My rating for this thing.

Grammar: 5/5. It’s so short there’s like no space to mess up.
Story: 2/5. There is absolutely no development or anything to the story, only very slight hints.
Characters: 1/5. Every bit of dialogue, every interaction, just everything was very bland, very characterless.
Dialogue: 1/5. It didn’t feel like anyone was talking, just words being said for the sake of words being said.
Length: 1/5. I’d go 0 but 1 is the lowest on my ranking system. It’s so short that it can’t develop the story at all, it can’t show any characters at all, and is only one line of dialogue.

Total: 10/25. Tons of improvement needed, hope you can improve later.

Good ratings (I like how you're honest) Can you rate my fan fic Scion of the Legends? Pm me the rating.

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Please try out my Fan Fics:
FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

Guys I need I new bey name and a new charecter name this will be the protaganist Please and thank u

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Do you mean Antagonist? The protagonist is the main character.

yes that is what I meant

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

yes that is what I meant

Ok. Just wanted to make sure so you weren't confusing anyone else. I'm stumped. When it comes to story writing or fanfics, I'm no good.

Okay thanks for trying

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

My rating for this thing.

Grammar: 5/5. It’s so short there’s like no space to mess up.
Story: 2/5. There is absolutely no development or anything to the story, only very slight hints.
Characters: 1/5. Every bit of dialogue, every interaction, just everything was very bland, very characterless.
Dialogue: 1/5. It didn’t feel like anyone was talking, just words being said for the sake of words being said.
Length: 1/5. I’d go 0 but 1 is the lowest on my ranking system. It’s so short that it can’t develop the story at all, it can’t show any characters at all, and is only one line of dialogue.

Total: 10/25. Tons of improvement needed, hope you can improve later.

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I was considering it until you begged every person you saw to read or rate your fanfic.

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Good ratings (I like how you're honest) Can you rate my fan fic Scion of the Legends? Pm me the rating.

I was considering it until you begged every person you saw to read or rate your fanfic.

not begged. Just asked. Because I just wants reviews. The only people who made good reviews/suggestions were PinkRose and @Longinox. Can you please soften your language? You're sometimes very rude and don't use the right words. I never begged anyone to read my fan fic or ask them to read it. If you want to, you can. If you don't, I don't really care.

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Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

Note: I'm falling apart from reading many posts from people who are leaving or are going to be inactive.

Guys Please Try not to fight or else this thread will get taken down

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Guys I need I new bey name and a new  charecter name this will be the protaganist Please and thank u

I can give you a name of one if you’ll like it

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I was considering it until you begged every person you saw to read or rate your fanfic.

not begged. Just asked. Because I just wants reviews. The only people who made good reviews/suggestions were PinkRose and Longinox. Can you please soften your language? You're sometimes very rude and don't use the right words. I never begged anyone to read my fan fic or ask them to read it. If you want to, you can. If you don't, I don't really care.

No no, I meant every word, and my selection of begged was not far off at all. I’m not being rude, but if you want me to I can.

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not begged. Just asked. Because I just wants reviews. The only people who made good reviews/suggestions were PinkRose and Longinox. Can you please soften your language? You're sometimes very rude and don't use the right words. I never begged anyone to read my fan fic or ask them to read it. If you want to, you can. If you don't, I don't really care.

No no, I meant every word, and my selection of begged was not far off at all. I’m not being rude, but if you want me to I can.

You two don’t fight it’s all right you need to calm down

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No no, I meant every word, and my selection of begged was not far off at all. I’m not being rude, but if you want me to I can.

You two don’t fight it’s all right you need to calm down

I’m not fighting, a simple conversation is all. But anyways Ryuga, if you wish to continue this discussion let’s go to PMs.

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not begged. Just asked. Because I just wants reviews. The only people who made good reviews/suggestions were PinkRose and Longinox. Can you please soften your language? You're sometimes very rude and don't use the right words. I never begged anyone to read my fan fic or ask them to read it. If you want to, you can. If you don't, I don't really care.

No no, I meant every word, and my selection of begged was not far off at all. I’m not being rude, but if you want me to I can.

Ask anyone. I didn't "beg" anyone to read my fan fic or for them to rate. "Can you rate my fan fic" is not begging. Sure I'd like for you to rate it, your choice.

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Ok nice your friends now and make sure you two don’t fight

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Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 5
Mission: Beat Lui!

Lui: That is your all come on! That is pathetic!

Justin: Why don’t you battle me again and see how things turn out huh? Or are you scared!

Me: Come on Justin chill out!

(Lui and Justin looking at each other with serious expressions)

Me: Lui you're going to battle me got it!

(Lui walks back in his cave)

Rantaro: Both of you need to chill out! I know Lui is unbearable but getting frustrated is only going to make it worse!

(My Thoughts) I can’t believe him he totally ignored me like I wasn’t even there!

Apollo: Asher!

Me: Yeah what’s up.

Apollo: Are you frustrated?

Me: Yeah he totally ignored us like we weren’t even there!

Apollo: Use the frustration and show him what we are like at full power!

Me: Your right I am going to show him what’s up!

Rantaro: Hey Asher stop daydreaming and let’s go!

Me: Wait what?

Justin: Heavy fog is coming in. We have to get somewhere safe now!

Emma: I am pretty sure I saw a cabin down that away!

Rantaro: Let’s get there quick!

(Gang runs to cabin)

Rantaro: It is good we got out of there when we did!

Justin: The fog is getting thick!

Noah: Look there is a beystadium!

Rantaro: I'm down if anyone else is!

Justin: What happened to just supervising?

Rantaro: (No Comment)

Me: Hey guys wanna throw down!

Justin: Bring it!

Me/Justin: 3 2 1 Let It Rip

Me: Go Apollo take em out!!

(Janus flies out of the stadium)

Justin: You got lucky 1 more time!

Emma: Can we join, it could be a battle royal!

Me: Yeah sure this is going to be awesome!

(Rantaro Smiles)

Jake: The fog is cleared up!

(Me and Justin Sprint up the mountain to battle Lui)

Justin: Lui!! Battle me!

Lui: Sure let’s see if you are as strong as you say!

Rantaro: First Battle! Ready Set!!

Lui/Justin: 3 2 1 Let It Rip!!

Lui: Luinor attack!!
(Luinor is attacking the center but Janus is not there)

Justin: Just like I planned! Dawn Launch!!

(Janus is hitting Lunior hard with attacks)

Lui: So you level up a bit I'm impressed!! But this is the end!!

Justin: Not yet isn’t JANUS!!

(Justin Starts Resonating)

Lui: Show them their nightmare!! LUNIOR!!

(Lui Starts Resonating)

Justin: We aren’t done yet!!

(Luinor hits Janus to the edge of the stadium)

Justin: Not yet!! Super Sunset Crash!!

Lui: Assaulting Upper!!

(Huge Explosion happens and Janus goes up in the air)

Justin: No!!

(Janus Bursts)

Rantaro: Assault Luinor with a Burst Finish The Winner Is Lui!!\

(Lui Laughs)

Lui: I got to say that battle was interesting!!

Justin: Grr!!

Me: It’s your turn to battle me. I'm getting you back for Justin!!

Justin: Asher…

(Lui Walks Away)

Rantaro: You should know that Asher was really close to beating Free De La Hoya!

(Lui Stops)

Lui: Is this true!!

Asher: Yup had him on the ropes!!

Lui: Don’t you dare disappoint me!!

Asher: I won’t!!

???: Grr!!

Rantaro: Ready Set!!

Me/Lui: 3 2 1 Let It Rip

Lui: Luinor smash them to dust!!

(Apollo is sent flying in the air)

Me: No way!!

(Apollo hits the wall and stays in)

(Lui Thoughts): That attack should have burst him! Maybe he is stronger than he seems!

Me: Apollo let’s go Bionic Launch!!

(Lunior is hit with a flurry of attacks)

Lui: Lunior!!

(Lui Starts Resonating)

Apollo: Don’t hold back!!

Me: You know I won’t! Apollo!!

(I Start Resonating)

Me: Let’s go all out!!

Lui: Hit it with Assaulting upper!!

???: Let It Rip!!

(Mystery bey hits Apollo and Lunior)

(Apollo Bursts)

Me: What!?!

(Lunior gets sent flying into Lui’s hand)

???: Is this your all Lui Shirosagi!!

Lui: Who are you!

Harry: I am Harry Tanaka. I am here to break Lunior!!

Me/Justin: Break!?!?

???: Harry stop it now!

Rantaro: *Gasps*

Me/Justin: *Gaps*

Me: Shu Kurnai?!

Shu: Why hello Asher good to finally meet you!

Me: Wait how do you know who I am?

Shu: Been watching your battles since Valt told me about you.

Harry: Well Lui Shirosagi, Will you accept my challenge!!

Lui: Sure! But don’t think Lunior is going to break so easily!

Shu: You guys will battle in 1 hour that way both of you have time to prepare!


Lui: Sure fine with me, just don’t lose too easily!!

Me: Hey Harry we were having a battle! You can’t just interrupt!!

Harry: That battle was a disgrace!

Me: *Gasps*

Harry: You came charging in without a single clue about what your next move was going to be! And you expected to win!!

Shu: Harry everyone battles a different way!

Me: If you think I'm so clueless, battle me!!

Harry: You're not ready to be broken yet!!

Me: *Gasps*

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
                        Chapter 6
       Master of Thievery Wicked Hermes

Shu: *Sighs* when will he ever learn.

Rantaro: Yeah Asher got pretty hot headed!

Shu: I’m talking about Harry, He thinks battles are for making people feel despair!

Justin: My question is why does he want to break Lunior?

Shu: His bey was once destroyed by leader of Inferno Author Peregrine!

Rantaro: I get it he wants to become stronger so it won’t happen again!

Justin: And he thinks breaking everyone’s bey is the way to do it!

Shu: Yes, he wants to break all the legends bey’s so they can feel despair!

Rantaro: Ok anyways, Where is Asher?

Justin: He said he was going to practice with Noah, Emma and Jake!
Shu: Looks like Harry got under his skin

Rantaro: Time for Honcho to shine!

Me: Let it rip!!

Jake: rip!!

Me: Go in for the win!!

(Apollo Bursts Jake’s bey)

Jake: Aw man!!

Rantaro: Hey what’s up guys!!

Jake/Noah: Just losing that’s what’s up!!

Rantaro: Hey Asher did Harry’s words get in your head!!

Asher: (No Comment)

Rantaro: EARTH TO ASHER!!!

Asher: Oh sorry what’s up Honcho?

Rantaro: Um are you ok?

Asher: Never better!!

Rantaro: Well I guess I kinda assumed you would be frustrated about what Harry said.

Asher: All I can do is get better right?

Rantaro: Um yeah I guess?

Shu: Come on guys, the battle is about to start!!

Rantaro: This is sweet!!

Justin: I heard that Lui called in the WBO officials to watch this match!

(Shu’s Thoughts): This battle is not going to end well!

Announcer: Hey everyone! We have got a treat for you! It is our rising star That is blowing through the rankings! Harry Tanaka!

Harry: I am going to break Lunior and all these people are here to see it!!

Announcer: He is ranked as one of the best bladers in the world! Lui Shirosagi!!

Lui: I am going to be winning today!!

Announcer: Rantaro Kiyama has volunteered to be our reff!!

Rantaro: First inspect your opponents bey!

Harry: Meet Wicked Hermes!! The bey that Luinor will fall to!!

(Lui’s Thoughts) His bey is a clockwise spinning defense type It has 2 blades for attacks and it looks like he has a huge armor on the outside but there is something else to it.

Rantaro: First battle! Ready set!!

Harry/Lui: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!

Harry: Go Hermes straight for the center!!
Lui: Knock them out of there!!


Announcer: Hermes goes to the center, but Luinor is on the attack hitting it with a flurry!!

(Hermes starts clicking to the bursting point)

Lui: Now end this, Assaulting Upper!!

Announcer: Luinor is planning on bursting it right now! Will we see a burst!!

(Luinor hits Hermes, but it does not burst)

Lui: What!?!

Justin: How is that possible!?

Shu: You see it has a 360 locking mechanism. So it is harder to burst.

Harry: My Hermes is invincible!! Wicked Pulse!!

Announcer: Luinor tries to break through the defenses, but it’s attacks come out short!!

(Lui starts resonating)

Lui: Go Assaulting Crash!!

(Luinor hits it and both of them fly out of the stadium)

Rantaro: Simultaneous ring out finish, no points!!

Me: It ended in a draw.

Shu: Harry wasn’t going all out!
Justin: Wait, that wasn’t his all?  

Shu: No he wanted to see if Lui was up to his level.

Lui: Are you really holding back now? Give me your all!!

Harry: If that’s what you want then you will have to stop holding back!!

Rantaro: 2nd battle, ready set!!

Lui/Harry: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Harry: Go Hermes!!!

(Harry starts resonating)

Lui: Luinor show them our true power!!!

(Lui starts resonating)

Lui: Assaulting Smash!!!

(Hermes Armor comes flying off)

Me/Justin: Wait what!?

Shu: This is the only phase you can burst it in since the button is now exposed!?

Rantaro: Huh?

Shu: The double bladed sword on Hermes, can be pushed in when the armor is off and it is glowing red in the center! If you do that it will burst.

Me: So all he has to do is hit it!

Shu: It is not that simple, you need to push it in hard at the exact right time only then will it burst!!

Lui: Go Luinor attack!!

(Hermes getting hit with a flurry of attacks)

Harry: You're not beating us that easily!!

Announcer: Mercy me, Hermes just threw the fallen armor at Luinor!!

Me: It can do that!?

Lui: We aren’t done yet!!

Announcer: Luinor is crushing Hermes against the wall!?!

Harry: HAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

Shu: This is not good!!

Harry: WICKED WHIP!!!

Announcer: Luinor is sent flying!!

(Hermes hits armor into the wall)

Harry: It’s time!!! WICKED CRUSH!!!

Announcer: Luinor is being crushed at all sides!!!

Lui: Wait What!?!?

(Luinor starts cracking, then breaks)
Me/Justin/Rantaro/Shu: *Gasps*

Rantaro: Hex Hermes with a burst finish, the winner of this match is Harry Tanaka!!

(Harry Smiles)

Lui: Luinor………

Me: Breaking a bey is unforgivable that’s not what the game’s about!!

Harry: Asher Suzuki once you're good and ready your bey will be destroyed as well!!

Me: You can try but you will never break Apollo!!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

eyblade Burst Bionic Battle
                    Chapter 7
          Rise Up, Omega Dragon!!

Rantaro: Hurry up guys we gotta catch the plane or else you won’t enter!!

Justin: Hurry up Asher, We will miss the plane!!

Me: Bye Valt catch you at the Legends League!

Valt: See you around, you better win!

(Runs to the airport)

Rantaro: I told your parents that we are heading out.

Me: Where are we going again?

Rantaro: The tournament is being held in America, you will be staying at the Raging Bulls, aka Shu’s team.

Justin: Asher win this for me too please.

Rantaro: Silly me I forgot to tell you that you were accepted a long time ago sorry!

Justin: WHY DID YOU NOT TELL ME RIGHT WHEN YOU HEARD!!!

Rantaro: Jeez, anyways you are in the B group, and Asher is in the A group!

Me: So 2 of the competitors will be able to go to the Legends League!!

Rantaro: Exactly there are 16 competitors in the tournament, so 8 in each group will be facing off!

Justin: So after that we go to the Legends League!!

Rantaro: Not exactly!

Me: Huh?

Rantaro: The WBO decided to host a tag team tournament! Then you will battle in the Legends League!!

Justin: Then I guess I will have to win!!

Pilot: We are landing right now!!

(Plane lands in America)

Shu: Hey guys, ready for the tournament!

Justin: You bet! Hey Shu are you entering the Legends League?

Shu: Thinking about it.

Me: So this is where we are going to stay?

Shu: Yup.

Rantaro: It’s been fun but I got to head out see you later!!

Me/Justin: Bye Honcho thanks for everything!!

Shu: I already got you registered in the tournament, the first match is starting soon. Let's go.

(Runs over to arena)

Announcer: Alright folks the Pre Legends League is about to get under way!!

Justin: Good luck Asher!!

Me: Same to you!!

Announcer: The first match will be Asher Suzuki Vs Ben Ito!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Asher/Ben: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Me: Bionic Launch!!

(Ben’s bey bursts)
Reff: Bionic Apollo with a burst finish, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!

Asher: Awesome match man!!

Ben: Next time we battle I will win!

(Justin’s opponents bey bursts)

Announcer: And Justin Aoki just bursted his way to the next battle!!

Harry: Burst it!!

(Harry bursts his opponents bey)

Announcer: Harry bursts his way into the next match!! Wow Harry, Asher and Justin are making their way to the finals!!

Asher: Awesome who am I going to be battling!!

Announcer: Unfortunately the A group finalist forfeit the tournament!!

Me: Aw man I don’t get to battle!!

Announcer: But our blading legend has come to battle after hearing about Asher!!

Me: Awesome who is it!?

Announcer: It is the boy who rises up to the challenge, the dragon tamer!!
Dante Koryu!!

Dante: Hey Asher ready to battle!?


(Dante’s face starts turning red)

Me: Yeah but you're a bit close.

Dante: Sorry about that man!

Me: No problem let’s battle!!

Announcer: Before your showdown Justin and Harry need to battle!!

Me/Dante: Aw man I wanna battle!!

Announcer: Let’s get this battle started!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Justin/Harry 3 2 1 let it rip

Announcer: Wow Janus takes the center and it sets up the ultimate defense!!

Harry: Attack!!

Justin: Don’t think so, Dawn Defense!!

(Hermes tries to attack but it’s defense blocks all of the hits)

Announcer: What!? Hermes is not doing anything to Janus!?

(Harry flares up with his resonance)

Justin: Wait what!?

Harry: Go forth!!

Announcer: Hermes starts a wicked counter strike!!

Justin: hang in there!!

(Justin starts resonating)

Justin: Super Sunset Crash!!!

Harry: Wicked Whip!!

(Janus and Hermes stop spinning)

Reff: Simultaneous survivor finish, no points

Harry: Grr!!

Justin: Aw man guess we have to go in for another!

Harry: I am bursting you in the next match!

Justin: We will see!!

Reff: Second battle!!

Harry/Justin: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Justin: Take the center!!

Announcer: Janus takes the center!! Wait what!? Hermes is not even going for Janus it is making a crash course into the wall!!

Harry: Now!!

(Armor goes flying off)

(Justin’s Thoughts): That’s what he was after!!

Harry: Wicked Cannon!!

Announcer: Wow Hermes circles around Janus and keeps hitting Janus with it’s armor!!!

Justin: Go Janus!!!

(Justin starts resonating)

Harry: Go destroy!!

(Janus gets hit by the armor and bursts)

Justin: *Gasps*

Reff: It is Wicked Hermes with a burst finish, the winner is Harry Tanaka!!

Me: Justin no………

(I run over to Justin’s locker room)

Justin: Hey Asher I lost pretty badly.

Me: You did awesome considering how strong Hermes is!!

Justin: No he was holding back Asher!!

Me: What do you mean?

Justin: If he has the power to break Luinor he has the power to break Janus!!

(Justin starts softly crying)

Me: It’s ok I know you will get him next time!!
Justin: No Asher it is over, I lost.

Me: You still got a chance at the tag League!!

Justin: Does that mean?

Me: Yep when I win I am going to choose you as my partner for the League!!

(Would Asher Suzuki start getting ready for his match he will be on in 5 minutes)

Me: Got to go, remember I am going to win for you!!

(Justin smiles)

Announcer: Alright folks, we have a big awesome match coming for you guys!! On one corner we have the Dragon Tamer Dante Koryu!!

(Crowd goes wild)

Announcer: And on the other side we have our rising star Asher Suzuki!! This will be a match that will go down in history!!

Dante: Meet Omega Dragon!! We will be winning today!

Me: No way Bionic Apollo and I are going to be winning!!

Reff: Inspect your opponents bey!!

(My Thoughts): This bey is seriously heavy and it’s wings are spring loaded so it is going to be doing a lot of damage but I have to win!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Dante/Me: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!

Announcer: The beys have landed, and they are giving a huge flurry of attacks!!

Me: Let’s go, Bionic Launch!!

Dante: Dragon Launch!!

(Apollo hits Dragon’s bound blades)

Dante: Winged Recoil!!

(Apollo is sent flying but hits the wall and stays in)

Me: Not done yet, Bionic Strike!!

(Apollo hits Dragon hard, but It’s bound blades hit Apollo out of the stadium)

Reff: Omega Dragon earns 1 point with a ring out finish!!

Justin: Oh no!!

Shu: Don’t worry he will turn this around.

Justin: How do you know?

Shu: Just have a feeling.

Announcer: Dragon’s attack power was out of this world; it used Apollo’s attack against it!!

Me: Apollo I don’t know what to do now we are backed in a corner!!

Apollo: Focus on the battle, Concentrate on victory, have nothing else on your mind!

Me: Right, time to win!

Reff: Ready set!!

Me/Dante: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Dante: Go Dragon!!

(Apollo goes in the air)

Announcer: Wow Dragon just sent Apollo sky high!!

Me: Not over!!

(Apollo hits the wall to stay in)

Me: Apollo!!!

(I start resonating)

Dante: Dragon!!!

(Dante starts resonating)

Me: Bionic Strike!!!

(Dragons bound blades stick out)

Announcer: With Apollo's strong attack the bound blades on Dragon have retracted permanently!!

(My thoughts): Dragon’s attacks will be even more powerful especially with that rubber on the blades!!

Dante: Omega Break!!

Me: Bionic Upper!!!

(Apollo and Dragon hit each other hard with their moves)

Me: Now Go!!!!!

(Apollo pushes in Dragon’s bound blade, Dragon bursts)

Reff: It’s Bionic Apollo with a burst finish, the winner is Asher Suzuki!!

(Crowd goes wild)

Justin: He did it!!!!

Shu: I knew he could!

Announcer: It’s official Harry Tanaka and Asher Suzuki are going to the Legends League!!

Me: I won!!

Dante: That was seriously fun we got to battle again!!

Me: Yup, see you at the Legend Tag League!!

(Harry’s Thoughts): Apollo is almost ready to be broken!!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Also I am running out of Idea's for charecters so Who ever comes up with the coolest charecter and coolest bey to go with the charecter there bey/charecter will be featured in my book

Uh, are you still accepting characters? I might have one or two to put in '-')/

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hey guys, did you know that in terms of competitive battling, vaporeon is one of the most underrated? not only that it is a water type which grants it only 2 weaknesses and 3 resistances, vaporeon also has a whopping HP stat of 130 and a respectable special defense of 95, allowing it to tank attacks well. it also has the access to the ability hydration, which makes it especially a power to be beckoned in rain teams as it is immune to status moves. not only as a staller, vaporeon can also hold the role of a sweeper as it has a respectable special attack stat of 110, allowing it to fit on HO or HO Rain teams well. in addition, it is able to learn the moves toxic, scald, wish, protect and acid armor making it a very compatible staller and support, flexible to fit in various teams, tiers and so much more to come.

Sorry I already figured that out but my next series will be diffrent

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Good ratings (I like how you're honest) Can you rate my fan fic Scion of the Legends? Pm me the rating.

I was considering it until you begged every person you saw to read or rate your fanfic.

And what exactly do you gain out of saying this?

Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 8
Masters Of The Sun Sol Helios And Inferno Hyperion!!

Rantaro: Hey thanks for looking after these to Shu, I hope they didn’t cause you too much trouble!

Shu: No problem Rantaro! Tell Valt I said hi.

Justin: Where are we going?

Rantaro: You will see, it will help Asher get ready for the Legends Tag League!!

Me: What about Justin? I want him to be my partner!?


Rantaro: Sorry Justin, Since you technically did not win, and all the spots filled up you can’t enter.

Me: Justin……

Justin: Well… looks like you will have to win for me!!

Rantaro: That’s the spirit!!

(Back at Japan)

Me: Are we almost there!?

Rantaro: Actually we are here!!
Justin: This is just a beyblade club?

Rantaro: Just come inside!

???/???: Let it rip!!

(Beys send each other flying)

(Honcho catches one of the beys)

Justin: Hyuga Hizashi?!

Me: Hikaru Hizashi?!

Rantaro: See you guys are hard at work!

Hikaru: Hey Honcho who are the new guys?

Hyuga: I don’t care who they are, I wanna battle them!!

Me: Let’s go right now!!

Rantaro: Isn’t it a bit early to be battling? don’t even know each other

Me: I am Asher Suzuki!!

Justin: I am Justin Aoki!!

Hyuga: Honcho are these the bladers you were talking about?

Rantaro: Yup!!

Justin: Aren’t you guys the Tag Team World Champions?

Hikaru: Yeah we sure are!!
Me/Hyuga: Less talk, more battle!!

Rantaro: How about a tag battle!?

Me/Justin/Hyuga/Hikaru: Sure!!

Rantaro: Inspect your opponents bey!!

Hikaru: Meet Sol Helios!!

Hyuga: Meet Inferno Hyperion!!

(Justin’s Thoughts) Inferno Hyperion, feels just like the sun. It is a clockwise spinning attack type with 4 large blades sticking out this will deal some damage!!

(My Thoughts) Sol Helios a counterclockwise spinning balance type. It has 5 blades and you can swap the blades to expose 5 more to up it’s defense. I will have to attack hard if I wanna burst this thing!!

Rantaro: First battle, ready set!!

Me/Justin/Hikaru/Hyuga: 3 2 1 let it rip!!


(Hyperion starts attacking Janus, but Janus repeals the attacks)

Justin: Dawn Guard!!

Hyuga: Zoom through their defense!!

Me: Apollo, Bionic Launch!!

Hikaru: Helios attack!!

(Helios and Apollo keep bouncing back from attacks)

Hyuga: Inferno Strike!!

(Janus gets hit hard)

Hikaru: Hyuga now!!

(Helios and Hyperion start clashing)

Me/Justin: Wait what?

Hikaru/Hyuga: HAAAAA

(Hikaru and Hyuga start resonating)

Hikaru/Hyuga Twin Strike!!

(Twin Strike makes a is heading right for Apollo)

Me: *Gasps*

Justin: Super Sunset Crash!!

(Janus and Helios Burst)

Justin/Hikaru: What!?

Me: Justin…..

Justin: Go out and win for me!!

(I enter deep resonance)

Rantaro: *Gasps*
Hyuga: Exeed counter!!

Me: End this!! Bionic Whip!!!

(Apollo starts flickering rainbow)

Hyuga: Go Zoom!!

Me: End this!!!!

(Huge explosion happens)

(Hyperion and Apollo burst)

Me/Hyuga Who won?

Rantaro: It was a draw.

Me: Aw man I was so close!

Rantaro: You should be proud, you were able to draw against a legend!!

Hyuga: Next time we battle I am going to win!!

Hikaru: Justin, your moves were epic. I look forward to battling you again!!

Justin: Yup and Next time I am going to blow you outta the water!!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

eggblader and JCE_13 can you rate my fan fic again please

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

eggblader and JCE_13 can you rate my fan fic again please

hey i would love to but i suck and rating fan fics. i mean ill try if you REALLY want me to

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eggblader and JCE_13 can you rate my fan fic again please

hey i would love to but i suck and rating fan fics. i mean ill try if you REALLY want me to

Try your best pls

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.