[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst Dynachi!

Lucha Burst · Jul. 13, 2021 9:43 PM

Dang, faza and loyd destroyed that in chapter 31, funny cause both luinor and Fafnir are dragons
Left spin Dragons at that

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ColdFlames13 · Jul. 13, 2021 10:50 PM

(Jul. 13, 2021 8:36 PM)Staron Wrote:
(Jul. 13, 2021 6:30 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 32 is out!! Staron you might wanna check this out!

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 32
On The Rampage!! Aegis Ifrit!!

~In Agnus’ Dorm~

(Someone knocks on the door, Agnus opens the door)

Agnus: Hey, aren’t you Bushi Kurogane?

Bushi: Yep, now let’s get practicing.

Agnus: Aren’t you going to say hi or somethin’?

Bushi: We won’t win if we don’t practice.

Agnus: Fine, let’s start!

Bushi: You can inspect my bey! Aegis Ifrit!

Agnus (Thoughts): Aegis Ifrit is a Clockwise Spinning balance type! It has 3 blades that can be used for Stamina Defense and Attack which is awesome! It’ll be able to switch between Attack Mode Defense Mode and Stamina mode, let’s get started!

(Bushi puts Ifrit in Defense Mode, Agnus puts Achilles in Attack Mode)

Agnus/Bushi: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!

(Ifrit takes the center, Achilles starts hitting Ifrit with a barrage of attacks)

Agnus: Echo Launch!!

(Achilles hits Ifrit with a strong attack, Ifrit gets sent up the stadium slope)

Agnus: *Gasps*

Bushi: Shogun Counter Crash!!

(Ifrit leans on its driver and starts crashes into Achilles, Achilles gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Agnus: You’ve gotta be kidding!

(Bushi picks up his bey)

Bushi: You’re worthy of being my partner for the Tag Battles!

Agnus: Um, ok?

Bushi: In the next match I suggest we go in with an all-out attack.

Agnus: You read my mind!

(Bushi and Agnus do a fist bump)

~In Colton’s Dorm~

Jay/Colton: Let it rip!!

Colton: Warp Launch!!

(Cognite hits Jinnus with a barrage of wobbling strikes)

Jay: That’ll do nothing against Jinnus!

(Jinnus starts taking clicks)

Jay: Jinx Wall!!

(Part of Jinnus’ layer comes up in the air, Cognite’s attacks start missing)

Colton: No!

(Cognite stops spinning)

Jay: You know, you’ve gotta use Stamina Mode more.

Colton: I know I can knock Achilles out if I attack!

Jay: But your best bet would be to spin longer than Achilles!

Colton: I think I know my own bey Mr. Hot Shot!!

Jay: At least “Mr. Hot Shot” has some brains!

Colton: You could’ve fooled me!

(Colton and Jay cross their arms and look away from each other)

Jay: Look, we don’t have time for this, our match is starting soon!

Colton: You’re right, truce?

Jay: Truce.

(Jay and Colton shake hands)

Colton: Maybe I could work on my stamina a bit more!

Jay: How about you use Attack Mode to help me increase my defense?

Colton: You’ve got it!

~In The Main Arena~

Hanami: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’ll be having the final match of the 1st round of the IWC’s!!

(The crowd goes wild)

Valt: So it’s Agnus and Bushi Vs Colton and Jay!

Aiger: Agnus’ gonna win!

Cuza: I don’t think so!

(Agnus, Bushi, Jay, and Colton walk up to the stage)

Colton: We’ve got an awesome strategy to beat you guys!

Agnus: It won’t work!

(Bushi Agnus and Colton put their beys in Attack Mode)

Jay: The Main Stars always win!

(Jay puts Jinnus’ weight from the bottom to the top)

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Agnus/Jay/Colton/Bushi: Let it rip!!

(Jinnus heads straight for the center)

Jay: Perfect launch!

Agnus: Echo Launch!!

(Achilles starts hitting Jinnus with a strong barrage of attacks)

Hanami: Achilles is on the attack! But Jinnus is barely hanging in there!

(Cognite starts picking up speed)

Colton: Jay, I’ve got your back! Warp Launch!!

Bushi: I don’t think so. Shogun Launch!!

(Ifrit and Cognite starts hitting each other with a wild barrage of attacks, Cognite gets hit upon the stadium wall)

Colton: Eternity Launch!!

Bushi: Slam into the wall Ifrit!!

(Ifrit slams into the wall, Cognite falls off the stadium wall)

Colton: *Gasps*

Jay: Jinx Wall!!

(Part of Jinnus’ layer pops up)

Agnus: Achilles!!

(Agnus’ Resonance Aura flares up Achilles blazes out of the bey)

Agnus: Fly!!

(Achilles flies up in the air Jinnus)

Jay: *Gasps*

Agnus: Echo Breaker!!

(Achilles slams down on Jinnus with its blade, Jinnus bursts)

Jay: No way!

Hanami: Achilles just flew in the air and slammed down on Jinnus pancake-style!!

(Ifrit and Achilles starts speeding up)

Bushi: Now, Agnus!

Agnus: You’ve got it Bushi!!

(Achilles slams into Ifrit and sends it flying into Cognite)

Agnus/Bushi: Echoing Aegis Impact!!

(Ifrit slams into Cognite with force, Cognite bursts)

Colton: What?!

Referee: Echo Achilles and Aegis Ifrit win!!

Hanami: Unbelievable! Bushi and Agnus just showed us what teamwork means!

Colton: You were supposed to defend!

Jay: Can’t you see that was what I was doing!!

Colton: Is your defense that weak?!

Jay: Excuse me?

Bushi: With your arguing, you won’t even make it to the Semi-Finals.

(Agnus and Bushi fist bump then walk away)

Colton/Jay: This is your fault!

Me: Bad start for Colton.

Brooke: With all their fighting they won’t win.

Cuza: Don’t worry Colton, you’ll turn things around!

MY BOY TAKING THE EASY DUB, LET'S GO!

Boom! Teamwork moves can't lose.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 13, 2021 10:52 PM

(Jul. 13, 2021 10:50 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote:
(Jul. 13, 2021 8:36 PM)Staron Wrote: MY BOY TAKING THE EASY DUB, LET'S GO!

Boom! Teamwork moves can't lose.

*twin strike

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

ColdFlames13 · Jul. 13, 2021 10:53 PM

(Jul. 13, 2021 8:38 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 13, 2021 8:36 PM)Staron Wrote: MY BOY TAKING THE EASY DUB, LET'S GO!
OI IT WASN'T AN EZ DUB LAD, COLT GONNA WIN NEXT TIME

Jinnius never thought of an attack... FROM ABOVE

(Jul. 13, 2021 10:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 13, 2021 10:50 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Boom! Teamwork moves can't lose.

*twin strike

Yes, I know. For some reason, I was thinking that was the name of Hikaru and Hyuga move only.

UnseenBurst · Jul. 13, 2021 11:35 PM

Chapter 33 is out! BladekingX is gonna be...

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 13, 2021 11:52 PM

(Jul. 13, 2021 11:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 33 is out! BladekingX is gonna be...

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 33
Thundering Grenade!!

(Colton walks up to us)

Colton: *Sighs* Looks like I lost.

Me: Don’t worry, it’s just the beginning!

Ryuji: The main problem was your teamwork!

Colton: *Gasps*

Adam: He’s right, you both barely planned out a strategy!

Colton: You try working with the stuck-up actor!!

Valt: Calm down guys, they're about to announce the Second Round!

Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today, we’ll be having the Second Round of the IWC’s!!

(The crowd goes wild)

Colton: I hope Mr. Hot Shot puts in the work this time.

Hanami: Our first match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Colton and Jay!!

Colton: Yo, we’re battling each other!

Me: We’re gonna win!

Colton: In your dreams!

Hanami: Our Second Match will be Daniel and Drake Vs Faza and Lloyd!

Drake: Nice, we get the strong opponents!

Daniel: This is going to be fun!

Faza: Beating them should be fun.

Lloyd: Whatever.

Hanami: Our Third and final match will be Bushi and Agnus Vs Scar and Crimson Eye!

Crimson Eye: Don’t lose.

Scar: Don’t tell me what to do!

Crimson Eye: If I don’t then this team will crumble.

Scar: Why you little!!

(Shu walks in)

Me: Shu!

Shu: Hey.

Valt: What took you so long?

Shu: Work, anyways how’s the tournament looking?

Me: Me and Brooke lost the first round.

Shu: Don’t worry, you’ve still got a chance to turn it around!

Colton: I’ve got to get training, I’ll catch you later!

Me: Come on Brooke, we’ve gotta beat ‘em!

(I run off)

Brooke: *Sighs* I’m coming.

~In Brooke’s Dorm~

Me: Knock ‘em out!

Brooke: Venture Launch!

(Belarix and Valtryek hit each other out of the stadium)

Me: *Gasps*

Brooke: Still not good enough!

Me: Maybe we should try using a Tag Team Move!

Brooke: With that combined attack power we could surely burst Congite and Jinnus!

Me: Then let’s get practicing!

~In Jay’s Dorm~

Jay: Honestly! I can’t wait for the Tag Team battles to be over! I’m through with you!

Colton: It’s your fault we lost that battle!

Jay: So it’s my fault that Cognite can’t withstand a little double attack!

Colton: If you would’ve been helpful I could’ve won!

Jay: You're going to stay on the stadium wall while I win this battle!

Colton: I’m gonna go all out!

Jay/Cokton: Hmp!

~In Brooke’s Dorm~

Ryuji: So you want us to help you work on your Tag Team skills?

Me: Yup, unless you don’t think you're good enough!

Adam: Of course we’re good enough! Let’s get started!

(Me and Brooke put our bey’s weights from the bottom to the top)

Me/Brooke: We’re ready!

Ryuji/Adam/Me/Brooke: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!

(Roktavor tries going for the center)

Brooke: Venture Launch!!

(Belarix hits Roktavor with a strong barrage of strikes)

Ryuji: Fight back! Ultra Berserker Wing Tornado!

(Roktavor creates a huge tornado and sends Belarix flying)

Brooke: *Gasps*

Ryuji: Aw yeah!

Adam: Samurai Guard!!

Me: Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek starts hitting Ashindra with a barrage of powerful strikes, Belarix catches onto the stadium rim)

Brooke: Venture Flash!!

(Belarix starts picking up speed around the stadium rim)

Ryuji: *Gasps*

Me: Thundering Recoil!!

(Valtryek sends Ashindra flying in the air)

Adam: Hang in there!

(Ashindra falls back on the stadium floor and picks up speed, Belarix heads straight for Roktavor)

Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!

Ryuji: Berserker Wing Storm!!

(Belarix gets blown away)

Brooke: Grr!!

Ryuji: We’ve been friends for a while! I know all your tricks!!

Me: Thundering Winged Launch!!

(Valtryek ricochets off the wall and hits Roktavor hard)

Me: Give ‘em your Winged Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek ricochets off the wall rapidly hitting Roktavor with a barrage of attacks)

Adam: I’m coming Ryuji!

(Ashindra tries hitting Valtryek but Belarix hits it away)

Brooke: I’m taking both of you down! Belarix!!

(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up Belarix blazes out of the bey)

Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!

(Belarix starts picking up speed and slams into Ashindra, Ashindra bursts)

Adam: No way!

(Belarix heads straight for Roktavor)

Me: Thundering Saber!!

(Valtryek slams into Roktavor, Roktavor starts wobbling)

Me: Brooke, end this!

Brooke: One last time! Grenade Bomb!!

(Belarix slams into Roktavor with force, Roktavor blows up and bursts)

Ryuji: No way!

(Roktavor’s parts roll at Ryuji’s feet)

Adam: You guys are powerful!

Ryuji: He’s right, for once.

Adam: I’ve been right tons of times!

Ryuji: Heh, in your dreams.

Adam: Why you little!

(Brooke and Vlad, your match is starting)

Me: We've gotta go! See ya!

(Me and Brooke run out of the dorm)

~In The Main Arena~

Hanami: Hello Bladers and Beyfans!! Today we’ll be having the first match of the 2nd Round!

(The crowd goes wild)

Hanami: It’s Vlad Aoi and Brooke Dakokutien Vs Colton Ackerman and Jay Burns! Here come our bladers!!

(Me Brooke Jay and Colton arrive on the elevators)

Me: Aw yeah!

Jay: Get ready to be taken down!

Colton: By me!

Jay: I meant me!

Colton: Let’s have an awesome battle guys!

Jay: Are you even listening?!

Hanami: Our bladers are fired up and ready to battle! Let’s start!!

(Colton puts Cognite’s weight from the bottom to the top)

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Jay/Brooke/Colton: Let it rip!!

Colton: Go Cognite!!

Me: Knock it away! Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek knocks away Cognite’s attack)

Hanami: We’ve just launched and we’ve already got action!

(Jinnus takes the center, Belarix starts hitting it with a barrage of attacks)

Brooke: Venture Launch!!

(Jinnus starts wobbling)

Hanami: Jinnus is barely withstanding Belarix’s strong barrage!

Colton: Warp Launch!!

Me: Thundering Recoil!!

(Cognite speeds into Valtryek for an attack, Valtryek intercepts it with its bound blade, Cognite gets shot up in the air)

Hanami: Valtryek just sent Cognite flying!

Colton: Spinning Moon Dive!!

Me: Dodge it!

(Cognite tries dive-bombing on Valtryek but Valtryek dodges it)

Me: Yes!

Jay: Jinx Wall!!

(A part of Jinnus pops up, Belarix’s attacks start missing, Belarix starts clashing against the wall)

Brooke: Grenade Counter!!

(Belarix speeds off the wall and slams into Jinnus, Jinnus starts wobbling)

Jay: *Gasps* No!

Hanami: Belarix just counterattacked!!

Me/Brooke it’s time!

Brooke: Belarix!

Me: Valtryek!

(Me and Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek and Belarix blaze out of the bey)

Me: Hit it Valtryek!

(Valtryek slams into Belarix with its bound blade, Belarix picks up serious speed)

Me/Brooke: Thundering Grenade!!

Colton: I’ll block it!

Jay: No don’t--

(Cognite gets next to Jinnus, Belarix slams into Cognite and Jinnus, Cognite and Jinnus both burst)

Referee: Thunder Valtryek and Grenade Belarix win!!

Hanami: Unbelievable! Valtryek shot Belarix into Cognite and Jinnus and burst both of them!!

Me/Brooke: Aw yeah!!

Jay: This is all your fault, if you wouldn’t have done that we would’ve won!

Colton: It’s not my fault that you're horrible at defending!

(Colton and Jay start arguing)

Brooke: They’re not going to win like this anytime soon.

Me: I know.

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE COLTON, NOOOOOOOOOO

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

UnseenBurst · Jul. 13, 2021 11:54 PM

(Jul. 13, 2021 11:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 13, 2021 11:35 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 33 is out! BladekingX is gonna be...

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 33
Thundering Grenade!!

(Colton walks up to us)

Colton: *Sighs* Looks like I lost.

Me: Don’t worry, it’s just the beginning!

Ryuji: The main problem was your teamwork!

Colton: *Gasps*

Adam: He’s right, you both barely planned out a strategy!

Colton: You try working with the stuck-up actor!!

Valt: Calm down guys, they're about to announce the Second Round!

Hanami: Hello all you bladers!! Today, we’ll be having the Second Round of the IWC’s!!

(The crowd goes wild)

Colton: I hope Mr. Hot Shot puts in the work this time.

Hanami: Our first match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Colton and Jay!!

Colton: Yo, we’re battling each other!

Me: We’re gonna win!

Colton: In your dreams!

Hanami: Our Second Match will be Daniel and Drake Vs Faza and Lloyd!

Drake: Nice, we get the strong opponents!

Daniel: This is going to be fun!

Faza: Beating them should be fun.

Lloyd: Whatever.

Hanami: Our Third and final match will be Bushi and Agnus Vs Scar and Crimson Eye!

Crimson Eye: Don’t lose.

Scar: Don’t tell me what to do!

Crimson Eye: If I don’t then this team will crumble.

Scar: Why you little!!

(Shu walks in)

Me: Shu!

Shu: Hey.

Valt: What took you so long?

Shu: Work, anyways how’s the tournament looking?

Me: Me and Brooke lost the first round.

Shu: Don’t worry, you’ve still got a chance to turn it around!

Colton: I’ve got to get training, I’ll catch you later!

Me: Come on Brooke, we’ve gotta beat ‘em!

(I run off)

Brooke: *Sighs* I’m coming.

~In Brooke’s Dorm~

Me: Knock ‘em out!

Brooke: Venture Launch!

(Belarix and Valtryek hit each other out of the stadium)

Me: *Gasps*

Brooke: Still not good enough!

Me: Maybe we should try using a Tag Team Move!

Brooke: With that combined attack power we could surely burst Congite and Jinnus!

Me: Then let’s get practicing!

~In Jay’s Dorm~

Jay: Honestly! I can’t wait for the Tag Team battles to be over! I’m through with you!

Colton: It’s your fault we lost that battle!

Jay: So it’s my fault that Cognite can’t withstand a little double attack!

Colton: If you would’ve been helpful I could’ve won!

Jay: You're going to stay on the stadium wall while I win this battle!

Colton: I’m gonna go all out!

Jay/Cokton: Hmp!

~In Brooke’s Dorm~

Ryuji: So you want us to help you work on your Tag Team skills?

Me: Yup, unless you don’t think you're good enough!

Adam: Of course we’re good enough! Let’s get started!

(Me and Brooke put our bey’s weights from the bottom to the top)

Me/Brooke: We’re ready!

Ryuji/Adam/Me/Brooke: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!

(Roktavor tries going for the center)

Brooke: Venture Launch!!

(Belarix hits Roktavor with a strong barrage of strikes)

Ryuji: Fight back! Ultra Berserker Wing Tornado!

(Roktavor creates a huge tornado and sends Belarix flying)

Brooke: *Gasps*

Ryuji: Aw yeah!

Adam: Samurai Guard!!

Me: Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek starts hitting Ashindra with a barrage of powerful strikes, Belarix catches onto the stadium rim)

Brooke: Venture Flash!!

(Belarix starts picking up speed around the stadium rim)

Ryuji: *Gasps*

Me: Thundering Recoil!!

(Valtryek sends Ashindra flying in the air)

Adam: Hang in there!

(Ashindra falls back on the stadium floor and picks up speed, Belarix heads straight for Roktavor)

Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!

Ryuji: Berserker Wing Storm!!

(Belarix gets blown away)

Brooke: Grr!!

Ryuji: We’ve been friends for a while! I know all your tricks!!

Me: Thundering Winged Launch!!

(Valtryek ricochets off the wall and hits Roktavor hard)

Me: Give ‘em your Winged Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek ricochets off the wall rapidly hitting Roktavor with a barrage of attacks)

Adam: I’m coming Ryuji!

(Ashindra tries hitting Valtryek but Belarix hits it away)

Brooke: I’m taking both of you down! Belarix!!

(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up Belarix blazes out of the bey)

Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!

(Belarix starts picking up speed and slams into Ashindra, Ashindra bursts)

Adam: No way!

(Belarix heads straight for Roktavor)

Me: Thundering Saber!!

(Valtryek slams into Roktavor, Roktavor starts wobbling)

Me: Brooke, end this!

Brooke: One last time! Grenade Bomb!!

(Belarix slams into Roktavor with force, Roktavor blows up and bursts)

Ryuji: No way!

(Roktavor’s parts roll at Ryuji’s feet)

Adam: You guys are powerful!

Ryuji: He’s right, for once.

Adam: I’ve been right tons of times!

Ryuji: Heh, in your dreams.

Adam: Why you little!

(Brooke and Vlad, your match is starting)

Me: We've gotta go! See ya!

(Me and Brooke run out of the dorm)

~In The Main Arena~

Hanami: Hello Bladers and Beyfans!! Today we’ll be having the first match of the 2nd Round!

(The crowd goes wild)

Hanami: It’s Vlad Aoi and Brooke Dakokutien Vs Colton Ackerman and Jay Burns! Here come our bladers!!

(Me Brooke Jay and Colton arrive on the elevators)

Me: Aw yeah!

Jay: Get ready to be taken down!

Colton: By me!

Jay: I meant me!

Colton: Let’s have an awesome battle guys!

Jay: Are you even listening?!

Hanami: Our bladers are fired up and ready to battle! Let’s start!!

(Colton puts Cognite’s weight from the bottom to the top)

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Jay/Brooke/Colton: Let it rip!!

Colton: Go Cognite!!

Me: Knock it away! Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek knocks away Cognite’s attack)

Hanami: We’ve just launched and we’ve already got action!

(Jinnus takes the center, Belarix starts hitting it with a barrage of attacks)

Brooke: Venture Launch!!

(Jinnus starts wobbling)

Hanami: Jinnus is barely withstanding Belarix’s strong barrage!

Colton: Warp Launch!!

Me: Thundering Recoil!!

(Cognite speeds into Valtryek for an attack, Valtryek intercepts it with its bound blade, Cognite gets shot up in the air)

Hanami: Valtryek just sent Cognite flying!

Colton: Spinning Moon Dive!!

Me: Dodge it!

(Cognite tries dive-bombing on Valtryek but Valtryek dodges it)

Me: Yes!

Jay: Jinx Wall!!

(A part of Jinnus pops up, Belarix’s attacks start missing, Belarix starts clashing against the wall)

Brooke: Grenade Counter!!

(Belarix speeds off the wall and slams into Jinnus, Jinnus starts wobbling)

Jay: *Gasps* No!

Hanami: Belarix just counterattacked!!

Me/Brooke it’s time!

Brooke: Belarix!

Me: Valtryek!

(Me and Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek and Belarix blaze out of the bey)

Me: Hit it Valtryek!

(Valtryek slams into Belarix with its bound blade, Belarix picks up serious speed)

Me/Brooke: Thundering Grenade!!

Colton: I’ll block it!

Jay: No don’t--

(Cognite gets next to Jinnus, Belarix slams into Cognite and Jinnus, Cognite and Jinnus both burst)

Referee: Thunder Valtryek and Grenade Belarix win!!

Hanami: Unbelievable! Valtryek shot Belarix into Cognite and Jinnus and burst both of them!!

Me/Brooke: Aw yeah!!

Jay: This is all your fault, if you wouldn’t have done that we would’ve won!

Colton: It’s not my fault that you're horrible at defending!

(Colton and Jay start arguing)

Brooke: They’re not going to win like this anytime soon.

Me: I know.

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE COLTON, NOOOOOOOOOO

Um, well you see plot did him dirty is all I can say

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 14, 2021 12:27 AM

(Jul. 13, 2021 11:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 13, 2021 11:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE COLTON, NOOOOOOOOOO

Um, well you see plot did him dirty is all I can say

bruh colton better win or i might ban your fanfic lol

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 14, 2021 12:55 AM

In one of the text where jay and Colton where arguing you said

“Jay/Cokton

Also great chapter!

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Staron · Jul. 14, 2021 1:03 AM

Even though Bushi and Agnus won, feel bad for Colton.

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UnseenBurst · Jul. 14, 2021 4:52 AM

Chapter 34 is out!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Legend27 · Jul. 14, 2021 7:01 AM

Your fan fictions are amazing dude

Valt and Valkyrie are my favorite
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Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 14, 2021 7:27 AM

(Jul. 13, 2021 11:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 13, 2021 11:52 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE COLTON, NOOOOOOOOOO

Um, well you see plot did him dirty is all I can say

Plot did Drake and Daniel dirty too lol

Demon Belial · Jul. 14, 2021 12:02 PM

So much happened while I was away! I'll read it now

Staron · Jul. 14, 2021 3:03 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 4:52 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 34 is out!

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 34
The Vicious Skater!! Vicious Satomb!!

Hanami: Hello everyone! We’re about to start the 2nd Match of the Second Round! Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Faza De La Hoya and Lloyd Shirosagi! Let’s get started!

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Daniel/Drake/Lloyd/Faza: Let it rip!!

Daniel: Go Dragon!!

(Dragon speeds up and heads straight for Luinor)

Hanami: Dragon starts by heading straight for Luinor!

Lloyd: Destruct Spiral!!

(Luinor speeds up and sends Dragon flying)

Daniel: *Gasps*

Hanami: Dragon has been sent sky high!

Drake: Scythe Strike!!

(Doomsizer hits Fafnir with a barrage of strikes, Fafnir just absorbs them)

Faza: Is this really all you’ve got?

(Dragon starts crashing down from the air)

Daniel: Royal Recoil!

(Dragon slams down on Luinor)

Lloyd: Destruct Upper!!

(Luinor sends Dragon into the wall, Dragon starts wobbling)

Daniel: Hang in there!

Lloyd: End this! Destructing Smash!!

(Luinor slams into Dragon, Dragon bursts)

Daniel: *Gasps*

Hanami: Dragon’s been burst!

Drake: End this Doomsizer!! Scythe--

(Luinor slams into Doomsizer, Doomsizer bursts)

Drake: *Gasps*

Referee: Destruct Luinor and Void Fafnir win!

Drake: Grr!!

Hanami: Faza and Lloyd ended things quickly and didn’t even need to break a sweat!

(Faza and Lloyd walk away)

Daniel: I’m sorry.

Drake: It’s not your fault, we just weren’t strong enough.

(Drake and Daniel walk away)

Me: Wow, Faza and Lloyd are really strong!

Valt: Well, they were trained by Lui and Free!

Me: Why didn’t you train me?!

Valt: Uh, I wanted you to learn how to battle yourself!

Me: Aw, that’s awesome!

Shu: You didn’t think of training him did you?

Valt: *Laughs shyly*

(Scar gets up from his seat)

Silas: Where are you going?

Scar: Does it matter?

(Scar leaves)

Rantaro: He reminds me of you!

Silas: Nah! Yo Valt’s small gang, check out what Scar’s doing!

Me/Ryuji/Adam/Brooke: You’ve got it!

(We run after Scar)

Me: We’ve gotta be quiet.

Brooke: Should we really be following him?

Ryuji: Maybe he’s up to something.

Scar: Relax, I’m just training.

Adam: Cool-- Wait what?!

(We all fall on each other)

Scar: You’re really bad at sneaking around.

Me: Well you see--

Scar: My dad asked you to do it, I know. Let it rip!!

(Scar pulls off a strong launch)

Scar: He worries about me too much!

Brooke: Silas was a strong blader back in his day, maybe you should listen to him?

Scar: He’s weak!! But I’m the exact opposite! I’m strong and he’s weak, end of discussion!

Me: Alright.

Scar: Since you were stalking me I suppose you owe me a favor!

Adam: *Gulps* What type of favor?

Scar: I want Brooke to battle me!

All: *Gasps*

Me: Hey, why don’t you battle me?

Scar: Let’s face it, without Brooke you wouldn’t even be at this point!

Me: Grr!!

Brooke: I accept your challenge!

Adam: I’ll be the referee! Inspect your opponent's bey!

Brooke (Thoughts): Vicious Satomb, a Clockwise spinning defense type! Its layer has a free-spinning tire around it to block attacks so knocking this over will be hard, it’s disk, and driver all have rollers on them to unleash wicked counter attacks! Let’s see how this plays out!

Adam: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Brooke/Scar: Let it rip!!

(Satomb takes the center)

Brooke: Go Belarix!

(Belarix hits Satomb with a barrage of attacks, Satomb blocks all of them)

Scar: Give me a run for my money! Roller Defense!!

Brooke: Hit ‘em harder! Venture Launch!!

(Belarix starts hitting Satomb with powerful strikes, Satomb blocks all the attacks with its free-spinning tire)

Brooke: Belarix!!

(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up Belarix flares out of the bey)

Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!

(Belarix speeds into Satomb, Satomb gets sent flying)

Scar: Satomb!!

(Scar’s Resonance Aura flares up Satomb blazes out of the bey)

Scar: Whirl Drift!!

(Satomb picks up speed while drifting on its driver and speeds into Belarix, Belarix gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Brooke: *Gasps*

Adam: It’s Scar Karlisle with a ring-out finish! Scar wins!!

Scar: See, I’m stronger than my dad, I’m the rightful owner of Satomb.

Me: Battle me next!

Scar: It would be a waste of my time.

Me: Didn’t you hear that I beat Aiden Peregrin!

Scar: *Gasps*

(Scar Karlisle your match is starting soon)

Scar: Catch you later.

(Scar walks away)

Me: You’d better not forget about our match!

Scar (Thoughts): I’m not gonna’ battle a Valt wanna be.

~In The Arena~

Hanami: Hello bladers! Today we’ll be continuing the 2nd Round of the IWC’s!

(The crowd goes wild)

Hanami: It’s Scar Karlisle and Crimson Eye Vs Agnus Akabane and Bushi Kurogane!!

(Bushi Agnus Crimson Eye and Scar arrive on the elevators)

Scar: We’re beating you!

(Scar punches his fist into his palm)

Agnus: Me and Bushi are gonna send you flying! Ain’t that right, Bushi?!

(Bushi nods)

Crimson Eye: Don’t tank.

Scar: I wasn’t planning on it!

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Agnus/Bushi/Crimson Eye/Scar: Let it rip!!

(Bushi Agnus and Crimson Eye go in Attack Mode, Crimson Eye goes in Counterclockwise Mode)

(Satomb takes the center)

Hanami: After four strong launches Satomb sets up camp in the center!!

Agnus: Blow ‘em away! Echo Launch!!

Scar: Nice try! Vicious Twister!!

(Achilles hits Satomb with a barrage of attacks, Satomb blocks all of the attacks)

Bushi: Shogun Launch!!

(Ifrit tries going in for an attack but Spryzen hits it away)

Crimson Eye: Upper Launch!!

(Spryzen hits Ifrit with a barrage of attacks)

Hanami: Ifrit is getting pulverized by Spryzen!

Agnus: Achilles!!

(Agnus’ Resonance Aura flares up Achilles blazes out of the bey)

Scar: Satomb!!

(Scar’s Resonance Aura flares up Satomb blazes out of the bey)

Agnus: Echo Breaker!!

(Achilles slams into Satomb, Satomb starts wobbling, Satomb starts drifting on its driver)

Scar: Whirl Drift!!

(Satomb speeds into Achilles, Satomb and Achilles starts wobbling)

Hanami: It’s a battle of stamina now!

Scar/Agnus: Hang in there!!

(Satomb stops spinning after Achilles)

Scar: Yes!

Hanami: Satomb wins the battle of stamina!!

Bushi: ifrit!!

(Bushi’s Resonance Aura flares up Ifrit flares out of the bey)

Crimson Eye: Spryzen!!

(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up Spryzen flares out of the bey)

Bushi: Shogun Slash!!

Crimson Eye: Storming Ax!!

(Spryzen and Ifrit start clashing hard, Ifrit gets sent flying in the air and bursts)

Referee: Vicious Satomb and Spryzen Stormbringer win!!

Bushi: Darn it!

Hanami: Spryzen just burst Ifrit into next year! And Scar and Crimson Eye have claimed their 2nd win!

Agnus: It’s ok, we tried our best.

Scar: Did you see how well I did?

Crimson Eye: You didn’t burst Achilles, disappointing.

Scar: Are you ever pleased!

Silas (Thoughts): Good job, Scar.

Damn, Bushi lost.
But at the end, if he loses an important event, like to a top blader or a tournament like in the Finals or Semi-Finals, he usually screams at the top of his lungs that he'd failed his father and all that.

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Demon Belial · Jul. 14, 2021 3:23 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 3:03 PM)Staron Wrote:
(Jul. 14, 2021 4:52 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 34 is out!

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 34
The Vicious Skater!! Vicious Satomb!!

Hanami: Hello everyone! We’re about to start the 2nd Match of the Second Round! Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Faza De La Hoya and Lloyd Shirosagi! Let’s get started!

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Daniel/Drake/Lloyd/Faza: Let it rip!!

Daniel: Go Dragon!!

(Dragon speeds up and heads straight for Luinor)

Hanami: Dragon starts by heading straight for Luinor!

Lloyd: Destruct Spiral!!

(Luinor speeds up and sends Dragon flying)

Daniel: *Gasps*

Hanami: Dragon has been sent sky high!

Drake: Scythe Strike!!

(Doomsizer hits Fafnir with a barrage of strikes, Fafnir just absorbs them)

Faza: Is this really all you’ve got?

(Dragon starts crashing down from the air)

Daniel: Royal Recoil!

(Dragon slams down on Luinor)

Lloyd: Destruct Upper!!

(Luinor sends Dragon into the wall, Dragon starts wobbling)

Daniel: Hang in there!

Lloyd: End this! Destructing Smash!!

(Luinor slams into Dragon, Dragon bursts)

Daniel: *Gasps*

Hanami: Dragon’s been burst!

Drake: End this Doomsizer!! Scythe--

(Luinor slams into Doomsizer, Doomsizer bursts)

Drake: *Gasps*

Referee: Destruct Luinor and Void Fafnir win!

Drake: Grr!!

Hanami: Faza and Lloyd ended things quickly and didn’t even need to break a sweat!

(Faza and Lloyd walk away)

Daniel: I’m sorry.

Drake: It’s not your fault, we just weren’t strong enough.

(Drake and Daniel walk away)

Me: Wow, Faza and Lloyd are really strong!

Valt: Well, they were trained by Lui and Free!

Me: Why didn’t you train me?!

Valt: Uh, I wanted you to learn how to battle yourself!

Me: Aw, that’s awesome!

Shu: You didn’t think of training him did you?

Valt: *Laughs shyly*

(Scar gets up from his seat)

Silas: Where are you going?

Scar: Does it matter?

(Scar leaves)

Rantaro: He reminds me of you!

Silas: Nah! Yo Valt’s small gang, check out what Scar’s doing!

Me/Ryuji/Adam/Brooke: You’ve got it!

(We run after Scar)

Me: We’ve gotta be quiet.

Brooke: Should we really be following him?

Ryuji: Maybe he’s up to something.

Scar: Relax, I’m just training.

Adam: Cool-- Wait what?!

(We all fall on each other)

Scar: You’re really bad at sneaking around.

Me: Well you see--

Scar: My dad asked you to do it, I know. Let it rip!!

(Scar pulls off a strong launch)

Scar: He worries about me too much!

Brooke: Silas was a strong blader back in his day, maybe you should listen to him?

Scar: He’s weak!! But I’m the exact opposite! I’m strong and he’s weak, end of discussion!

Me: Alright.

Scar: Since you were stalking me I suppose you owe me a favor!

Adam: *Gulps* What type of favor?

Scar: I want Brooke to battle me!

All: *Gasps*

Me: Hey, why don’t you battle me?

Scar: Let’s face it, without Brooke you wouldn’t even be at this point!

Me: Grr!!

Brooke: I accept your challenge!

Adam: I’ll be the referee! Inspect your opponent's bey!

Brooke (Thoughts): Vicious Satomb, a Clockwise spinning defense type! Its layer has a free-spinning tire around it to block attacks so knocking this over will be hard, it’s disk, and driver all have rollers on them to unleash wicked counter attacks! Let’s see how this plays out!

Adam: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Brooke/Scar: Let it rip!!

(Satomb takes the center)

Brooke: Go Belarix!

(Belarix hits Satomb with a barrage of attacks, Satomb blocks all of them)

Scar: Give me a run for my money! Roller Defense!!

Brooke: Hit ‘em harder! Venture Launch!!

(Belarix starts hitting Satomb with powerful strikes, Satomb blocks all the attacks with its free-spinning tire)

Brooke: Belarix!!

(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up Belarix flares out of the bey)

Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!

(Belarix speeds into Satomb, Satomb gets sent flying)

Scar: Satomb!!

(Scar’s Resonance Aura flares up Satomb blazes out of the bey)

Scar: Whirl Drift!!

(Satomb picks up speed while drifting on its driver and speeds into Belarix, Belarix gets sent flying out of the stadium)

Brooke: *Gasps*

Adam: It’s Scar Karlisle with a ring-out finish! Scar wins!!

Scar: See, I’m stronger than my dad, I’m the rightful owner of Satomb.

Me: Battle me next!

Scar: It would be a waste of my time.

Me: Didn’t you hear that I beat Aiden Peregrin!

Scar: *Gasps*

(Scar Karlisle your match is starting soon)

Scar: Catch you later.

(Scar walks away)

Me: You’d better not forget about our match!

Scar (Thoughts): I’m not gonna’ battle a Valt wanna be.

~In The Arena~

Hanami: Hello bladers! Today we’ll be continuing the 2nd Round of the IWC’s!

(The crowd goes wild)

Hanami: It’s Scar Karlisle and Crimson Eye Vs Agnus Akabane and Bushi Kurogane!!

(Bushi Agnus Crimson Eye and Scar arrive on the elevators)

Scar: We’re beating you!

(Scar punches his fist into his palm)

Agnus: Me and Bushi are gonna send you flying! Ain’t that right, Bushi?!

(Bushi nods)

Crimson Eye: Don’t tank.

Scar: I wasn’t planning on it!

Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Agnus/Bushi/Crimson Eye/Scar: Let it rip!!

(Bushi Agnus and Crimson Eye go in Attack Mode, Crimson Eye goes in Counterclockwise Mode)

(Satomb takes the center)

Hanami: After four strong launches Satomb sets up camp in the center!!

Agnus: Blow ‘em away! Echo Launch!!

Scar: Nice try! Vicious Twister!!

(Achilles hits Satomb with a barrage of attacks, Satomb blocks all of the attacks)

Bushi: Shogun Launch!!

(Ifrit tries going in for an attack but Spryzen hits it away)

Crimson Eye: Upper Launch!!

(Spryzen hits Ifrit with a barrage of attacks)

Hanami: Ifrit is getting pulverized by Spryzen!

Agnus: Achilles!!

(Agnus’ Resonance Aura flares up Achilles blazes out of the bey)

Scar: Satomb!!

(Scar’s Resonance Aura flares up Satomb blazes out of the bey)

Agnus: Echo Breaker!!

(Achilles slams into Satomb, Satomb starts wobbling, Satomb starts drifting on its driver)

Scar: Whirl Drift!!

(Satomb speeds into Achilles, Satomb and Achilles starts wobbling)

Hanami: It’s a battle of stamina now!

Scar/Agnus: Hang in there!!

(Satomb stops spinning after Achilles)

Scar: Yes!

Hanami: Satomb wins the battle of stamina!!

Bushi: ifrit!!

(Bushi’s Resonance Aura flares up Ifrit flares out of the bey)

Crimson Eye: Spryzen!!

(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up Spryzen flares out of the bey)

Bushi: Shogun Slash!!

Crimson Eye: Storming Ax!!

(Spryzen and Ifrit start clashing hard, Ifrit gets sent flying in the air and bursts)

Referee: Vicious Satomb and Spryzen Stormbringer win!!

Bushi: Darn it!

Hanami: Spryzen just burst Ifrit into next year! And Scar and Crimson Eye have claimed their 2nd win!

Agnus: It’s ok, we tried our best.

Scar: Did you see how well I did?

Crimson Eye: You didn’t burst Achilles, disappointing.

Scar: Are you ever pleased!

Silas (Thoughts): Good job, Scar.

Damn, Bushi lost.
But at the end, if he loses an important event, like to a top blader or a tournament like in the Finals or Semi-Finals, he usually screams at the top of his lungs that he'd failed his father and all that.

Oh. He's an interesting character

Staron · Jul. 14, 2021 3:51 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 3:23 PM)Demon Belial Wrote:
(Jul. 14, 2021 3:03 PM)Staron Wrote: Damn, Bushi lost.
But at the end, if he loses an important event, like to a top blader or a tournament like in the Finals or Semi-Finals, he usually screams at the top of his lungs that he'd failed his father and all that.

Oh. He's an interesting character

Yeah, he takes pride in his battles, so it would be cool if he would be the new Lui as of now.

Not the whole unbeatable blader thing, but the one to face Crimson Eye before the big match, since if he loses, he could maybe be cheered up by the main characters or come back even stronger.

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UnseenBurst · Jul. 14, 2021 5:34 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 7:01 AM)Legend27 Wrote: Your fan fictions are amazing dude

Thanks

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Lucha Burst · Jul. 14, 2021 5:54 PM

Another amazing chapter

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UnseenBurst · Jul. 14, 2021 5:54 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 5:54 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Another amazing chapter

Thanks!

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

PinkRose · Jul. 14, 2021 6:47 PM

At this point I just want someone (preferably Shu) to walk up to Sebastian, flip him off, and then tell him that his naming sense is somehow worse than Red Eye and that he needs to get over his phase.

I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 14, 2021 6:48 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 6:47 PM)PinkRose Wrote: At this point I just want someone (preferably Shu) to walk up to Sebastian, flip him off, and then tell him that his naming sense is somehow worse than Red Eye and that he needs to get over his phase.

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY SEBASTIAN, WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

PinkRose · Jul. 14, 2021 6:50 PM

Because apparently all Kurenais go through the exact same cliche at some point in their life.

I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

UnseenBurst · Jul. 14, 2021 6:50 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 6:47 PM)PinkRose Wrote: At this point I just want someone (preferably Shu) to walk up to Sebastian, flip him off, and then tell him that his naming sense is somehow worse than Red Eye and that he needs to get over his phase.

He legally changed his name to Crimson Eye LOL

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 14, 2021 6:54 PM

(Jul. 14, 2021 6:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 14, 2021 6:47 PM)PinkRose Wrote: At this point I just want someone (preferably Shu) to walk up to Sebastian, flip him off, and then tell him that his naming sense is somehow worse than Red Eye and that he needs to get over his phase.

He legally changed his name to Crimson Eye LOL

lol i thought it was just a nickname

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz