[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst Dynachi!

UnseenBurst · Jun. 03, 2021 10:02 PM

(Jun. 03, 2021 9:52 PM)JJustice Wrote:
(Jun. 03, 2021 9:32 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Ok Fafnir is the only bey that's not taken so you can use that

The Dynachi system is made of 6 parts Dynachi Ring. Dynachi Chip. Dynachi Weight. Dynachi Gear. Disk. and Driver. The Dynachi Ring is a combination of the dynamite Blade and Gachi layer the chip is a dynamite chip the weight you can move under the gear to make the center of gravity low or put it on the layer to make the center of gravity high. The Gear is to add extra attack defense or weight it is basically like the F gear for Dynamite Belial
If you need more info talk to me

How would you feel if you were supposed to be super strong and famous then you got beaten by a couple of nobodies new to Beyblade that's what Jay is going through

.... I would turn to the snake pit for help 😈

The snake pit was demolished after evolution and Theodore Glass got arrested years ago (In Dynachi at least)

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jun. 03, 2021 10:05 PM

(Jun. 03, 2021 10:02 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Jun. 03, 2021 9:52 PM)JJustice Wrote: .... I would turn to the snake pit for help 😈

The snake pit was demolished after evolution and Theodore Glass got arrested years ago (In Dynachi at least)

Oh then I would turn to the guy in metal fight he will make me stronger with his bey dark wolf

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Lucha Burst · Jun. 03, 2021 10:21 PM

Name: Faza De La Hoya

Eye color: gold

Hair color: Gold with a blue highlight, same as frees but with a blue highlight

Age: 13

Look like: Faza is tall with a lean build, he wears a tank-top blue and black short-sleeved jacket with gold highlights, He also features a blue arm sleeve with gold straps, similar to his brother free's the green one. he wears loose black pants with short gold shoes with blue laces

Personality: When meeting new people he tends to be as quiet as his brother but once he gets to know someone he can be very vocal to them. along with this, he has an eye for Beyblade, he can tell gimmicks just from one look and he can see a Beyblades movement pattern as it spins

Beyblade: Void Fafnir... I created the basic name if that's ok
@"Strikegamerv6"

character done! sorry for the format problem lol

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UnseenBurst · Jun. 03, 2021 10:25 PM

(Jun. 03, 2021 10:21 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Name: Faza De La Hoya

Eye color: gold

Hair color: Gold with a blue highlight, same as frees but with a blue highlight

Age: 13

Look like: Faza is tall with a lean build, he wears a tank-top blue and black short-sleeved jacket with gold highlights, He also features a blue arm sleeve with gold straps, similar to his brother free's the green one. he wears loose black pants with short gold shoes with blue laces

Personality: When meeting new people he tends to be as quiet as his brother but once he gets to know someone he can be very vocal to them. along with this, he has an eye for Beyblade, he can tell gimmicks just from one look and he can see a Beyblades movement pattern as it spins

Beyblade: Void Fafnir... I created the basic name if that's ok
@"Strikegamerv6"

character done! sorry for the format problem lol

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jun. 03, 2021 10:26 PM

(Jun. 03, 2021 10:25 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:21 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Name: Faza De La Hoya

Eye color: gold

Hair color: Gold with a blue highlight, same as frees but with a blue highlight

Age: 13

Look like: Faza is tall with a lean build, he wears a tank-top blue and black short-sleeved jacket with gold highlights, He also features a blue arm sleeve with gold straps, similar to his brother free's the green one. he wears loose black pants with short gold shoes with blue laces

Personality: When meeting new people he tends to be as quiet as his brother but once he gets to know someone he can be very vocal to them. along with this, he has an eye for Beyblade, he can tell gimmicks just from one look and he can see a Beyblades movement pattern as it spins

Beyblade: Void Fafnir... I created the basic name if that's ok
@"Strikegamerv6"

character done! sorry for the format problem lol

Boy or Girl?

Boy in the sentence lucha said he but I'm not sure for sure

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Lucha Burst · Jun. 03, 2021 10:26 PM

(Jun. 03, 2021 10:25 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:21 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Name: Faza De La Hoya

Eye color: gold

Hair color: Gold with a blue highlight, same as frees but with a blue highlight

Age: 13

Look like: Faza is tall with a lean build, he wears a tank-top blue and black short-sleeved jacket with gold highlights, He also features a blue arm sleeve with gold straps, similar to his brother free's the green one. he wears loose black pants with short gold shoes with blue laces

Personality: When meeting new people he tends to be as quiet as his brother but once he gets to know someone he can be very vocal to them. along with this, he has an eye for Beyblade, he can tell gimmicks just from one look and he can see a Beyblades movement pattern as it spins

Beyblade: Void Fafnir... I created the basic name if that's ok
@"Strikegamerv6"

character done! sorry for the format problem lol

Boy or Girl?

Boy

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LegendJustice · Jun. 03, 2021 10:27 PM

(Jun. 03, 2021 10:26 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote:
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:25 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Boy or Girl?
Boy

Knew it

Was Strike what a cute bird

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(Jun. 03, 2021 10:25 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Jun. 03, 2021 10:21 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Name: Faza De La Hoya

Eye color: gold

Hair color: Gold with a blue highlight, same as frees but with a blue highlight

Age: 13

Look like: Faza is tall with a lean build, he wears a tank-top blue and black short-sleeved jacket with gold highlights, He also features a blue arm sleeve with gold straps, similar to his brother free's the green one. he wears loose black pants with short gold shoes with blue laces

Personality: When meeting new people he tends to be as quiet as his brother but once he gets to know someone he can be very vocal to them. along with this, he has an eye for Beyblade, he can tell gimmicks just from one look and he can see a Beyblades movement pattern as it spins

Beyblade: Void Fafnir... I created the basic name if that's ok
@"Strikegamerv6"

character done! sorry for the format problem lol

Chapter 12 name and summary
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Bey of Magic Void Fafnir!!! The Bey Cruiser makes a pit stop at Spain so the gang looks around to meet the newest blader riding up the ranks!!

Great name 👍

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jun. 04, 2021 12:30 AM

Chapter 12 was changed!!

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LegendJustice · Jun. 04, 2021 12:38 AM

(Jun. 04, 2021 12:30 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 12 was changed!!

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Destruction! Destruct Luinor!! Lloyd decided to evolve Luinor into a Dynachi bey

Epic

LLoyd sounds like ninjago

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Lucha Burst · Jun. 04, 2021 12:40 AM

(Jun. 04, 2021 12:30 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 12 was changed!!

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Destruction! Destruct Luinor!! Lloyd decided to evolve Luinor into a Dynachi bey

oooh, cool

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UnseenBurst · Jun. 04, 2021 6:26 PM

Chapter 13

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this will be easier to understand after I post chapter 12

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LegendJustice · Jun. 04, 2021 6:34 PM

(Jun. 04, 2021 6:26 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 13
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Fix The Friendship!!! Adam and Ryuji are having some hard times!!
this will be easier to understand after I post chapter 12

Oop they will become friends?

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jun. 04, 2021 6:47 PM

Chapter 12 is out :)

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(Jun. 04, 2021 6:34 PM)JJustice Wrote:
(Jun. 04, 2021 6:26 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 13
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Fix The Friendship!!! Adam and Ryuji are having some hard times!!
this will be easier to understand after I post chapter 12

Oop they will become friends?

What do you think?

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jun. 04, 2021 7:05 PM

(Jun. 04, 2021 6:47 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 12 is out

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 12
Destruction! Destruct Luinor!!

(Xerxes starts punching a punching bag)

(Xerxes’s Thoughts): I’m supposed to be Prince Xerxes!! I can’t be losing!!

(I walk by)

Me: Hey man!!

Xerxes: Hello fellow Lad!!

Me: You can just call me Vlad!!

Xerxes: Well then Vlad what brought you here this late?

Me: After my battle with you I just couldn't sleep I had to get training!!

Xerxes: Speaking of that.

Me: Huh?

Xerxes: Vlad I want to get as strong as you are!! Would you be my rival?

Me: Sure!!

Xerxes: Then it is settled next time we meet I will win!!

Me: In your dreams.

(I yawn)

Xerxes: Look who’s tired now!!

(Xerxes yawns)

Me: Speak for yourself!!

(We laugh as we head to bed)

(In the workshop)

Lloyd: I will not lose again like that!!

(Lloyd flashes back)

Aiden: Omega Blast!!

(Luinor bursts)

(Back in the present)

Lloyd: Dad’s expecting great things off me!! I have to live up to him!!

(Lloyd starts building his bey, 2 hours later)

Lloyd: It’s done Destruct Luinor!!

(The next day)

Alarm: ADAM KUSABA WAKE UP!!!

(Adam falls off the bunk bed)

Adam: What about Vlad.

(Adam looks at Adam’s bed but he’s not there)

Adam: *Gasps*

(On the ship)

Me: Hey Brooke!! You are on a run!!

(Brooke doesn't comment)

Me: Let’s race!!

(I zoom past Brooke)

Brooke: *Sighs*

(Brooke speeds up)

Me: So you're down for a race!?

Brooke: I guess so.

Me: Whoever gets to the other side of the ship first wins!!

(I speed up)

Brooke: Oh no you don’t!

(Brooke speeds up)

Me/Brooke: I’m winning!!

(We get to the other side of the ship)

Me: Looks like I won!!

Brooke: In your dreams!

(Adam runs to find us)
Adam: The matches are starting soon!! Get a move on!!

(We run to the Arena)

Announcer: Hello everyone!! Today we’ve got more matches in store for you all!! And--

Lloyd: Listen up everyone!!

Everyone: *Gasps*

Lloyd: My Destruct Luinor will beat all of you and will win!!

Me: A Dynachi Bey?

Lloyd: That’s right!!

Announcer: Lloyd has declared victory already!! And I haven’t even said that matchups!! Ok with that out of the way our matches will be!!
Ryuji Kiyama Vs Xerxes Shakadera Vs Jay Burns!!

Jay: Lights!! Camera!! Action!!

Ryuji: Xerxes look out!!

Announcer: Second match will be!! Lloyd Shirosagi Vs Sebastian Kurenai Vs Adam Kusaba!!

Adam: Time for me to shine!!

Lloyd: Perfect Opponents to test Luinor with!!

Sebastian: I’m so taking you down!!

Announcer: Our final match will be!! Vlad Aoi Vs Brooke Daikokuten Vs Daniel Koryu!!

Daniel: I’m gonna rise up and win!!

Vlad: What about Aiden?

Announcer: Aiden said he’s working on a project and he will not be here!!

Adam: Best news ever.

Ryuji: You're scared!!

Adam: Can’t you find something to do!!

Ryuji: Why do you think I came to this cruise!!

Adam: Because you're weak!!

Ryuji: You're the one to talk, you haven’t even won one battle!!!

Adam: Grr!!!

Announcer: First match bladers please come to the stage!!

Ryuji: I’ve got to go!! At least I will win!!

(Adam no comment)

(At the stadium)

Ryuji: Xerxes I’m taking you down once and for all!!
Xerxes: Lad, you said that last time but I’m obviously winning!!

Jay: Fella’s I’m going to win so there’s no reason to be arguing!!

Announcer: Sparks are flying and the beys haven’t even been launched yet!!

Drone: First battle!! Ready set!!

Everyone: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!

Xerxes: Go Xcalius!!

Announcer: Xcalius makes first contact on Jinnus and Jinnus gets sent flying!!

(Jinnus lands on the slope)

Jay: Jinnus!!!

(Jay’s Resonance Aura flares up)

(Jinnus flies in the air)

Announcer: Jinnus uses the slope to fly in the air and attack Xcalius from above!!

(Xcalius and Roktavor start clashing)

Ryuji: Berserker Wing Cyclone!!

Xerxes: Sorry mate I got to get him off me!!

Announcer: Xcalius uses the Cyclone to dodge Jinnus!!

Ryuji/Jay: *Gasps*

(Jinnus and Roktavor start clashing hard, Roktavor and Jinnus burst)

Xerxes: That’s how you do it!!

(Xcalius lands in Xerxes hand)

Drone: It’s Bayonet Xcalius with a double burst finish. The Winner is Xerxes Shakadera!!

(Jay smashes his hand into the ground)

Announcer: Our prince of beyblade shows us how to battle like a boss!!

Xerxes: Ryuji lad, thanks for helping me win this!!

Jay/Ryuji: Not again!!

(Ryuji picks up Roktavor and leaves)

Adam: What happened to your winning streak!!

Ryuji: BE QUIET!!!

(Ryuji runs off)

Adam: *Gasps*

(Adam tries running after Ryuji)

(I run up to him)
Me: Adam your match is starting!!

(Adam runs right past me)

Announcer: Hello again everyone!! We’re kicking things off with the second match already!! Adam Kusaba Vs Seabastian Kurenai and Lloyd Shirosagi!!

Adam: This battle has my name on it!!

Lloyd: Luinor is ready to destroy you guys!!

Drone: Inspect your opponents bey!!

(Adam’s thoughts): Destruct Luinor a counterclockwise spinning attack type!! It’s disk combined with it’s gear looks like it can get some upper attacks but when it takes more damage it can form into a smash attack!! Let’s do this Ashindra!!

(Adam puts Ashindra’s weight from the bottom to the top)

(Sebastian puts Spryzen’s weight from the bottom to the top)

Drone: First battle!! Ready set!!

Everyone: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!

Announcer: All of them pull of some sweet launches

(Ashindra takes the center)

Sebastian: Go in for it!!

(Spryzen aims for Ashindra but Luinor comes in hot sending Spryzen flying)
Announcer: Spryzen just got sent flying from Luinor!!

(Spryzen lands on the slope)

Sebastian: Counter Break!!

Announcer: Spryzen is flying in the air trying to attack Luinor!!

Lloyd: Destruct Upper!!

(Spryzen and Luinor start clashing)

(Luinor starts clicking)

Adam: Hey what about me!!

Announcer: Spryzen and Luinor are giving it all they got!!

(Luinor and Spryzen get sent flying in the air)

Sebastian: Now Spryzen!!

(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Lloyd: Luinor!!!

(Lloyd’s Resonance Aura Flares up)

Sebastian: Barbaric Whip!!!

(Spryzen’s Avatar slashes at Luinor)

Lloyd: Destruct Smash!!
(Luinor and Spryzen start clashing hard in the air a huge explosion happens)

Announcer: Who will win!!

(The announcer gets blown out of his seat)

Sebastian/Lloyd: End this!!

(Spryzen and Luinor burst)

(Ashindra stops spinning)

Adam: I won?

Lloyd/Sebastian: He won?

Drone: Apparently it’s Samurai Ashindra with a double burst finish. Adam Kusaba wins!!

Adam: I did it!!

(Adam starts doing a victory dance)

Lloyd: Don’t get cocky!! There are only so many times you can get lucky.

(Sebastian and Lloyd walk away)

Adam: I would’ve won anyways!!

(Jun. 04, 2021 6:34 PM)JJustice Wrote: Oop they will become friends?

What do you think?

Yeah I think they will

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jun. 04, 2021 7:13 PM

@Lucha-Burst your character will be in chapter 14

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

UnseenBurst · Jun. 05, 2021 8:06 PM

Wait there's are going is going to be a second antagonist?

The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jun. 05, 2021 8:21 PM

Wdym??????

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UnseenBurst · Jun. 05, 2021 8:30 PM

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(Jun. 05, 2021 8:21 PM)JJustice Wrote: Wdym??????

:P can't say all I can say is betrayal

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LegendJustice · Jun. 05, 2021 8:42 PM

(Jun. 05, 2021 8:30 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: [Deleted Post]

(Jun. 05, 2021 8:21 PM)JJustice Wrote: Wdym??????

can't say all I can say is betrayal

Oh mystery

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UnseenBurst · Jun. 07, 2021 7:02 PM

Chapter 13 is out!!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jun. 07, 2021 7:23 PM

(Jun. 07, 2021 7:02 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 13 is out!!

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 13
Fix The Friendship

Adam: Did you guys see how I completely dominated that match!!

Me: About that.

Adam: What?

Brooke: Vlad is too nice to say that you winning was a complete fluke.

Adam: What do you mean?

Me: Well, you only won because Lloyd and Sebastian completely ignored you.

Adam: I would’ve won anyways.

Me: I dunno after seeing that explosive match--

Adam: Are you saying I’m weak!!

Me: I never said that!!

Adam: Yo blondie tell him it was a completely real win!!

Brooke: Ryuji’s not here.

Vlad: Come to think of it, I haven’t seen him since he lost against Xerxes.

(Adam flashes back)

Adam: What happened to your winning streak!!

Ryuji: BE QUIET!!

(Adam stops flashing back)

Adam: I think I might know where he is!!

(Adam runs off)

Me: Adam, wait!!

(Brooke stops me)

Brooke: We can’t be late for our match. Adam’s fine but we’ve got to go.

Me: You're right.

(We run into the Arena)

Announcer: Our last match will be a dozy!! We’ve got all the attack types in the ring and ready to rumble!!

Daniel: Me and Dragon are gonna win!!

Brooke: In your dreams kid.

Me: Brooke’s right I’m winning this!

(I put Valtryek’s weight from the bottom to the top)

Brooke: That was not my point.

Drone: First battle! Ready set!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

(The reboot tip stick comes out)

Me/Brooke/Daniel: Let it rip!!

Announcer: And Belarix starts the match off by pounding on Dragon!!

Brooke: Venture Launch!!

Daniel: Dragon Launch!!

Me: Rush Launch!!

(Valtryek Belarix and Dragon send each other flying)

Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!

Announcer: The beys get sent flying but Valtryek picks up speed and heads straight for Dragon!!

Daniel: Royal Recoil!!

(Dragon sends Valtryek flying)

Announcer: Is this the end for Valtryek?

(The reboot tip stick comes in)

Me: Heroic Reboot!!

(Valtryek speeds up and catches onto the rim)

Me: Valiant Flash Launch!!

Announcer: Valtryek starts speeding around the stadium like a rocket!!

Daniel: I’m gonna get you!!

(Dragon catches onto the rim)

Announcer: Dragon is on the chase for Valtryek!!

Brooke: Belarix!!

(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)

(Belarix catches onto the rim)

Brooke: Venture Flash!!

(Valtryek and Dragon get sent flying out of the stadium)

Me/Daniel: *Gasps*

Drone: It’s Detonate Belarix with a ring out finish. Brooke is the winner.

Announcer: Wow!! Belarix just put Valtryek and Dragon in their places!!

Brooke: Nice job Belarix.

(I hold out my hand)
Brooke: What do you want?

Me: A handshake!!

Brooke: For?

Me: The awesome battle!! You're really amazing!!

Brooke: *Gasps*

(Brooke cracks a small smile)

(Me and Brooke shake hands)

(Adam comes running)

Adam: I found Ryuji!!

(We run with Adam)

Me: Where is he?

Adam: In El Astro!!

Brooke: How did he get there?

Adam: We were really close so he took the emergency boat there!!

Me: How do you know this?

Adam: The staff members can track boats and knowing Ryuji he’s in Free De La Hoya’s forest!!

(Me and Brooke jump in the boat)

Me: Well, what are we waiting for?

(Adam smiles then jumps in the boat)

Adam: Who knows how to use this?

Me: I don’t know, I'm just going to wing it!!

Adam/Brooke: No Don’t!!!

(5 minutes later)

(We wash up on shore)

Me: Well that was unexpected.

Brooke/Adam: You think?

(We run into the forest)

(Ryuji starts punching a tree)

Ryuji: I lost to him again!!

(Ryuji falls to the ground and starts pulling out grass)

Adam: Hey Ryuji.

Ryuji Are you here to gloat about my loss again!!

Adam: *Sighs*

Ryuji: Just go on with it.

Adam: Look man, that wasn’t cool of me I’m sorry.

Ryuji: You better b--

Ryuji: Thank you.

Me: Aw, group hug!!

(I start squeezing everyone)

Brooke: We need to breathe!!

Adam/Ryuji: Let go!!

(I let go)

Me: Sorry guys!

???: How cute.

All: *Gasps* Faza De La Hoya!?

Good Job

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jun. 09, 2021 3:32 AM

Chapter 14 Smile

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LegendJustice · Jun. 09, 2021 11:36 PM

(Jun. 09, 2021 3:32 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 14 :)

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 14
Bey Of Magic Void Fafnir!!

Faza: Hey.

Adam: Faza!! What are you doing here?

Faza: Nothing much, just training.

Me: Um, sorry if I sound rude but who are you?

(Adam, Ryuji, and Brooke fall over)

Ryuji: He’s Faza De La Hoya!! The son of Free De La Hoya!!

Me: Oh yeah!! Valt told me about Free!

Adam: He’s #1 in the rankings so far!!

Ryuji: I’ve heard he’s never lost a battle.

(Faza leaves swinging on vines)

Adam/Ryuji: Wait up!! I wanna battle you!!

(Adam and Ryuji run off after him)

Brooke: So should we.

Me: Definitely.

(Me and Brooke runoff following Ryuji and Adam)

Adam: Wait up!! Battle me, please!!

Ryuji: He’s battling me!!

(Adam pushes Ryuji into the pond)

Ryuji: No good cheater!!

Adam: You snooze, you lose!!

(Adam bumps into Faza and falls over)

Adam: Ouch!! What are you a robot!?

Faza: Some say.

(Ryuji catches up)

Ryuji: Battle me.

Faza: Sure.

Adam: What about me!!

Faza: Ryuji’s a higher rank, nothing personal.

Adam: Grr!!

(We catch up out of breath)

Brooke: You guys need to stop running off.

Faza: Let’s go.

(At the stadium)

Faza’s Phone: Ryuji Kiyama has sent you a challenge. Do you wish to accept?

Faza: Kiyama? You're related to Ransou Ranjiro and Rantaro aren’t you?

Ryuji: Yeah, can’t say I’m happy about it.

Faza: Whatever, let's get started.

(Faza accepts, a drone comes flying in)

Announcer: Hello everyone!! Today our top dog Faza De La Hoya is battling the Definition Of Popular Ryuji Kiyama!!

Adam: Wow news gets around quick.

Vlad: I know right.

Drone: Inspect your opponent's beys!!

(Ryuji’s Thoughts): Void Fafnir, a counterclockwise stamina type that has 3 dragon heads and has an absorption gap so that it can absorb attacks. It looks like the gap will be locked in and the dragon's head's mouth will be closed. But it looks like there is more to it.

(Faza takes Fafnir and places it in the center)

Ryuji: Get your bey and get ready for battle!!

Faza: Naw, I’m good now, launch your bey.

Ryuji: Is this some kinda joke?

Announcer: Ryuji, if you want him to launch his bey he can.

Faza: Yep, or are you too scared to lose to a bey that’s not even spinning.

Ryuji: Don’t mock me!! Bring it!!

Drone: First battle!! Ready set!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Ryuji/Faza: Let it rip!!

Announcer: Roktavor has been launched and is picking up speed around the stadium!!

Ryuji: Knock it outta there!!

(Roktavor hits the absorption gap, Fafnir starts picking up serious speed)

Ryuji: *Gasps*

Announcer: Did Fafnir just steal Roktavor’s spin!?

Ryuji: That’s cheating!!

Faza: No it’s not. I’m using your bey’s energy and finally putting it to good use.’
Ryuji: Try mocking me now!! Berserker Zone!!

Announcer: Roktavor locks down the center and is ready to take on any hit!!

Faza: Is this really all you got?

Ryuji: *Gasps*

Faza: Void Spin!

(Fafnir and Roktavor start clashing, Fafnir starts stealing all of Roktavor’s spin)

Ryuji: I’m not losing yet!!

(Fafnir keeps hitting Roktavor hard and gaining more spin)

Announcer: Are we at the gas station? Because Fafnir’s at the pitstop!!

Ryuji: Roktavor!!!

(Ryuji’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Ryuji: End this!! Berserker Wing Cyclone!!

(Roktavor forces Fafnir into the ground)

Faza: Fafnir!!!

(Faza’s Resonance Aura flares up)

(The absorb driver goes inwards)

Faza: Absorb Break!!

(Fafnir picks up speed and bursts Roktavor, Roktavor’s parts hit the drone)

Announcer: We’ve been shot down!!

Drone: ZZZ Faza De La Hoya ZZZZ wins with a burs-- ZZZZ

(The drone falls to the ground)

Ryuji: He didn’t even launch his bey!

(Ryuji punches the ground)

(Faza’s Thoughts): That was fun. I might join their little cruise.

Me: Ryuji, we’ve gotta head back to the ship. It's leaving soon.

Ryuji: Faza De La Hoya!!!

(We run to the ship)

Adam: Phew! Barely made it!!

Ryuji: I can’t believe I lost to the guy who didn’t even launch his bey.

Brooke: I can.

Ryuji: Why you little.

Me: Guys pipe down!! The announcer is about to reveal some big news!!

Announcer: Everyone’s attention, please!!! We’ve got a special guest joining the cruise!!

Me: Wonder who it is?

Announcer: Faza De La Hoya welcome!!

All: *Gasps*

Faza: Hey.

Ryuji: He’s joining us?

Me: Wicked!!

Announcer: Faza is here to battle you all and wishes all of you a good match!!

(Jay’s Thoughts): Finally, I can prove to the world my worth that I’m the true #1 blader!!

(Faza’s Thoughts): I’ve got a feeling this will be fun.

[font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]runoff You did not space it but the drone saying ZZZ was hilarious 😂 [/font]

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

UnseenBurst · Jun. 09, 2021 11:47 PM

(Jun. 09, 2021 11:36 PM)JJustice Wrote:
(Jun. 09, 2021 3:32 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 14

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Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 14
Bey Of Magic Void Fafnir!!

Faza: Hey.

Adam: Faza!! What are you doing here?

Faza: Nothing much, just training.

Me: Um, sorry if I sound rude but who are you?

(Adam, Ryuji, and Brooke fall over)

Ryuji: He’s Faza De La Hoya!! The son of Free De La Hoya!!

Me: Oh yeah!! Valt told me about Free!

Adam: He’s #1 in the rankings so far!!

Ryuji: I’ve heard he’s never lost a battle.

(Faza leaves swinging on vines)

Adam/Ryuji: Wait up!! I wanna battle you!!

(Adam and Ryuji run off after him)

Brooke: So should we.

Me: Definitely.

(Me and Brooke runoff following Ryuji and Adam)

Adam: Wait up!! Battle me, please!!

Ryuji: He’s battling me!!

(Adam pushes Ryuji into the pond)

Ryuji: No good cheater!!

Adam: You snooze, you lose!!

(Adam bumps into Faza and falls over)

Adam: Ouch!! What are you a robot!?

Faza: Some say.

(Ryuji catches up)

Ryuji: Battle me.

Faza: Sure.

Adam: What about me!!

Faza: Ryuji’s a higher rank, nothing personal.

Adam: Grr!!

(We catch up out of breath)

Brooke: You guys need to stop running off.

Faza: Let’s go.

(At the stadium)

Faza’s Phone: Ryuji Kiyama has sent you a challenge. Do you wish to accept?

Faza: Kiyama? You're related to Ransou Ranjiro and Rantaro aren’t you?

Ryuji: Yeah, can’t say I’m happy about it.

Faza: Whatever, let's get started.

(Faza accepts, a drone comes flying in)

Announcer: Hello everyone!! Today our top dog Faza De La Hoya is battling the Definition Of Popular Ryuji Kiyama!!

Adam: Wow news gets around quick.

Vlad: I know right.

Drone: Inspect your opponent's beys!!

(Ryuji’s Thoughts): Void Fafnir, a counterclockwise stamina type that has 3 dragon heads and has an absorption gap so that it can absorb attacks. It looks like the gap will be locked in and the dragon's head's mouth will be closed. But it looks like there is more to it.

(Faza takes Fafnir and places it in the center)

Ryuji: Get your bey and get ready for battle!!

Faza: Naw, I’m good now, launch your bey.

Ryuji: Is this some kinda joke?

Announcer: Ryuji, if you want him to launch his bey he can.

Faza: Yep, or are you too scared to lose to a bey that’s not even spinning.

Ryuji: Don’t mock me!! Bring it!!

Drone: First battle!! Ready set!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Ryuji/Faza: Let it rip!!

Announcer: Roktavor has been launched and is picking up speed around the stadium!!

Ryuji: Knock it outta there!!

(Roktavor hits the absorption gap, Fafnir starts picking up serious speed)

Ryuji: *Gasps*

Announcer: Did Fafnir just steal Roktavor’s spin!?

Ryuji: That’s cheating!!

Faza: No it’s not. I’m using your bey’s energy and finally putting it to good use.’
Ryuji: Try mocking me now!! Berserker Zone!!

Announcer: Roktavor locks down the center and is ready to take on any hit!!

Faza: Is this really all you got?

Ryuji: *Gasps*

Faza: Void Spin!

(Fafnir and Roktavor start clashing, Fafnir starts stealing all of Roktavor’s spin)

Ryuji: I’m not losing yet!!

(Fafnir keeps hitting Roktavor hard and gaining more spin)

Announcer: Are we at the gas station? Because Fafnir’s at the pitstop!!

Ryuji: Roktavor!!!

(Ryuji’s Resonance Aura flares up)

Ryuji: End this!! Berserker Wing Cyclone!!

(Roktavor forces Fafnir into the ground)

Faza: Fafnir!!!

(Faza’s Resonance Aura flares up)

(The absorb driver goes inwards)

Faza: Absorb Break!!

(Fafnir picks up speed and bursts Roktavor, Roktavor’s parts hit the drone)

Announcer: We’ve been shot down!!

Drone: ZZZ Faza De La Hoya ZZZZ wins with a burs-- ZZZZ

(The drone falls to the ground)

Ryuji: He didn’t even launch his bey!

(Ryuji punches the ground)

(Faza’s Thoughts): That was fun. I might join their little cruise.

Me: Ryuji, we’ve gotta head back to the ship. It's leaving soon.

Ryuji: Faza De La Hoya!!!

(We run to the ship)

Adam: Phew! Barely made it!!

Ryuji: I can’t believe I lost to the guy who didn’t even launch his bey.

Brooke: I can.

Ryuji: Why you little.

Me: Guys pipe down!! The announcer is about to reveal some big news!!

Announcer: Everyone’s attention, please!!! We’ve got a special guest joining the cruise!!

Me: Wonder who it is?

Announcer: Faza De La Hoya welcome!!

All: *Gasps*

Faza: Hey.

Ryuji: He’s joining us?

Me: Wicked!!

Announcer: Faza is here to battle you all and wishes all of you a good match!!

(Jay’s Thoughts): Finally, I can prove to the world my worth that I’m the true #1 blader!!

(Faza’s Thoughts): I’ve got a feeling this will be fun.

[font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]runoff You did not space it but the drone saying ZZZ was hilarious 😂 [/font]

It was doing that because Fafnir was so OP that it burst Roktavor and it's part's hit the Drone essentially breaking the drone lol

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15) Thunderbringer! Nexus Zeus!!

16) A New Darkness Arises!! Warped Apocalypse!!

17) Friend Vs Friend!!

18) Lights!! Camera!! Action!! (I'm sure @Jjustice can guess who this chapter's about)

19) Daniel On The Rise!!

20) Power Up!! Heroic Spring Attack!!!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

LegendJustice · Jun. 10, 2021 12:21 AM

(Jun. 09, 2021 11:47 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Jun. 09, 2021 11:36 PM)JJustice Wrote: [font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]runoff You did not space it but the drone saying ZZZ was hilarious 😂 [/font]

It was doing that because Fafnir was so OP that it burst Roktavor and it's part's hit the Drone essentially breaking the drone lol
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Faza be like: Ryuji get recked by my Fafnir
15) Thunderbringer! Nexus Zeus!!

16) A New Darkness Arises!! Warped Apocalypse!!

17) Friend Vs Friend!!

18) Lights!! Camera!! Action!! (I'm sure @Jjustice can guess who this chapter's about)

19) Daniel On The Rise!!

20) Power Up!! Heroic Spring Attack!!!

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Did I hint Vlad's Valkryie's evolution name? oops.

Yes my boy jay is back

This is funny https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&url=http...AdAAAAABAR

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably