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(Nov. 25, 2021 3:50 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:(Nov. 25, 2021 2:58 AM)Ayanokoji Wrote: Beyblade Burst Elite #3 “Man is an animal that makes bargains: no other animal does this - no dog exchanges bones with another.”
Spoiler (Click to View)*4 years ago*
Theodore walks into one of the white room cells to see Damian fight against two martial artist masters. Damian was using every technique from every single martial art which he learned in under a year. Damian finally decides to fight back and not defend and knocks out one of the masters with one punch to the solar plexus. The other man grabs a knife from his pocket and stabs Damian in the hand. Damian doesn't even cry or even react from the knife being stabbed in his hand and keeps gripping on the masters hand. The master tries to get out of Damian’s grip but fails every single time. Damian starts putting pressure on the masters hand causing eventually every bone in the masters hand to break. The master starts crying in pain and Damian puts him to sleep with a sock to the mouth.
Theodore: Good job Damian! That was excellent.
The cages that separated Damian from the exit of the room finally lifted and Damian walked out of the cell with no emotion and his eyes glowing yellow. Some other children walked out the room but most were either unconscious or being dragged out by masked men for losing.
*present day*
Damian wakes up the next day from a email by the WBBA saying the tournament was postponed due to Percy posting the discovery of the Cho X bey. Damian went automatically to the WBBA website where there’s instructions to make a certain type of bey and right there it had the instructions to make a Cho X bey. On the bottom left corner it was stated the credits of the creation of the bey system goes to Damian Abital. Which was the name Damian was going under to hide he was a Glass after the reaction from Percy when he heard his name.
Damian: Looks like Percy respected me hiding my last name.
Dajjal: Are you surprised?
Damian: No. I knew he would likely do that. He probably thinks I’m trying to go rouge against my fathers wishes because of it.
Dajjal: And are you?
Damian: Well yes but no. I want to separate myself from my father after what he’s done to me and has not let me done. But my goal and my fathers are the same, for me to be the best blader ever. So I guess I am not going rogue.
Dajjal: Well anyway shouldn’t you be worried about the Cho X system being able to be made by the entire world.
Damian: No, that was my entire plan actually for Percy to do this. My father likely doesn’t want people to know how to make the best bey system ever created so this will make him angered and worried. Though I am not.
Dajjal: Why?
Damian: Well since people are making new beys they’re gonna have to learn how to master the system and since they’re making new beys or evolved beys they will have to rebond with their bey or bond with their new bey avatar. I do not have to go through the entire resonance experience because you were made from my consciousness. We are the same and understand each other. Every other blader has to learn to listen to their bey and understand them. I don’t because you understand and learn things the same as I do. We even share the same voice.
Dajjal: That is very true. So no matter what they will be beneath us because of this in a connection with their bey.
Damian: Exactly.
Damian gets a idea and grabs his launcher and Dajjal and leaves his house. Damian starts walking to the WBBA training facility to scout out the people who are gonna participate in the tournament and likely their new Cho X bey that’s gonna be used. Damian eventually enters the WBBA training facility and sees some of the people who were listed to have made it in the tournament. Also as expected they all had Cho X beys and the bladers were getting use to them. One of the bladers he noticed was a girl named Taylor Aza. Her bey is a a right spinning attack type with the parts being Over and a new driver that looks like destroy but with the rubber tip of xtreme. The beys avatar is a dragon; he also noticed the most dangerous part of the bey is the four metal attack points with the eyes of the dragon on them. She could probably be a strong opponent to everyone else but to him she was just another obstacle.
Taylor: Go Tarragon!
Damian: There she goes, her bey is named Tarragon, interesting.
Then he then noticed a boy named Itsukimaru. His pink hair flew in the wind from his right spinning attack type bey. The parts on it were a new forge disc that can split into two parts and the driver was a new two sided balance driver. He also saw in Itsukimaru’s pocket three other layers so he is probably a balance type user that because of the Cho X system having one layer like Cho Z and not a ring had to make multiple layers since he likely uses different rings like Drum when GT was the main system.
Itsukimaru: GO IZANAGI!
Damian: The people here have interesting names for their beys. But who am I to judge, my bey means deceiver in Arabic. Which fits with me I guess. It also is the name of the anti christ in Islam. Wonder if like the meaning in Arabic this is supposed to reveal something about me. Whatever, I need to get back to scouting and not have this monologue in my head.
Damian then noticed the popular boy from the tryouts he noticed who’s Cho X bey is a red bey that has a knight avatar.
Damian: Honestly from the design you could just say he made you could call himself a copy of Valt. The bey is shaped like a Valkyrie, has a knight as the avatar, and spins right and is a attack type. Though he’ll probably have a different name for it so he doesn’t look like a copy cat to his friends.
The parts for his bey is nexus + s and quick’.
Damian: The disc is a interesting choice for attack but whatever that’s irrelevant right now.
He then noticed the girl he protected the other day. Her Cho X bey is a left spinning dragon attack type that looked like a copy of Longinus.
Damian: What, is everyone now copying peoples bey? Though Longinus is really just a copy of L Drago kinda so you can’t really say much.
The parts she’s using for her bey is karma metal xtreme. He then noticed the strong blond haired kid who’s Cho X bey is a left spinning stamina type which was using over bearing. This bey had the avatar of a dragon which from just the details could seem like a copy of Fafnir but from the design you could tell it wasn’t. He then saw in the corner glaring at him was the brother of the girl he saved. The boys Cho X bey actually looked like a Fafnir copy with it being a left spin bey that looked like a combination of stamina and balance with the parts giga and zone’ + z. Looks like he’s probably gonna focus for a battle of life after death with him draining the opponents spin with his rubber.
Damian: Well that’s enough scouting, I’m starting to get bored.
Damian gets up from the bench and goes to the stadium close to him. He launches Dajjal and watches Dajjal spin in the center with its great stamina. Damian then grabbed Dajjal and left the facility to go to his apartment. But on his way there he got caught by Percy.
Percy: Damian, where are you going?!
Damian: Home, why?
Percy: You’re gonna leave right before the battles start?! Are you crazy?!
Percy grabs Damian’s arm and drags him to a podium set up with a mic for Percy to speak on to let the battles begin for the day. Damian tried to make a angered face to get Percy to let go of him but Percy didn’t budge causing Damian to go back to his normal emotionless face.
Percy: Hello everyone! Before the battles begin I have a announcement! I would like us all to thank our special guest here Damian Abital for creating the Cho X system! The strongest bey system to ever be created to date!
The bladers there started cheering for Damian and Damian just looked at them with a emotionless face. His soulless eyes started creeping out some of the bladers with the applause eventually going to silence.
Percy: Well Damian since you’re here would you like to say anything?!
Percy stepped off the podium letting Damian to do a speech.
Damian: What I say here will determine my standing on beyblade so I have to make it good. Should I try a joke? I bet I can get a big laugh if I’m really energetic. Or maybe I’d just creep everyone out. It’s not like I have any hobbies or talents that would I could use to do that. I’m just a white bird, flying free.
Percy nudges him to give his speech and Damian snaps back to realities and begins to speak.
Damian: Uh… Um… I’m Damian Abital. Uh… I look forward to battling you all with this new bey system. Ah, um… I’m not good at blading or anything in particular. Uh… I’ll work hard to get along with everyone and get better at blading.
Damian goes silent and Percy nudges everyone to start clapping.
Damian: I blew it. Especially for the supposed perfect human.
Percy: Good speech Damian! Well let the battles begin!
Damian got off the podium and saw the girl he saved gave a sly chuckle.
Damian: She laughed at me.
Damian went straight to the exit again but was stopped by the brother of the girl.
Manabu: Do you remember who I am?!
Damian: Not not really.
Manabu: I’m Manabu! The guy you stood up again from yesterday. You should’ve stayed out of me and my sisters business so now you’ll pay. Battle me now!
Damian shrugged.
Damian: Sure, why not.
Damian and Manabu got to their sides of the stadium.
Manabu: You ready to be destroyed?!
Damian: Sure, why not.
Both: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Dajjal goes to the center of the stadium while Manabu’s bey circles around Dajjal.
Manabu: Go! Turn Fafnir!
Damian: So he really made his own Fafnir. Has people like Rashad, Fumiya, and Xhan really changed people to start copying blader’s beys.
Fafnir attacks Dajjal with one of its rubber blades. Though since both beys hit each other’s rubber spots nothing really happened.
Manabu: So your bey spins right and has rubber, interesting. Up the tempo Fafnir! Zone Counter!
Fafnir kept attacking Dajjal with barely any affect. Fafnir eventually starts losing stamina and starts moving to the center. Percy decided to come over to the battle since he was interested why the battle wasn’t over already. Percy then understood why, Damian wasn’t battling truly he was just letting Manabu wear himself out. Since Fafnir had a lot less spin Damian moved his head and Dajjal moved out of the center and won with a spin finish due to Fafnir not being able to spin steal off Dajjal.
Manabu: Are you scared to fight back?! Fight back with your blader spirit and let’s see who the true stronger blader is you coward!
Damian: Alright then.
Damian grabs Dajjal and notices that Fafnir got one click off Dajjal meaning it’s attacks were futile and he could obviously win this battle of strength due to his metal blades. Both bladers ready their beys and get ready to launch.
Both: 3,2,1, GO SHOOT!
Manabu went on the offensive again and kept attacking Dajjal.
Manabu: FIGHT BACK YOU COWARD! FAFNIR! ZONE COUNTER!
Fafnir started sprinting right towards Dajjal with all its power.
Damian: Bearing drive.
Dajjal blitzes Fafnir and slams Fafnir into a wall. With each attack Fafnir got slammed into the stadium wall.
Manabu: ZONE WING COUNTER!
Fafnir uses one of its rubber wings to bounce of the stadium wall and slammed into Dajjal sending Dajjal back a little.
Percy: Do to the weight of Dajjal you can’t really move it without a very strong attack.
Manabu: Alright then let’s try this! TURN CLAW!
Damian: Well if we’re copying moves then I’ll end this here.
Fafnir starts sprinting at Dajjal with all its remaining power. Manabu smirks at Damian thinking this will end it but Damian’s golden eyes started glowing. Damian snaps his fingers with his right hand with enough friction for a small flame to appear on his first finger. He then closes his hand into a fist and then moved his arm upward into the air and snapped again.
Damian: ABADDON BOMBER!
Fafnir slams into Dajjal causing a big explosion to happen in the stadium. A bunch of wind came from the explosion causing Percy and Manabu to be sent backwards while Damian stood there strong. When the two pushed back bladers opened their eyes they saw a wrecked stadium with Damian throwing Dajjal up and catching Dajjal. They then looked inside the stadium to see the bursted Turn Fafnir. Manabu then got to the ground and slammed his fist into the concrete.
Manabu: How! How did I lose to someone like you! You even admitted that you aren’t truly good at anything! Even blading! You got a fifty on every single test as well!
Damian walked away from the scene and left the training facility and finally made it to his apartment with no distractions. Damian put Dajjal on his desk with his launcher and laid in his bed.
Dajjal: I wish we used our full power back there. Everyone would’ve gone ballistic.
Damian: It’s fine, we made a scene there as much as needed. That kid there and no one else with likely bother us or mess with us.
Dajjal: Why was this your to do there. Why not at the tournament.
Damian: Because man can easily be controlled by fear. Stories will be told of the incident with the incident being over exaggerating every retelling causing the levels of fear to increase and eventually; I will be controlling that tournament with fear like their pawns on a chessboard.
UnseenBurst @Hollowmind8 @LJ-Blader SpeedySuomi GHero GenesisBlader
Interesting chapter. Extra note Itsukimaru only uses two layers, I put in four Beys in my submission because Izanagi and Izanami can be split into two and combined into one layer, sorta like Eclipse and Apollo, the disc is just like Paradox as well. Anyways, I'll be giving the review then; Nothing special happened, but it did give us a part of Damian's backstory, however... it was sort of uh, edgy you know? Especially when it ties in with the canon. Setting that aside though, the battles were quite fun to watch, so for this story, I'll be giving it a 7.3/10.
Alright I’ll see if I can make some changes/retcons that can solve these problems with your bey. I was planning to make a edgy mc from the get go. A man who tries to hide his talents and likes to work from the shadows manipulating people.
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