula! Please, please-”
King Nebula: “I SAID SILENCE!”
*King Nebula’s voice echoes around the room, everything is silent except for the slight dripping of the rain on the window*
King Nebula: “Now, get me a drink.”
Servant: “Y-yes sir.”
*Servant hurries out of the room*


Raging Bulls Training Center

*Scene cuts to a battle between Boa and Acheros*

Both: “Aaaaaaaaaaaa!!!”
Acheros: “Destroy them Aeneas! Phantom Barrage!”
*Aeneas hits Bahamut with a barrage of speedy attacks*
*Bahamut dodges but gets hit (with another one) into the wall!*
Boa: “No! Bahamut”
Acheros: “Go Aeneas!”
*Aeneas glows black*
Acheros: “This feeling, it’s not good.”
Corrupted Aeneas: “Yes it is!”
Acheros: “No. IT’S NOOOOOTTTT!”
*Acheros falls to his knees*
Boa: “Acheros, are you okay?”
*Acheros looks up and his eyes are glowing purple; Boa edges back*
Boa: “Umm.. Shu? Acheros is acting weird.”
*Acheros’s head snaps back up*
Acheros: “Wha-what happened”




Dream

Unknown: Go! DEMON!
Acheros: No! Aeneas!
*Shattering sound*

Unknown: “HAHAHAHAHA!”

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I FINALLY UPDATED!
YAY!
DragonBladerZ

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Your writing style is nice!!!!

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Your writing style is nice!!!!

Thanks!
BTW I have a question...
How do I tag Dragon Blader Z

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Your writing style is nice!!!!

Thanks!
BTW I have a question...
How do I tag Dragon Blader Z

wdym?

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Ghost Reap! The Ultimate Attack!|
(Shoutout to all the Silas/Sisco fans out there!)

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*Acheros wakes up with a start*
Acheros: “W-what was that? First Aeneas was acting weird, now this?”


*Sound of footsteps coming up the staircase*
Mom: “Acheros! Wake up! You’re going to be late for school!”
Acheros: *Groans* “Just give more minutes, please!”
Mom: “You’re already late! Get up fast and get ready!”
Acheros: “Ugh, OKAY”


(I added this scene to show that Acheros is a regular kid, but let’s fast forward to when he’s at the Raging Bulls, afterschool)

Shu: “Hey Acheros, after what happened yesterday I need to talk to you about it, because you handled it pretty well!”

Acheros: “Sure, ‘cause my head is still spinning.”

Shu: “What was happening was that your resonance is too strong and your bey cannot control itself and it tries to take advantage of your power, it means to do you no harm but as I said, it is out of it’s control. Your personality is such that you were able to resist it, and that is very good.”


Acheros: “But what can I do to make it not happen again?”

Shu: “You have to…”

*Shu’s voice trails off as a shadow appears from behind the door*

???: “Shu Kurenai, I hear you have a new and-”


*Silas Karlisle walks in*

Silas: *Makes finger quotes* “- “powerful” student”

*Silas smirks*

Acheros: “Who are you?”

*Silas’s face deflates*

Silas: “WHAT DO YOU MEAN “WHO ARE YOU”?! I AM THE FAMOUS (and rightly so) SILAS KARLISLE!”

Acheros: “whatever.”

Silas: “AAAAAAAUGH! YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT!”

(Fast forwards to Silas and Acheros’s battle)


Shu: “This will be a first to three points battle a burst finish is 2 poi-”


Silas: “BE QUIET AND LET US BATTLE!”

Acheros: *laughs*

Both: “3 2 1, GO SHOOT!”

Acheros: “Aah! Aeneas!” (I borrowed that from UnseenBurst)


Silas: “SATAN!”

*Aeneas starts glowing purple*

Acheros: “Now! Ghost Reap!”

*Aeneas hits Satan glows black and Satan shatters”


*Black streaks slash at Acheros*

Acheros: “AUGH!”


*Acheros collapses*

Acheros: “No, no, no! What have I done?”


Silas: “You broke Satan! That’s what!”


Shu: “Don’t be so hard on him, he tried to stop himself-”


Acheros: “No, Shu, it’s my fault.”


*Acheros gets up and limps away*

*Shu glares at Silas*

Shu was cut off so many times in this chapter...
I hope you like it!
Sorry it was short though:p

Also, tell me if you guys wanna be pinged

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Acheros picrew

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Ryujikki, the Dragon King!

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*Sound of beys clashing*

???: Go! Atomic Demolition!

*Sound of bey bursting*

???: You win again Ryujikki, whoever gave you that beyblade sure trusted you with such immense power.

Ryujikki: I still can’t believe he trusted me with Qadros! He must’ve thought that I was like my father… You’re my only friend left, Toko.


Toko: Ryujikki-

*Ryujikki starts to cry*

Ryujikki: I-I can’t believe tha-that my father would abandon me to a farm… He was one of the beyblade greats! And afte-after leaving I-I ne-never heard about (or from him) again.


Raging Bulls Training Center

*Acheros walks in*

Shu: Hey Acheros, after what happened yesterday, I wanted you to meet one of my best friends Va-

???: Hey everyone!


Shu: V-Valt, you’re early…


Valt: *Grins* I wanted to battle Acheros as soon as possible!


Acheros: Valt Aoi!!! How do you know who I am?

Valt: *Chuckles* Well Shu here, he told me you are really strong!

Acheros: Really Shu?

Shu: Yup

Valt: Okay, enough chit chatting (though there is never enough chit chatting) Let’s get to the battle!

*Fast Forward to battle*

Boa: This is a 3-way battle royale! Shu vs Valt vs Acheros! Who’s going to win?

All: 3, 2, 1 Go Shoot!

*Valkyrie starts circling the stadium very fast while Spriggan takes the centre*

Shu: Astral Defense!

Valt: Rush Shoot!

Acheros: Ghost Reap!

*Valkyrie and Aeneas hit Spriggan with a powerful barrage of attacks*

*Spriggan moves out of the way and hits Valkyrie with a fast counter-attack*

Shu: Astral Slash

*Valkyrie dodges the attack while Aeneas takes the centre*

Valt: Valkyrie! Hit Aeneas with Shot Upper!

Acheros: Ghost Counter!

*Valkyrie and Aeneas hit each other with a powerful collision, sending both beys flying. Valkyrie plummets backwards towards Spriggan*

Valt: Oh god…

*Valkyrie and Spriggan hit each other and burst*

Acheros: Yes!

Boa: *Laughs* Acheros wins with a double burst finish!

Valt: *Laughs and falls to the floor*

Shu: *Shakes his head and smiles* Acheros, you got us that time, but you won’t win next time!


*Everyone laughs*

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BTW posting a new chapter soon!
Here are some people who I want to read my fanfic: UnseenBurst, Ryuga's-Son and SpeedySuomi I'll add more later

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A New Mentor! Free De La Hoya!

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Shu: I have a surprise for all of you!

Boa: Really? What is it?

Shu: We’re going to Spain!

*Fast forward to in the airplane*

Acheros: I can’t believe we’re going to Spain! I’ve read so many amazing things about it!

Shu: And I have another surprise too! A few special guests will be joining us!

Acheros: Really, who?

Shu: You’ll find out soon enough!

*Plane lands*

Shu: Our first stop, the baggage claim!

*Everyone Laughs*

Valt: They should be he-

???: VAAAAAAAAAAAAAALTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!

Valt: I guess they’re here! Boa and Acheros, meet my friends: Lui, Hyuga, Hikaru, Aiger and Dante!

*A kid with big red hair bounds up to Acheros and shakes his hand vigorously*

Hyuga: Hiiiii! I’m Hyuga Hizashi! Wanna battle?

Acheros: *Laughs* Sure! But let’s get out of the airport first.

*Everybody introduces themselves, Lui is sarcastic and, yeah, let’s fast forward a bit*

Shu: The taxis are here!

*They ride to BC Sol*

Valt: So Shu, tell them where we’re going!

Shu: We’re going to the forest to meet one of the best bladers in the world! Free De La Hoya!

Acheros: Really? I’m a huge fan of his! Aeneas is actually based a bit on Fafnir!

Hyuga/Hikaru/Aiger/Drum/Boa: Well my bey was based on *all speak at once*

Shu: We’re here!

???: boo.

Valt: AUGHHHH! *Jumps 10ft into the air*

Valt: Free! You scared me!


Free: ok.

Shu: *laughs*


All At Once: BATTLE ME!

Free: I pick- pineapple.

Hyuga: I’ve beat you before! AAAA!

*Walk over to the stadium*

Aiger: I’ll be the ref. Ready? 3-2-1 Go!

Free/Hyuga: Go shoot!

Hyuga: Go! Pyro Slash!

Valt: *Thinks* Tinder Hyperion, a fierce attack type. The Tinder blade has 6 metal and 6 plastic contact points, when at it’s second click it’s 12 blades become six which makes the hits much harder!

*Hyperion clashes with Fafnir*

Free: Kick Counter!

*Both beys get knocked out of the stadium*

Aiger: It’s a draw!

Free: next.

Acheros: Let me come next.

Free: joe.

All: wat.

Aiger: Ready? Set! 3-2-1 Go!

Acheros/Free: Go Shoot!

Acheros: Ghost Reap!

*Aeneas speeds up and hits Fafnir*

Free: Kick Counter!

Acheros: No! Ending orb!

*Aeneas hits Fafnir, but Fafnir absorbs the impact*

Acheros: That won’t work on me!

Acheros: *Thinks* I’ll overwhelm Fafnir with lots of hits that will cause it to burst!

Free: Fafnir! Now!

Acheros: What?

Free: Tapered dodge!

*Fafnir scrapes on it’s disc and speeds around the stadium (still on it’s disc)*


Valt: A NEW TECHNIQUE!

Free: *Smirks* Kick Counter!

*Fafnir knocks Aeneas out of the ring*

Aiger: A ring out finish! Free gets one point!




(To be continued…)

Free is free! Some jokes that start with 'J'!
I hope you guys like the chapter!

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Never new valt was a thinker lol

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May I add a oc to BEYBLADE burst illuminate:info

Gender-male

Hair-blond

Hairstyle-spiked up

Name-max

DB core-Medusa

Armor-0

Ring-crisis

Disk-royalty

Tip-trap

Bey shape- circle with four round blades

Gimmick-metal blades fill the empty spaces within the four blades

Never new valt was a thinker lol

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May I add a oc to BEYBLADE burst illuminate:info

Gender-male

Hair-blond

Hairstyle-spiked up

Name-max

DB core-Medusa

Armor-0

Ring-crisis

Disk-royalty

Tip-trap

Bey shape- circle with four round blades

Gimmick-metal blades fill the empty spaces within the four blades

This is great, but would you mind filling the form on the first page? Thanks

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Ok I’ll do it next time

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Btw he’s a little like bell and is really strong

I finished the google form

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Alright, I'll enter this character contest. I probably won't win but it'll be fun either way.

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Alright I'll join this contest

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Since 3 more people have entered I guess I'll join them.

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I'm going to start writing again soon since school is off for the winters!
Let's see who wins the contest!

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I'm going to start writing again soon since school is off for the winters!
Let's see who wins the contest!

Hold on ima enter real quick

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When do you think the results are going to be posted?

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Excited to see what the next chapters have in store!

https://forms.gle/yMjmTWpmqUWQypd76
Above is a form for my character contest so you don't have to type so much, I have made it pretty simple.

Could you please add a dual spin option to "Bey Spin Direction" on the form?

https://forms.gle/yMjmTWpmqUWQypd76
Above is a form for my character contest so you don't have to type so much, I have made it pretty simple.

Could you please add a dual spin option to "Bey Spin Direction" on the for

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I'm going to start writing again soon since school is off for the winters!
Let's see who wins the contest!