As unfortunate as it sounds, the series is currently delayed due to summer camp starting in about in a week, and ive got some other plans
[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst DB: Star Ignition
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Episode 3B - Genesis Blast!
WARNING: BLOOD AND SMALL HORROR!!
Silas: LETS DO THIS VALT!!!!
Valt: Something is different about him....
Silas: I SAID LETS DO THIS!!!!!
*his eyes turn to a lizards eye*
Valt: SILAS NO!!!!
Demon Silas: BRING IT ON!!!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!
*Satomb claims the center*
Valt: ATTACK!!!!
Demon Silas: WASTE OF MY TIME!!!!!
Valt: GOOO GENESIS WHIP!!!!
*Valtryek slashes across the rollers*
Valt: NOOO!!!
Demon Silas: ITS USELESS!!!!!
*everyone wakes up and heads to the gym*
Rantaro: *rubs eyes* ugh... Whats going on...
Rickson: A battle is going on, but look at Silas... He isn't looking so good...
Shu: Its happening again....
Valt: I WILL BRING YOU BACK SILAS!!!! VALTRYEK!!!!
*Valtryek avatar comes out*
Demon Silas: SATOMB!!!!!
*Satombs avatar comes out*
Valt: FINISH THIS!!!! GENESIS BLAST!!!!
Demon Silas: CYCLONE LOOP!!!!!!
*both beys clash and a huge explosion erupts*
Valt: SILAS!!!
*Satomb gets blown into the wall and bursts*
Silas: WHAT!!!
*his eyes turn back to normal*
Silas: What just happened.....
Valt: You were consumed by Darkness....
Silas: I remember seeing a guy with red eyes and wavy hair....
Shu: *gets Snake Pit memories* no... It can't be...
Silas: Do you know this guy, Shu?
Shu: Not directly.... I do know he is one the Snake Pits elite bladers...
Valt: What is his name?
Shu: Devala Hamazan....
Valt: What is his goal??
Shu: He resides at the snake pit so I don't know....
*meanwhile at the snake pit*
*Gold Eye drags two corpses one being a girl and the other a boy*
Gold Eye: Alright in you go....
*he tosses the bloody bodies into a room and closes the door*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
WARNING: BLOOD AND SMALL HORROR!!
Silas: LETS DO THIS VALT!!!!
Valt: Something is different about him....
Silas: I SAID LETS DO THIS!!!!!
*his eyes turn to a lizards eye*
Valt: SILAS NO!!!!
Demon Silas: BRING IT ON!!!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!
*Satomb claims the center*
Valt: ATTACK!!!!
Demon Silas: WASTE OF MY TIME!!!!!
Valt: GOOO GENESIS WHIP!!!!
*Valtryek slashes across the rollers*
Valt: NOOO!!!
Demon Silas: ITS USELESS!!!!!
*everyone wakes up and heads to the gym*
Rantaro: *rubs eyes* ugh... Whats going on...
Rickson: A battle is going on, but look at Silas... He isn't looking so good...
Shu: Its happening again....
Valt: I WILL BRING YOU BACK SILAS!!!! VALTRYEK!!!!
*Valtryek avatar comes out*
Demon Silas: SATOMB!!!!!
*Satombs avatar comes out*
Valt: FINISH THIS!!!! GENESIS BLAST!!!!
Demon Silas: CYCLONE LOOP!!!!!!
*both beys clash and a huge explosion erupts*
Valt: SILAS!!!
*Satomb gets blown into the wall and bursts*
Silas: WHAT!!!
*his eyes turn back to normal*
Silas: What just happened.....
Valt: You were consumed by Darkness....
Silas: I remember seeing a guy with red eyes and wavy hair....
Shu: *gets Snake Pit memories* no... It can't be...
Silas: Do you know this guy, Shu?
Shu: Not directly.... I do know he is one the Snake Pits elite bladers...
Valt: What is his name?
Shu: Devala Hamazan....
Valt: What is his goal??
Shu: He resides at the snake pit so I don't know....
*meanwhile at the snake pit*
*Gold Eye drags two corpses one being a girl and the other a boy*
Gold Eye: Alright in you go....
*he tosses the bloody bodies into a room and closes the door*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
Beyblade Burst TurboDrive plot
5 Months after Aiger Akabane takes the title of world champion, apparently the death rate in Japan skyrockets after police find dead bodies in The Neo Bey Arenas basement, the fatal wounds look quite questionable. Aiger and his friends take action and investigate the constant murders.
5 Months after Aiger Akabane takes the title of world champion, apparently the death rate in Japan skyrockets after police find dead bodies in The Neo Bey Arenas basement, the fatal wounds look quite questionable. Aiger and his friends take action and investigate the constant murders.
Due to an occurring Real life issue, Episode 4A and 4B will be released tomorrow with a new episode of Diamond so in the meantime, please be patient
Thank You ~ DeltaZakuro
Thank You ~ DeltaZakuro
Episode 4A - Clockwork! Alter Chronos!
WARNING: BLOOD AND DISTURBING CONTENT AHEAD!!!!
Valt: *yawn* Good morning everyone....
Rantaro: Ah Valt!! How was your sleep!
Valt: Very great! I never woke up during the night!!!
Sasha: For once!!!
Valt: ARE YOU IMPLYING THAT I SLEEPWALK!!!
Rickson: Sometimes, but no hard feelings tho man..
Rantaro: Yeah, i admit to my own case of sleepwalking..
Valt: Hey has anybody seen Cuza? He's usually is down here once he smells breakfast....
Silas: He is out in the forest training, we're going out there once we're done with breakfast...
Valt: I haven't seen Free either....
Rantaro: That is actually true, i haven't seen Free in like a week....
Silas: He is usually not gone that long!!!
After breakfast
Valt: There he is!!!!
Cuza: Oh hey valt!!!!
Valt: Buddy we finally found you!!
Silas: Cuza... Battle me!!!!
Cuza: Alright lets do this!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Satomb takes the center*
Silas: Alright the centers ours!!
Cuza: Go!! Warp Launch!!
*Chronos strikes Satombs frame and bursts through it*
Silas: NO!!!
Cuza: YIPPEE!!!
Valt: ALRIGHT ITS MY TURN!!
Cuza: Alright lets go!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Chronos takes the center*
Valt: RUSH LAUNCH!!
Cuza: Dont give up!!!
*Chronos gets blown back*
Cuza: CHRONOS!!!
*Chronos avatar comes out*
Valt: VALTRYEK!!!!
*Valtryeks avatar comes out*
Valt: GENESIS WHIP!!!
Cuza: WARP LAUNCH!!
*both beys clash and Chronos bursts*
Cuza: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Valt:That was a fun battle Cuza....
Cuza: Yeah... Anyway lets go home!!!
*he runs into the forest*
Rantaro: What an interesting person....
*Cuza screams*
Valt: CUZA!!! Are you ok??
*everyone looks up at the trees and sees a horrific sight*
A girl who looked to be about 14 years was hanging from a tree and her shirt was ripped revealing about a 3rd of her chest and slash marks cover her body
Silas: Someone go get Kris!!
Cuza: Im on it!!
Valt: Im gonna climb up and cut her free, Silas.. Be ready to catch her!!!
Silas: Got it!!
*Valt climbs towards the girl*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
WARNING: BLOOD AND DISTURBING CONTENT AHEAD!!!!
Valt: *yawn* Good morning everyone....
Rantaro: Ah Valt!! How was your sleep!
Valt: Very great! I never woke up during the night!!!
Sasha: For once!!!
Valt: ARE YOU IMPLYING THAT I SLEEPWALK!!!
Rickson: Sometimes, but no hard feelings tho man..
Rantaro: Yeah, i admit to my own case of sleepwalking..
Valt: Hey has anybody seen Cuza? He's usually is down here once he smells breakfast....
Silas: He is out in the forest training, we're going out there once we're done with breakfast...
Valt: I haven't seen Free either....
Rantaro: That is actually true, i haven't seen Free in like a week....
Silas: He is usually not gone that long!!!
After breakfast
Valt: There he is!!!!
Cuza: Oh hey valt!!!!
Valt: Buddy we finally found you!!
Silas: Cuza... Battle me!!!!
Cuza: Alright lets do this!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Satomb takes the center*
Silas: Alright the centers ours!!
Cuza: Go!! Warp Launch!!
*Chronos strikes Satombs frame and bursts through it*
Silas: NO!!!
Cuza: YIPPEE!!!
Valt: ALRIGHT ITS MY TURN!!
Cuza: Alright lets go!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Chronos takes the center*
Valt: RUSH LAUNCH!!
Cuza: Dont give up!!!
*Chronos gets blown back*
Cuza: CHRONOS!!!
*Chronos avatar comes out*
Valt: VALTRYEK!!!!
*Valtryeks avatar comes out*
Valt: GENESIS WHIP!!!
Cuza: WARP LAUNCH!!
*both beys clash and Chronos bursts*
Cuza: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Valt:That was a fun battle Cuza....
Cuza: Yeah... Anyway lets go home!!!
*he runs into the forest*
Rantaro: What an interesting person....
*Cuza screams*
Valt: CUZA!!! Are you ok??
*everyone looks up at the trees and sees a horrific sight*
A girl who looked to be about 14 years was hanging from a tree and her shirt was ripped revealing about a 3rd of her chest and slash marks cover her body
Silas: Someone go get Kris!!
Cuza: Im on it!!
Valt: Im gonna climb up and cut her free, Silas.. Be ready to catch her!!!
Silas: Got it!!
*Valt climbs towards the girl*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
(Jun. 03, 2020 8:59 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 4A - Clockwork! Alter Chronos!
WARNING: BLOOD AND DISTURBING CONTENT AHEAD!!!!
Valt: *yawn* Good morning everyone....
Rantaro: Ah Valt!! How was your sleep!
Valt: Very great! I never woke up during the night!!!
Sasha: For once!!!
Valt: ARE YOU IMPLYING THAT I SLEEPWALK!!!
Rickson: Sometimes, but no hard feelings tho man..
Rantaro: Yeah, i admit to my own case of sleepwalking..
Valt: Hey has anybody seen Cuza? He's usually is down here once he smells breakfast....
Silas: He is out in the forest training, we're going out there once we're done with breakfast...
Valt: I haven't seen Free either....
Rantaro: That is actually true, i haven't seen Free in like a week....
Silas: He is usually not gone that long!!!
After breakfast
Valt: There he is!!!!
Cuza: Oh hey valt!!!!
Valt: Buddy we finally found you!!
Silas: Cuza... Battle me!!!!
Cuza: Alright lets do this!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Satomb takes the center*
Silas: Alright the centers ours!!
Cuza: Go!! Warp Launch!!
*Chronos strikes Satombs frame and bursts through it*
Silas: NO!!!
Cuza: YIPPEE!!!
Valt: ALRIGHT ITS MY TURN!!
Cuza: Alright lets go!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Chronos takes the center*
Valt: RUSH LAUNCH!!
Cuza: Dont give up!!!
*Chronos gets blown back*
Cuza: CHRONOS!!!
*Chronos avatar comes out*
Valt: VALTRYEK!!!!
*Valtryeks avatar comes out*
Valt: GENESIS WHIP!!!
Cuza: WARP LAUNCH!!
*both beys clash and Chronos bursts*
Cuza: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Valt:That was a fun battle Cuza....
Cuza: Yeah... Anyway lets go home!!!
*he runs into the forest*
Rantaro: What an interesting person....
*Cuza screams*
Valt: CUZA!!! Are you ok??
*everyone looks up at the trees and sees a horrific sight*
A girl who looked to be about 14 years was hanging from a tree and her shirt was ripped revealing about a 3rd of her chest and slash marks cover her body
Silas: Someone go get Kris!!
Cuza: Im on it!!
Valt: Im gonna climb up and cut her free, Silas.. Be ready to catch her!!!
Silas: Got it!!
*Valt climbs towards the girl*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
What the... Good chapter though. Also, you should put a warning for the ya know part. Bruh, valt going towards the person is weird. Get rid of that part (if you want to).
(Jun. 03, 2020 9:02 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:I wasn't going to reveal this now, but Valt doesnt even touch her, he only cuts the rope she was hanging from and Silas holds her for a brief second and sets her down directly afterwards(Jun. 03, 2020 8:59 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 4A - Clockwork! Alter Chronos!
WARNING: BLOOD AND DISTURBING CONTENT AHEAD!!!!
Valt: *yawn* Good morning everyone....
Rantaro: Ah Valt!! How was your sleep!
Valt: Very great! I never woke up during the night!!!
Sasha: For once!!!
Valt: ARE YOU IMPLYING THAT I SLEEPWALK!!!
Rickson: Sometimes, but no hard feelings tho man..
Rantaro: Yeah, i admit to my own case of sleepwalking..
Valt: Hey has anybody seen Cuza? He's usually is down here once he smells breakfast....
Silas: He is out in the forest training, we're going out there once we're done with breakfast...
Valt: I haven't seen Free either....
Rantaro: That is actually true, i haven't seen Free in like a week....
Silas: He is usually not gone that long!!!
After breakfast
Valt: There he is!!!!
Cuza: Oh hey valt!!!!
Valt: Buddy we finally found you!!
Silas: Cuza... Battle me!!!!
Cuza: Alright lets do this!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Satomb takes the center*
Silas: Alright the centers ours!!
Cuza: Go!! Warp Launch!!
*Chronos strikes Satombs frame and bursts through it*
Silas: NO!!!
Cuza: YIPPEE!!!
Valt: ALRIGHT ITS MY TURN!!
Cuza: Alright lets go!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Chronos takes the center*
Valt: RUSH LAUNCH!!
Cuza: Dont give up!!!
*Chronos gets blown back*
Cuza: CHRONOS!!!
*Chronos avatar comes out*
Valt: VALTRYEK!!!!
*Valtryeks avatar comes out*
Valt: GENESIS WHIP!!!
Cuza: WARP LAUNCH!!
*both beys clash and Chronos bursts*
Cuza: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Valt:That was a fun battle Cuza....
Cuza: Yeah... Anyway lets go home!!!
*he runs into the forest*
Rantaro: What an interesting person....
*Cuza screams*
Valt: CUZA!!! Are you ok??
*everyone looks up at the trees and sees a horrific sight*
A girl who looked to be about 14 years was hanging from a tree and her shirt was ripped revealing about a 3rd of her chest and slash marks cover her body
Silas: Someone go get Kris!!
Cuza: Im on it!!
Valt: Im gonna climb up and cut her free, Silas.. Be ready to catch her!!!
Silas: Got it!!
*Valt climbs towards the girl*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
What the... Good chapter though. Also, you should put a warning for the ya know part. Bruh, valt going towards the person is weird. Get rid of that part (if you want to).
Hopefully this cleared the air a little bit
(Jun. 03, 2020 9:22 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:Ok. I was scared for a moment (not really).(Jun. 03, 2020 9:02 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: What the... Good chapter though. Also, you should put a warning for the ya know part. Bruh, valt going towards the person is weird. Get rid of that part (if you want to).I wasn't going to reveal this now, but Valt doesnt even touch her, he only cuts the rope she was hanging from and Silas holds her for a brief second and sets her down directly afterwards
Hopefully this cleared the air a little bit
Episode 4B - A Dark Mystery!
Valt: *thinks as he's climbing* who would kill someone like her... She may have a family, one she cant go back to....
*Valt reaches the branch that holds the lifeless girl*
Valt: Silas! Are you ready?!
Silas: Yeah, send her on down!!!
*Valt cuts the rope and the girl starts to fall*
Silas: I got her.... I got her!!!
*Silas perfectly catches her*
Rantaro: Awesome catch!!! You can come down now Valt!!!
Valt: Alright I'm coming!!!!
*Valt jumps down*
*Silas sets the girl down against the tree*
Rantaro: So now what?
Valt: I guess we wait for Cuza and Kris to get here
*after a few minutes of waiting, Cuza and Kris show up*
Kris: Is it just her?
Valt: Yes....
Kris: Poor child... Another one has died....
Valt: What do you mean another one?
Kris: Rumors are going around saying Children are being taken to an evil facility in California in the United States, they're either forced to go or they die....
*Shu appears in the forest*
Shu: And this girl refused to go and she paid the price....
*a cell phone starts ringing*
Valt: Who's phone is that?
*everyone looks at the girl*
*Valt picks up a cell phone which had fallen out of her pocket*
Cuza: What's the number?
Valt: Its 666-6666-6666!!
Silas: Thats a creepy number!!!
Valt: Kris... Should I answer?
Kris: Go ahead....
Silas: WOAH WOAH WOAH!! This is stupid, you can't just answer a phone that isn't yours!!!
Kris: Silas... If we answer, we might uncover the identity of this killer!!!!
Silas: Well... Fine, answer it Valt.....
*Valt answers the phone*
???: You did the right thing to answer me, otherwise i would've went there and killed you all
Valt: Who are you and why did you kill this innocent girl?
???: My name is irrelevant seeing as this might be our only talk, but about the girl.... She deserved to die, a loser isnt tolerated in The Snake Pit....
Valt: Are you Devala?
Devala: why yes.... It just occurred to me that your friend Shu Kurenai cant keep his mouth shut!!!!
Valt: At least his info was right.... You don't know anything about us!!!
Devala: Thats where you are wrong... I know everything about you and your friends, i even know your exact location and the people you are with...
Valt: Prove it...
Devala: You are in the forest where Free De La Hoya is known to appear and you are with Shu Kurenai, Rantaro Kiyama, Silas Karlisle, Cuza Ackermann and Kristina Kuroda!!!
*a MASSIVE chill goes everyone's spine*
Devala: Was i corr-
*Valt throws the phone against a tree and breaks it*
Valt: I couldnt here anymore....
Rantaro: I can't believe what just heard....
Kris: Everyone... Before you go to bed, lock your doors and close your windows if they're open... Its time we took precautions!!!!
*everyone heads back to BC Sol*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
Valt: *thinks as he's climbing* who would kill someone like her... She may have a family, one she cant go back to....
*Valt reaches the branch that holds the lifeless girl*
Valt: Silas! Are you ready?!
Silas: Yeah, send her on down!!!
*Valt cuts the rope and the girl starts to fall*
Silas: I got her.... I got her!!!
*Silas perfectly catches her*
Rantaro: Awesome catch!!! You can come down now Valt!!!
Valt: Alright I'm coming!!!!
*Valt jumps down*
*Silas sets the girl down against the tree*
Rantaro: So now what?
Valt: I guess we wait for Cuza and Kris to get here
*after a few minutes of waiting, Cuza and Kris show up*
Kris: Is it just her?
Valt: Yes....
Kris: Poor child... Another one has died....
Valt: What do you mean another one?
Kris: Rumors are going around saying Children are being taken to an evil facility in California in the United States, they're either forced to go or they die....
*Shu appears in the forest*
Shu: And this girl refused to go and she paid the price....
*a cell phone starts ringing*
Valt: Who's phone is that?
*everyone looks at the girl*
*Valt picks up a cell phone which had fallen out of her pocket*
Cuza: What's the number?
Valt: Its 666-6666-6666!!
Silas: Thats a creepy number!!!
Valt: Kris... Should I answer?
Kris: Go ahead....
Silas: WOAH WOAH WOAH!! This is stupid, you can't just answer a phone that isn't yours!!!
Kris: Silas... If we answer, we might uncover the identity of this killer!!!!
Silas: Well... Fine, answer it Valt.....
*Valt answers the phone*
???: You did the right thing to answer me, otherwise i would've went there and killed you all
Valt: Who are you and why did you kill this innocent girl?
???: My name is irrelevant seeing as this might be our only talk, but about the girl.... She deserved to die, a loser isnt tolerated in The Snake Pit....
Valt: Are you Devala?
Devala: why yes.... It just occurred to me that your friend Shu Kurenai cant keep his mouth shut!!!!
Valt: At least his info was right.... You don't know anything about us!!!
Devala: Thats where you are wrong... I know everything about you and your friends, i even know your exact location and the people you are with...
Valt: Prove it...
Devala: You are in the forest where Free De La Hoya is known to appear and you are with Shu Kurenai, Rantaro Kiyama, Silas Karlisle, Cuza Ackermann and Kristina Kuroda!!!
*a MASSIVE chill goes everyone's spine*
Devala: Was i corr-
*Valt throws the phone against a tree and breaks it*
Valt: I couldnt here anymore....
Rantaro: I can't believe what just heard....
Kris: Everyone... Before you go to bed, lock your doors and close your windows if they're open... Its time we took precautions!!!!
*everyone heads back to BC Sol*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
I’m getting Ready Player One vibes lol
Episode 4A Got me in the last half! not gonna lie bro.....
(And even that Devil Number)
(And even that Devil Number)
(Jun. 04, 2020 12:34 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: Episode 4A Got me in the last half! not gonna lie bro.....
(And even that Devil Number)
Both were intentional, the last half might have confused some people which I answered a few posts above and i thought the devils number was a bit fitting in that situation
Episode 5 will be out tomorrow but a change is being made, this series is now directed towards the teen audience mainly due to the horror and blood that's in the series, now despite being labeled 13+ there will not be any profanity (well duh) or sexual themes (*duh intensifies*).
Mods or Committees or anyone in general, if you have questions please ask and ill answer as soon as I can
Mods or Committees or anyone in general, if you have questions please ask and ill answer as soon as I can
Sorry Episode 5 is taking so long, ive been busy planning some stuff for Hyper G and Diamond, ill get Episode 5 up as soon as I can,
Sidenote: i may or not be in the process of developing a new fan fiction
Sidenote: i may or not be in the process of developing a new fan fiction
Episode 5A will be up on Wednesday
5B will be on Friday
Episode 6A will be on Saturday
Yeah be ready for an Adventures overload
5B will be on Friday
Episode 6A will be on Saturday
Yeah be ready for an Adventures overload
this is amazing so far! I look forward to the next chapters.
Deeply sorry for taking so long, ive been a little bit stressed and a little bit sick (no i dont have Coronavirus) lately but ill try to get 5A/5B out tomorrow as soon as I can.
Sorry In Advance ~ DeltaZakuro
Sorry In Advance ~ DeltaZakuro
(Jun. 19, 2020 1:42 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Deeply sorry for taking so long, ive been a little bit stressed and a little bit sick (no i dont have Coronavirus) lately but ill try to get 5A/5B out tomorrow as soon as I can.
Sorry In Advance ~ DeltaZakuro
I've also been stressed myself final day of school is tmrw and my final report card is coming in) and I am getting a bit of a cough myself, but hop you get through this. You're in no rush whatsoever to keep releasing episodes, just take your time.
Bruh Creepy Stalker vibes im looking out my window constantly now
![[Image: 051713b84bc75be40962757326da713a.jpg]](https://i.pinimg.com/originals/05/17/13/051713b84bc75be40962757326da713a.jpg)
(Jun. 19, 2020 10:33 PM)BeyZoid Corrupt Wrote: Bruh Creepy Stalker vibes im looking out my window constantly now
Ive watched a LOT of horror movies up which kinda gave me the inspiration for doing a Horror/Mystery fan fiction. Hopefully the feeling of being watched will go away. (little word of advice: Dont Read At Night)