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[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Dynachi!

Jul. 10, 2021  5:14 PM
 
I wonder if it's allowed, but will it be similar formula to a specific series of Beyblade or a new idea?

For example, in Beyblade Burst, main character faces antagonist, main character loses.

Evolution/God, beats main rival who is also the villain.

Turbo/ChoZ, character is cocky but overcomes that cockiness to become king of Beyblade and so on and so forth.
Jul. 10, 2021  5:38 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  5:14 PM)Staron Wrote: I wonder if it's allowed, but will it be similar formula to a specific series of Beyblade or a new idea?

For example, in Beyblade Burst, main character faces antagonist, main character loses.

Evolution/God, beats main rival who is also the villain.

Turbo/ChoZ, character is cocky but overcomes that cockiness to become king of Beyblade and so on and so forth.
For now the plot looks like Evolution.
Jul. 10, 2021  6:25 PM
 
Chapter 31 is out @"Valt Aoi01" your character is in here LJ is not going to be happy
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Jul. 10, 2021  6:29 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 31 is out @"Valt Aoi01" your character is in here LJ is not going to be happy
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uh huh yep my boi colton got the win in the bag uh huh
Jul. 10, 2021  6:35 PM
 
There is one thing I wanna mention about Bushi, he takes pride in wins and losses because he doesn't wanna disappoint his dad.

So he would feel really bad when he loses.

And he has as much of a bond as most of the main characters of the metal saga of beys.
Jul. 10, 2021  6:41 PM
 
Nice chapter! But Colton won?!
Jul. 10, 2021  6:48 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!

*Runs Away*
Jul. 10, 2021  6:50 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!

*Runs Away*

lol
Jul. 10, 2021  7:46 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 31 is out @"Valt Aoi01" your character is in here LJ is not going to be happy
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Nice really liked this chapter!
Jul. 10, 2021  7:53 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!

*Runs Away*

Lol
Jul. 10, 2021  9:13 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!

*Runs Away*

How many bladers will there be in IWC?
Jul. 10, 2021  9:20 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  9:13 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote:
(Jul. 10, 2021  6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: *Runs Away*

How many bladers will there be in IWC?

12
Jul. 10, 2021  9:35 PM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  9:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 10, 2021  9:13 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: How many bladers will there be in IWC?

12
Hope one of them is Bushi.
Jul. 11, 2021  7:16 AM
 
(Jul. 10, 2021  9:35 PM)Staron Wrote:
(Jul. 10, 2021  9:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 12
Hope one of them is Bushi.

8 bladers have been confimed.

Vladt
Colton
Brooke
Drake
Sebestian
Faza
Llyod
And that aiger's son(forgot his name)
Jul. 11, 2021  7:39 AM
 
(May. 21, 2021  4:17 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Hey Guys!!! I'm making this fanfic called Beyblade Burst Dynachi!!! Which will feature all of you!!! These are the rules to be in it!!! 1. You must fill out the registration it is short. 2. You cannot make a bey you need to use a Beyblade from S1-S7 3. You cannot have an antagonist Bey 4. Your character has to be related to the original owner of the bey. 5. You can only make new drivers and disks. 6. Have fun and tell me if you want any changes!!! These are the things you need for your registration. @Jjustice was the first register.

Name: 

Bey Name: 

Age: 

Personality:

What you look like (Optional): 

 Bey Moves:

If you wanna be in say me and fill this out
@Jjustice can you please move your registration here thanks Smile

Name: Scar Karlisle

Beyblade: Vicious Satomb. The layer is free spinning with rubber to avoid damage and spin steal. Disc- Kinetic. This disc is just like the layer of kinetic satomb it has rollers. The driver: Loop metal. And the gear is R gear(Roller)

Age: 16

Personality: Same like Silas but he hates Silas for being so weak.(Silas is his father) His goal is same as his father to best Fafnir.

Bey moves: Vicious Wall. The rollers helps the bey for defence.

Whirl loop: same like cyclone loop. But loop is metal So it will make sparks in the stadium.

Kinetic Counter: The bey counters the attack and has a huge burst rate.
Jul. 11, 2021  10:18 AM
 
(Jul. 11, 2021  7:16 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote:
(Jul. 10, 2021  9:35 PM)Staron Wrote: Hope one of them is Bushi.

8 bladers have been confimed.

Vlad- Valtryek
Colton- Cognite
Brooke- Belial (Belarix i think)
Drake- Doomscissor
Sebastian- Sprizen
Faza- Fafnir
Llyod- Luinor
Agnus - Achilles
His name is Agnus.
 It will end with Vlad vs Sebastian am I right?
(I edited the quoting, hope you don't mind)
Jul. 11, 2021  10:25 AM
 
(Jul. 11, 2021  10:18 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 11, 2021  7:16 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: 8 bladers have been confimed.

Vlad- Valkyrie
Colton- Chronos
Brooke- Belial (Belarix i think)
Drake- Deathscyther
Sebastian- Spriggan
Faza- Fafnir
Llyod- Longinus
Agnus - Achilles
His name is Agnus.
 It will end with Vlad vs Sebastian am I right?
(I edited the quoting, hope you don't mind)

I guess Daniel and Xerneus will be there too. And if bushin and Scar(My character) compete in World Championships then it's perfectly 12
Jul. 11, 2021  1:21 PM
 
(Jul. 11, 2021  10:18 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 11, 2021  7:16 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: 8 bladers have been confimed.

Vlad- Valtryek
Colton- Cognite
Brooke- Belial (Belarix i think)
Drake- Doomscissor
Sebastian- Sprizen
Faza- Fafnir
Llyod- Luinor
Agnus - Achilles
His name is Agnus.
 It will end with Vlad vs Sebastian am I right?
(I edited the quoting, hope you don't mind)
I guess the top 4 will be Vlad,Sebastian,Faza and Agnus.
Jul. 11, 2021  4:53 PM
 
1. Faza De La Hoya

2. Lloyd Shirosagi

3. Crimson Eye (Aka Sebastian Kurenai)

4. Jay Burns

5. Agnus Akabane

6. Daniel Koryu

7. Drake Kurogami

8. Bushi Kurogane

9. Vlad Aoi

10. Colton Ackerman

11. Brooke Dakokutien

12. Scar Karlisle

These are the rankings and participating bladers in the tourney
First Round
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Jul. 11, 2021  5:19 PM
 
(Jul. 11, 2021  4:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 1. Faza De La Hoya

2. Lloyd Shirosagi

3. Crimson Eye (Aka Sebastian Kurenai)

4. Jay Burns

5. Agnus Akabane

6. Daniel Koryu

7. Drake Kurogami

8. Bushi Kurogane

9. Vlad Aoi

10. Colton Ackerman

11. Brooke Dakokutien

12. Scar Karlisle

These are the rankings and participating bladers in the tourney
First Round
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uh happened to xerxes shakadera
Jul. 11, 2021  5:25 PM
 
(Jul. 11, 2021  5:19 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 11, 2021  4:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 1. Faza De La Hoya

2. Lloyd Shirosagi

3. Crimson Eye (Aka Sebastian Kurenai)

4. Jay Burns

5. Agnus Akabane

6. Daniel Koryu

7. Drake Kurogami

8. Bushi Kurogane

9. Vlad Aoi

10. Colton Ackerman

11. Brooke Dakokutien

12. Scar Karlisle

These are the rankings and participating bladers in the tourney
First Round
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uh happened to xerxes shakadera

I didn't have space for him so I only included him in the Battleship arc same with Zafary
Jul. 11, 2021  8:11 PM
 
Yes Jay is back!,
Jul. 12, 2021  6:25 AM
 
(Jul. 11, 2021  5:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 11, 2021  5:19 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: uh happened to xerxes shakadera

I didn't have space for him so I only included him in the Battleship arc same with Zafary

Cool. Did not expected to team up with Crimson eye
Jul. 12, 2021  10:59 PM
 
Chapter 31 is here!! The IWC's have officially started!!
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Jul. 12, 2021  11:09 PM
 
(Jul. 12, 2021  10:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 31 is here!! The IWC's have officially started!!
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Nice chapter, I can't spot any grammar mistake
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