(May. 20, 2021 5:44 PM)JJustice Wrote: (May. 20, 2021 5:38 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Try making your registrations like this. This is how to make registrations
Name: Jay Burns
Bey Name: Jynx a Jinnus nd combo
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anything extra you wanna add here.
ok thanks strike
name: Jay Burns
bey name: Jynx Jinnus
moves: you have been Jynxed Jynx sword and Jynx whip
age: 12
personality: he is the type of guy that if anyone hurts his friends then he will beat them up but he can be really caring and can sometimes be a show-off but besides that he is a strong blader
likes and dislikes: he likes candy and dislikes cats he is just scared of cats
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Ok so I kinda need to make a bit of change that I will PM you but just need to say defense types can't use whip/Sword moves
Chapter 29's name has been changed
Apollo's Awesome Awakening
What is your guys' favorite chapter? mine is chapter 29 the one I'm working on
Chapter 29 is out!!!
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 29
Apollo’s Awesome Awakening!!!!
Valt: Wow we’re really behind!!
Hyuga: Sorry.
Valt: No problem!!!
Hyuga: I was supposed to win!!
Valt: Asher wanna... *Gasps*
(I enter Hyper Resonance)
Me: Send me out next!!
Hyuga: Are you ok!?
Me: I gotta win!!! For Hyuga!!!
Hyuga: *Gaps*
(Valt slaps me on the back)
Valt: Go show them how far you’ve come!!!
Me: I’M GOING UP NEXT AND NOTHING’S STOPPING ME!!!!!
Shu: Looks like Asher is going up.
(Harry registers for the match)
Lui: So you're going!?
Harry: It’s time Apollo will finally be shattered!!! As will Asher’s spirit!!!
Shu: Grr!!
(I walk up to the stage, I start a flashback)
Me: I'm going to beat you Valt!!
Me: Apollo I promise you I will become super strong!!
Me: Apollo nooo!!!
(I start crying)
(I stop the flashback)
Announcer: We have an epic match for you everyone it’s Asher Suzuki Vs Harry Tanaka!!!!
Robbie/Oliva/Mom/Dad: Go Asher you can do it!!!
(My Thoughts): They're counting on me to win!!!
Harry: I can read you like a book!!! Your scared Apollo will break again!!!
Me: Grr!!
(Harry laughs)
Ref: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Me/Harry: 3 2 1 let it rip!!!
Announcer: Hermes takes the center with speed and power!!!!
Me: Nexus Launch!!!!
Announcer: Apollo unleashes a flurry of attacks but Hermes is not even taking a scratch!!!
Harry: Is this all you got!?
Me: No way!! Nexus Upper!!!!
(Apollo keeps pushing the barrier in)
Harry: Corrupted Counter!!!!
(Apollo gets sent flying out of the stadium, Apollo bursts after hitting the ground)
Me: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Corrupted Hermes with a ring out finish!!!! Harry claims 1 point!!!!
Me: You got lucky!!!
Apollo: Asher!!!
Me: What’s up!!
Apollo: You’ve grown so much since we’ve started blading together!!! Show Harry the fruits of our labor!!!
Me: Right!!!
Ref: Second battle!!!! Ready set!!!!
Me/Harry: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Me: Nexus Force!!!!
Harry: Corrupted Force!!!!
(Apollo and Hermes hit each other onto the slopes)
Harry: TIME TO BREAK!!!!!
(Harry enters Ultra Dark Resonance, Hermes enters Ultra Dark Flare)
Me: Go all out!!!
(I enter Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)
Harry: Corrupted Impact!!!!
Me: Nexus Upper!!!
Announcer: Hermes and Apollo are each giving each other a barrage of attacks!!!!
(Harry’s Thoughts): How is he evening out with me!!!
(Harry flares up with Dark Flare)
Harry: END THIS WITH CORRUPTED WHIP!!!!!
Me: Nexus Whip!!!!
(Enormous explosion happens)
Harry: FINALLY YOU WILL BREAK!!!!
(Huge click noise happens)
Me: *Gasps*
Announcer: Did Apollo just!?
(Apollo falls from the air and makes a perfect landing)
Harry: WHAT THE!?
Announcer: Apollo has changed!!! They are rubber blades underneath the normal blades making a double-bladed rubber attack!!!
Valt: Apollo just awakened!!!
Me: End this with Ultimate Nexus Sword!!!
(Apollo pushes in the barrier and the armor comes flying off)
Harry: No!!!
Announcer: It’s official Apollo just broke the unbreakable barrier!!!
Me: Go!!!!
(Apollo pushes in the button Hermes starts clicking)
(Harry groans)
Shu/Valt: *Gasps*
Harry: CORRUPTING BLAST!!!!!
(Both beys get sent flying out of the stadium, Apollo lands first)
Harry: IT DIDN’T BREAK!?
Ref: It’s Corrupted Hermes with a ring-out finish!!! Harry Tanaka wins with a score of 2-0!!!!
Me: Aw man I lost!!
Man in the crowd: Asher you did awesome!!!
(Crowd starts cheering my name)
Valt: You did awesome!!
Hyuga: You went kablamo!!! And zoomed right past him!!!
(Harry walks away)
Announcer: Asher may have lost but he showed us the battle of a lifetime!!!
Shu: Do you now see what blading is about?
Harry: Yes. I NEED TO CRUSH APOLLO ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!!!!
(Harry flares up with dark resonance)
Shu: *Gasps*
Harry: I’m going to the Tag Battle!!! And you cannot stop me!!!!
Shu: Then I’m going up to!!
Harry: Do as you like just stay out of my way!!!
Valt: We need to pick up the pace!!!
Hyuga: I’m going with Valt!!!
Valt: *Gasps*
Hyuga: I know we got what it takes!!!
Valt: Asher are you good with this?
Me: Of course!!! Go kick some bey!!!
Announcer: The Tag battle will be Team Valt Aoi Vs Team Shu Kurnai!!!
Team Valt is struggling to hang on but can they win the Tag Battle!!!
Valt: Shu!!! This is going to be seriously fun!!!
(Shu smiles)
Harry: Valt Aoi!!! I’m taking you down!!!
Hyuga: Hey I’m right here!!!
Ref: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Hyuga/Valt/Shu/Harry: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Hyuga: Hyperion!!!!
(Hyuga enters Hyper Resonance, Hyperion enters Hyper Flare)
Announcer: Hyperion hits Hermes with an all-out barrage!!!!
Shu: Get in there Spryzen!!!
Valt: I’m not letting you!!! Rush Launch!!!
Announcer: Valtrek hits Spryzen with a barrage of attacks from behind!!!
Harry: Grr!!!
(Valtrek starts getting faster)
Hyuga/Valt: Dual Charge!!!
Announcer: Hyperion and Valtrek crush Spryzen and Hermes together like a sandwich!!!
(Hermes barrier gets pushed in)
Harry: HERMES!!!!!
(Harry enters Ultra Dark Resonance, Hermes enters Ultra Dark Flare)
Harry: Corrupted Counter!!!
Announcer: Spryzen is sent flying up the slope!!!!
Shu: Counter Break!!!
Announcer: Spryzen is heading straight for Hyperion!!!!
Hyuga: *Gasps*
Valt: HERO SWORD!!!!!
Shu: What the!?
(Spryzen and Valtrek burst)
Announcer: I can’t believe my eyes!!!!! Valtrek jumped into the fray and sacrificed himself for Hyperion!!!!
Hyuga: Xceed Counter!!!!
Harry: END THIS WITH CORRUPTING BLAST!!!!!
(Enormous explosion happens, Hyperion bursts)
Hyuga: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Corrupted Hermes with a burst finish. The winner of the Team
Battles are Team Shu!!!!
Announcer: Hyperion has been burst!!!!
Hyuga: I lost!!!
Valt: *Sighs*
Harry: YOU JUST GOT DESTROYED BY MY ULTIMATE POWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: I’M SO TAKING YOU DOWN!!!!!
Harry: TRY YOUR BEST BUT I WILL DESTROY APOLLO JUST WAIT AND SEE!!!!!!
The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.