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Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Feb. 04, 2021
https://forms.gle/yMjmTWpmqUWQypd76
Above is a form for my character contest so you don't have to type so much, I have made it pretty simple.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate - PeppzieCola - Feb. 04, 2021
Ooh, cool!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate - GhostFox - Feb. 04, 2021
Thank you!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate - SpeedySuomi - Feb. 04, 2021
I'm interested to see how this fanfic turns out. I'm kinda hyped!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate - GhostFox - Apr. 13, 2021
Hey guys... I don't know if this is considered necroposting but I want to start re-writing the fanfic.
Also, if anyone wants a chance to be in it- just do the form above!
Ps. I started writing but never posted..
Also, plz say if u filled in.
Contest ends on Sunday
A new one will start next sunday
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 13, 2021
(Apr. 13, 2021 5:18 AM)GhostFox Wrote: Hey guys... I don't know if this is considered necroposting but I want to start re-writing the fanfic.
Also, if anyone wants a chance to be in it- just do the form above!
Ps. I started writing but never posted..
Also, plz say if u filled in.
Contest ends on Sunday
A new one will start next sunday
I finished the google form character contest.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Psycho101 - Apr. 13, 2021
i also did the form
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Apr. 14, 2021
OK! Will just go check it out!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Apr. 20, 2021
I did the contest
(Feb. 04, 2021 5:15 AM)GhostFox Wrote: https://forms.gle/yMjmTWpmqUWQypd76
Above is a form for my character contest so you don't have to type so much, I have made it pretty simple.
I have a quick question what happens if you win?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Apr. 21, 2021
If you win, your character becomes a part of the story
BTW these are the winners:
6Jupiter5
@ Dragon Blader Z
Ryuga's Son
I will be posting the first chapter by the weekend.
Also, someone made a character named Asriel Wingfeather and didn't add their WBO username... could you plz redo the form with ur username cuz I really liked it :)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Apr. 26, 2021
Chapter names:
1: Ghost Aeneas! A New Legend Rises!
2: The Purple Demon! Meet Ruined Bahamut!
3: King Nebula! The Lord of Destruction!
4: Ghost Reap! The Ultimate Attack!
5: Ryujikki, the Dragon King!
6: A New Mentor! Free De La Hoya!
Legend appearances (so far):
Valt Aoi- Ryujikki, the Dragon King!
Shu Kurenai: Ghost Aeneas! A New Legend Rises!
Free De La Hoya: A new mentor! Free De La Hoya
Aiger Akabane: A new mentor! Free De La Hoya
Hyuga Hizashi: A new mentor! Free De La Hoya
Hikaru Hizashi: A new mentor! Free De La Hoya
Lui Shirosagi: A new mentor! Free De La Hoya
Boa Alcazaba: The Purple Demon! Meet Ruined Bahamut!
Dante Koryu: A new mentor! Free De La Hoya
Bell Daikokouten: --
Rantaro Kiyama: --
Delta Zakuro: --
Silas Karlisle: Ghost Reap! The Ultimate Attack!
I will try to post the first chapter today or tomorrow
Chapter one + Prologue:
Prologue:
*Sound of shattering*
Unknown: “NO! Spriggan!”
Unknown 2: *Makes fake sad face* “Now, now, don’t you cry, it’s going to be all right little Shu… JK! *Evil laughter booms* I don’t care about you at all! You are just a stepping stone on my path to being the best blader in the world!”
Shu: “You will pay for this! While I’m rebuilding my Spriggan my new student will take care of you!”
*Shadowy figure appears from behind Shu*
Unknown 3 (this dude^): “You’re laughing now, but you won’t be once I’m done with you!” *Starts glowing black and purple* “Me and Aeneas will shred you to pieces!”
Ghost Aeneas! A New Legend Rises!
Two weeks earlier:
Woman’s voice: “You’re going to be late Acheros! Come down quickly”
Acheros: “Ok mom! Coming!”
*Acheros runs down*
Mom: “You’re never late! What happened?”
Acheros: “I was busy polishing Aeneas, I want him to look perfect for our audition for the Raging Bulls!”
Mom: *Laughs* “You and your beyblade, I will never understand… Now quickly eat your breakfast and run!”
Acheros: “Ok mom!”
Fast Forward to Raging Bulls Training Center
Acheros: “I’m finally here!” *Looks at Aeneas* “It’s time to show them what we got!”
*Shu walks in from behind them*
Shu: “Hello, I presume you are Acheros Izumi. Welcome to the Raging Bulls! For your test you are going to be battling against my top student, Fubuki Sumiye!”
Fubuki: “Welcome to the Raging Bulls! I am Fubuki Sumiye; today you will be battling me, if you manage to score even just one point against me you are the newest recruit to the Raging Bulls. But don’t get too comfortable, only one person has managed to beat me so far and he is famous for his power,” *Gestures to boy in the corner* “Anyway, let the battle begin!”
Both: “3,2,1, GO SHOOT!”
“Go Aeneas! Ending Orb!”
*Hits Forneus*
*Forneus Bursts*
Fubuki: “What just happened?”
Acheros: “I was expecting more of a challenge…”
Shu: “Woah Acheros! That was amazing, welcome to the club!”
Plz rate it! thanks!
How is it?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Apr. 26, 2021
Awesome name for chapter 3 and the chapters names are nice
Its 10/10 for the fanfic for me!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 26, 2021
(Apr. 26, 2021 6:30 AM)GhostFox Wrote: Chapter names:
1: Ghost Aeneas! A New Legend Rises!
2: The Purple Demon! Meet Ruined Bahamut!
3: King Nebula! The Lord of Destruction!
4: Ghost Reap! The Ultimate Attack!
5: Ryujikki, the Dragon King!
6: A New Mentor! Free De La Hoya!
Legend appearances (so far):
Valt Aoi- Ryujikki, the Dragon King!
Shu Kurenai: Ghost Aeneas! A New Legend Rises!
Free De La Hoya: A new mentor! Free De La Hoya
Aiger Akabane: --
Hyuga Hizashi: --
Hikaru Hizashi: --
Lui Shirosagi: --
Boa Alcazaba: The Purple Demon! Meet Ruined Bahamut!
I will try to post the first chapter today or tomorrow
Chapter one + Prologue:
Prologue:
*Sound of shattering*
Unknown: “NO! Spriggan!”
Unknown 2: *Makes fake sad face* “Now, now, don’t you cry, it’s going to be all right little Shu… JK! *Evil laughter booms* I don’t care about you at all! You are just a stepping stone on my path to being the best blader in the world!”
Shu: “You will pay for this! While I’m rebuilding my Spriggan my new student will take care of you!”
*Shadowy figure appears from behind Shu*
Unknown 3 (this dude^): “You’re laughing now, but you won’t be once I’m done with you!” *Starts glowing black and purple* “Me and Aeneas will shred you to pieces!”
Ghost Aeneas! A New Legend Rises!
Two weeks earlier:
Woman’s voice: “You’re going to be late Acheros! Come down quickly”
Acheros: “Ok mom! Coming!”
*Acheros runs down*
Mom: “You’re never late! What happened?”
Acheros: “I was busy polishing Aeneas, I want him to look perfect for our audition for the Raging Bulls!”
Mom: *Laughs* “You and your beyblade, I will never understand… Now quickly eat your breakfast and run!”
Acheros: “Ok mom!”
Fast Forward to Raging Bulls Training Center
Acheros: “I’m finally here!” *Looks at Aeneas* “It’s time to show them what we got!”
*Shu walks in from behind them*
Shu: “Hello, I presume you are Acheros Izumi. Welcome to the Raging Bulls! For your test you are going to be battling against my top student, Fubuki Sumiye!”
Fubuki: “Welcome to the Raging Bulls! I am Fubuki Sumiye; today you will be battling me, if you manage to score even just one point against me you are the newest recruit to the Raging Bulls. But don’t get too comfortable, only one person has managed to beat me so far and he is famous for his power,” *Gestures to boy in the corner* “Anyway, let the battle begin!”
Both: “3,2,1, GO SHOOT!”
“Go Aeneas! Ending Orb!”
*Hits Forneus*
*Forneus Bursts*
Fubuki: “What just happened?”
Acheros: “I was expecting more of a challenge…”
Shu: “Woah Acheros! That was amazing, welcome to the club!”
Plz rate it! thanks!
How is it?
Good! I'll give it a 7.8/10 for prolouge and chapter one! Good job! (I see the chapter were my Boi Ryujikki gonna come!)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Apr. 26, 2021
Yeah I saw your character he’s coming on chapter 5 and mine which is King Nebula is coming on chapter 3
And Nice GhostFox
Nice character Master Dragon Emperor
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Valtryek Aoi - Apr. 27, 2021
Very interesting, I'd like to see where this goes.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Apr. 27, 2021
The Purple Demon! Meet Ruined Bahamut!
The next day
Acheros’s Perspective:
I kept wondering who the kid who beat Fubuki was… When I go back to the club today I’m going to challenge and beat him!
Third Person Perspective:
Mom: “Acheros! Come down quickly!”
*No reply*
Mom: “Don’t make me come up there!”
*Still no reply*
*Mom goes up the stairs*
Mom: “Acheros!”
*Looks at the bed; it’s cleaned up and no one is there.”
Raging Bulls Training Center
Acheros: “Look Aeneas, we’re here, it’s our first proper day!
Fubuki: “Hi Acheros, welcome back! I’m still stunned how you defeated me yesterday! It's kinda humiliating… Anyway, your first exercise of the day will be facing Boa!” *Gestures to boy practicing in the corner* “But be careful, he is considered a blading legend!”
Acheros (thinking): “Yes! I finally get to battle him!”
*Aeneas starts glowing*
Acheros: “What’s wrong Aeneas?”
*Looks at Aeneas and gets pulled into the resonance realm*
Aeneas: “Acheros, I sense that Boa and his bey have a very strong bond. We will have to pull out all the stops!”
Acheros: “Got it.”
Shu: “Acheros… Acheros… Snap out of it.”
Acheros: “Huh? I just saw Aeneas! Was it a dream?”
Shu: “No, it wasn’t, I’ll explain it to you later, but now it’s time for your battle with Boa.”
Acheros: “Ok.”
*Walks over to stadium*
Boa: “Hello Acheros… I heard you beat Fubuki, it was probably a fluke…”
Acheros: “Trash talk all you want but just understand this, don’t underestimate me.”
Fubuki: “Bladers set! 3,2,1, Go Shoot!”
Acheros and Boa: “Go Shoot!”
Boa: “Witness the power of my bey! BAHAMUT!”
*Bahamut settles in the centre of the stadium*
Boa: “It is an immovable defense type!”
Acheros: “I don’t care about any of that! We’ll win no matter what! Aeneas!”
*Aeneas’s avatar appears*
Boa: “Bahamut!”
*Bahamut’s avatar appears*
Boa/Acheros: “Ruined Vertical!/Ending Orb!”
*Huge clash*
Both: “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!”
*Sound of bursts*
Fubuki: “Simultaneous burst finish! It’s a draw!”
Please give me ur thoughts!
BTW thx for the encouragement guys!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Apr. 27, 2021
10/10 perfect
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Apr. 27, 2021
Character Profiles:
1)
Name: Acheros Izumi
Age: 10 (turns eleven)
Description- Skinny, average heighted kid who wears skull tee (B&W), ripped jeans.
Big dark eyes, medium-length messy black hair (white streak). Very smart, serious, caring, wise, kind, kinda lazy (Free type), focused in battle (kinda emo 2)
Flare: Black with white and teal lines
Birthday: Sept 8th- same as mine
Dynamite Core- Aeneas, has metal in it.
Armor- 9
Blade- Ghost, made of hard rubber
Forge Disc- Phantom- Weight adjustable
Performance Tip- Zeta+' - 9 modes, can change modes during battle
Spin Direction- Dual (can spin steal from both directions)
Bey type- Balance
Bey appearance (Core)- Mix of Union and Perseus (kind of)
Bey Colours- Black, white, gold, teal, blue eyes
Avatar- (will add soon- look out for edit)
(Apr. 27, 2021 11:31 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: 10/10 perfect
Thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Apr. 27, 2021
My character’s coming next chapter now i’m excited 😁
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Apr. 30, 2021
Hello when you’re posting another chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Apr. 30, 2021
Prob by tomorrow, I've been busy with school stuff
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - May. 15, 2021
Thanks! Sorry I haven't been posting
Will really try to soon
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Jul. 07, 2021
(May. 15, 2021 5:44 PM)GhostFox Wrote: Thanks! Sorry I haven't been posting
Will really try to soon
Ok (if you'll start making the chapters with all of your heart.)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate [Character Contest] - GhostFox - Jul. 07, 2021
I will... Trust me!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Illuminate - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 07, 2021
(Apr. 13, 2021 5:18 AM)GhostFox Wrote: Hey guys... I don't know if this is considered necroposting but I want to start re-writing the fanfic.Necropost needs to be more than a year I think. (I didn't find any information about that, prob I didn't look at the right place idk)
Also, if anyone wants a chance to be in it- just do the form above!
Ps. I started writing but never posted..
Also, plz say if u filled in.
Contest ends on Sunday
A new one will start next sunday